Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique
Chapter 53 of 118
MMADfanSunday, 14 March 1999. Severus masters an esoteric spell.
ReviewedRated for sexually explicit language, content, and some very mild slashiness.
Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique
Sunday, 14 March 1999
"McGonagall, come in."
"Snape!" Gareth grinned at him. "I was very glad to get your owl. I had to get out of the house. Living with two witches, even ones I love, is driving me batty."
"I wasn't expecting you so soon," Severus said, closing the door.
"I brought some beer," Gareth replied, holding out a canvas bag, its contents clanking together. "Gluffy's at the estate again, Mum's in one of her moods where she locks herself in her study and doesn't come out, and Hermione's moping about pretending to practise her Animagus exercises, but basically just being bitchy...sorry, Severus, but even the best of witches can get that way sometimes. Nothing pleases her. I offer her tea, she wants coffee; I make soup and cheesy toast for lunch, and she asks what else there is. I tell her if she wants something different, she can do the cooking, and she rolls her eyes and goes off to pout in her room. I try to be more than just her Arithmancy master and be her friend, but she makes it very difficult sometimes. I forgot how moody teenagers can be. By the time she went off in her sulk, I felt like having her organise our parchments and then perform multiple variant calculations on the names and birth dates of everyone in the Ministry just to give her a taste of what an apprenticeship could be like for her. But I didn't. I let her pout a while, then I brought her a bar of chocolate and told her I was going out."
Severus put the canvas bag on the small table toward the back of the room and took out two beers, handing one to Gareth and opening the other for himself, then taking a seat in the wooden chair across from him, the table behind him.
Gareth grinned. "Becoming a beer-drinker, Snape?"
"It is still early. I do not wish to drink anything stronger. Besides, I went to a party on Friday night and drank too much."
"Did you get a bit squiffy, Snape?" Gareth asked, amused.
Severus quirked a crooked smile. "A bit. I was a little indiscreet with Poppy, I'm afraid."
"Really? At the party?"
"No, not at the party." Severus felt like rolling his eyes. "In the stairwell. And then again in a side corridor."
"You two did it in the stairway?" Gareth sounded astounded.
"No, of course not." Severus smirked. "Very nearly, though. We waited until we reached a more secluded corridor."
Gareth shook his head and took a swig of beer. "Sounds like you and Poppy have quite a thing going."
Severus shrugged. "I suppose, but I don't know what that thing is. I thought it was just . . . just fucking. Just one night. A . . . a tryst, to put it less crudely. It's become a fling, I guess. But 'fling' always sounded so carefree and unsubstantial to me, and this doesn't feel that way. It's so good, McGonagall. When I am with her . . . it's hard to describe. I don't have the words. And it's not just the sex. That's very, very good, but just being with her . . . I feel . . . I feel calm . . . safe." He sighed.
Gareth finished his beer and Summoned another. "Sounds like you're getting more involved with her than you thought you would."
Severus nodded shortly. "It's not possible, though."
"Why not?"
"She wouldn't be interested. And we are agreed that if either of us begins to see someone else, we will stop having sex. That's all it is. Just sex. She doesn't want more. She even said that if I had the opportunity for a tryst with another witch, and I wanted to take advantage of it, I should, as long as it wasn't dating, in which case we'd have to stop seeing each other first. She wouldn't have said that if she wanted more."
"Oh." Gareth took a swallow of beer, his brow knit in thought. "And what did you tell her?"
"I knew it wouldn't be fair of me to ask her not to have sex with someone else if she wanted to, so I told her the same thing."
"And her response?"
"That she didn't think she'd be doing that. But she doesn't sleep around casually, McGonagall. She isn't that sort of witch."
"Still . . . I don't know whether the two of you have a life-long romance or not, but you might want to begin consider redefining your relationship. Talk to her about it. You keep saying 'it's just fucking,' but you act like it's far more than that to you, even if that is what draws you to her again and again."
"It is so good . . . I shouldn't say anything to you. I know how you feel about her."
Gareth shrugged. "It's no great unrequited love, but I do envy you. I never believed I had any chance with her, so don't worry about me. Besides, there are other witches in the world. If you want more with Poppy, I say, go for it."
"But . . . I'm in love with Hermione," Severus said.
"Are you? Or do you love her as a friend? She is an attractive girl, no doubt about it. You have been leading such an isolated life for so long, her friendship has been very important to you. You almost died. You would have died except Uncle Albus and Hermione were there and saved you, and then when you think you're dying, what is it you see that gives you comfort? Hermione's face. That's got to affect a man, not to mention that she clearly has a kind of crush on you. It wouldn't be surprising if you developed a thing for her. It doesn't mean you're in love with her."
"I am," Severus said vehemently, opening another beer and flinging the beer cap across the room.
