Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion
Chapter 85 of 118
MMADfanSomeone falls under the suspicion of the investigating Aurors and is brought to the Ministry for questioning.
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Monday, 29 March 1999
Poppy woke up and decided against going to breakfast that morning. Instead, she reset her alarm and rolled over and slept for another half hour. When the Charmed clock rang again, she still felt it was too early to get up, but she sat up, reached for her wand, and called Perlie.
The elf was there promptly, arriving before Poppy had shoved her feet into her slippers.
"Morning, Perlie. I'm going to take a shower. Please bring me tea, eggs, and toast when I'm out."
As she showered, waking up as the water streamed over her, Poppy reflected on the night before. Severus had been wonderful, and he had gone to so much trouble for their date; he had clearly stepped well outside his usual comfort zone in order to make their date special for her. They had even danced for quite a while, and he had told her before that he didn't like dancing. That had clearly changed...at least for the previous evening. He'd been warm and witty, and yet still showed the shy vulnerability that always touched her heart so.
She dressed in a set of pale blue robes and went out to her sitting room, where Perlie was setting out her breakfast. The large bouquet of lilacs was sitting in the centre of the table.
"Twiskett sends these from Professor Snape," Perlie said, smiling. "They be's very pretty."
"Yes, they are very pretty," Poppy agreed. There was an envelope sitting among the flowers that she hadn't seen the night before. She plucked it out and sat down. Her name was on the front of the envelope in Severus's handwriting.
Holding the envelope and smiling, Poppy barely nodded at Perlie as the house-elf asked if she wanted her tea poured. She pulled the parchment from the envelope and unfolded it.
Monday, 29 March 1999
Dear Poppy,
If I could write all that I wish to tell you, and tell you all you mean to me, there would not be enough parchment in the castle, even if I could find the words to express myself.
Please see these flowers and think of me. I kept one small sprig for myself. It will remind me of you and the happiness you have brought me.
I am looking forward to seeing you this evening. I hope you are, too.
Yours,
Severus
PS My turn: Poppy Prunella Pomfrey. (Please tell me I'm wrong!)
Poppy smiled. Yes, she could tell him he was wrong, at least about her middle name. She was looking forward to seeing him that evening, though.
She finished her breakfast quickly, then put on her matron's white pinny and hat. Before she left, she bent over the bouquet of lilacs and breathed in their scent. Severus had said to look at the flowers and think of him. Lilacs, the first emotions of love. He was falling in love with her, it seemed. Poppy could not deny to herself that she had already fallen in love with him, and the evening before had simply brought her more deeply in love.
She broke off a small stem of lilac, charmed it to stay fresh, and pinned it to her pinny just above her watch. She could catch its scent wafting up gently, and she took a long, deep breath and let it out slowly. Although she didn't know when she would be able to tell Severus that she loved him, she would enjoy these feelings. She had believed that she was long past feeling the rapturous love that was welling up in her, but it was there. When she looked at the flowers and remembered Severus's gentle kisses, she felt it even more strongly.
Her worry would be a thing of the past, she decided. She could still be hurt, Poppy acknowledged to herself, or the relationship could make either of them miserable, but those dangers would exist whether she worried about them or not...and dwelling on them might actually make them more likely to come about. She still wanted to step back and keep the pace as it had been the previous evening, though. It would be too easy to have their sexual passion become the overriding feature of their relationship, and she wanted a full, meaningful relationship with him.
In the infirmary, Poppy was surprised to see that yet more flowers awaited her: the two potted birds-of-paradise that had flanked Severus's fireplace the evening before. There was another note.
29 March 1999
Dear Poppy,
My rooms have no light during the day, and although I could set up special lighting for these two plants, I thought that you might enjoy having them in your office.
I hope you have a pleasant morning.
Yours.
Severus
Poppy had just finished arranging the plants in the corner of her office by the window when she saw a gaggle of fifth-year students limping toward the castle, followed by Hagrid, who was carrying two more. Letting out a tut of annoyance and wondering what beast Hagrid had been showing them that day, she picked up her potions basket and left the infirmary to go down to meet them. It didn't look as though it would be a quiet morning.
