Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere
Chapter 80 of 118
MMADfanSunday, 28 March 1999. Severus prepares for a duel, then he prepares for a date, and Filius and Gareth each lend him a hand. Which will pose the greater challenge?
ReviewedChapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere
Sunday, 28 March 1999
"You're sure you're all right, Severus?" Filius asked, looking down with concern into the younger wizard's face.
"Mmm. Yes. I'll be fine." Once he was able to get up off the cold, hard stone floor, he'd be fine. He had managed to sit up after Filius cast Renervate, but his chest still ached, and his head hurt where it had hit the stone wall when he'd flown backward after being hit in the chest by Flitwick's battering hex.
"You were doing so much better with your blocks," Filius said fretfully, "I was sure you'd be able to deflect that one, or side-step it."
"I did both. Obviously, I was ineffective." Severus leaned his weight on his left arm and reached back with his right hand and gingerly felt the growing lump on the back of his head. His hair was sticky. He winced slightly.
"I'm so sorry, Severus! I wouldn't have cast the Mulcare so forcefully if I'd realised your block wouldn't even weaken the blow."
"Mmph." Severus bent his knees, trying to push up and get to his feet. He sat down again with a thump. "I just need to catch my breath for a minute more."
"We should see to your head, too," Filius said, peering around to see the back of Severus's head. "I think you're bleeding. I don't like to cast Healing charms on people's heads. How's your chest?" The little wizard placed his hand on the left side of Severus's chest and pressed lightly where the hex had hit.
"Sore." Severus took in a deep breath and immediately regretted it.
"Do you think you broke anything?"
Severus shrugged his left shoulder. "I don't think so. I think it's just a bruise. A little potion will fix it up quickly." He reached back and touched his head again. "I think that this might need more than just a potion, though."
"Poppy's gone for the day...should we put a call through to St. Mungo's? Or perhaps Mother Wayland could come up from Hogsmeade..."
"I will not have that woman touch me," Severus snapped. "And Mungo's . . . by the time they sent someone, I'd probably be either recovered or dead."
"Oh, dear! We should get you to a Healer!" Filius wrung his hands in anxiety.
"It was a joke, Filius," Severus said gently. "I'm fine. We'll go see the Headmistress if we have to. She's not bad at this sort of thing. And if she can't help . . . I suppose we could disturb Healer O'Donald on a Sunday morning."
"Or we could contact Poppy. She's just visiting her sister in Wales. I'm sure she would come back to help, especially for you."
"I don't want to disturb the matron on her day off," Severus replied.
He took another deep breath. It wasn't as uncomfortable. He didn't want to interrupt Poppy's day, but he also didn't want to have her alarmed by any message about an injury to him, and he wanted her to think of him as her lover, not as her colleague, let alone as her patient. She would break off her visit to come back and treat any of her colleagues, Severus knew that, or to treat any of the students, but until he was on firmer footing with her personally, he didn't want Poppy to be the Hogwarts matron with him, just his friend and, he hoped, his lover. He loved her, and he loved her more with each day. He wanted to be her lover, her true lover, he wanted to learn to be her lover, and he wanted her to know his love for her. He wanted her care, and her love, but he didn't want her to return to him as his caregiver.
Severus let out a slow, even breath. "I'm sure it won't be necessary to contact her. I'll be fine."
"Can you stand? Here, hold onto my shoulder and push up...I'm quite sturdy!"
With some reluctance, Severus put his right hand on Flitwick's shoulder, his left hand on the wall beside him, and he scrambled to his feet. He took another deep breath; this one was easier.
"All right, Severus?" Filius squeaked.
Severus nodded. "Good. Better, in fact." He touched the back of his head. "Just a bit of a headache. I think some potion and an ice pack should do it. And I'd trust you to cast a Detumescens on it, Professor. I am sure you are quite competent."
"Well . . . we'll see. Let's get you back to your rooms first, then we can see what it looks like in good light." Filius looked up at Severus and asked hesitantly, "Do you have a good, bright lamp in your rooms?"
Severus snorted a quick laugh. "Yes. I have a good lamp by my desk."
"Then we'll go there, if you feel well enough to walk."
Severus forbore to point out that during the war, he'd had to do far harder activities with far worse injuries and far less attractive goals. This was just a bump on the head, and only a few hundred yards and a couple dozen stairs, with his own quarters awaiting him at the end of it.
Back in Severus's sitting room, Filius had Severus sit in his desk chair as he trained the light from his reading lamp on the back of his head. He Levitated himself up to the desk and sat on the edge to peer at the lump.
"It's hard to tell, but it looks as though it's stopped bleeding," Filius observed. "May I cast a cleansing charm and clean up the blood?"
Severus nodded his assent and felt the light whisper of magic pass over the back of his head, then he felt Filius's fingers part the hair around the bump.
"It looks better. Is it sore?" he asked as Severus flinched mildly.
"Somewhat."
"We should call Poppy back to the school," Filius said. "Or bring you to St Mungo's."
"I do think just a few generic Healing charms would be fine, Professor."
"I don't know . . ."
"Pretend it's my knee and not my head, if that helps," Severus said impatiently. "But if you don't want to do it, we can find the Headmistress."