Gareth was quiet for a minute, then he said, "All right. Then don't get too close to Poppy. For her sake. She may know that it's just a short-term relationship, a fling, as you put it, but that doesn't mean that she couldn't begin to feel more for you. You need to make sure it stays just sex. Don't get too close to her. Even having sex frequently might lead to that, so be careful. You don't want to hurt her."
Severus scowled at his beer bottle.
"And if you don't like that, then you need to reevaluate everything, my friend. What you want for yourself and what you want with Poppy. And whether your feelings for Hermione are incompatible with that."
"And if they are?"
Gareth shrugged. "You need to decide that. I have probably said and done too much already."
"No, no, you haven't. You have been a good friend, McGonagall," Severus said with a sigh. "I don't know if anything will ever happen between me and Hermione. She is still very young, and I still want my freedom."
"Freedom to do what?"
Severus was quiet for a moment. "To fuck attractive witches." He raised his eyes to meet Gareth's. "Not a very pleasant admission, is it?"
"And what other attractive witches do you have your eye on, other than Poppy?"
"None at the moment. There really aren't very many to choose from."
"I'm sure there must be some. According to you, you're just looking for sex, after all...no strings sex...so you don't have to be too picky."
"Why? Poppy and I can have sex. As long as we are doing it, why fuck some second-rate witch whom I don't like? You're almost as bad as your uncle, though in a different way. Last night he was trying to think of a witch to fix me up with...not just for sex, though, I'm sure."
"No, that wouldn't be like Uncle Albus. He seems to think that all sex should be deeply meaningful. Tries to offer his own misspent youth as an object lesson in the values of chastity, constancy, and moderation. 'Settling down' seems to be a virtue of its own to him." Gareth looked slightly amused.
"Hmmpf. It's easy for him to say that. He has Minerva," Severus said.
"You have a bit of a thing for her, don't you?"
"What?" Severus asked, aghast.
"You have a bit of a thing for Aunt Minerva. I can see it. You fancy her. And even when you were being your most bastardly, you would always do whatever she asked. You would look up at her, you would go all gooey, and she had you," Gareth said with a smirk.
"I do not have a bit of a 'thing' for Minerva, and I do not go 'gooey' over anyone," Severus said stiffly. "We were Heads of House together for many years. I am her Deputy. She is a friend. Do not sully our relationship by suggesting such a thing."
"That's all right, Snape. She's a pretty remarkable witch. I'm not saying it like it's a bad thing," Gareth replied. "She's very fond of you, too, I can tell. Probably looks at you like a son."
"That is even more ridiculous." Severus took a swig of beer, thinking that that was a particularly disgusting thought, given that they had made love when he was afflicted by the Actus Adfectus Amor Verissimus. "We are close friends. I am friends with both her and Albus, and for a long time, my relationship with Albus was complicated in a way that my relationship with Minerva was not."
"So, have you made any progress practising that spell?" Gareth asked, changing the subject.
"I haven't had very much time to practise. I went to the party on Friday night, then yesterday was busy, and there was a Quidditch match in the afternoon. In the evening, I counselled a troubled student, and then after curfew, I was with Poppy. Today it's been busy, as well. I didn't have any time until just after lunch today. I gave it a try before you arrived."
"And the results?" Gareth asked, interested.
"It was difficult, as you said," Severus admitted. "It was not successful."
"What happened?"
"It didn't take properly. When I came, I had a small ejaculation, and the orgasm was weak, as well." He set down his empty beer bottle and opened a new one, then handed another to Gareth.
"Did you examine the diagrams and really read the instructions?" Gareth asked.
"I do not require an anatomy lesson, and yes, I read the instructions," Severus said, put out. He might not have as much experience with sex as McGonagall, but he certainly understood the mechanisms of it.
"You'll get it. You can try it again now, if you want," Gareth said with a grin. "I could watch and comment on your technique."
"Hmmpf. You would enjoy that, wouldn't you, McGonagall?"
"I have to admit I would."
"I do not masturbate in front of others," Severus said coldly.
Gareth, ignoring his tone, looked him up and down. "Was that a request? Because I would be quite happy to lend a hand."
"I am perfectly capable of practising on my own," Severus said.
Gareth tilted his head and gave a little shrug. "I could give you advice. And if you were successful, I could provide a little variety for you. Masturbating becomes rather dull after the first couple orgasms, believe it or not."
"I don't know if I can now, anyway. It was just before you arrived." He didn't really think that he wanted to have sex with Gareth, though he supposed that the other wizard might be able to offer him some advice. It was also oddly titillating to think that Gareth still found him attractive and wanted to watch him.
"Give it a shot. As I say, I'd be happy to lend a hand. Or tongue. Or other body part."
Severus unbuttoned his trousers. He stared at Gareth as he pulled out his penis. "Pointers?" he asked.