Severus was slightly disappointed not to see Poppy at breakfast, but if she were able to get a few minutes extra sleep, he was glad. His own sleep had been disturbed, and he felt unfocussed and distracted. Although he had felt quite content when he'd returned to his quarters after leaving Poppy, he'd had a hard time falling asleep, then woke several times during the night. Seeing Bulstrode's memory had made the attacks feel much closer to home, even more so than the attack on Malfoy had. When he did sleep, his dreams had been vague and peculiar; he couldn't remember them on waking, but they left him feeling unsettled.
As he taught his morning classes, Severus focussed on the students and their brewing, but every now and then, he would put his hand into the pocket of his robe where he had put the sprig of lilac he had taken from Poppy's bouquet. He had charmed it to stay fresh and to retain its blossoms so that it would last the day in his pocket. Touching the woody stem of lilac, he thought of Poppy. He hoped that she was having a quiet morning. After their late night, she deserved to have a peaceful morning.
His own morning was punctuated by dunderheads who could not follow simple instructions and who, as a result, produced inert sludge...when they weren't melting their cauldrons or creating toxic fumes. After smothering the third explosion of the morning, Severus was ready to cancel classes for the day.
"Did they serve stupid juice with your breakfasts this morning? What part of 'grind to a fine powder' was difficult to understand?" Severus demanded.
"I thought it was fine enough," Norbert Twiffle mumbled.
Severus lifted the mortar that still contained some of the ground Chimaera hoof. He turned it upside down on the table. "It's like gravel. Look at it, Twiffle. What is 'fine' about it?"
"I was in a hurry, I guess," the Hufflepuff said.
"In a hurry to blow yourself up, Twiffle? Don't answer that," Severus said in disgust. "Clean up this waste of expensive potions ingredients. You'll brew this again tonight...no, tomorrow. Seven o'clock. Be here." He looked around the room at the rest of the potions. "In fact, everyone be here but Brett, Harper, and Gleason. Tomorrow evening, seven sharp. And I suggest that between now and then, you all read the formula and instructions until you can repeat them by rote. Hopefully, with some understanding."
He dismissed the class, telling them to go to the library and reread the potions formula, and then he Vanished all the potions. Brett, Harper, and Gleason hadn't finished brewing theirs, but they had been the only ones whose potions were at the correct stage and whose ingredients were all properly prepared.
Thinking that he could go up to the infirmary and spend a half hour with Poppy before lunch, Severus started up from the dungeons. As he came down the hallway past the staff room, he was surprised to hear the great door open and then see Gareth step into the entry hall. The younger wizard was as white as a sheet and clearly upset.
"McGonagall? What's wrong?"
"Severus! I have to find Uncle Albus and Aunt Minerva right away."
"Dumbledore's teaching and Minerva's in London. What's wrong? What happened?"
"It's Mum."
A few students came down the stairs, and Severus took Gareth's elbow and pulled him toward the staff room. "In here," he said. "Tell me what is going on."
Gareth took a shaky breath and began to pace as Severus closed the staff room door.
"They've taken Mum to the Ministry. They're questioning her about the attacks. They're treating her like a suspect."
"What? That's ludicrous..."
"I know, I know. And it's my fault."
"Sit down and tell me what happened."
Gareth took a deep breath and let it out, taking a seat in the armchair by the fire. "A couple Aurors came by this morning, Auror Plummer and a younger Auror named Appleton. It was just me and Hermione there today. They asked us both some questions about where we were yesterday. Hermione was at Weasley's, and they confirmed that you were with me at Grandmother Siofre's yesterday afternoon. I thought they were finished, but then Plummer asked me whether I owned a Chameleon Cloak or knew anyone who did. I told her that there are a couple at the Tyree place, which they seemed to already know, and then I mentioned that my Dad used to have one. They wanted to know where it was and who had it now. I told them that last I knew, Mum had it on the island. She never used it much, but I'm pretty sure she had it there, and that it's still there."
"A lot of people have Chameleon Cloaks...perhaps not a great many people do, but your mother's not the only one. Why did they bring her to the Ministry?" Severus asked.
"The two of them whispered together for a while, then they asked me where my mother was, since she was obviously not at home. I said that she's been staying at the estate recently. They wanted to question her right away, so they went to the Three Broomsticks to Floo through...the estate's still on the Floo Network even though our Hogsmeade house isn't. I Apparated ahead of them, and when they called through the Floo, Mum let them come through.