"Poppy..."
"No."
Filius shrugged. "Detumescens first, or Consuere?"
"Detumescens, I should think," Severus said. "And wouldn't Sutura be better than Consuere?"
"I've always used the Consutus for little cuts," Filius replied. "Sutura I think is better for bigger wounds."
"As you wish." He felt Filius cast the first Healing spell, reducing the swelling, and he let out a sigh.
"Better, Severus?" Filius asked.
"Indeed."
"It's begun to bleed again now, though."
"Use Coagulare, then," Severus said, trying to rein in his impatience with the little Charms master's tentativeness.
Filius quickly cast the Coagulare and followed it with the Consutus. "You might want to have Poppy check it when she returns this evening."
"Perhaps. It feels quite well now, though. I just think a potion or two, and I'll be fine."
"Your new spells are very effective," Filius said, changing the subject. "I think you'll be able to give Albus a challenge."
"I have a few other ideas, if I have the time to work on them," Severus said.
"You still need to work on your blocks, though. Their strength isn't in question . . . I think the problem is with your timing and the speed of the spell. It's been a bit erratic."
They discussed ways in which Severus might be able to improve his blocks, then Filius pulled out his watch and shook his head. "This has been most engrossing, but I'm late meeting Pomona. We were going to give a tune-up to the microclimates in the far gardens before lunch. She wants to add some tropical flowers to those beds this spring, so the microclimates need some tweaking."
"And I need to send an owl, myself," Severus said, thinking of his own floral pursuits and his plans to try to create a romantic atmosphere for Poppy that evening. "Say, Flitwick . . . you wouldn't happen to have a musical box I could borrow for the evening, would you?"
"I believe so." The little wizard smiled brightly at the younger wizard. "Have a date tonight, Severus? Perhaps with the lovely Hogwarts matron?"
Severus raised his eyebrows. "Why would you ask that?"
"Oh, I happened to have noticed a few things . . . perhaps I'm imagining it, but it seems to me that the two of you have rather hit it off lately, or that you could, if you both wanted to give it a whirl."
Severus opened his mouth, then closed it. Filius chuckled. "I am right, then!"
"It's that obvious?" Severus asked, blushing and wondering how much Filius had noticed and whether others had.
"Let me put it this way: the Severus Snape I have come to know would never have sipped a drink from anyone's straw a year ago. And I do believe that he would still be quite fastidious about such a thing. Yet Poppy readily offered you a sip from her drink, and you didn't decline it. That was my first little clue that perhaps you may have a bit of a soft spot for her. Then yesterday in the infirmary, all those red carnations, which presumably came from the large bag you had been carrying when you arrived on the grounds. And when you two talk, when you're just together, there's just an indefinable spark between you. I don't think it's obvious, though. I simply happened to be looking at the right moments, and I'd been thinking just recently how it would be nice if you found someone special, so I happened to see things. I don't think anyone else has necessarily noticed, though." Filius saw Severus's stricken expression and added, "I really doubt it at all, Severus. Although I do hope that the lady in question has noticed, since she seems taken with you, too."
Severus blinked. Flitwick was the only one at Hogwarts who had deduced that Robbie was really Dumbledore; Filius was a very perceptive wizard, and he wasn't a Ravenclaw for nothing. It could very well be that he was the only one who had noticed. But Severus hadn't thought he'd been obvious about it at all.
"So, do you two have a date this evening?" Filius asked again.
"Er, yes."
Filius smiled broadly. "Wonderful, Severus! And you will be entertaining her here?" he asked, looking around.
"Yes, when she returns from her sister's. Eight."
"Are you, um, planning something special?" Filius asked, looking around the room again.
"I have asked Twiskett to have a light meal prepared...some of the things from your party, in fact. She liked the spanakopita. And I thought I'd get out my wizarding wireless if you didn't have a Charmed box I could borrow."
Filius nodded. "I see . . . and atmosphere?"
"Atmosphere . . . the music . . ." Severus said weakly, looking around his sitting room and seeing it as someone else might. "And I thought candles. And I'm fetching flowers this afternoon, if I can find an open shop."
"Oh, that sounds fine, Severus! Quite fine! A witch likes to see that you've gone to a bit of effort for her, just for her. It doesn't even need to be much, really, just clearly aimed at making her more comfortable, relaxed, and romanced. Set a nice atmosphere for her. A little effort will go a long way. Consistent effort, though," Filius added with a nod.
"Of course," Severus said uncomfortably.
"Well, I'd better get going if we're to finish charming the microclimates before lunch," Filius said. "I'll bring the musical box by after dinner, all right, Severus? I have one with some very nice selections on it that she's sure to enjoy."
"Thank you, Professor."
"Don't forget to do something about your chest, or you're sure to have quite a bruise that will need more than just a little potion." Filius smiled brightly. "But then you could have Poppy take a look at it! You should have her check your head wound, in any case."
"Mm. I will take care of it." He could hardly neglect to take care of it, he thought, as his left pectoral muscle was still quite sore from the impact of the blow. He probably already had a bruise.
