False Prophecy
Chapter 31 of 40
AuretteThe final confrontation draws near.
ReviewedThank you to my beta, Astopperindeath
The days that followed were busy and exciting as well as nervewracking and tense. The newly expanded room, now dubbed the 'practice center' by the women, was in constant use.
Supplies showed up regularly. Viktor had sent robes, cloaks and sturdy boots. Severus continually sent healing potions and draughts and as many other medical potions as he had time to make. Neville had his people making an incredibly large number of illegal portkeys. They timed it for the days when a member of Snape's Company was in the Ministry of Transportation so they could intercept the alerts from going out. All this had to be smuggled in and through the house until it could be stored in one of the rooms in the east wing. We were developing quite a stockpile. Of course, I kept the potions in my room over the kitchen.
Ma had made clever usage of charms to simulate the sound of large parties going on in other lounges to explain the shortage of available women to whoever came to the door. That left us free to practice with our new wands unless any of the Death Eaters showed up. It was rather nice to have another name to call the younger men. Now when we spoke of Death Eaters, it came with all the same stomach clenching as before.
We took rotation in our same groups of eight we had before, only this time eight girls from one dorm worked downstairs and sixteen were upstairs practicing spells. Ma would send one of her house-elves up after us if we had been requested specifically. We developed a routine of walking to the door, placing our wand on one of the small shelves Neville had set on the wall, shrugging out of our robes and hanging them on a hook by the door and then leaving to go take care of business.
It wasn't many nights before I realized that the other girls were making sure I didn't have any customers on my shift. Sitting in the lounge, I became aware of Dusty or Peaches moving to intercept even the slightest glance and Theo or Vaisey or one of the others would inevitably make some suggestive comment and escort me upstairs where they would immediately drop my arm and apologize.
I walked into the practice room one night, after having been escorted up the stairs by Caddoc Warrington, and saw Ma cuff Peaches and Theo on their heads. It didn't take a genius to realize they had been snogging on one of the couches.
"More wards were removed from this room than just those that closed you off from your magic. Unless you want to start the next generation of Snape's Company, you might want to take it to another room," she muttered and walked away shaking her head, but I saw the little happy smirk on her face. I waited until they had pulled themselves together a bit and approached them.
"Why am I being kept from working downstairs?" I demanded to know. "I'm not comfortable getting special treatment like this; it's not fair to the other girls. Did Severus put you up to this?"
Theo and Peaches looked at each other and then back at me.
"The girls needed a way to actively feel like they are doing something. Protecting you is a tangible thing they can do," said Theo.
"It's good for morale and leaves you free to plan. Get over it," added Peaches. "Snape didn't tell us to; the other girls decided, but I will tell you he was rather pleased with the idea," finished Theo. He grabbed Peaches by the hand, and with a nod to me, they hurried out of the room to finish their moment in privacy.
And so, I spent my days and nights in the practice center where I had a desk and all the ink and parchment I could want. All battle strategy was discussed in this room, since it was good sense to make use of a house that was known to have people coming in and out at all hours of the night. Severus drilled us in defensive spells as well as some nasty ones that would have got us in trouble with the Ministry before, well, before the Ministry started using them. Neville came by often, always under a glamour, to confer about tactics and preparations. Charlie and Percy came to help train us as well; both of them had deadly aim and greatly improved our accuracy. Percy helped organize my legion of notes and charts, and his wife Penelope would often come by, Polyjuiced to look like a man, to retrain people in healing spells and to help Peaches organize the medical corps.
Twice, we were honored to witness a team dueling demonstration with Severus and Theo against Charlie and Percy. I know I was supposed to be watching everyone, but I only had eyes for Severus as he whirled and twisted and flung his hexes in silence. The point of the first duel was to demonstrate the use of voiceless magic and if that meant that it was supposed to leave Peaches and me too breathless to speak, it was a success. After about twenty minutes, Percy clipped Theo, and his shield failed and Charlie quickly took him down, only to have Severus dispatch them both with a silent blasting hex that made it seem as if he had been holding back the whole time. The point of the second duel was straight up face-saving, as the proud Weasley brothers came back for a second match two days later. This time, it ended in a draw as Severus had spent most of the duel fending off a constant barrage of attacks while Theo threw shields on him and couldn't get off a good shot of his own. Charlie and Percy worked a similar plan of one defending as the other tried to pick a weak point. That lesson was actually highly instructive, and we found ourselves practicing working in pairs after that.