"They asked her about where she was yesterday afternoon and evening, and there was a significant portion of time when she was in the library alone, reading, and then she went out for a hike before dinner and didn't get back until seven. She wasn't seen by anyone. So she doesn't have an alibi. She also doesn't have an alibi for the previous two attacks, not one that the Aurors liked, anyway...when the two witches were attacked, she was still at the house in Hogsmeade, but she'd gone out for a walk before breakfast and she said she didn't remember seeing anyone who might have also seen her. Then when Malfoy was attacked, she was here in Hogsmeade, but she was in her study and neither I nor Hermione had seen her all afternoon. The attack before that, she was in Hogsmeade, as well, but she'd already gone to bed for the night, and clearly she has no witnesses that she was tucked up in bed when Huffy was being cursed. For the others, she doesn't even remember where she was, though most of the time, she must have been at the house in Hogsmeade. But she didn't know that she'd need an alibi, so she didn't make note of anyone she might have seen. They're questioning her as a suspect, Severus. Mum may seem strong, but this could be too much for her."
Severus shook his head. "Hopefully, they will treat her with respect. Auror Plummer must have been one of her students. Did anyone go with her?"
Gareth shook his head. "Quin and Alroy are working...in their Muggle offices in the City...and Rosemary isn't supposed to Floo or Apparate anywhere at this point in her pregnancy. I wanted to go, but then I thought I should let someone else know. Besides, Plummer said I couldn't stay with Mum even if I did go with them. I sent Gluffy to Grandmother Siofre, and I came here."
"I don't know what your grandmother can do for her, but Minerva and Albus might be able to help," Severus said. "Blampa!" He paused and was about to call Minerva's house-elf again when she popped into the room.
"Blampa, find the Headmistress. I believe she is still at St. Mungo's...visiting Bulstrode," Severus added to McGonagall. "Tell her . . . here, I'll write a note to give her."
Severus went over to a small secretary and pulled open its middle drawer, found some parchment, and took a quill from its holder on the desk.
29 Mar 1999
Minerva...
Go directly to the Ministry when you get this. Auror Plummer has taken Prof Gamp to the Ministry for questioning. Gareth is here now. We'll inform Dumbledore.
...S. Snape
Gareth took the note and the quill, and added a postscript saying that Siofre should be on her way there herself.
"Grandmother Siofre's an advocate," Gareth explained, handing the parchment to Blampa. "She doesn't go before the Wizengamot any longer, but she's a canny witch. She'll put them in their place if they try to get Mum to take Veritaserum or something. Mum has her rights."
Blampa Apparated away to find Minerva, and Severus shook his head and sat down. "It can't be your mother..."
"Of course it can't!" Gareth interrupted.
"I mean that even if it could be her, it isn't. There's something . . ." He shook his head again. "There's something very wrong with her even being a suspect, and I can't put my finger on it."
"It's because it's stupid. Completely lame-brained," Gareth said, becoming upset again. "How they think it could be Mum..."
"Listen, Gareth, she'll be fine. I'm sure of that. Minerva will go straight there. But there is something I know, but I can't think . . . Go find Dumbledore. You know where his classroom is. Tell him what has happened, but have him come down here to see me. I need a moment of quiet to think."
"Yeah, Snape, you have your moment of quiet, whilst Mum could be in chains somewhere..."
"Gareth! Stop. Think. Take a breath, then go get Dumbledore."
"Sorry, Severus. It's just, she's already gone through more than anyone should."
"I know that. But if you give me a moment of quiet, I might be able to help. Go fetch your uncle."
After Gareth had left, Severus closed his eyes. There was something dancing at the fringes of his consciousness, but he couldn't catch it. If he'd had more sleep, perhaps he'd already have it. Or else it was just an illusion . . .
Five minutes later, Severus still didn't know where this conviction came from, and Albus and Gareth stepped into the room.
"Gareth told me that you sent Blampa for Minerva," Albus said without any preamble.
Severus nodded. "She was already in London. She's probably with Professor Gamp already, or will be shortly. Faster than we could get there."
"What other questions did they ask your mother?" Albus asked.
"They wanted to know where Dad's old Chameleon Cloak was, they wanted her to show it to them, but she said that she doesn't have it. She left it in the house on the island. They didn't like that answer."
"I should have remembered that Cloak last night and dispelled any concerns about it then. One of us can go to the island and look for it, if that becomes necessary," Albus said gently. "What else?"
