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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


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7/10

chyara

no wedding and kids for her, eh?

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

It's called an "open end", darling... Nobody knows what the years will bring :-)

10/10

MollysSister

Thank you so much for this story ladies. I have enjoyed the reading of it.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

We aim to please...

9/10

feisanna

Beautiful ending, my thanks to Marisol for her tale and to you Muggline for your translation.

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Marisol, I've really appreciated your character development in this story.  There were times when I didn't think that this Severus could love, but you made his growth towards loving Hermione very believable!Muggline, thanks for taking the effort to translate this story and share it with us.  And thanks for letting me read the chapters before anybody else.  Hehe!  :)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thanks for the praises - but you had to work for your privilege, my dear!

10/10

Elisabeth

Your author's note really said it all -- what distinguishes this story isn't hawt sexxx or high drama (although it has been both sexy and dramatic), but its subtle layers of mood. All of the characters were completely, fully drawn -- as the story grew on me, each new chapter seemed like a reunion with old friends. Many thanks to Marisol, and thank you so much, Muggline, for your efforts in bringing this lovely story to a new audience.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, that's why I loved it. In my opinion, this is a true "adult" story, where the characters get out of bed and live a life.

10/10

beaweasley2

Very nice story. You did a good job translating it. I hope to see others from this author some day.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I can't promise anything. She has posted some HP FF, but I have started translating another fic by a different author and I have a very busy RL. Just watch what happens...

10/10

braye27

This has been such wonderful story that I simply must tell Marisol and you, Muggleline, how deeply grateful I am that we have been allowed the joy of reading it.  It was realistically paced to reveal the journey of the spirit that Severus had to make to go from the isolated and taciturn man he was to become the man we see in this Epilogue.  Paralleling Severus' own journey, Hermione, Ginny, and Harry made their own slow journey and managed to forge bonds of love and friendship with the Potions master.  Hermione's journey went much further.  By encompassing Severus with her total acceptance of what he could offer, which included loving her, she and Severus have built a life for themselves that may not have been everyone's idea of perfect, but it suited the two of them well.I'm tickled for Albus that he was sorted into Ravenclaw.  He will not have to meet any expectations for either House—Slytherin or Gryffindor, but I have no doubt that he will bring glory to his own House and to his godfather by becoming brilliant at Potions!Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the opportunity and the privilege of enjoying this marvelous story!Beth

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

OMG, get off the floor, dear! Thank you very much for your reviews - you always take the time to leave meaningful comments that make our day...

10/10

fizzabella

Just lovely:)

So perfect:)

Warm regards,

Fizzabella

10/10

sinbad

Nice ending and a good compromise.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, I think a fairy tale ending would have been strange...

0/10

myami

Beautiful.

10/10

snitchette

I'm surprised. I thought after a decade they would at least live together. They seem to be happy quite enough, but I couldn't help but hope for marriage and perhaps a child or two. That's the bad side of being an helpless romantic.Anyway, that was a fantastic story, and I thank you and Marisol for sharing and translating.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, of course it would have been nice. But it's their happiness that counts.

10/10

ClayPotter

Beautiful! I was a bit surprised that they were not married, but perhaps marriage doesn't suite Marisol's Severus (or Hermioine either, it's not for everyone).Like you, Muggline, I really enjoyed the slow and realistic pace of this story. It warmed my heart to the core.Thanks so much for giving us non-German speakers the chance to enjoy it. :)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You're welcome. I actually did this to see whether I could do "literature" as in "not business/finance". It was fun!

10/10

neelix

Sweet ending. Sad it's all over though! Thanks for brining this to us!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

If you're sad that it's over, it must have been good!

10/10

makaem

That was a lovely ending. Thank  you for taking the time to translate this. I'm always in awe of anyone who is able to do that. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you!

10/10

irishredlass

Now to get the epilogue to this story on today, of all days, my birthday is absolutely perfect.  Thank Marisol for writing it and thank you for taking the time and care for translating it so we could all enjoy it in its glory.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Happy Birthday, then!

0/10

hopelesliehermnharry

Oh my God!!!...Thank you so much Marisol and thanks a million Muggline for translating...This just made my day!!!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

This fic is beyond amazing. This has to be the most realistic portrayal of the ss/hg ship I have ever read. The dance between them was painful at many moments, as was the time it took to get to this point, but dang was it worth it. Eagerly await further development of their relationship.

10/10

MollysSister

I do adore those late night confessions and promises.

0/10

remy

Oh...just an epilogue left, makes my heart a teeny bit sad but I can see how our story is coming to an end. :)

Sometimes that's the best and worst feeling in the world - the near end to a great story, don't you think?

0/10

remy

I love the imagery of the corridor conversation..lovely!

(Sidenote: Do you see those random question marks at the end of the chapter?)

0/10

remy

Oh my goodness, this has to be my favorite love scene.

I am very far behind in this story - what a great place to pick it up!

9/10

feisanna

what a lovely tale, please keep it up

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, there's not much to keep up, since there's only the epilogue left.

0/10

star_girl

Nawww, I imagine Severus to be a possessive smuggler too! Lovely chapter.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you!

10/10

snitchette

I'm so glad he finally accepted and her love. I can't wait to read the epilogue.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Don't worry, it's in the queue.

10/10

debjunk

Aw, yay! I really love how Severus knows he's difficult and is amazed by Herm's devotion.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, he seems to have come to his senses.

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