A Last Briefing
Chapter 33 of 40
AuretteHermione frets on the eve of battle.
ReviewedA big thank you to astopperindeath for the beta.
Chapter 33: A Last Briefing
The thirty-first of July found the house crowded and tense. There was no business; things had been quiet on that front for the last two days. The Death Eaters were all on alert at the Ministry, and only Vaisey or Goyle had showed up to pass on information. Regular customers stayed away as well, as the Wizarding world settled in to wait for the prophecy to be fulfilled.
Neville's fighters had started to arrive in twos and threes in the early morning hours, and eventually, their entire company of ninety-two was at the house, supplemented by the twenty oath-bound friends of Viktor's from Bulgaria that had arrived the day before.
Ma had accommodated everyone into rooms and unused dorms, and even though it was crowded, things were going smoothly so far. Now with the exception of Snape's Company, and Severus himself, we were all jammed into the practice center for a last briefing.
"Alright, let's review one more time," I said to the packed room. "They don't fight as a cohesive unit but in a chaotic, self-centered manner. We have been drilling for that, and I think we can feel confident that our tactics are as sound as common sense allows.
"Agatha, you're in charge of operations in the house once our army moves out. Do we need anything else for the infirmary or holding area?"
"Not at the moment," she replied. "I've relocated the infirmary to the dorms upstairs, and it's fully stocked. I hope by all that's sacred we don't need that much room, but better safe than sorry. As for the detainees, I have a place for them but we'll have to wait for the wards to drop before I can secure it better. When it starts, I will make for there right away with three of Mr. Krum's gentlemen, and it will be only a matter of moments for it to be ready and functional."
"Excellent. You'll have to secure the Floo quickly; we can't have anyone gaining access to the house at all once this begins, except by Portkey."
"I can shut that down now, if you like; that doesn't set off any wards."
"How often do you use it?"
"Only for paperwork...budget reports and the like...about once a week."
"Let's just wait until we are closer to zero hour. I don't want to do anything out of the ordinary too soon, just in case." I turned towards Nadia and Penelope.
"You've checked over the new infirmary? Is there anything you need?"
"Not that I can foresee," answered Nadia. "It's fully stocked with potions, medical supplies and equipment. All we need are healers able to do more than triage." She looked towards Penelope.
"What's the status with our St. Mungo's connection?" I asked her.
"We have five people ready to Portkey here when they get my signal. All have been oath-bound and all are completely loyal to the cause. Three are trauma specialists, and two are trained in curse reversal. You get the casualties to us, and we can treat them."
An excited murmur ran around the crowded room.
"That's... much better than we hoped for," I said.
"Well, you have Blagdon and Goyle to thank for that. They approached Pansy Parkinson's sister, Dahlia, last week. She's now one of our new Trauma specialists. He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named made a big mistake when he started killing his own. She brought in the last two, also grieving relatives with an axe to grind. So, yes, we have a much better infirmary now."
"That's excellent news. Excellent. Peaches, what about your cohort, are you ready?"
Peaches moved through the crowd until she was up front.
"Yes, we each have enough Portkeys to get anyone who goes down back to the house, and medical supplies for anything too critical to Portkey, and we've drilled on how to cover each other if one of us drops out of formation to stabilize someone for transport. We're as ready as we're going to be."
"Do all the fighters know the incantation to illuminate Snape's Company? We can't risk picking off our own."
"We do," said Neville
"Vee do as vell," said Viktor.
"Remember, when the Dark Lord goes down, those with the Dark Mark will be incapacitated, according to the ones who where there when he was defeated before. Be prepared for that, and try to keep our boys safe if possible; not everyone on the other side has a Dark Mark."
I looked down at my notes and heaved a sigh.
"Alright, let's talk quickly about what to do if the Dark Lord doesn't go down." I waited for the muttering to die down before I continued. "Does anyone not have a personal Portkey?" I held my hand up to show the ring on my middle finger. Everyone in the room held a hand up to show identical rings. "Neville, your people staying behind have theirs as well?"
"Yes. Everyone not in the fight will be in the forest with the centaurs. If they get the signal, they will all Portkey to Viktor's estate in Bulgaria."
I nodded and crossed off the last line on my notes.
"Remember, if we lose, there is nowhere safe in Britain. Don't hesitate; if you see the signal, get out." I turned back to Nadia and Penelope. "You will hopefully have enough time to grab supplies and activate the rings on any patients you can before you get out yourselves.
"I think that about covers it. Any questions? No? Really? Alright then.