Gareth looked at Severus's penis and shifted in his seat. "Um, first, you should have a full erection."
"I did the last time," Severus said. "Almost made myself come thinking about Poppy whilst I did it, and then I remembered to stop and cast the spell."
"You should do it sooner than that...partly because you need to be able to concentrate enough, but then, too, you don't have to worry about stopping, you can just let go."
"You would like to watch, wouldn't you?"
"Not if it makes you uncomfortable, Severus," Gareth said softly. "If you want to practise now, I am happy to leave you alone and head back down to Hogsmeade, or stay and touch you myself. I do like to touch you, you know."
Severus said, "I don't know if I can do it in front of you. Just sit there and be quiet."
Severus closed his eyes, blanking out his awareness of the wizard sitting across from him, then he took his cock in his hand and began to pull and stroke as he thought of Poppy. Poppy, naked, letting him suckle her breasts as he rubbed her pussy. She wanted him, she wanted him very badly. Sexy, hot, Poppy . . .
He almost forgot the spell again, but he remembered before he became too aroused, and as he cast it, feeling it tingle through his cock all the way deep into his groin, he opened his eyes. Gareth was there, sitting across from him still. He smiled at Severus.
"Very nice, Snape," Gareth said with a nod of approval.
"Now it's your turn, McGonagall," Severus whispered.
Gareth made a move toward him. Severus shook his head. "That is not what I meant," Severus said, stroking his cock languidly.
"Ah. I see."
Gareth took off his sporran and placed it on the floor beside his chair, then he unbuckled his kilt and folded it back. His penis was already partially erect. Gareth gazed at Severus as he took himself in his hand and squeezed, then began to stroke upwards, spreading his legs and taking his balls in his other hand, cupping them and rolling them lightly.
"Spell?" Gareth asked.
Severus nodded. "If you like."
Gareth cast it. This time, Severus was paying more attention, and he noticed that Gareth seemed to give his cock a little squeeze as he cast and that there was an extremely brief, almost imperceptible glow.
"You squeezed," Severus said.
"Just a habit. I don't do a lot of wandless magic, other than in Arithmancy. I find it helps me focus my magic."
"There was a little glow I hadn't noticed before."
"Yes. It was probably too light in the room the last time I cast it on you. I didn't notice it myself for quite a while, but it is always there, I think."
"What colour is it? I didn't quite see."
"Kind of yellowish, I think. Or gold. Why?"
Severus rolled his eyes and Gareth laughed.
"Never seen you do that before," Gareth said, choking.
"What?"
"Roll your eyes. Such a drama queen, Snape!"
"I am not a drama queen!"
"Right. So what's with the eye-rolling?" Gareth asked.
"I didn't roll my eyes, either. But just when I think you might be exceptional for a mere Arithmancer, you ask a question like that."
"If I didn't ask, I'd never know. Which is more stupid? I hope your pedagogical methods are better in a classroom of kids, Snape," Gareth said good-naturedly.
"When you do Arithmancy, you cast transmutations, reductions, and expansions. There are a certain range of colours that each of those can take. You have probably noticed that as the spell is taking effect, the colour will shift slightly as it affects the calculation. I am sure you have some sense after practising Arithmancy for so long what the shift means and what you can expect from the transmutation...and, in deference to your sense of injured pride, I will admit that the shifts would mean nothing to me. I only know that they are there."
"Yes, I'm introducing the concept to Hermione, but there is no shift in colour with this spell. I don't think I've noticed it with any regular spells, in fact."
"There is actually a slight, but almost undetectable, shift for most Transfigurations and Healing spells when they take effect, and even for many charms and other spells. It's brief, practically instantaneous, and is usually very close to the same colour of the spell...if the spell even has a colour itself...so it's usually only detectable using special means, unlike in Arithmancy, where it's obvious."
Gareth knit his brow, his cock forgotten, though still in his hand. "Why? Why so obvious in Arithmancy and not in other kinds of magic?"
Severus shrugged. "Your mother would probably know, or Dumbledore. I have only made a study of it because of my work at trying to mask spells, making one spell look like a different one. It also can make a spell more effective if you understand how it resonates. It becomes more focussed and stronger. Knowing that this spell is a pale gold should help me to cast it more effectively."
"You should take an apprentice yourself, Snape," Gareth said, taking a swallow of beer.
Severus snorted. "As though anyone would trust a Death Eater...or a Death Eater's apprentice...particularly with Potions."
Gareth tilted his head noncommittally and reached for his beer. "That's a discussion for another time. I'm beginning to wilt. The discussion of spell theory is mentally stimulating but not very titillating."
"I want to see you unwilt, McGonagall," Severus said, "then I want to see you come."