"They were interested in her alibis, but as I already told both of you, she doesn't really have any alibis. She didn't know she'd be needing them, did she, and Plummer wasn't happy about that, either. Then they were interested in her shoes, of all things. Wanted to know what kind of shoes she wears when she goes walking or hiking."
Severus shot Albus a glance, then asked, "What did your mother tell them?"
"She has a few different pairs of walking shoes and hiking boots. They're all these Muggle shoes she likes. They have good treads, she says. Don't even need a traction charm most of the time."
Albus sighed. "And they're rubber-soled?"
"Yeah, of course they are." Gareth looked at the two of them. "What do her shoes have to do with anything? Did they find footprints or something? They could test her shoes then, and they'd see they weren't the ones, right? So that's a good thing."
"The perpetrator appears to wear rubber-soled shoes, or possibly crepe," Severus said, feeling uncomfortable that he had been the one to point that out to Moody the night before. Moody had obviously already passed on his observations to the Auror Department. "I don't know whether they've found footprints."
"Great," Gareth said with a sigh. "Did you remember whatever it was that you needed your moment of quiet for?"
Severus shook his head. "I think there's something in that memory that we viewed last night, Albus, but I can't put my finger on what it is. But there's something . . . I just don't think that figure could be Professor Gamp. It seems to be the right height and general build...if there's no charm distorting the appearance of height, but . . . I need to see the memory again. Can you get Moody back here with his copy of the memory? Or can you remember more than I do? You've known Gamp for years, did it look like her to you?"
"I don't know . . . I think that if it had been Gertrude, I would have recognised her..."
"It couldn't be Mum!" Gareth said indignantly. "You're speaking as though it could be!"
"I don't believe she'd ever do anything like this, Gareth," Albus said soothingly. "I am merely speaking hypothetically. We need to think clearly in order to help her."
"I know, I know," Gareth said, slouching down in his chair. "I just . . . I couldn't do anything to help her. And she would insist on being truthful and not making anything up."
"Of course, and that's always better. Lies exposed have a way of making a person look very guilty," Albus replied. "But back to your question, Severus. I think that if it had been Gertrude, I would have recognised her even with the Disillusionment and Chameleon Cloak, and I didn't, though she does resemble the general build of the person in the memory."
"We'll need to see the memory again," Severus said. "Or I will. Gareth, you should go to the Ministry and see what you can find out. They might let you be with your mother if Minerva and Madam Tyree insist on it. They may even have let her go home already. Dumbledore will find Moody, and after we've reviewed the memory again, I think we'll be able help more." He hoped that they could exonerate Gamp completely, but he wouldn't promise that to McGonagall.
Gareth and Albus both left, and as the door to the staff room opened, Severus could hear the students chattering as they went to the Great Hall for lunch. Hoping that whatever was niggling at the edges of his consciousness might become apparent as he ate, Severus went to the Great Hall, too. With Minerva gone, and Albus, as well, it was best if he were there.
Just as it had that morning at breakfast, the conversation at the staff table revolved around the most recent attack, this one on a witch who had been a student only the year before.
"Is Minerva still at St. Mungo's visiting Bulstrode?" Vector asked on his right.
Severus looked at her distractedly. "I believe she is still in London," he replied, "as she is not here."
"Where's Dumbledore?"
Severus shook his head. "I don't know." True enough; he had no idea where Dumbledore would begin looking for Mad-Eye.
Sensing that Severus wasn't in the mood to talk, Vector didn't pursue the conversation.
Poppy came into the Great Hall, and as she approached the table, she caught his eye and smiled. He nodded. He hoped nothing would interfere with his seeing her that evening, but if the business with Gamp didn't get cleared up, he should probably spend the evening with Gareth. It was partly his fault that McGonagall's mother was being questioned by the Ministry. If it weren't for the business with the Chameleon Cloak and the shoes, they probably wouldn't even have asked her for an alibi...although she was a witch with reason to harbour a grudge against Death Eaters. Not only had her husband been killed by them, but she'd been attacked, too. By him.
Severus sighed and looked down at his plate, which still held most of his lunch. Suddenly, he realised what it was in the memory that he needed to see once more. He felt slightly sick, and he pushed away from the table. He couldn't eat anything more. He would await Albus and Moody in the staff room, and if they hadn't returned before his first afternoon class . . . he would call Twiskett and have him post an announcement cancelling it. He had to see the memory again.