"We move floor to floor, we stay in our formations, we stick to the plan until the plan stops working, then we improvise. Look to your team leaders and follow the chain of command on your teams."
I laid my notes down on my desk.
"Percy has maps of the Ministry for everyone; take the time to study them with your team. From now on, stay with your team members. We might as well spend the day getting used to each other now that we are all together finally."
At my signal Percy stepped forward with a stack of parchment and began handing maps out.
Charlie made his way over to me and gripped my shoulder as we looked out at the people in the room.
"You do know that you're an amazing woman, right?"
I tried for a self-deprecating laugh but only managed a noise reminiscent of mild hysteria.
"Thanks, Charlie."
"Ron and Harry must be very proud of you, wherever they are watching from now. I know I am."
"Oh Charlie! Why didn't this happen all those years ago? Why did Dumbledore leave it to us to do this when we were just children? Look at what has been accomplished in months; Dumbledore had years!"
He pulled out his wand and cast Muffliato around us.
"Easy, Hermione, this wasn't months. It was years too. Years for Snape to find all the pieces, years for the Wizarding world to understand what they could have prevented, years for all the pieces to fall back into place. Remember no one but those few people in the Order believed Dumbledore. Who knows what could have happened if Harry hadn't been tricked into going back to the Burrow that day. Dumbledore's plan might have worked if it had played out they way he intended. But that's all in the past now; you and Snape have played the cards you were dealt and this," he gestured to the room, "is the result. It will be settled tomorrow, one way or another. All we can do now is wait," he said, as a solid lump settled in my gut.
The rest of the day was spent smiling and reassuring everyone around me, until I thought my face would crack, and trying to find flaws in plans that seemed suspiciously competent. I wished Severus was with me. I had this irrational need for him to come in and swoop me up and put me in his pocket. All these people looked to me, and I was feeling more and more pressured. As evening drew to a close, my anxiety level increased to the point that Neville pulled me aside and asked if I needed a calming draught.
"Am I that bad?"
"Well, the last time I saw you walking around in small circles flapping your hands was the night before our O.W.L.S," he said. "Relax, Hermione, we've done everything we can until tomorrow night: fretting about it now won't help."
I sighed. "You're right, of course, but I just can't shut down my mind. I can't help but think I'm forgetting something important."
"All we can do is plan for the expected and try to prepare for the unexpected, Hermione. Of course we're probably forgetting something, but we'll run ourselves into the ground if we start to worry about every little detail." He guided me over to a table and poured me a cup of tea and added a few drops of potion to it. "Drink, you need to settle yourself."
"Thanks. It's just hard; everyone expects so much of me, and I'm terrified that this will go completely wrong."
"Hermione, even if it does, that doesn't mean it's your fault. The way I see it, you can't lose either way. We either win, or we've thrown everything we had at this one last stand. There's no failure in either scenario. You've already given everyone what they needed, a chance, a hope and a sense of purpose. That's much better than struggling to survive each day, griping about how the world has gone to the dogs and not doing anything to stop it. That's what ninety percent of the Wizarding world has been doing the last five years. Honestly, that's really all we have been doing. Oh, we called it biding our time, but in reality we were too terrified to make a move. You gave us the missing spark. When we heard you were alive and needed us to help destroy the Dark Lord, it galvanized our people. Everyone here is committed. We may have doubts about whether or not we can prevail, but no one has any doubts that we are doing the right thing.
"So, thank you, Hermione. Thank you for being a symbol, thank you for being an organizer, and thank you for being a leader who paces and frets and worries about her army."
I drained my tea and set my cup on the table.
"Hannah's a lucky girl, Neville," I said. "You have a marvelous way of making someone feel better about themselves."
He smiled broadly and patted me on the shoulder.
"Nah, I'm a lucky bloke. She keeps me running in the right direction, and she remembers all the little bits I can never keep track of."
We both laughed at that. Neville's limited memory had been legend when we were still in school, and I was comforted to know some things stayed the same. He had changed, though. He was still quiet and unassuming, but he was also still made of steel when he had to be.
"Feeling a bit more calm now?"
"Yes, the potion helped, but your words were most important. Thank you, Neville."
"Anytime, Hermione; why don't you get some sleep now? Tomorrow is going to be another long day of waiting, and if we don't get some rest, tempers will flare. I'll go send everyone else to bed as well."
He gave me a one-armed hug and sent me on my way.