After Filius left, Severus went to his cupboard and pulled out two potions, one a green salve meant for bruises and sore muscles, and the other a mild analgesic. He considered the brown bottle for a moment, then put it back. It would likely make him sleepy, and it was considered unsafe to Apparate within a few hours of taking. Headache Potion would do. If he had any, which he didn't. He would have to get some from somewhere before lunch. Twiskett could fetch him some, or he could stop by the infirmary and get some from the main school supply.
He took the salve with him into the bathroom and took off his jacket, waistcoat, and shirt. He examined the large blackish-purple bruise on his upper chest, looking in the mirror to see the entire thing. It looked nasty; no wonder he was sore. It took two applications of the salve and several minutes for the bruise to begin to fade and for the underlying muscle to ease its aching. He probably should have had Flitwick apply the salve, Severus thought, or gone to the Headmistress to have her do it, since such potions were always more effective when applied by another person. He'd have to apply it again later, certainly, but his chest felt better than it had, and he could make it through the day without it distracting him too much.
He really would have to work on his blocks. Practising with Flitwick was useful, but he thought that he needed additional practice. As much as it might be helpful to practise with Albus, it also would give away too many of his newly invented spells and reveal too many of his weaknesses. Perhaps Ouellette would practise with him. His fellow Slytherin had become more involved in the duels than she'd originally planned to, Flitwick's enthusiasm had been so contagious, and Severus had admired her performance in her own duel several weeks before. She might be a useful practice partner.
Severus touched the back of his head. Still mildly sore, but a Headache Potion would fix it up. He would stop and get some from Minerva after he'd sent his owl to McGonagall. He hadn't precisely promised Poppy that he would not go anywhere unaccompanied, but he knew it would please and reassure her if she knew that he was taking her wishes seriously. That could not hurt in his execution of Operation Woo and Win Poppy Pomfrey. Hmm . . . Poppy . . . Posy Pomfrey? No, that sounded silly. But he would put that one on his list. He smiled to himself. He would win their bet and then, with a bit more effort, he would win her.
Gareth was just washing his hands at the kitchen sink, having gone to supervise the house-elves as they moved Eileen Snape's bedroom furniture up into the dusty attic, when there was a banging at the window. He shook the water from his hands and strode quickly over to the door, making a mental note to remove the sticking charm from the kitchen windows before he left that day, and let in the owl.
He gave the owl a few treats from his sporran and broke the seal on the parchment. A note from Severus. He wanted to meet in McTavish Street at one. Gareth glanced at his wrist, which was bare, and pulled his watch from his sporran and strapped it back on his left arm. It was already eleven-thirty. He had wanted to work longer, but if they were going to be meeting at one...and Severus had said nothing about lunch...he'd have to find something to eat before then. Gareth grinned. He'd stop by Melina and Brennan's. Although the two usually had a late Sunday brunch and a large meal in the midafternoon rather than lunch, Gareth was sure that they'd be happy to provide him with a bite to tide him over. If he were in luck, Brennan had made potato cakes and there'd be some leftovers. Drenched in melty butter, he'd find the potato cakes a fine meal with no additions, but Melina was, like their Aunt Minerva, partial to haggis in the morning, or at least some kind of nice sausages, so Gareth knew he certainly wouldn't starve. Being a McGonagall witch, Melina would likely insist on introducing some fruit into the meal somewhere, but Gareth would have no objections to that. It would be better than the peculiar fruit smoothies that Hermione had taken to making for every breakfast, always adding that yellow mystery powder to them. Gareth had thought it was simply some Muggle protein powder, or bee pollen, perhaps, but Hermione said that Mother Wayland had suggested it, and it was one of the old witch's nostrums. Hermione didn't seem any the worse for drinking the peculiar concoctions, but Gareth couldn't be persuaded to try it.
He gathered up the photographs and a few other things, stuffed them into his satchel, and Disapparated for the O'Donalds'. Unsticking the kitchen windows could wait; Gareth was hungry.
Severus looked at the closed door and the darkened shop behind its window panes. "Your shop is closed, McGonagall."
"It's not my shop, Snape." Gareth shook his head and looked heavenward. "There's a flower stand near the station. I think there's someone there every day."
A pout crossed Severus's face, and Gareth didn't suppress his snicker. He looked just like two-year old Severus in one of the photos he'd seen that morning.
"I do not want to get some wilted flowers from a bucket on the street," Severus said, his brows drawn together in a frown. He fingered the card in his pocket. He had thought perhaps daisies or jonquils, or both. He ran his finger along the edge of the card. Globe amaranth had been a possibility, too, though perhaps it was a bit too soon for amaranth. He sighed.
"Well, why don't we walk a bit and see if we see anything else that's open," Gareth suggested.
"I wanted flowers. My sitting room is dismal. Flowers and candles," Severus replied. "I want to create a romantic atmosphere."
"There's a nice gift shop along here that sells candles. Scented ones. I know it's open on Sundays," Gareth said. "You could get some that are floral scented."
"I don't want Muggle scented candles. I want flowers. We have candles enough at . . . at the school."
"You have flowers at the school, too," Gareth pointed out.