Although Severus doubted that the Aurors would treat Professor Gamp as they had treated him when he'd been arrested all those years before, the less time that she remained a suspect, the better. And it was the least he could do for Gareth and his mother after having been the direct cause of so much pain in their lives for so long.
On his way out, he stopped at Poppy's chair and bent close to her.
"Can I see you for a moment, Madam Pomfrey?" he asked softly. "I see that you haven't finished your lunch, but it's somewhat urgent."
Without hesitation, Poppy got up and followed him out.
"What is it, Severus?"
Severus held up one hand, then led her to the staff room. Only after he had closed the door did he answer her question.
"I thought you should know that Professor Gamp has been taken to the Ministry for questioning about the attacks. I don't believe she's under arrest," Severus said in response to Poppy's expression of alarm, "but Gareth was here earlier, and he said that she's become a suspect. She doesn't have adequate alibis for the last few attacks, she owns a Chameleon Cloak...which she could not produce...and she wears rubber-soled shoes. And she's a witch of about the right height and build."
"But that's absurd!" Poppy exclaimed. "It couldn't be Gertrude. She wouldn't do things like that. She certainly wouldn't hex people like Clematis and Virginia, but I can't see her ambushing anyone and attacking them from behind."
"I know. And I think that I know something that will help her, but I want to view the memory from last night one more time. Dumbledore is fetching Moody, if he can find him."
"The memory?"
"I'm not certain, but I think I'm right about something. I just need to confirm it."
"What? Something in the memory . . . Of course!" Poppy exclaimed. "The curse...it seemed to come from the attacker's right-hand side. Is that it?"
Severus nodded, smiling slightly at the speed with which Poppy had realised what had taken him longer to remember, despite being so personally familiar with Gamp's injury. "I think it did. But there was so much distortion from the Cloak and the charm, I want to view it once more. I am unsure."
"I'm certain of it," Poppy said firmly. "And there was even a movement when the spell was cast. I couldn't make out the wand very well...it looked like it was a dark one, but that could have been the Disillusionment Charm...but I was pretty sure I saw the arm reach out with the wand. And it was on the right. The attacker's right, I mean, not ours. I didn't even think it was significant last night."
Severus shrugged. "If I had viewed it when I was fresher, perhaps I might have made note of it, since it would eliminate at least some suspects, but perhaps not. It wasn't obvious, and we're also all so used to seeing someone use a wand with their right hand, it only seems remarkable when they don't, if you know what I mean."
Poppy nodded. "I never thought that Gertrude would find it lucky to be missing her right arm, but in this case, I think that she is...although that's probably what they see as her motive. That and Malcolm's death and Quin's affliction. Those would be motive enough for some person, I'm sure."
Severus nodded, controlling his expression and the feeling of self-disgust that rose in him. Poppy could have no idea how the thought of Professor Gamp's injury affected him...and he didn't want her to know.
"I am going to wait for Dumbledore," Severus said. "I will tell him what we have remembered, and we can view the memory once more and make sure of what he and Moody can tell the Ministry."
"I could do that for you if they're not back before your next class," Poppy offered. "Why don't we wait up in my office? We have a good view of the gates from there. I also have a few students in the infirmary who I should check on again shortly."
Severus nodded. "All right."
Up in the infirmary, Poppy fixed them both tea, and they sat in her office and waited.
"Thank you for the plants, and for your lovely notes. They really made my morning, Severus," Poppy said. "I can also reassure you that my parents did not name me Prunella!"
Severus smiled. "That is reassuring."
"I've devised a new strategy for guessing your name," Poppy said, taking a sip of tea.
"I didn't realise you had any strategy before," Severus said with a smirk.
"Ha ha," Poppy said. "As if you've done better."
"So what's your new grand strategy?"
"You're so clever; you figure it out," Poppy said.
"Getting tough, hmm?"
"I want to win."
"So what's your next guess?"
"Severus Stephen Snape."
Severus snorted a laugh.
"Wrong? Oh, well."
"Now you're going from the outlandish to the pedestrian; that's your new strategy?"
"As if 'Prunella' weren't outlandish," Poppy said.
"Not as outlandish as 'Septimius' or 'Salazar.' Then . . . Poppy Patience Pomfrey?"
"Patience? Do I look like a Patience to you?"
He shrugged one shoulder. "In that cap of yours, you look like a lot of things. A Pilgrim, perhaps." He laughed.