The members of Snape's Company kept me updated on the last ploy we ladies had decided to pull off via rumor. Goyle Sr. had made a comment about how we needed a prophecy right now to throw the Dark Lord over the edge. He had talked about how obsessive he had been about the last one and how it would have been nice had there been another to make him just as tactically blind as before. That had set my mind to thinking, and eventually, we had started to disseminate the rumor to the Death Eaters who still came in the evenings. A week later, according to Snape's Company, every wizard and witch on the street now thought there was a savior on the horizon according to prophesy, but no one knew the actual words or where it had come from.
Then one day, about a fortnight after we had set the rumor free, lo and behold: it was found. Once word of a prophecy reached the Dark Lord's ears, he ordered the Department of Mysteries searched until it was found by Mulciber. This caused quite a stir, not only among the people at the Ministry but also for us. We had made up a rumor; we didn't actually have a prophecy.
The mystery of the suddenly appearing prophecy was solved the next night when Severus and I were alone in our room. We didn't get much time together anymore, and this was the first time he had been able to stay the night since the night of our big argument. Not wanting to waste time, we had set upon each other as soon as the door was closed, and an hour later, we were relaxing in bed. I was still perched on his lap, leaning against his bent knee, fingers playing absent mindedly with his long hair. He was stretched back on a mountain of pillows. His body was languid, eyes heavy lidded, his movements sated as he lifted his arms and rested his hands behind his head. His two tattoos were visible in the candle light.
I smiled as I remembered the lecture I had given him on that subject. He had just smirked at me and it taken me a minute to realize that not only had he stopped listening to me, but he was actually enjoying my attempt to scold him. I think if he had actually said he thought I was adorable, I might have run screaming down the hall in my frustration. As it was, he didn't have to; he just radiated it in the most infuriating way. When I had demanded to know if he had marked himself as well, he just raised that damned brow and unbuttoned his cuff. Pulling back his sleeve, he showed me he had. Of course, his was slightly different, not just because his serpent was much larger and more intimidating and the lightning bolt was much smaller but also, under the lightning bolt, his serpent curled protectively around a lioness in full roar.
"Well," I had said. "I won't even go into detail about what Freud would have to say about you wanting the bigger snake."
I smiled now to remember his quiet rumble of laughter.
I had finished braiding the lock of hair I had and reached to grab a new one, when I remembered I had wanted to ask him his thoughts on the prophecy. I started to card my fingers through another lock, separating it into three pieces.
"Severus?"
"Hmm?"
"What do you know about this business with the prophecy?"
"Quite a lot actually."
His answer intrigued me, and I searched his face, waiting for an explanation. Reading Severus's expressions was a frustrating hobby, but I was desperate to perfect it. Once the effects of the backlash had worn off, he was back to introverted and rarely forthcoming unless he was undone by sex, and he was getting better at recovering from that quicker as well. It was important that I learn to break his code, to try to avoid miscommunications. A quirk of a lip there, a glitter in the eye, just so, a carefully too smooth brow, and it added up to... smug.
"Severus! You planted the prophecy!"
Full blown evil smirk. He reached up and tugged a lock of my hair and let it spring back.
"But how? What does it say? How did you manage it?"
"Easy, woman!" His hands shot out to stop my excited bounce, and I remembered my position. I threw him an apologetic look.
"I thought Goyle's idea had merit, but I knew it wouldn't work without proof. I whipped up something vague enough to sound real and creepy enough to send him over the edge. Krum helped."
"Viktor? How did he help? How did you make it creepy?"
"There is an old instructor in Durmstrang who knows how to fashion memory message bubbles that can pass as recorded prophecies. I sent Krum a message to record, and he had his sister speak the words into the matrix. He brought it back with him, and all I needed was to rig it with names and dates and place it on a shelf."
"What does it say?"
Snape looked at me and then cleared his throat and in a sonorous voice intoned:
"She comes. The one who purifies comes from the house of the vanquished. On the last day of the seventh month, she will purge the house of law. The phoenix shall be vindicated, and the loyal shall be laid low. She comes. The one who purifies comes from the house of the vanquished."
His voice trailed off, and then he ruined it by waggling his eyebrows, breaking the spell.
"That's very good!"
"Thank you, I'd like to think twenty years of listening to Sybill would lend a certain verisimilitude."
"It sounds real enough, too real; are you sure it doesn't point a bit too directly to me?"