The room over the kitchen didn't offer as much comfort now; it had been rearranged to make room for all the extra bodies packed into the east wing. Now there were two beds, and the seating had all been removed. Empty boxes were still crammed into corners from when all the supplies had been distributed earlier. Peaches and I shared the space now, and she came in shortly after I did. We spoke quietly, each mostly caught up in our own thoughts, but we took comfort in our friendship, and after a quick hug and urges to sleep well, we doused the lights and turned in.
Sleep eventually came, but it wasn't easy, even with the calming draught. Now my thoughts circled lazily instead of franticly as I listened to the sound of Peaches' soft snores.
I woke when the bed dipped down, and I struggled to sit up. A long arm pulled me back down and onto a warm chest, and I nestled into the damp smell of a freshly showered Severus.
"What time is it?" I asked sleepily.
"Four in the morning, go back to sleep." He pressed a kiss to the top of my head, and I heard him sigh deeply.
"Everything go alright?"
"Hush, Hermione. Everything is fine. The Dark Lord is secure in his hubris and his superiority, but the spy needs sleep."
"Alright, sleep well, Severus."
"Dream well, Hermione."
"Severus?"
"Hmm?"
"I love you."
His arm contracted around me and his deep husky voice replied, "Thank God."
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Princess of Gryffindor
597 Reviews | 6.94/10 Average
I agree with Mick42 in the sense that I don't like the Voldemort won/everyone's dead/Hermione's a whore stories. I avoid them like the plague. I decided to give this one a go based on the reviews. I was very, very skeptical. There were aspects to the writing that I didn't like, such as it being written in first person, but the memorial scene alone made it well worth the read. I may have shed a tear (or 10).
Wow...just wow. Now I know why all of these other reviewers have shed a tear. I am a mess. Still smiling tho'! Captivating read. Kudos!
Yay, all finished. It's been a while since I've read this, so I had forgotten a lot of the details in the ending chapters, but I still love it as much as I did the first time I read it. You have my in tears reading the end couple of chapters now, but that's terribly easy to do to a pregnant woman, so don't worry too much lol.
I just love Snape, have I ever mentioned that? I do. And it's stuff like this in stories- him vowing to protect Hermione- that make me love him even more..
This is one I've read before, on ffnet I think, but I have to read it here too, it just seems impossible not to reread your favorite stories when you come across them somewhere. The bonus is that you already know you love the story, even if you can't remember all the details between point A and A.D.
My dear Aurette,I have spent half of yesterday and all of today re-reading this unbelievable story. Half of the time, I've been a sobbing, sopping mess - when S&H were gathering forces and found people who were still alive, the whole Harry and Ron speaking to Hermione from the great beyond, the memorial scene (holy crap, talk about sobbing!), reuniting with Minerva's ghost, and the list goes on. I love the plot of the story. I love your numerous OCs. I love how the young DEs revolt. I love how forces from all sides join together to fight the Dark Lord. I love the romance between S&H. I love how utterly vulnerable he is to her, and she to him. I love how wizarding society hero-worships Snape in the end. I love So Many Things about this story. If my heart could take it, I'd start it all over again, but I really wasn't exaggerating when I said I was sobbing half the time I was reading. This might sound odd, but reading this today, US Memorial Day, just makes it seem even more poignant. But I do think it's honoring to RL sacrifices by reading about fictional ones. Thank you so much for this absolutely wonderful story, and for giving me such an enjoyable (if teary and snotty) way to spend my day off.Love,Christev
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
{{{hugs}}}What a beautiful thing to say. I am deeply touched and honored. Thank you, Christev.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
{{{hugs}}}What a beautiful thing to say. I am deeply touched and honored. Thank you, Christev.
Heartbreaking and wonderful and worth rereading. Thank you for sharing this.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I'm so glad you enjoyed. ;-)
Just re-read this and had to mention: Best Epilogue Ever. Why couldn't you have given JK a few pointers? ;-p
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! She never asked... Thank you!
I've just flown through the last several chapters, held in thrall to this story! This is just genius, you know, starting at a place of total desolation - this terrible post-war dystopia - and taking all the elements from DH (the prophecy from Severus, the Hallows, even walking beside the dead and moving with them before returning to earth - thanks particularly for including Draco with the others), using them as they were meant to be used, finding another way of stopping Voldemort and reenvisioning a new world in the aftermath.
And I love seeing Snape marked as the Man Who Lived! And a father! And the Minister! (And that proposal? Mmm-hmm... clearly, he has caught on to everything Hermione's been teaching him!)
You strike such a great balance between comedy and high drama. It's such a pleasure to read.