"Professor Sprout was somewhat perturbed when she found one of her rosebushes had lost its blooms overnight a couple weeks ago. As I was the one who had . . . harvested them, and I confessed to it...don't ask me what possessed me to confess at the time, perhaps it was sleep deprivation...she has forgiven me, but I do not believe it prudent to go about gathering flowers in the Hogwarts greenhouses just yet."
"Ah, I see. Well . . . do they have to be from a shop?" Gareth asked.
"What do you mean?"
"Rosemary has a greenhouse, though I don't think she's spent much time with it in a couple of years with everything else that was going on...especially not in the last few months. I know she wouldn't mind us popping by for some flowers and helping ourselves, but as I say, I don't know whether we'd find much there at the moment. But Grandmother Siofre has some wonderful gardens, two large greenhouses, a conservatory, and a wide range of flowers and other decorative plants at their peak at any time of year...different ones depending on their cycle, but Uncle Honnie probably has more variety than you'd find in any shop, though not necessarily any you have in mind. A lot of useful plants, too. He sells to a lot of apothecaries. You'd find it interesting...unless you've been there before?"
Severus shook his head. "No, no, I haven't."
"Great! You can meet more of the family then, and I bet we can get our tea there, too, if you don't have to hurry back. Don't let Grandmother Siofre intimidate you...she's a bit brusque with everyone. Uncle Honnie's a sweetheart, though. Hey, you'll probably meet Eoghan, too!" Gareth's grin changed, as though he suddenly realised something. "Yes, yes, it's about time you met Eoghan, I think . . ."
"Eoghan? You make less and less sense with each passing day, McGonagall." Severus shook his head, then he stopped cold and grabbed Gareth's arm. "Wait, he's the boy you told me about, the one whose parents were killed," he said in a low voice.
"Aye, he's the lad," Gareth said.
"You haven't . . . you don't think . . . they can't believe . . ." Severus looked around them; there was no one within earshot. "I had nothing to do with that raid. I am certain of it. If it was in McTavish Street in nineteen ninety-five, I wasn't there," he whispered urgently.
Gareth raised his hands, palms toward Severus, and said, "Wait, wait, my friend. No one said anything like that. It has never even been suggested. It's just that...eh, you'll find out soon enough, Severus. And it's probably nothing that will matter to you, anyway, from what you've said in the past. I'll enjoy the moment, though. Besides, you'll be teaching Eoghan in the autumn. Might as well meet him now!"
"You are truly infuriating, McGonagall."
"Sorry! I think it's congenital! Let's walk and find somewhere to leave from."
"All right," Severus said grudgingly. He needed flowers. He'd put up with McGonagall and his relatives for Poppy's sake. Poppy . . . Pearl Pomfrey. Poppy was a pearl, but it was not a euphonious combination, so he hoped that guess was not correct.
"Good," Gareth continued. "Have you met Johannes? You must have."
"No."
"Oh, thought you might have met him. He and Mum are great friends, and of course, Aunt Minerva and Uncle Albus are, too. I think that Professor Sprout consults with him occasionally."
"Is this Johannes Birnbaum?" Severus asked, finally putting the various pieces of Gareth's ramblings together. "The old Herbology teacher?"
"That's the one."
"He's your Uncle Honnie?"
"Well, he's not literally my uncle, obviously, but that's what I called him when I was a boy."
"You have a very strange family," Severus said.
"We have a few things in common, then!" Gareth replied cheekily.
"Mm." He rolled his shoulders and winced. "Let's just go. My headache's coming back."
"You also seem a little stiff. We could stop and see Melina first. She and Brennan were just playing Scrabble when I left. I'm sure she wouldn't mind taking a look at you."
"No. I'm fine. Just a little sore. It was the trip that brought the headache back."
"Right. Grandmother Siofre can give you some Headache Potion."
"I don't even like the idea of asking them for flowers. The more I think about it, the less I like it, but I don't have a lot of choice."
"You could buy some scented candles," Gareth said, an innocent expression on his face.
Severus rolled his eyes. "I said I want to create a romantic atmosphere, McGonagall, not a toxic one. Here. We can Disapparate from here," he said, stepping into a narrow alley out of view of anyone.
A few moments later, he was looking around himself, trying to become oriented after being Side-Alonged to an unfamiliar location. He could be almost anywhere in the Highlands, he thought, though he could feel some strong wards just inches away.
"That's the Tyree place," Gareth said unnecessarily, gesturing toward the large stone house ahead of them.
Severus nodded. The landscaping was impressive. For late March, there were a surprising number of flowering plants blooming on the slopes leading up to large house. Birnbaum must have created some very strong microclimate charms to bring on such a profusion of flowers so early.
"The greenhouses are around back. I'm sure he'll have something suitable for you," Gareth said, waving as the front door opened. "Hey, Brantin!"
A pale house-elf wrapped in a heavy linen towel waved cheerily.
"Are Grandmother Siofre and Uncle Honnie around?"
"Where else would we be?" Siofre asked, appearing behind Brantin. She looked over at Severus, then back at her great-grandson.
"Grandmother Siofre, may I present Severus Snape. Professor Snape, my father's grandmother, Madam Siofre Tyree."
Severus inclined his head respectfully.
