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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


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10/10

neelix

*sniff*well, that was worth waiting for!Beautiful...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

And what a long wait it was... thanks!

10/10

braye27

Hermione's nervousness as she paced in front of Severus's new home was perfectly described.  Continually glancing at one's watch and being surprised that only mere seconds have passed is something everyone can identify with.  We've all been situations like that, and the feeling that time is "taking its own sweet time" only makes the waiting more difficult.

I loved Severus's new home!  The small and cozy house, sparsely furnished, seems like just the kind of place that Severus would have chosen.  The tall grass in the garden and the old cherry trees fit very well with the home I pictured, and it suits him to a tee.  I can imagine him slowly making changes here and there to grow some of the herbs he will need for his potions, and taking delight in making a new life for himself here.

I think I must give thanks to Mr. Blinkey for showing an interest in Hermione, and to Ginny for deciding that she and Harry should get the children home before they became too tired.  At first I was afraid that Hermione was going to leave as well, but Severus came through and gave her that kiss that let her know that he wanted her to be a part of his life.  His promise that he would try to never hurt her on purpose was as honest as he could be.  He couldn't promise to be all the things she might wish, but he made it perfectly clear that the thought of being without her in his life terrified him as much as the thought of opening himself up to having someone special in his life.  Making a new life is an undertaking that only a brave man would attempt, and I think that he will be very glad he chose to do it.  After all, when he was completely unguarded, when he was still asleep, he drew her body to his and held on to her.  "Hermione smiled when she recognised the gesture for what it was: his instinctive wish to keep her as close as possible."

I am eagerly awaiting the epilogue to see what the future might hold for these two wonderful people.  Thank you to Marisol for writing this wonderful story and to you for translating it so we English speakers can enjoy it.  I have loved every word.Beth

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you so much for your warm and elaborate review! It's readers like you that keep us going!

10/10

ClayPotter

"Housewarming" indeed! What a wonderful way to start a new life.I am so glad that this chapter is here to read. I went down my list of favorites yesterday and wondered if I would ever get to read the end of this story. And here it is, with the epilogue soon to follow. A bittersweet fact. I want to keep reading more, but I know that it can't go on forever.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, I started translating another story some time ago. It's totally different, set in the Marauder Era and full of drama and suspense in later chapters - but it is finished already, so I know what I'm getting into (96 chapters...) :-)

10/10

Gardengirl

Awww! *is happy*That was terrific! Loved Ginny's not-subtleness. It was fantastic.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, I loved it, too.

0/10

gifarlme

lovely

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thanks!

10/10

Zigflorian

Yay!  That was very sweet!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Sugar-high, eh?

10/10

beaweasley2

I loved this. His little house seems perfect for him. I loved the interchange/reactions regarding Mr. Blimey. Too funny. I'm so glad GInny's oh-so-subtle hint worked out.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes... Did you see the imaginary camera turn towards the fire in the grate ;-)? (That's what they always did in Hollywood movies to hint at other things happening between the leading couple...)

10/10

joyfulheart

I love this story. I am so glad its back. This was a very heartwarming chapter, worth the wait.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

THANKS!

10/10

jaden

I don't review very often bit this story has been one of my favorites.  Thank you for updating! I had almost given up hope!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

so had I... but we made it!

0/10

kimjo2

touching and heartwarming.  thanks so much

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

you're welcome...

10/10

makaem

I  hope Ginny didn't get into trouble with Harry.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Why would she? I bet she'll explain everything to him once they're at home. And as soon as he sees the happy couple, he will sing her praises.

10/10

fizzabella

Perfect:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh, Baby, that's what I like ;-) Short and oh so sweet...

0/10

GryffKat

I am so glad to see an update. Please convey my enjoyment of the story to the author.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Don't worry. She has the password and she will be reading this.

10/10

keske

aww!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

hee hee ;-)

10/10

sinbad

 Severus's style of negotiation is hilarious!  I liked the house description as well.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

negotiation? What negotiation?

0/10

krazigal2004

Wow. He finally told someone what he was doing. At least he didn't just disappear like before. Can't wait to read more. =)

0/10

kimjo2

it is glacially slow but he is moving.  what a wonderful and hopefilled update.  thanks so much

0/10

MollysSister

I can certainly understand how being around Severus is exhausting with him attempting to change. I get frustrated just reading about it!

Begone to spinners end! An excellent image to see it burning.

No need to reply to this review, you just get better.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, very good and so promicing!  I'm so glad that he's moving and starting over.

10/10

beaweasley2

Talk about baring your soul!
Oh, hmm, now he knows, but what will he do about it?

10/10

neelix

Oh my goodness! Fantastic update! I really hope marisol is a fast writer and that the translation is quick. I cannot wait to se where this goes now! Thanks.. and I hope you feel better soon x

10/10

Hanagasume

I like this story a lot!
I'm not prone to reading, WIP's,
but I find this intriguing.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!

A~~

0/10

sunny33

Progress, however slow, is still progress. :)

10/10

ClayPotter

I hope that this is a true and good turning point for Severus. He needs a change so much. A fresh start will help him to put the past behind him.

10/10

debjunk

You had me worried there for a while.  I think his burning his house and starting over is a wonderful idea!  Who would want to stay in a house full of bitter memories.  Bravo for him. 

I hope you're feeling better soon. 

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