Poppy raised one eyebrow. "Okay, now you're going for the low blow...though I certainly do have to have a lot of patience to deal with you. But I won't be thrown off, Severus . . . Sextus Snape."
Severus smirked and shook his head. "I'm going to win, Poppy. And you'll be glad about it."
"I'm not giving up yet," Poppy said with a smile.
"Neither am I. However, I am going to have to leave," he said with a glance out the window. "I hope that Dumbledore finds Moody soon. McGonagall was upset. I've never seen him quite like that. Even when he's angry, he's . . . he's in control, somehow, if you know what I mean. Coldly rational beneath his anger. He was very emotional this morning."
Poppy nodded. "He would be. Gertrude's his mother, after all, and she's already had enough trouble in her life without having people suspecting her of being a mad vigilante."
"Hopefully, his concern has already been allayed, but if not, Dumbledore and Moody can help. Thank you, Poppy. I appreciate your help." He reached out and caressed her arm. "And your company."
"I wish we'd had more privacy, but Hagrid will insist on introducing his students to 'lively creatures.' It was a Mackled Malaclaw this time. Fifth-year Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw students. I'd be careful what you assigned them. Their luck's going to be bad for at least a week. You're liable to have more melted cauldrons than usual." She looked out the window just as Severus started toward the door. "Wait, Severus...Rath's letting Miss Granger onto the grounds. Does she know what's going on?"
"I don't know...she was with McGonagall when the Aurors came to question him, but then he went to the Gamp estate alone, I think. I'll go down and talk to her. She may not have a clue what's happened, why Gareth never came back to the house. She'd be concerned."
"Good idea. I'll call Strilpa and have her put a sign on your classroom door telling your students to wait for you in an orderly fashion."
"They should know that already...but this is the second-year Gryffindor-Slytherin class. They are undisciplined. Thank you." He paused at the door. "I'll see you this evening."
Poppy nodded. "Events allowing."
"Events allowing . . ."
Severus left to meet Hermione.
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OMG! How did I miss these last two chapters? Totally wonderful! I'm so in love with Severus and Poppy, I hope it works out for them, I'm worried about Gertrude's attack getting in the way of their happiness, Severys should really talk to Poppy about it and clear the air, I'm sure Gertrude wouldn't mind talking to her as well and explaining she's forgiven him. I'm also so curious about Poppy's middle name! I' suspicious of Gwen bein the vigilante although Severus doesn't think her capable of it, I'm dying to know whow it is and why she's doing it. Are Gertrude and Quin together now? I thought I saw a gleam of something there. Please, tell us soon! I read you haven't forgotten about this fic or any of your other WIPs so I'm hoping for an update in the near future, if live allows. Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi! How lovely to see your name again! :) I'm glad you enjoyed those last two chapters -- though they won't be the last ones, I do hope! I am planning to pick up my WIPs very soon. I've written a couple short fics recently (for Minerva Fest and for the HoggyWarty Christmas exchange), so that kind of helped grease the fanfic cogs a bit. So many (astute!) questions -- but you'll have to wait for the answers!Thank you so much for sticking with the stories! It's very encouraging to know there are still a few folks looking forward to more chapters. :-)
Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)
Hi! I'm glad to see you are back in fanfiction again and I do hope the cogs are all greased up and ready to go! I've been waiting (patiently!) for an update to this story and to Charming The Scottish Garden, I do love me some Johannes and Siofre! Oh! So, my questions are good? That means I might be onto something, although you did give me a little preview that Gertrude would have a new man in her life, you didn't say who it was, so I think Quin might be a good choice just because they seem connected, although I don't remember quite well if they are related or not. I don't know how much I'll like Trudie with someone other than Malcolm but since you'll be writing it I'm sure I love it, you have this way of making me fall for the craziest couples like Severus and Poppy, never in a million years would I have liked them together if it weren't for your story. Anyway, I look forward to any updates you post. Thanks for coming back, I hope life is good to you :)
OMG. I love these two. Poppy and Serverus are sooooo cute. Please update soon. I want to know what happened to Severus'sbparents and how will Serverus react when Gertrude comes to Hogwarts to teach???