Oh, Goyle. Goyles will be Goyles, I suppose!"I think you have just been metaphorically peed on." Oh, I love this line... particularly since Severus' possessiveness towards Hermione is such a strong part of his character (which is why his reluctant willingness to 'share' Hermione rather than lose her was SO terribly shocking).
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Thank you! And I think, by his behavior in this chapter, you can see he tacitly took those words... back.
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
Oh, absolutely! That's what's so marvelous to see in this Snape. He acts impulsively so often, and then immediately knows that it's not what he really wanted, and is slowly learning to keep it all in check as he accepts the fact that she really loves him and that he's truly safe with her.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Hannah and Neville! Woo-hoo! (You can just feel the little triumphs along the way - things are getting brighter all the time!) And the lack of trust between all parties involved... yes, that feels completely, completely believable.(Also,I don't know that I've ever met an original character that I've liked, but Peaches is fantastic. Just fantastic. You make me change my mind on a lot of things, I think...)
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I intentionally started this tale as dark as I could make it, and then slowly let the light in. Neville and Hannah were such a beacon of hope...
Ah, the trust between the two as they examine the girls! And her red robes... yes, I imagine Severus doesn't want Hermione in anything less than a high-necked robe in front of her old beau.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Trust is something they thought they had, but as you can see, they are both too emotionally unsophisticated to not end up with issues.
Whoa, whoa, whoa... Elder Goyle and Ma are two revelations here, aren't they? As for the former, it really makes me wonder (again and again) what Voldemort's plan was 'when' he won. Why cheat Death if you have nothing to live for? For someone as hypothetically long-sighted as he was (looking to an eternity of power and control over the wizarding world), he's remarkably short-sighted here (what do you do now that you've won?). You raise all sorts of fascinating questions here. And Ma, with the Veritaserum? Grand.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Ma was intended to just be a stock vilain, but she elbowed her way toward three dimentional. I was very happy with the way she worked out.
The robes! Wonderful, wonderful, all around, from Hermione's comfort in them and the note exchange.Charlie and Viktor? You're really getting things moving here, aren't you? Momentum. You're really a master with creating a momentum that just pulls a reader through the story. I don't mean just here, but everything I've read up til now - it's so well paced and unfolds so naturally. In case I haven't said this in a chapter or two, thanks so much for sharing this.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I was very attuned to the pacing of this tale. It was my very first mult-chaptered fic and getting the pacing down right was one of my primary concerns. Thank you so much for reviewing it!
Hooray! I love what you've done with Theo Nott. The second guessing and the regret shows how easy it was for misguided, then-ambivalent people to latch on to Voldemort's coat tails. (Cloak tails?) Very like Severus at that age, no?You're also hilarious, but I suspect you know that. "Conjure myself some decent clothes?" FABULOUS.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Exactly! I saw Theo as not being wildly different from young Snape, just perhaps a bit more entitled. I am so glad you liked this.
Wow. There are so many things I love, love, love in this chapter. First off, the relationship between Severus and the Malfoys. (Ach, and the horror of their deaths!) Next, Dumbledore's attitude. I, for one, have a tendency to vilify the man. Reading the repentance he shows here makes me rethink a lot of things about him. (So thank you for challenging me!) But you're right - we have a lot of evidence in DH that there are many unspoken things in his past that explain his present actions. And, of course, it's just a relief to see that he finally has someone to tell all this to, someone who will care for him and stand by him through it all. This is just wonderful, and I'm completely loving your writing and this story!
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I also have a tendancy to vilify Dumbledore, but I know that was never JKR's intention, so every so often I try and reset my thinking. Then I backslide. lol.
There are so many reasons I love this story... wonderful narrative flow, seamless incorporation of canon devices (Hallows! Can't wait to see them in action!), a fresh perspective on the nature of evil in the Voldemort regime, a place to see regrets worked out and atoned for.But the single greatest reason why this is so fabulous is your clear vision of your characters. What we know of them from JKR is fleshed out so beautifully here, and it's not a happy-go-lucky, cleaned up and sanitized version of the very broken people we know (and love), but a hard look at the mistakes they make and how they learn together to move on and forgive one another in a much deeper understanding of who the other really is.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
This chapter was my impetus for writing the whole fic. I wanted to get to this scene. Of course, once I did, I then had a Ministry to over throw... lol.
Oh, now that's interesting... incorporating the Hallows? I think this means we'll get to see some action from the Elder Wand (killing Voldemort?), the Resurrection Stone (Harry and Ron?), and the Invisibility Cloak (I have no idea on this one... it's useful in so many ways). I can't wait to see where they lead!