"How do you do, Professor." She nodded briskly, then turned to Gareth. "So, you don't pay a call on us for weeks, and now you show up with this fellow. You must be wanting something."
Gareth smiled. "We're after some flowers, Grandmother. I thought that Johannes might have some he could bear to part with."
"Hmph. No doubt he does. Come in," Siofre said, stepping back from the door to allow the two wizards entrance. "He's in the grove; I'll send Kilbeena for him."
"I also thought Eoghan might like to meet Severus," Gareth said.
Siofre nodded and raised her eyebrow, looking again at Severus, this time, a slight smile twitching at the corners of her mouth. "Go through to the sitting room. Eoghan is in his library. I will fetch him to meet his cousin."
Author's Note: The little florist shop card with the "Language of Flowers" that Severus is carrying with him says that daisies signify patience and jonquils mean "return my affections." Globe amaranth is undying love.
I've begun posting a new short RaMverse fic to the Petulant Poetess, Charming the Scottish Garden. There's a bit of a tie-in to the current chapters of A Long Vernal Season, and I think you might enjoy it. Siofre Tyree is one of the primary characters.
I also posted "A Spree with Albus" to my blog, which features the duel between Albus and Malcolm McGonagall. It's an out-take from Resolving a Misunderstanding, and it is relevant to an upcoming chapter of Long Vernal Season; you can find it by going to my WordPress blog (the link is on my author's page here), and either clicking on "Read a Little Fanfic Now," or finding it in the sidebar. I didn't post it here because it's part of Resolving a Misunderstanding "Chapter CXXXV: A Spree," which is here on TPP. I edited it down to make it a little stand-alone ficlet for folks unfamiliar with RaM or ones who would like to refresh their memory without hunting for the relevant portion of the chapter.
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Chapter Eighty: In Pursuit of Flowers (Title subject to change)
Sunday, 28 March 1999
Severus meets one of his distant relatives, and he continues his attempt to create a romantic atmosphere in his pursuit of Poppy.
Characters: Severus Snape, Filius Flitwick, Poppy Pomfrey, Gareth McGonagall, Siofre Tyree, Eoghan Tyree, Johannes Birnbaum, others.
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OMG! How did I miss these last two chapters? Totally wonderful! I'm so in love with Severus and Poppy, I hope it works out for them, I'm worried about Gertrude's attack getting in the way of their happiness, Severys should really talk to Poppy about it and clear the air, I'm sure Gertrude wouldn't mind talking to her as well and explaining she's forgiven him. I'm also so curious about Poppy's middle name! I' suspicious of Gwen bein the vigilante although Severus doesn't think her capable of it, I'm dying to know whow it is and why she's doing it. Are Gertrude and Quin together now? I thought I saw a gleam of something there. Please, tell us soon! I read you haven't forgotten about this fic or any of your other WIPs so I'm hoping for an update in the near future, if live allows. Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi! How lovely to see your name again! :) I'm glad you enjoyed those last two chapters -- though they won't be the last ones, I do hope! I am planning to pick up my WIPs very soon. I've written a couple short fics recently (for Minerva Fest and for the HoggyWarty Christmas exchange), so that kind of helped grease the fanfic cogs a bit. So many (astute!) questions -- but you'll have to wait for the answers!Thank you so much for sticking with the stories! It's very encouraging to know there are still a few folks looking forward to more chapters. :-)
Response from doralupin87 (Reviewer)
Hi! I'm glad to see you are back in fanfiction again and I do hope the cogs are all greased up and ready to go! I've been waiting (patiently!) for an update to this story and to Charming The Scottish Garden, I do love me some Johannes and Siofre! Oh! So, my questions are good? That means I might be onto something, although you did give me a little preview that Gertrude would have a new man in her life, you didn't say who it was, so I think Quin might be a good choice just because they seem connected, although I don't remember quite well if they are related or not. I don't know how much I'll like Trudie with someone other than Malcolm but since you'll be writing it I'm sure I love it, you have this way of making me fall for the craziest couples like Severus and Poppy, never in a million years would I have liked them together if it weren't for your story. Anyway, I look forward to any updates you post. Thanks for coming back, I hope life is good to you :)
OMG. I love these two. Poppy and Serverus are sooooo cute. Please update soon. I want to know what happened to Severus'sbparents and how will Serverus react when Gertrude comes to Hogwarts to teach???
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond to your comment. I really appreciate your review. I am coming back to fanfic after a longish hiatus, and I hope to update all of my WIPs very soon. (Some of what went on with Severus's parents can be glimpsed in "Charming the Scottish Garden," which is set in the late 50s and focusses on Siofre and Johannes. You don't have to read that story to enjoy LVS, though.) Thanks very much for your review! I do hope to post a new chapter of Long Vernal Season within the next couple of weeks.
Im glad i chose to read this chapter last before going to bed. It's raining outside my window now which makes it even easier to imagine the scene you've set before us. I love that Severus and Poppy are moving forward with their relationshp and growing more comfortable with each other. And who wouldn't wanna be snuggled up with the one they love when it's raining outside? Sigh. LOVED IT!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks! It's good to write a relationship that's progressing.I'm glad you liked the rainy seaside snuggling! :-)
It's a lovely story. I look forward to new installments.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much, Dorit!The next chapter is underway, though slowly. I'm glad to know you're looking forward to it!