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your comment. I really appreciate your review. I am coming back to fanfic after a longish hiatus, and I hope to update all of my WIPs very soon. (Some of what went on with Severus's parents can be glimpsed in "Charming the Scottish Garden," which is set in the late 50s and focusses on Siofre and Johannes. You don't have to read that story to enjoy LVS, though.) Thanks very much for your review! I do hope to post a new chapter of Long Vernal Season within the next couple of weeks.
Im glad i chose to read this chapter last before going to bed. It's raining outside my window now which makes it even easier to imagine the scene you've set before us. I love that Severus and Poppy are moving forward with their relationshp and growing more comfortable with each other. And who wouldn't wanna be snuggled up with the one they love when it's raining outside? Sigh. LOVED IT!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks! It's good to write a relationship that's progressing.I'm glad you liked the rainy seaside snuggling! :-)
It's a lovely story. I look forward to new installments.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Yay, an update!!I loved the interaction with Siofre, Poppy, and Severus in this chapter. I think Siofre is trying, in her own way, to make Severus feel welcomed on the estate and I think it was great that she gave them each a charm so they could Apparate. And the surprise with the flowers and the note at the cottage was perfect. I loved it and I think my heart melted with Poppy's. lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
I was so thrilled to see you posted another chapter! Glad to hear that the writing bug has bitten you again and hope you are well.
Regarding this chapter I found your ideas about arithmantic charms fascinating; what a creative mind you have! Severus bringing up procreation was funny and interesting. I had assumed Poppy was past her childbearing years. As always, looking forward to more.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Loved it! I thought Severus was about to propose! You're killing me.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
This is the first time she said it, isn't it?Oh, that's wonderful :) glad you're back again!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
When will your next updaate be?
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
I can't wait to hear what happens next! Hope to see the next chapter soon!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
First off let me just say I love this story, very creative, but come on! You're driving me insane! Please just marry them already it would be adorable! And Severus talking about children- I almost fainted! Can Poppy still have children? Anywyas, I can't wait for your next update!
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Another awesome chapter to the story, woo hoo.Loved the "procreation" bit of the chapter. I can't believe Severus went there, teehee. And poor Poppy ... that must have caught her off guard. Cracks me up. And I'm dying to know more about the letters!!!Update soon.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Woah! That's a teaser! I am DIEING to know what the letters say! Awesome way to set the chappie up. I loved the nudges - and I won't say more on that. I am most interested in all the explanations of Arithmancy - a lot of your ideas about magic give me ideas on how to work around my ideas of magic, if that makes any sense. You and Squibby both have great scientific ideas in relationships with magic - and I just love to read how they weave together. As I grow older, I am learning - everything in this world - living, dead or otherwise, even history, is interwoven into nearly everything else. Almost every act and every creature has a direct affect on the rest of the world if you travel along the path long enough. I find this interweaving so facinating.Bla bla bla, enough of my rambling - an excellent suspense chapter - has me chomping at the bit to find out WHAT is going on with Severus' parents!And, was I misreading, but is Poppy a tad uncertain about Sevy here? She doesn't seem as relaxed and confident as usual.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
I enjoyed the exploration of Arithmancy and its many applications in the wizarding world. It must be a lot of fun to take canonical concepts and expand on them in such an interesting way.Poor Severus had a bit of a slip there! Procreation? He's certainly blunt about his intentions toward Poppy in that bit. He can't have had much of a love life in the past, though, so enjoyable sex must be something new to him, as well as someone who reciprocates his love for her. It's lovely to see him have a second chance at love as well as life. I always love to see Gareth and his relationship with Snape, particularly their banter. They've come a long way from their first hostile meeting in DD, that's for sure!It was a lot of fun to see Angus Og make a little cameo at the end of the chapter, especially now that I know he's the Celtic god of love. A suitable entity for Severus to call on, certainly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Welcome, Welcome back! I have so enjoyed your stories. I am currently rereading this one to again familiarize myself with the 'danglimg plot clues.' I must admit to a secret desire... Would truly love to see you get the Potions Master into a kilt. Full Scottish.regalia would be even better! Thank You again for taking the time to dream and compose a follow-on tale for the Professor.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