Gareth began to stroke himself again, quickly becoming fully erect, then his eyes closed. His breathing heavy, he said, "Talk to me, Snape."
Severus hesitated only a moment, trying to think of what to say to a man, then he said, his voice low and silky, "You must be proud of that cock of yours, McGonagall. It's very big and you know how to fuck with it. You even fucked me, McGonagall, stuck your cock right up my arse and fucked me till I came. Your cock was right up my virgin arse, and you're so good, you made me come even though I don't like cocks. But I liked yours. And now you're letting me watch you masturbate until you come. Do you think I find it exciting to watch you masturbate? I actually do. I never would have imagined it could be exciting, but watching you pull your cock...yes, come, come, Gareth!"
Gareth's cock twitched and pulsed as he came without ejaculating. Severus had been lightly stroking his own erection as he watched Gareth, and now he stroked harder, closing his eyes.
"And now I'm going to come, McGonagall. Fuck, I'm coming! Fuck, fuck, fuck!"
Severus came hard, but the spell was a success, and he didn't ejaculate. He opened his eyes and smiled at Gareth, not a toothy grin, but still, a broad smile for Severus.
"Very good, Snape," Gareth said. "Don't be disappointed, though, if it gives out with the next orgasm."
"You are even more of a pessimist than I am sometimes, McGonagall."
"I'm not saying that it will, and even if it does, you have got the spell essentially mastered, and it's just a matter of getting it to last until you release it."
"Hmmpf. That happened to you, didn't it? It worked but gave out early?"
"Yes, on the third orgasm, so don't feel bad. You're already doing better than I did...and maybe if you hadn't waited so long to cast it the first time you did, it would have taken. You are a very fast learner, Snape."
"I told you," Severus said smugly. "What next?"
"You want me to do anything for you? I could think of a few things." He licked his lips.
"What do you think about when you masturbate?" Severus asked.
"Most of the time, nothing much. I just concentrate on the sensation. If I'm in a relationship, I might think about that person. If I'm not in a relationship, then sometimes I think about a particularly good lover, or I imagine being with someone I lust after."
"Talk to me, McGonagall," Severus said in a low voice. "Talk to me about a witch you fucked. Tell me everything you did. I want to come whilst you tell me about what you did."
"Mmm, all right," Gareth said. "Imagine this. Gorgeous, tall Mediterranean beauty. Olive skin, long, wavy black hair, nice round arse. I met Lieke at a party, though I'd seen her around before that. There was a big pool, and she was in this little tiny Muggle bathing suit."
"What were her breasts like?"
"Oh, they were wonderful. Full but firm, and her tan could be called seamless. She must have sunbathed naked. And her nipples were big and dark. But I didn't see them yet. I saw them later. I followed her into the house when she went to find more ice..."
"Were there other people there?"
"Yes, but they were all at the pool. I followed her into the kitchen. She turned and saw me. I was getting quite the erection just looking at her, thinking what we could be doing together. It was very evident because I was wearing only my swimming shorts. She looked me up and down and asked me if I need some ice for my swelling."
Severus smirked.
"I told her that I'd rather suffer unless I could relieve it in another way," Gareth said. "She walked up to me, right there in the kitchen, and said that she thought she might be able to help with that. She tugged once on that little top of hers, and it fell right off. I took those gorgeous breasts in my hands and licked her tits as she pushed off the rest of her suit. I took her down to the floor..."
"In the kitchen?" Severus asked.
"Oh, yes, right there in the kitchen. I started licking and kissing her body all the way down to her cunt. She had only this little thatch of hair that her bikini had covered, but she still had a luscious pussy, dark and all woman. She was screaming as I licked her nub, pounding her fists on the floor. I thought someone might hear us, so I rose up on my knees and reached for the bowl of ice on the counter. I took a handful and rubbed it on her pussy, but it didn't cool her off at all. She wriggled and squirmed as I rubbed her. I even put a piece of ice in her, and she was so hot, it melted fast, and I sucked and licked her as it ran out. She sat up, pushing me back, then she sat on my face and pulled down my shorts and started sucking me whilst she fucked my face. I cast a spell so I wouldn't orgasm yet, but she came again as I tongued her. I pushed out from under her, but I held her there so that she was crouching on the floor in front of me, her arse in the air. I pushed my cock into her and started to fuck her hard. She was so juicy and hot...that's right, come, Snape! Come!"
Severus shuddered, opened his eyes, and let out a long breath, then he said, "You can't stop there."
