Such a cathartic chapter for the two of them.  Poor Hermione wasn't expecting Severus to make a vow to keep her safe.  Think it was all a bit too much for her...

I like this. Rather dark and intriguing - just what I enjoy!

Wow.  That was intense. 

Wow. This just keeps getting better

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Malfoy sr. a spy OMG.  Everyone gone, everyone.......... Truly heartbreakingWhat an incredible update, I will be here waiting on the edge of my seat for the next one.

what an intense story.  thanks so much

Well written, intriguing story.  I look forward to the rest.  Well done.

Geez, this is a bloody depressing chapter. Dark, dark world in this fic.

you've written a really interesting take on Voldemort's triumph.  Great detail to descriptions, not too much and not too little.  Keep up the good work.

Oh God! How heartbreaking! This story really tugs at my gut. Such sadness. He must have been the one they never found. So glad she stopped being mean to him and is accepting his gentle kindness. Sounds like then need each other despirately.

Wow, such an emotional chapter for Hermione!

Oh wow. Brilliant as always.

Oh my gosh, this has me crying.  Please update soon!!!!

Excellent take on Hermione's fate, the emotions ring true.  The enigma of Severus Snape's standing within the Dark Lord's kingdom is fascinating.  Well done, I'm looking forward to what happens next.

facinating!  what an intense and amazing story.  thanks so much

Quite a strong chapter.  Should be interesting to see Hermione and Severus facing these emotions now after supressing them for such a time.

What a powerful chapter to follow that last powerful chapter.  This is getting very interesting, and I'm really looking forward to the next update.Thanks!Beth

I think Walden McNair wants a piece of Severus, and it's a good think for Snape that Hermione is on his arm.  Now I simply must go to the next chapter because my curiosity is killing me!

I really like this, BTW.
Beth

Whoa!  This first chapter is a real doozie.  Sounds like life after a victorius Voldemort is not something any of the survivors would look forward to.  Being pimped out for the wellbeing of Ma's pocketbook is not my idea of a good time.

I can't wait to see where you take us on this journey!!!
Beth

Something pretty powerful occurred in those few minutes when Severus and Hermione were along in the room.  I love it when McNair tried to horn in on Severus' time, and the Potions master was quick to let him know that that would never happen.


Very good chapter!
Beth

Another great chapter.  You've expressed Hermione's confusion beautifully.

Fascinating to watch Hermione digging for feelings that she has buried so deeply.  It is hard to imagine someone thinking insanity was their only escape, what a horrible place to be. It will be interesting to see what other part Snape will play in her emotional reawakening.

Another fabulous chapter. I loved the way you brought out her growing awareness of Snape and the emotions attached to that awareness of him.

Hello - this is a really interesting start and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop things through the story.  I was expecting Mr M to be Lucius Malfoy so I was pleasently surprised when it was revealed to be McNair.  Looking forward to seeing the next chapter :-) xXx