Severus' thoughts on the ambition of Voldemort five years out are interesting... it certainly does make you wonder - what would Tom have done had he won? Did he have a plan in place? I mean, the fear of ignominious death aside, what was really motivating his actions? What did he envision for the Wizarding world?
There's much that I enjoy in this chapter... the way they recognize each other as being, really, the only people left on earth (that we know of so far) who can really see one another is fantastic. Antarctica banter with penguins! 'Whoever had broken this man deserved to burn in hell.'What I found myself wishing I had here was Hermione's musings on her own sexual history. Was she a virgin before she was enslaved here? I found I wanted this when she first talked about her position as a whore with Snape as well... I just want it sometime. (Maybe it's coming up later? We'll see!) There seems to be space for her to say that she's still a virgin (so to speak) with a great deal of this as well. And defend her innocence. Since she never kissed Ron in the final battle (AU breaks off earlier here, right?), has she even been kissed?
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
(Because Severus very well may be right in trying to stop her... for her own peace of mind, certainly, and for the fact that she's been traumatised for years there. Another sexual experience now may not be helpful on the road to recovery, and he'd certainly be remiss if he didn't know the situation before letting her have her way with him...)
The harpsichord? That's hilarious. Does she tune it herself, as well? All the descriptions of this place add up to a bizarre, depressing, garish nightmare. It's like everyone tossed in their leftovers and out popped a brother, or several people's lives just vomited out all their extras on the (Voldemort-run) street.
Ah, Draco. I'm sad to hear he's lost. I have a soft spot for him as one of the people who gave Severus a will to go on in HBP and DH. I would have liked seeing your Snape deal with him.
That last long paragraph on the enigma of Snape? Spot on. It sums up why he's such a fascinating character in canon: powerful and powerless, beautiful and ugly, lauded and humiliated. The ambiguity of him is so rich, and not in the Dumbledore 'we sort too soon' sort of way, claiming that he's truly a Gryffindor at heart merely because he's on the side of good.
As to protection, well, that's another one of the strongest themes attached to him in canon, isn't it? He's constantly fighting to protect people - even people he despises -and he prepares them all to do the same. Your Hermione's a lucky girl...
Well done, you.
Hmm... "I, too, practice self-denial?" I think he might practice a few kinds of denial here, since he did just move to kiss her. (Of course, perhaps poor Severus doesn't know any better. He missed out on the 'What not to do whilst visiting a whorehouse' lesson in finishing school.) I greatly appreciate a post-DH Snape who doesn't know what to do with a woman... after all, when you poke around in canon, it seems fairly obvious that his social calendar was empty.
I also enjoy the dynamic you're setting up between Hermione and Peaches, the latter of whom is clearly in control of her own destiny in a way that Hermione just isn't... yet.
And...Harry and Ron? What?!?
Oh, gravy! Lime-green peignoirs and silver mules? This is a high class establishment poor Hermione's stuck in. (Although the lime-green clothing is oddly reminiscent of St. Mungo's...)
I love a phrase like "She floated in like a frigate in full sail." Really, the oppressing shabbiness of the place is overwhelming. I'm so very wary of new characters, so I'm really hoping I will like yours... Peaches, maybe yes? Ma, maybe no. Unless we do know Ma or Angel already and they're just under aliases like the Princess?
Drinking Cocoa enticed me back here to revisit this wonderful, deep, rich tale once again, when I should be doing my own writing and in other ways getting the heap of papers on my desk cleared and sorted (not to mention getting to bed at a decent hour). But, no, I had to swallow this beautiful work whole once again, rediscovering all its complexities and marvels, emotions and heatbreak, fascinations and intricacies. And it is now nearly 2am, and I can at last climb into my solitary little bed, wrapped in the warmth of some quite satisfying and delicious writing. Thank you.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I thank you, truly, for your revisiting this story. Nothing is more satisfying than knowing it is apreciated on a second reading as well. :-)
I give it five years before Brilliant figures out how to spell that journal open and gets the shock of her young life hahahaha.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! Oh, that would be Brilliant! You need to write that fic!
Response from StarryEyedNoOne (Reviewer)
I haven't wrote HP fanfic since I was the age of a first year lol. I pray to any diety that's listening that NONE of it is still floating aroung out there. :-\
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! I understand. I once read that if you aren't embarrased by something you wrote a year ago, you are no longer growing as a writer. Hell, I get embarrassed over things I wrote last week...