It was interesting to see Alastor again here. He seems to be on slightly better terms with Snape, although their relationship is certainly a tense one. They're both intense figures who can hold grudges. Burns certainly sounds like a suspect! I'm interested to see where questioning her leads. She doesn't seem to understand that not all Slytherins are as bad as Polyphemus and the toe-rag (in the immortal words of Minerva McGonagall) were.I hope the vigilante is caught soon, especially now that someone has died as a result of her actions. The use of the Conruptus spell is a truly disturbed touch, especially combined with the "diseased flesh" rhetoric. I'd certainly be wary if I was a crook and had Mad-Eye Moody on my tail!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I will put a £ on Burns, can't wait so learn if I am right.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Seems like forever since we've had an update so I'm very happy to see one now. I'm very pleased Poppy rushed home to be with Severus after the attack. I think these two are just adorable (don't tell Snape I said that) and for her to endure the wrath of her friends upon coming home early ... I think Severus better really appreciate her gesture. And the bit about Minerva and Gertie before they became friends ... awesome. I love how all your stories tie in together. Can't stand Moody, though that's probably b/c you've written him so well. haha.Hope you'll update again soon!!CFP,the GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
*snip*“He’s dead. Died an hour or so after reaching St. Mungo’s. Poor sod didn’t have a chance. It was another Conruptus, but this one hit his abdomen, practically dead centre. The damage was extensive. Even if he’d been found right away, the Healers say his chances of surviving such a bad hit were close to nil. Looks like his wife has a good chance of pulling through. She was hit second, and she’d turned to shield her children. The youngest was in her arms.” Moody’s cheek twitched, and his natural eye blinked. He swallowed and shifted in his chair, his claw-foot scraping against the stone floor. *snip*Awwwwwwwwwwwwww - is that Alastor nearly getting choked up???? AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I wuvs my Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Two witches, managing their men... both very skillfully.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Poor Poppy. It's a miserable feeling to constantly watch out for someone else at a party, making sure they're enjoying themselves or at least not unhappy.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Ha! Panacea - I knew it. The contrast between how the three of them approached the door-riddle was perfect. Flitwick loving the challenge, Poppy game for it but seemingly unconcerned about failing, and Severus annoyed at the inconvienience and protective of his dignity.And the contrast between the way Severus and Poppy viewed her younger self was sweet, too. She's still a bit worried and insecure about their age difference, and he's so in love with her that he considers any Pre-Sev version as simply Poppy-in-development.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
I'm so glad he got that off his chest! And that Poppy took it well. It's a good thing she's both mature and has a real generosity of spirit, otherwise his habit of blurting things out could get him into deep trouble. And this time they were only cuddling, not even post-coital. LOL.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
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Sorry if this is a short one - I just wanted to let you know how happy I was about the update, and how much I liked it.
Poor Severus, to have to meet that Gwen person - but it's only natural, of course, that this will happen to him now and then. And I nearly had forgotten about the attacks. I'm getting more and more curious about their origin!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It has been so long since I've updated on a regular basis, it's not surprising you had forgotten about the attacks. I hope to update at least twice a month from now on -- barring major disruptions in RL.
Thanks again!
What a lovely fun chapter! I'm so happy and excited to be reading a new chapter of this story. I so adore your Severus and how he's come to interact with the others in such a friendly way. Reading about dueling parctice was fun - I think I've said it before but I vastly enjoy your creative use and explanations of magic. Charms, Transfiguration, Jinxes, spells, intention, all of it actually seems to make sense in a way that I could actually use it (if I were a witch and if magic actually existed.) You make it so real, so effortless, such a part of the way of things -- it's like watching Fred Astaire dance... effortless - we all think we could actually do that. Seeing how Madam Fuller reacted to the situation makes me appreciate Poppy all the more. I loved Melina oblivating her - what a surprising and fun moment. I can just imagine the look on Severus' face and the conspiriatorial comradery he'll now feel with Melina. Hope there will be more to this story soon. Thank you for your creativity and hard work.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much for the review,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I am very glad you enjoyed it.If you ever wake up to discover yourself a witch in the middle of the HP universe, you can put your knowledge of magic to work! lol! (And not go trying untested zero-g charms on people!) I'm glad you like the magic. It is fun to construct. I had a particularly good time with Flitwick's hyperbaric treatment, although the details of it weren't sketched out here.Glad you enjoyed Melina's little surprise at the end of the chapter!Thanks again for your review and for returning to the story after such a long hiatus. Hopefully, the next chapter won't be so long in coming! (I'm working on a novella-length Hooch fic at the moment, and I'm trying to get that finished sometime this week. We'll see! Keep an eye out for that one. It's not RaMverse, though -- Snape's in it, and he's our canon Potions master.)