Yay, an update!!I loved the interaction with Siofre, Poppy, and Severus in this chapter. I think Siofre is trying, in her own way, to make Severus feel welcomed on the estate and I think it was great that she gave them each a charm so they could Apparate. And the surprise with the flowers and the note at the cottage was perfect. I loved it and I think my heart melted with Poppy's. lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Siofre is trying to make Severus feel welcome, as you say, and to let him know that he is both safe and trusted there. It's a bit of an unusual circumstance for him.Poppy's heart sure did melt -- I think Severus should be very happy about that! :-)Thanks for the review! (I'm hoping for another soonish, but I'm working on CSG at the moment -- it's kinda fun writing Siofre at these two different points in time.)
I was so thrilled to see you posted another chapter! Glad to hear that the writing bug has bitten you again and hope you are well.
Regarding this chapter I found your ideas about arithmantic charms fascinating; what a creative mind you have! Severus bringing up procreation was funny and interesting. I had assumed Poppy was past her childbearing years. As always, looking forward to more.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thanks,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! Glad you liked the Arithmantic charms -- it was fun to be able to work them in here and show Gareth practicing his specialization. I figure that with much longer lifespans than Muggles, witches have correspondingly longer procreative years, although it would be a rare thing for a witch past a certain age to actually have a child, both due to a decline in fertility w/o recourse to potions and to personal choice. You may remember that in Death's Dominion, Severus didn't automatically realise that Gareth was Gertrude's son because, as he remarked later to Hermione, she was pretty old when she had him, unusually so (67 yrs old). So Poppy continues to take contraceptive potion on the off-chance that she might become pregnant even without any fertility potions. It's good to be back with my characters and stories again -- I've missed them! I've also just missed having the mental and emotional space to write; it's good to have RL calming down a bit! I'm glad to see you're still around, too! It's been a while!
Loved it! I thought Severus was about to propose! You're killing me.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hiya,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm glad it didn't kill you, since then you'd miss the rest of the story! haha! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was really fun to get back to the story.Thanks very much!
This is the first time she said it, isn't it?Oh, that's wonderful :) glad you're back again!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Indeed it is!It's good to see you -- I'm glad I'm back again, too!
Response from herby (Reviewer)
Oh, I forgot: Congrats on 2nd place! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you!
When will your next updaate be?
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I'm not sure. October was a really hard month, so I wasn't able to write for the last few weeks, and November is looking a bit better, but I'm trying to get myself back on track with things before I can write. I'm glad you're still following the story! :-) Thanks for staying in touch with it even if it's been a bit skimpy in updates recently.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Sorry you've been having a hard time! Don't worry, I LOVE this story. Can't wait!
I can't wait to hear what happens next! Hope to see the next chapter soon!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! It's in the works -- it's been a really tough month, so little energy for writing, but I'm trying to plug away. Thanks for dropping me a note! I always enjoy hearing from readers who are enjoying the story. It's very encouraging.
Response from Applebee545 (Reviewer)
So happy to hear that!! Your welcome and can't wait to see it! :)
First off let me just say I love this story, very creative, but come on! You're driving me insane! Please just marry them already it would be adorable! And Severus talking about children- I almost fainted! Can Poppy still have children? Anywyas, I can't wait for your next update!
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Response from BitBit (Reviewer)
Oh and when will you tell us Poppy's middle name, that whole thing is hilarious!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'm glad you love the story! There's more to go -- mysteries to solve & all that -- and I hope you enjoy that, as well. :-)Witches can continue to have children a few decades longer than Muggle women, though in the last decade or two, they may need a bit of help from potions. Gertrude had Gareth when she was 67 with a bit of help from potions -- and because Malcolm really wanted a child with her. There are actually hints to the reader as to what Poppy's middle name might be -- in the title of the story (though that also expresses what Severus is experiencing throughout the story), in Firenze's prediction back in Part 2, and in Aine's prediction a little while back.Thanks for the review! I might try to write a bit on LVS today.
