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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


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10/10

blue artemis

Ah, that was rather a lovely way to bridge a gap.  Although I do believe that Albus will be a Slytherin.  

0/10

MollysSister

The are both over read to be apologizing with Shakespeare’s words! Ha!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, wouldn't you just love to converse with your loved ones like that?

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, wouldn't you just love to converse with your loved ones like that?

0/10

MollysSister

What what known what from the start? Did I miss something? Egads!

0/10

MollysSister

I think Hermione has made a good choice in avoiding Snape for awhile. Dust settling is a good thing. Oh my she has just stirred it all up again hasn’t she? ((giggles))

9/10

CharmedForce

I really enjoy how Severus and Hermione communicate without direct words. The quotes and meaning behind actions really speaks loudly.

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Sounds like Snape's betting on his own influence on little Albus Severus. Wonder if he has a clue how close Harry came to being put in Slytherin. George's news was delightful and completely in character! Of course he would essentially elope. Our beloved twins were always about the spontaneity of the moment. Thank you for a very touching tribute to Fred. It was lovely to see an unspoken, yet definite, truce between Snape and Hermione. An extra little gift for little Albus Severus' birthday.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

... although he might not care about that gift yet. I loved the picture of the stiff potions master right in the middle of a Weasley family reunion.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

... although he might not care about that gift yet. I loved the picture of the stiff potions master right in the middle of a Weasley family reunion.

10/10

emmeline33

Another beautiful, poetic chapter.  I quite enjoy the quiet, almost reverential tone of this story, and the way that Hermione is coming to know not only Snape, but herself as well through their interactions.  I can almost see and hear their exchanges in my mind as I read, you describe them so well.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I totally agree. It was this poetic and slow development that made me consider this story for translation. I love stories who - poetically speaking ;-) - explore the terrain on long and winding roads instead of taking the highway.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I totally agree. It was this poetic and slow development that made me consider this story for translation. I love stories who - poetically speaking ;-) - explore the terrain on long and winding roads instead of taking the highway.

0/10

sunny33

subliminal Shakespearean messages, one way of communicating :)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, something is rotten in the state of Denmark, I guess

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, something is rotten in the state of Denmark, I guess

10/10

gabi1791

Slowly but steadily moving forward. I like it!gab

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

One step forward, half a step back...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

One step forward, half a step back...

0/10

septentrion

It's so strange, that way they have to communicate without words, spoken words. Do they even realise it?

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Even if they realise it, there is a whole mountain range of denial here...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Even if they realise it, there is a whole mountain range of denial here...

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Ah, so Hermione was behind the letter from Leontes. Seems Hermione wasn't quite as clever as she thought using Muggle literature references. After all, Snape"s father was a muggle. Sounds like Snape may be calling a truce at last. Thank you for continuing with this translation. I'm enjoying this story very much and look forward to future updates!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, be honest: we are all Muggles, but would we have known about the reference to "Hermione" by just reading the name?I am still translating, although the chapters won't be coming as fast as in the beginning any more: RL is being quite exhaustive at the moment.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, be honest: we are all Muggles, but would we have known about the reference to "Hermione" by just reading the name?I am still translating, although the chapters won't be coming as fast as in the beginning any more: RL is being quite exhaustive at the moment.

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Oh, dear!  Just when everything seemed to be falling into place, Rita Skeeter has to go and muck it all up. And poor Hermione gets to be the bearer of the bad news.

0/10

MollysSister

Oh that was chilling! I expect its going to be a long road back to being civil to eachother…

0/10

MollysSister

Goodness Snape is good at holding a grudge! I thought the obliviate idea of Hermione's was a good one. Meep!

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

That last part almost sounded like Severus was apologizing.  I liked Harry's reader's letter.Translation was clear and well done.  Although I had to laugh a little at the use of the word Schadenfreude.  I guess some things just cannot be translated.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Hi Professor,believe it or not, but there is a small range of German words that seem to have made it into English usage unharmed. Examples: Schadenfreude, Leitmotiv, Kindergarten, Weltschmerz, Angst ...Although I don't like the tenor behind it. "Characterise the German soul, please!" - "Weltschmerz, Schadenfreude, Angst..." :-(I'd rather go for the "Footbal-Feast-Crazy" thing we are experiencing once again this year (for the European Championships which are on at the moment).

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Hi Professor,believe it or not, but there is a small range of German words that seem to have made it into English usage unharmed. Examples: Schadenfreude, Leitmotiv, Kindergarten, Weltschmerz, Angst ...Although I don't like the tenor behind it. "Characterise the German soul, please!" - "Weltschmerz, Schadenfreude, Angst..." :-(I'd rather go for the "Footbal-Feast-Crazy" thing we are experiencing once again this year (for the European Championships which are on at the moment).

0/10

sunny33

His response to Rita's article is interesting.  good chapter

10/10

snuggleslut

interesting, I went and reread the play but i'm still not sure as to what Severus is trying to get at, but I can't wait to find out. i'm really enjoying reading this story and wanted to thank you for translating it so that I could.

10/10

pookah

Quite an apology from Snape.  Thank you for this interesting chapter  (with Shakespeare!)  well done both writing and translating it.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Brilliant.I'm guessing that Leontes is Hermione and it's her letter defending Severus and he has now acknowledged that by sending her the line from Shakespeares Winter Tale.I am thinking that way because in said Shakespeare play Leontes is Hermiones husband.

0/10

shellsnapeluver

cute story... I wonder what he thought when he looked into his green eyes...

10/10

blue artemis

Leontes is Hermione's husband.  That was her letter.  Which Snape must have recognized perfectly well.  A wonderful chapter. 

10/10

Severessa

I don't get it. I'm sorry. What do Leontes Pearson have to do with anything, and what secret does Hermione have? I tried to slog through the Shakespeare quote, and my mind can't wrap around all of the hidden meanings, except that Hermione is the queen accused of planning to off her husband.If you could give me a hint or two, I could enjoy the tale a little better, I think....?????????????

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

,  <who is feeling confused and more than a little stupid>

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well: there is a reader's letter in the newspaper, defending Snape. Written by some stranger. Nobody is supposed to know who this stranger is, especially not Snape. Hermione thought that by using a pseudonym out of a Muggle book, she would avoid detection quite cleverly. However, Snape seems to know Muggle literature. He found out who she is because of the characters in the play and even acknowledges her praises with a quote from said Muggle literature. Got it?

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

,  <who is feeling confused and more than a little stupid>

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well: there is a reader's letter in the newspaper, defending Snape. Written by some stranger. Nobody is supposed to know who this stranger is, especially not Snape. Hermione thought that by using a pseudonym out of a Muggle book, she would avoid detection quite cleverly. However, Snape seems to know Muggle literature. He found out who she is because of the characters in the play and even acknowledges her praises with a quote from said Muggle literature. Got it?

10/10

gabi1791

Very good chapter!!! Looking forward to more!gab

9/10

CharmedForce

I hope Rita gives up and doesn't attack him further. But that's somewhat like wishing the wind wouldn't blow, isn't it?

9/10

reets67

Nice progression. Great writing and translating.  I like the inclusion of the reference to A Winter's Tale - Plus the name Leontes also alludes nicely to the secret character's affiliation and identity...

Cheers

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