Gareth grinned. "I was fucking her from behind, still holding off my orgasm, and she was moaning as my cock pumped in and out, and she came again. She just kept coming and coming. Lieke was one hot fuck. When she finally relaxed, I pulled out of her and she looked back at me, then turned around, still on her knees, and looked at my cock. She said I still had a swelling that needed to be taken care of. She stood up, grabbed my penis and pulled me backwards into the dining room. When she got me there, she pushed me down into a chair and conjured bonds, tying my hands behind my back. She straddled me, her tits brushing my chest, then she sat on my cock. There we were, I was tied up on a chair in the dining room, my cock was up her pussy as she fucked me, both of us moaning, and would you believe that someone walked in on us?"
Severus opened his eyes again. "What happened?"
"Do you really want to know?"
"Yes."
"It was a mutual friend, Andreas. He just looked at us for a minute...Lieke had stopped moving as soon as he walked in...and then he asked if it was a private party or if he could join us. Lieke got up...and I almost cried, I'd been so close to coming...and she told Andreas that there was an admission price. She wanted to watch Andreas suck me off before he could do anything else. She knew Andreas well, and apparently he'd been lusting after me for a while, but I didn't know it. He also liked both women and men, but I'd thought he was only interested in witches since that's all I'd seen him with."
"So he joined you?" Severus asked, his eyebrows raised.
"Oh, he joined us, he joined us both. The three of us had a very good time together, both of them so sexy, both of them together . . ." Gareth said, his eyes closing as he stroked himself to orgasm.
Severus watched as Gareth's penis pulsed as he came.
Gareth opened his eyes and reached for his beer.
Severus had come again as Gareth was talking; this time, it hadn't felt as strong. He blinked at Gareth.
"Do you do that often?"
"You mean with more than one partner? No. That was actually my first time, about ten or eleven years ago, and I've only done it once since then. I like concentrating on one lover, and I like the depth of intimacy with only one other person, especially as we get to know each other better. Not that it wasn't hot, of course."
"Did you see her again?"
Gareth laughed. "Yeah, when she and Andreas got married. I was his best man."
"They got married?"
"They did. They'd just been friends until that afternoon at the party, then one thing led to another, and they got married."
"That's . . . bizarre," Severus said.
Gareth shrugged. "I thought it was one of my more interesting encounters. Most of them are much less unusual. But that's why I told it to you, because it was different. I thought you might find it exciting."
"Yes, and I did come again, but it wasn't very good. I didn't ejaculate, though," Severus said, looking down at his penis.
"So, tell me a story, Snape."
"I haven't got one. My early experiences were unpleasant and painful, for the most part, the ones that weren't with prostitutes or, well, with witches who might as well have been prostitutes, and I don't want to compromise Poppy by saying anything more than I already have."
"Didn't you have any other lovers?" Gareth asked curiously.
Severus's mind flashed to Minerva. "Just one, but that is even more private, and it was only one time, really."
"Mind if I ask you a very personal question?" Gareth asked.
Severus rolled his eyes. "I've just masturbated in front of you, McGonagall. How much more personal do you think you can get? It's not as though I'd be compelled to answer you."
"I've just been wondering . . . for some time now, actually . . . since even before, um, well, before I liked you very much. Since that first shower."
"What?"
"Are all Death Eaters like you?"
Severus's brow furrowed. "What do you mean?"
"Just wondering whether it was part of becoming a Death Eater," he said, gesturing with his beer bottle. "You know, being cut?"
"Cut? We were branded. You've seen the mark where it used to be. You saw it before then. It was a brand, a burn, not a cut."
"I meant . . . your penis. Are all Death Eaters circumcised?"
Severus opened his mouth, then closed it. He swallowed. He'd been teased some about it when he was in school at Hogwarts, but no one had mentioned it since then. He'd thought it was normal until he'd gone to school, Muggle primary school, and realised that the other little boys looked different. He thought it was a stupid question on Gareth's part, but Gareth had likely not had occasion to see other Death Eaters naked.
"No," Severus replied shortly. "It was done when I was a baby."
"Oh." Gareth didn't look as though his curiosity had been satisfied. "Why? If I may ask. I know it's personal, another bloke's cock, even though we're . . . you know."
"Because my father was," Severus said. "And my father was circumcised because his mother was Jewish. His father, Botolph Snape, was C of E. I do not believe that any of them were particularly religious. However . . . after what my grandmother and her parents had escaped when they came to England in nineteen thirty-three, I think that my grandmother believed it to be an important symbol of their heritage. That is what my father told me when I asked why I looked different from the other boys at school. My mother apparently was displeased about it. Obviously, though, it wasn't something I discussed with her, particularly not after my father left us. And, to correct a . . . a misstatement I made to you once, my middle name isn't 'Samuel.' I was named after my father's grandfather, who had been a concert violinist, Shmuel Morgenstern. Shmuel is Samuel in English, and Samuel is what my great-grandfather went by every day, and my dad used to called me 'Sammy' when I was little, but that's not what's on my Muggle birth certificate. It's actually Shmuel." He waited for Gareth's reaction to his peculiar Muggle middle name, the one his mother had hated so.
