I'm glad to see that Severus hasn't lost his wit. He's not that disagreeable, it seems, just withdrawn from society, though his "relationship" with the Potters will probably put him in contact with other beings a bit more.

Wonderful story, wonderful translation.  I'm so impressed by this first chapter.  Thank you for writing it, MArisol and thank you, Muggline, for translating it. 

Great chapter...I hope Snape reconsiders.

A great first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.

I can't imagine what a task translating something like this would be. Can't wait to read more!

I love Slytherin Hermione. Not very fair for Severus, but the only way to get him do what she wants.

Excellent start.....

Yea!  J.K.R. is thwarted again!  I think Harry was brassy to ask Severus to be godfather, but I like the idea, how fitting!

An intriguing start.  Poor Severus, so neglected and bitter.  How will he respond to Hermione?I've bookmarked.

   Oohh...playing the Lily card...very slick.   Very intriguing beginning.  Can't wait for more.

Very interesting start, I like the idea of Severus being some part of Albus Severus life. (Though I have more issues about Albus being part of his name, Dumbledore was an manipulative old bastard, no matter how much he was on the "rigth" side of the war.)Please say that since you have made Severus still alive, that Hermione is still Hermoine Granger, not Granger-Weasley or just Weasley. Just the thougth of Ron being anything more than a friend makes my skin crawl, I hate that pairing:-)Update again soon!

I have been staying away from post DH fics because I was disappointed in the book in general, but decided to give this a read anyway. I think it will be a good story and look forward to the next chapter. Great start.

Very nice and intriguing beginning!  I'm looking forward to reading more.

oh can't wait!

Harry has always been a little hot-headed, but I don't think Snape would have reacted well to the child's name if he had heard it from Harry.

I wonder how this will bring about a relationship between Hermione and Severus. Perhaps she is the godmother of Albus Severus Potter? Hopefully Severus will decide to get out of his house more . . . or at least decide to spend more time with people. I'm sure Hermione wouldn't mind talking with him. :)I like the preface of your story. I'm quite looking forward to what comes next. I have a feeling that Severus will decide to become the godfather, but I'm not sure how he'll go about accepting the position. Maybe owling a letter? That way he wouldn't have to see Harry again right away.

this is such a different start for a story, I will look forward to more.

Wonderful beginning to this story that looks like it has great promise.  Even with such a short scene, I like the way you have portrayed Hermione already.  I look forward to your next chapter.  Thanks for posting, JoAnne

Hermione has struck a chord here. You've picked my curiosity. I bookmark the story.

Al is a lucky boy to have such godparents. As for his housing, I think only time and the Sorting Hat can tell...

I'm trying very hard to be patient for the next chapter... you're going to have it soon, right? Please? This is the best HG/SS story I've ever read... please?

Hermione the lonely spinster, etc.?  Well not for long, I hope.

Karma points for Hermione!  "Persistence" really is her first name.  Miracles do happen. And the thought of a man (esp. Snape) with an infant in his arms just makes me *melt*.  Thank you for translating this story.  I know I never would have read it if it wasn't in an English version.  I hope to see more stories with your collaboration in future.

Intriguing, promising start! I'm bookmarking this.

Oh man...what an evil cliffie...love the story.