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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


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0/10

sunny33

Powerful spell that! :)

0/10

kimjo2

*sniff* *honk!*  dang, woman!  you made me cry.  what an awesome (in the real sense of the word) chapter.  it's so not going to be easy.  he's been the way he is for so long but i see hope, too.  thanks so much, love.  you rule and reign!
                                      (me blowing kisses)

10/10

kizzy7

Moved me to tears with this line: "Please stop hurting yourself." I hope he can. I hope he can let go of the past and realize that people care for him, for his wellbeing without any selfish reasons. Oh, rarely am I so invested in a fic.

10/10

keske

~hugs hermione and severus tightly~

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter, I love how Severus is finally talking to Hermione, his feelings and even asked for help. 

10/10

irishredlass

What an absolutely beautiful and powerful moment.  The door has finally been opened.

10/10

Nessa

Bless Severus, if only he could explain in some sort of way what he is feeling and not just his feelings for Hermione. But Hermione will get him through this though and drag them out (I hope).  
Great update.

0/10

rhiannon113

I have chills. That was one of the most amazing "Hermione making Severus remove his head from his own arse" scenes I've ever read!!!!! (No disrespect to our beloved Potions Master, bien sur.)

Wooo. I had to read it twice because I kept tearing up. =]

10/10

joyfulheart

That was lovely.

8/10

kimbee73

What decision? AHHH! Evil cliffie. Do write again soon.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

As per today (2009/03/23) the next chapter is no. 22 in the queue... - and chapter 32 has been posted already!

10/10

makaem

Heck of a place to leave us.  I can't decide if I want her to walk away or finally wear him down enough to start a relationship. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh, but she can't walk away now, can she? She would have had much more reason in earlier chapters!

10/10

beaweasley2

So? Where did he go? Obviously he's all right, but yes, everyone whose in his life was worried about him. Why didn't he realize that he is now part of a family? Oh, I can't wait until Ginny sees him!Or Harry!Or Al - even Al woudl know that something was wrong and would have been a bit worried...So, Give it up Severus, YOU are cared for, cared about and loved.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Takes a lot of getting used to these things...

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, how sweet. Poor little James, Of course he didn't mean it. LOL

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, that's how children are.

10/10

beaweasley2

WHoot, Dumbledore. What great words of wisdom.Odd that it would be in Severus' old classroom where Severus and Hermione would meet to talk.  He opens up to her and I bet in the next minute he will shove her out again. Man, that man is broken and lost. Too bad.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

This cactus has huge thorns indeed.

10/10

beaweasley2

Woa, bravo Ginny!  Yes, I see now, but Hermione should keep herself in check and cool off. Let herself gain back her strength before facing him again. Let him come crawiling....

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

It will take until chapter 31 before he does anything akin to crawling.

10/10

beaweasley2

Hermione, give it up girl - it was a one night stand and meant nothing to the guy.  You are better off going back to work, writting a book on 'Understanding Why Miggles Won't See You (it'll be a best seller,  I promise), start knitting hats and socks for Christmas (Ron would simply love a pair), taking up painting, start a herb garden, and breeding hippogriffs.  That should get him off your mind.Ginny! Whoot - you go girl! What a great friend she is. So glad that she was around to help pull Hermione back on her feet again.And Severus  watch out! Ginny is gonna step in!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*giggle* I loved the "herb garden and Hippogriffs" part...

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, Harry's reaction at finding Hermione in the house was so realistic. Hermione's hurt and confusion when she realized that she was alone was well done. I'd have left, but then the extremely painful interchange between Severus and Hermione wouldn't have happened. But man I feel sorry for her - her world just fell out from under her feet. And his words were far more apinful than any knife could be.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

If reviews could kill, he would have been tarred, feathered and quartered at that point.

10/10

beaweasley2

Um, wow, nice lemons... very seductive and passionate.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

A little unexpected, though...

10/10

beaweasley2

From a lie to a kiss. Whoot! To a real kiss. yipeeee

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I guess that's what everyone felt upon reading this one.

10/10

beaweasley2

WHAT?  Oh, no you didn't! This is the worst evil cliffie I have ever read!!! --> on forward

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

It's good you didn't find the story earlier, when you would have waited a while for the next one...

10/10

beaweasley2

OH, good they brewed the potion. I hope the little babe will be all right?

10/10

beaweasley2

Aw, the family reunion around the hospital bed! Man, that Healer had a bur up her bum!  Good move, Hermione!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You took advantage of the weekend to catch up, eh?

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Yep!

10/10

Nessa

That was an interesting update. I wonder Severus has been. Something to ponder. Look forward to more.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

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Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

the answer - or a very educated guess - is in the next chapter.

9/10

sinbad

I think Severus is protesting too much.  Perhaps he is so afraid of what he is feeling he needs to retreat a bit.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I finally managed to put the next chapter at the end of the validation line, so you can see for yourself, soon.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I finally managed to put the next chapter at the end of the validation line, so you can see for yourself, soon.

0/10

star_girl

Another great chapter. I love seeing the flashes of Severus' caustic humour.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

So do I...

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