"Ah . . . I see." Gareth thought for a moment, considering what his friend had told him about his Muggle family. "And you became a Death Eater. You are a puzzle, Snape. A lovable puzzle, but a puzzle."
"Shut up, McGonagall." Severus took a swig of beer, clutching his penis in the other hand, absently squeezing it. "It could have been worse. I could have been named for one of my own grandfathers, Botolph or Drusus."
Gareth laughed. "Actually, 'Severus Drusus Snape' doesn't have a bad ring to it. Very posh and pureblood, very hoity-toity. Or 'Drusus Botolph'..."
"Just leave it, McGonagall!"
"Okay, Severus. You're right. Sorry. And I actually like the name 'Shmuel.' It has character and strength, rather like one of my favourite wizards," Gareth said. He looked down at his erection. "Let's release the spell and come now. Even having you here, masturbating becomes dull."
Severus nodded. "I didn't know what you meant before when you said that, but I do now."
"It's different when you're with a witch, though. Then it's really good." Gareth looked over at Severus's cock. "You want me to pleasure you?"
Severus hesitated. "No, I don't think so. I want my first time ejaculating after I cast this spell myself to be with someone else...really with someone else, not like this...and to be with Poppy. No offense, McGonagall." He didn't really want to have sex with anyone other than Poppy again, not for a while, anyway, but he didn't want to admit that to Gareth.
Gareth smiled and nodded. "None taken. I think in that case, if you don't object, I'm just going to release the spell and let my erection fade."
"No, that's fine." Severus looked at his penis. "How will I know if the spell really worked if I do that?"
"It was sufficiently effective, Snape. You can practise again by yourself if you want to make certain."
They each released the spell. Severus fixed his trousers, but there was still a noticeable bulge.
"You want another beer, McGonagall?" he asked as Gareth put down his empty bottle.
"Sure." He didn't bother to buckle his kilt around him.
Severus flicked the bottle caps off two bottles of beer and handed one to Gareth.
"How long does it take for the erection to go down after ending the spell and not orgasming?" Severus asked.
"A little longer than usual, I think, but that just may be because of the level of arousal. Obviously, I don't do this very often." Gareth held the cold bottle against his cock, turning it so that the condensation spread over his shaft.
"You might want to cover yourself up," Severus suggested.
Gareth shrugged, but he put his bottle down on the table next to him and felt for the ends of his kilt. He looked up.
"What's that?" Gareth asked.
"Bollocks! Someone's at the door! Get into the loo...quick, just go though the bedroom!" Severus said as Gareth opened the wrong door and stopped, seeing the bedroom.
Buttoning his frockcoat in front of him and hoping that it covered him enough, Severus stood and drew his wand to open the door, then he spied the parchment with the spell on it lying on the floor next to his chair. He picked it up and shoved it into his pocket. Instead of using his wand to open the door, he walked over and opened it himself.
Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie's
Sunday, 14 March 1999
Severus and Poppy spend time together in the afternoon, then go to dinner in Diagon Alley.
Rated MA.
Characters: Severus Snape, Poppy Pomfrey, Gareth McGonagall, Mr Delancie, others
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Long Vernal Season
1058 Reviews | 7.24/10 Average
OMG! How did I miss these last two chapters? Totally wonderful! I'm so in love with Severus and Poppy, I hope it works out for them, I'm worried about Gertrude's attack getting in the way of their happiness, Severys should really talk to Poppy about it and clear the air, I'm sure Gertrude wouldn't mind talking to her as well and explaining she's forgiven him. I'm also so curious about Poppy's middle name! I' suspicious of Gwen bein the vigilante although Severus doesn't think her capable of it, I'm dying to know whow it is and why she's doing it. Are Gertrude and Quin together now? I thought I saw a gleam of something there. Please, tell us soon! I read you haven't forgotten about this fic or any of your other WIPs so I'm hoping for an update in the near future, if live allows. Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi! How lovely to see your name again! :) I'm glad you enjoyed those last two chapters -- though they won't be the last ones, I do hope! I am planning to pick up my WIPs very soon. I've written a couple short fics recently (for Minerva Fest and for the HoggyWarty Christmas exchange), so that kind of helped grease the fanfic cogs a bit. So many (astute!) questions -- but you'll have to wait for the answers!Thank you so much for sticking with the stories! It's very encouraging to know there are still a few folks looking forward to more chapters. :-)
Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)
Hi! I'm glad to see you are back in fanfiction again and I do hope the cogs are all greased up and ready to go! I've been waiting (patiently!) for an update to this story and to Charming The Scottish Garden, I do love me some Johannes and Siofre! Oh! So, my questions are good? That means I might be onto something, although you did give me a little preview that Gertrude would have a new man in her life, you didn't say who it was, so I think Quin might be a good choice just because they seem connected, although I don't remember quite well if they are related or not. I don't know how much I'll like Trudie with someone other than Malcolm but since you'll be writing it I'm sure I love it, you have this way of making me fall for the craziest couples like Severus and Poppy, never in a million years would I have liked them together if it weren't for your story. Anyway, I look forward to any updates you post. Thanks for coming back, I hope life is good to you :)
OMG. I love these two. Poppy and Serverus are sooooo cute. Please update soon. I want to know what happened to Severus'sbparents and how will Serverus react when Gertrude comes to Hogwarts to teach???