Another awesome chapter to the story, woo hoo.Loved the "procreation" bit of the chapter. I can't believe Severus went there, teehee. And poor Poppy ... that must have caught her off guard. Cracks me up. And I'm dying to know more about the letters!!!Update soon.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yep, that certainly did catch Poppy off-guard! Glad it gave you a giggle!We'll get to the letters, never fear! Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Woah! That's a teaser! I am DIEING to know what the letters say! Awesome way to set the chappie up. I loved the nudges - and I won't say more on that. I am most interested in all the explanations of Arithmancy - a lot of your ideas about magic give me ideas on how to work around my ideas of magic, if that makes any sense. You and Squibby both have great scientific ideas in relationships with magic - and I just love to read how they weave together. As I grow older, I am learning - everything in this world - living, dead or otherwise, even history, is interwoven into nearly everything else. Almost every act and every creature has a direct affect on the rest of the world if you travel along the path long enough. I find this interweaving so facinating.Bla bla bla, enough of my rambling - an excellent suspense chapter - has me chomping at the bit to find out WHAT is going on with Severus' parents!And, was I misreading, but is Poppy a tad uncertain about Sevy here? She doesn't seem as relaxed and confident as usual.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
You'll find out a bit more about what the letters say in the next chapter, but not everything until Severus reads them. It ties in with a lot of bits and pieces we've been gleaning about Severus's parents since Part One, as well as tying into what we learn about Eileen & her father in Charming the Scottish Garden -- there will be a bit of a recap of that in LVS for Severus's sake (and for readers who aren't reading the late 50s, early 60s CSG fic).Poppy isn't uncertain, though she does show hesitation in a couple spots. Naturally, she was a bit taken aback with the sudden mention of procreation! lol! But her other hesitancy has a reason for it, which will come out in the next chapter. No big deal, though.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I was thining she might be a tad threatened by Gareth, since Severus has told her of a more friendly relationship that they had - thought she might have some doubts. I certainly have to get back into CSG, that's for sure - I've forgotten a great deal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
No, she's not. Gareth just dominates the conversation here a bit. As he is quite capable of doing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
HAHA! Some of us are like that, especially when you get us on a subject we love. Gareth has good company - is all I'm gonna say! *grins*
I enjoyed the exploration of Arithmancy and its many applications in the wizarding world. It must be a lot of fun to take canonical concepts and expand on them in such an interesting way.Poor Severus had a bit of a slip there! Procreation? He's certainly blunt about his intentions toward Poppy in that bit. He can't have had much of a love life in the past, though, so enjoyable sex must be something new to him, as well as someone who reciprocates his love for her. It's lovely to see him have a second chance at love as well as life. I always love to see Gareth and his relationship with Snape, particularly their banter. They've come a long way from their first hostile meeting in DD, that's for sure!It was a lot of fun to see Angus Og make a little cameo at the end of the chapter, especially now that I know he's the Celtic god of love. A suitable entity for Severus to call on, certainly.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
It is fun to play with magic in the stories. I enjoy trying to systemetize it while still keeping it magical and a bit mysterious. (Heck, a lot mysterious in most cases, since it's magic! ) I see basic Arithmancy as a bit like symbolic logic combined with physics, and advanced Arithmancy like theoretical physics plus its practical application in creating effects in the world, not just describing it, so rather well differentiated from "Muggle" numerology, in which everything is reduced to numbers. In my version of magical Arithmancy, other symbols are used to, and they can mean different things and have different "powers" depending upon their juxtaposition with other symbols, whether numeric or otherwise. Yep, I have spent far too much time contemplating a wholly imaginary magical system! lol!Severus did have a little slip that showed Poppy the general direction of his intentions, didn't he?Yes, good ol' Angus Og. Minerva has been using terms from Celtic myths & legends this year for her passwords, and she's particularly fond of that one because of the story her brother Malcolm told her about Angus Og.Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Welcome, Welcome back! I have so enjoyed your stories. I am currently rereading this one to again familiarize myself with the 'danglimg plot clues.' I must admit to a secret desire... Would truly love to see you get the Potions Master into a kilt. Full Scottish.regalia would be even better! Thank You again for taking the time to dream and compose a follow-on tale for the Professor.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Hello, Sehkmet! (Love your name!) Yes, there are a very many dangling clues in this story, and they are going to begin to gradually come together. I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. :-)Severus in a kilt? Hmmm, must think about how to achieve that one . . . maybe in a side-story. Could make for some fun. Naturally, it couldn't be of his own accord. Bad bet with Gareth, perhaps? The possibilities abound!Thank you very much for your kind words! It's especially encouraging coming back from a longish hiatus.Have fun with the reread!
It was interesting to see Alastor again here. He seems to be on slightly better terms with Snape, although their relationship is certainly a tense one. They're both intense figures who can hold grudges. Burns certainly sounds like a suspect! I'm interested to see where questioning her leads. She doesn't seem to understand that not all Slytherins are as bad as Polyphemus and the toe-rag (in the immortal words of Minerva McGonagall) were.I hope the vigilante is caught soon, especially now that someone has died as a result of her actions. The use of the Conruptus spell is a truly disturbed touch, especially combined with the "diseased flesh" rhetoric. I'd certainly be wary if I was a crook and had Mad-Eye Moody on my tail!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Moody is trying to be conciliatory to Snape, but Moody doesn't do conciliatory very well, and Snape isn't the most forgiving soul. Considering their personalities and their histories, they're actually getting along pretty well now! lol!Yep, the vigilante's choice of hexes is particularly nasty. "Disturbed" is a good word for it.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I will put a £ on Burns, can't wait so learn if I am right.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
I'll make a note of that!