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your comment. I really appreciate your review. I am coming back to fanfic after a longish hiatus, and I hope to update all of my WIPs very soon. (Some of what went on with Severus's parents can be glimpsed in "Charming the Scottish Garden," which is set in the late 50s and focusses on Siofre and Johannes. You don't have to read that story to enjoy LVS, though.) Thanks very much for your review! I do hope to post a new chapter of Long Vernal Season within the next couple of weeks.
Im glad i chose to read this chapter last before going to bed. It's raining outside my window now which makes it even easier to imagine the scene you've set before us. I love that Severus and Poppy are moving forward with their relationshp and growing more comfortable with each other. And who wouldn't wanna be snuggled up with the one they love when it's raining outside? Sigh. LOVED IT!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks! It's good to write a relationship that's progressing.I'm glad you liked the rainy seaside snuggling! :-)
It's a lovely story. I look forward to new installments.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Yay, an update!!I loved the interaction with Siofre, Poppy, and Severus in this chapter. I think Siofre is trying, in her own way, to make Severus feel welcomed on the estate and I think it was great that she gave them each a charm so they could Apparate. And the surprise with the flowers and the note at the cottage was perfect. I loved it and I think my heart melted with Poppy's. lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
I was so thrilled to see you posted another chapter! Glad to hear that the writing bug has bitten you again and hope you are well.
Regarding this chapter I found your ideas about arithmantic charms fascinating; what a creative mind you have! Severus bringing up procreation was funny and interesting. I had assumed Poppy was past her childbearing years. As always, looking forward to more.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Loved it! I thought Severus was about to propose! You're killing me.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
This is the first time she said it, isn't it?Oh, that's wonderful :) glad you're back again!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
When will your next updaate be?
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
I can't wait to hear what happens next! Hope to see the next chapter soon!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
First off let me just say I love this story, very creative, but come on! You're driving me insane! Please just marry them already it would be adorable! And Severus talking about children- I almost fainted! Can Poppy still have children? Anywyas, I can't wait for your next update!
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Another awesome chapter to the story, woo hoo.Loved the "procreation" bit of the chapter. I can't believe Severus went there, teehee. And poor Poppy ... that must have caught her off guard. Cracks me up. And I'm dying to know more about the letters!!!Update soon.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Woah! That's a teaser! I am DIEING to know what the letters say! Awesome way to set the chappie up. I loved the nudges - and I won't say more on that. I am most interested in all the explanations of Arithmancy - a lot of your ideas about magic give me ideas on how to work around my ideas of magic, if that makes any sense. You and Squibby both have great scientific ideas in relationships with magic - and I just love to read how they weave together. As I grow older, I am learning - everything in this world - living, dead or otherwise, even history, is interwoven into nearly everything else. Almost every act and every creature has a direct affect on the rest of the world if you travel along the path long enough. I find this interweaving so facinating.Bla bla bla, enough of my rambling - an excellent suspense chapter - has me chomping at the bit to find out WHAT is going on with Severus' parents!And, was I misreading, but is Poppy a tad uncertain about Sevy here? She doesn't seem as relaxed and confident as usual.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
I enjoyed the exploration of Arithmancy and its many applications in the wizarding world. It must be a lot of fun to take canonical concepts and expand on them in such an interesting way.Poor Severus had a bit of a slip there! Procreation? He's certainly blunt about his intentions toward Poppy in that bit. He can't have had much of a love life in the past, though, so enjoyable sex must be something new to him, as well as someone who reciprocates his love for her. It's lovely to see him have a second chance at love as well as life. I always love to see Gareth and his relationship with Snape, particularly their banter. They've come a long way from their first hostile meeting in DD, that's for sure!It was a lot of fun to see Angus Og make a little cameo at the end of the chapter, especially now that I know he's the Celtic god of love. A suitable entity for Severus to call on, certainly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Welcome, Welcome back! I have so enjoyed your stories. I am currently rereading this one to again familiarize myself with the 'danglimg plot clues.' I must admit to a secret desire... Would truly love to see you get the Potions Master into a kilt. Full Scottish.regalia would be even better! Thank You again for taking the time to dream and compose a follow-on tale for the Professor.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
It was interesting to see Alastor again here. He seems to be on slightly better terms with Snape, although their relationship is certainly a tense one. They're both intense figures who can hold grudges. Burns certainly sounds like a suspect! I'm interested to see where questioning her leads. She doesn't seem to understand that not all Slytherins are as bad as Polyphemus and the toe-rag (in the immortal words of Minerva McGonagall) were.I hope the vigilante is caught soon, especially now that someone has died as a result of her actions. The use of the Conruptus spell is a truly disturbed touch, especially combined with the "diseased flesh" rhetoric. I'd certainly be wary if I was a crook and had Mad-Eye Moody on my tail!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I will put a £ on Burns, can't wait so learn if I am right.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Seems like forever since we've had an update so I'm very happy to see one now. I'm very pleased Poppy rushed home to be with Severus after the attack. I think these two are just adorable (don't tell Snape I said that) and for her to endure the wrath of her friends upon coming home early ... I think Severus better really appreciate her gesture. And the bit about Minerva and Gertie before they became friends ... awesome. I love how all your stories tie in together. Can't stand Moody, though that's probably b/c you've written him so well. haha.Hope you'll update again soon!!CFP,the GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
*snip*“He’s dead. Died an hour or so after reaching St. Mungo’s. Poor sod didn’t have a chance. It was another Conruptus, but this one hit his abdomen, practically dead centre. The damage was extensive. Even if he’d been found right away, the Healers say his chances of surviving such a bad hit were close to nil. Looks like his wife has a good chance of pulling through. She was hit second, and she’d turned to shield her children. The youngest was in her arms.” Moody’s cheek twitched, and his natural eye blinked. He swallowed and shifted in his chair, his claw-foot scraping against the stone floor. *snip*Awwwwwwwwwwwwww - is that Alastor nearly getting choked up???? AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I wuvs my Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Two witches, managing their men... both very skillfully.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Poor Poppy. It's a miserable feeling to constantly watch out for someone else at a party, making sure they're enjoying themselves or at least not unhappy.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Ha! Panacea - I knew it. The contrast between how the three of them approached the door-riddle was perfect. Flitwick loving the challenge, Poppy game for it but seemingly unconcerned about failing, and Severus annoyed at the inconvienience and protective of his dignity.And the contrast between the way Severus and Poppy viewed her younger self was sweet, too. She's still a bit worried and insecure about their age difference, and he's so in love with her that he considers any Pre-Sev version as simply Poppy-in-development.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
I'm so glad he got that off his chest! And that Poppy took it well. It's a good thing she's both mature and has a real generosity of spirit, otherwise his habit of blurting things out could get him into deep trouble. And this time they were only cuddling, not even post-coital. LOL.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
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Sorry if this is a short one - I just wanted to let you know how happy I was about the update, and how much I liked it.
Poor Severus, to have to meet that Gwen person - but it's only natural, of course, that this will happen to him now and then. And I nearly had forgotten about the attacks. I'm getting more and more curious about their origin!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It has been so long since I've updated on a regular basis, it's not surprising you had forgotten about the attacks. I hope to update at least twice a month from now on -- barring major disruptions in RL.
Thanks again!
What a lovely fun chapter! I'm so happy and excited to be reading a new chapter of this story. I so adore your Severus and how he's come to interact with the others in such a friendly way. Reading about dueling parctice was fun - I think I've said it before but I vastly enjoy your creative use and explanations of magic. Charms, Transfiguration, Jinxes, spells, intention, all of it actually seems to make sense in a way that I could actually use it (if I were a witch and if magic actually existed.) You make it so real, so effortless, such a part of the way of things -- it's like watching Fred Astaire dance... effortless - we all think we could actually do that. Seeing how Madam Fuller reacted to the situation makes me appreciate Poppy all the more. I loved Melina oblivating her - what a surprising and fun moment. I can just imagine the look on Severus' face and the conspiriatorial comradery he'll now feel with Melina. Hope there will be more to this story soon. Thank you for your creativity and hard work.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much for the review,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I am very glad you enjoyed it.If you ever wake up to discover yourself a witch in the middle of the HP universe, you can put your knowledge of magic to work! lol! (And not go trying untested zero-g charms on people!) I'm glad you like the magic. It is fun to construct. I had a particularly good time with Flitwick's hyperbaric treatment, although the details of it weren't sketched out here.Glad you enjoyed Melina's little surprise at the end of the chapter!Thanks again for your review and for returning to the story after such a long hiatus. Hopefully, the next chapter won't be so long in coming! (I'm working on a novella-length Hooch fic at the moment, and I'm trying to get that finished sometime this week. We'll see! Keep an eye out for that one. It's not RaMverse, though -- Snape's in it, and he's our canon Potions master.)