Seems like forever since we've had an update so I'm very happy to see one now. I'm very pleased Poppy rushed home to be with Severus after the attack. I think these two are just adorable (don't tell Snape I said that) and for her to endure the wrath of her friends upon coming home early ... I think Severus better really appreciate her gesture. And the bit about Minerva and Gertie before they became friends ... awesome. I love how all your stories tie in together. Can't stand Moody, though that's probably b/c you've written him so well. haha.Hope you'll update again soon!!CFP,the GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, Moody can be pretty abrasive, and since Snape still doesn't like him, that comes through here.I'm sure that Severus both appreciates the gesture and regrets it -- since it raised questions in her friends' minds about why she would leave -- but on the whole, he is very glad she's back, and he's glad that she is willing to leave her friends when she believes he needs her, and that she is willing to be put in an awkward position to do it.I'm working on "Stray" at the moment. It's a bit weird to switch back and forth between "Stray" and LVS, but sometimes I write on one, sometimes the other. It's easier when I'm writing two RaMverse fics because, as you say, the stories all tie together, but "Stray" is not set in the RaMverse and it has a canon-compliant (pretty much) Snape, not the more reformed Snape of the RaMverse.
*snip*“He’s dead. Died an hour or so after reaching St. Mungo’s. Poor sod didn’t have a chance. It was another Conruptus, but this one hit his abdomen, practically dead centre. The damage was extensive. Even if he’d been found right away, the Healers say his chances of surviving such a bad hit were close to nil. Looks like his wife has a good chance of pulling through. She was hit second, and she’d turned to shield her children. The youngest was in her arms.” Moody’s cheek twitched, and his natural eye blinked. He swallowed and shifted in his chair, his claw-foot scraping against the stone floor. *snip*Awwwwwwwwwwwwww - is that Alastor nearly getting choked up???? AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I wuvs my Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Yeah, just a bit! I know you love your Alastor!
Two witches, managing their men... both very skillfully.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Sometimes necessary!
Poor Poppy. It's a miserable feeling to constantly watch out for someone else at a party, making sure they're enjoying themselves or at least not unhappy.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
If Poppy had any clue that Severus is particularly uncomfortable with Gertrude, then she'd be even more worried about that, but she is certainly drawn from her enjoyment of the party during her initial worries that Severus is unhappy. Fortunately, that improves, because, as you say, it can be miserable to constantly be watching to see if someone is enjoying themselves! You can't enjoy the party yourself.
Ha! Panacea - I knew it. The contrast between how the three of them approached the door-riddle was perfect. Flitwick loving the challenge, Poppy game for it but seemingly unconcerned about failing, and Severus annoyed at the inconvienience and protective of his dignity.And the contrast between the way Severus and Poppy viewed her younger self was sweet, too. She's still a bit worried and insecure about their age difference, and he's so in love with her that he considers any Pre-Sev version as simply Poppy-in-development.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Panacea is definitely a good one to add to the list!Glad you enjoyed the different perspectives!
I'm so glad he got that off his chest! And that Poppy took it well. It's a good thing she's both mature and has a real generosity of spirit, otherwise his habit of blurting things out could get him into deep trouble. And this time they were only cuddling, not even post-coital. LOL.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
That was a big blurt, too! Fortunately, Poppy also has learned to try to digest something that surprises her before blurting something herself. lol!Severus is trying to behave differently with Poppy and be as open with her as possible (though he's still hiding some big secrets from her), and he's unfortunately going to an extreme in his honesty. Still, his instincts are basically right; he's just not very good at timing or wording yet, to say the least!
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Sorry if this is a short one - I just wanted to let you know how happy I was about the update, and how much I liked it.
Poor Severus, to have to meet that Gwen person - but it's only natural, of course, that this will happen to him now and then. And I nearly had forgotten about the attacks. I'm getting more and more curious about their origin!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It has been so long since I've updated on a regular basis, it's not surprising you had forgotten about the attacks. I hope to update at least twice a month from now on -- barring major disruptions in RL.
Thanks again!
What a lovely fun chapter! I'm so happy and excited to be reading a new chapter of this story. I so adore your Severus and how he's come to interact with the others in such a friendly way. Reading about dueling parctice was fun - I think I've said it before but I vastly enjoy your creative use and explanations of magic. Charms, Transfiguration, Jinxes, spells, intention, all of it actually seems to make sense in a way that I could actually use it (if I were a witch and if magic actually existed.) You make it so real, so effortless, such a part of the way of things -- it's like watching Fred Astaire dance... effortless - we all think we could actually do that. Seeing how Madam Fuller reacted to the situation makes me appreciate Poppy all the more. I loved Melina oblivating her - what a surprising and fun moment. I can just imagine the look on Severus' face and the conspiriatorial comradery he'll now feel with Melina. Hope there will be more to this story soon. Thank you for your creativity and hard work.
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
Thank you very much for the review,
Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)
! I am very glad you enjoyed it.If you ever wake up to discover yourself a witch in the middle of the HP universe, you can put your knowledge of magic to work! lol! (And not go trying untested zero-g charms on people!) I'm glad you like the magic. It is fun to construct. I had a particularly good time with Flitwick's hyperbaric treatment, although the details of it weren't sketched out here.Glad you enjoyed Melina's little surprise at the end of the chapter!Thanks again for your review and for returning to the story after such a long hiatus. Hopefully, the next chapter won't be so long in coming! (I'm working on a novella-length Hooch fic at the moment, and I'm trying to get that finished sometime this week. We'll see! Keep an eye out for that one. It's not RaMverse, though -- Snape's in it, and he's our canon Potions master.)