"Well, I have been sent here to investigate the possibility, and I think I investigated you rather thoroughly, did I not?" His hands swept up and over my body.
"I'm being serious, Severus!" I batted at his hands.
"The Dark Lord is deranged, and with the discovery of the prophecy, he has only the most tenuous hold on his sanity. He ordered a rounding up of all the female Gryffindors still alive. I left the explanation of why that was unfeasible to Mulciber. He is still recovering, but he did get the order rescinded. I'm just following up on a possibility. I will present the Dark Lord with some edited memories of your more than willing acquiescence, and he will be satisfied."
"I can't say I'm happy with the idea of him watching us."
"He... has before."
"Oh. Right."
"Quite."
"Getting back to the prophecy, I have to say it sounds real, but it doesn't sound particularly creepy."
"You should hear it with a Bulgarian accent. Bulgarians always sound creepy."
"Stop that. How did you get it into the Department of Mysteries without anyone seeing it?"
"The same way you always snuck into the library at night before every exam."
"Oh, Harry's cloak!"
"Indeed. I especially liked how the prophecy was inscribed. It just said 'The Lioness' and then 'The Loyal'. So everyone that the Dark Lord forced into touching it thought it was about them. Idiots."
"Hang on, give me that date again?"
"...On the last day of the seventh month..."
"But Severus! That's Harry's birthday! That's only two weeks away, how can we be ready by the thirty-first?"
He sat up and pulled me into his arms while rolling over so he had me pinned to the bed under him.
"Don't be a dunderhead. The prophecy isn't real. We're not going to attack on the thirty-first."
I relaxed under him, relieved, and he started to nuzzle along my ear with his nose.
"We're going to attack on the first."
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Princess of Gryffindor
597 Reviews | 6.94/10 Average
I agree with Mick42 in the sense that I don't like the Voldemort won/everyone's dead/Hermione's a whore stories. I avoid them like the plague. I decided to give this one a go based on the reviews. I was very, very skeptical. There were aspects to the writing that I didn't like, such as it being written in first person, but the memorial scene alone made it well worth the read. I may have shed a tear (or 10).
Wow...just wow. Now I know why all of these other reviewers have shed a tear. I am a mess. Still smiling tho'! Captivating read. Kudos!
Yay, all finished. It's been a while since I've read this, so I had forgotten a lot of the details in the ending chapters, but I still love it as much as I did the first time I read it. You have my in tears reading the end couple of chapters now, but that's terribly easy to do to a pregnant woman, so don't worry too much lol.
I just love Snape, have I ever mentioned that? I do. And it's stuff like this in stories- him vowing to protect Hermione- that make me love him even more..
This is one I've read before, on ffnet I think, but I have to read it here too, it just seems impossible not to reread your favorite stories when you come across them somewhere. The bonus is that you already know you love the story, even if you can't remember all the details between point A and A.D.
My dear Aurette,I have spent half of yesterday and all of today re-reading this unbelievable story. Half of the time, I've been a sobbing, sopping mess - when S&H were gathering forces and found people who were still alive, the whole Harry and Ron speaking to Hermione from the great beyond, the memorial scene (holy crap, talk about sobbing!), reuniting with Minerva's ghost, and the list goes on. I love the plot of the story. I love your numerous OCs. I love how the young DEs revolt. I love how forces from all sides join together to fight the Dark Lord. I love the romance between S&H. I love how utterly vulnerable he is to her, and she to him. I love how wizarding society hero-worships Snape in the end. I love So Many Things about this story. If my heart could take it, I'd start it all over again, but I really wasn't exaggerating when I said I was sobbing half the time I was reading. This might sound odd, but reading this today, US Memorial Day, just makes it seem even more poignant. But I do think it's honoring to RL sacrifices by reading about fictional ones. Thank you so much for this absolutely wonderful story, and for giving me such an enjoyable (if teary and snotty) way to spend my day off.Love,Christev
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
{{{hugs}}}What a beautiful thing to say. I am deeply touched and honored. Thank you, Christev.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
{{{hugs}}}What a beautiful thing to say. I am deeply touched and honored. Thank you, Christev.
Heartbreaking and wonderful and worth rereading. Thank you for sharing this.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I'm so glad you enjoyed. ;-)
Just re-read this and had to mention: Best Epilogue Ever. Why couldn't you have given JK a few pointers? ;-p
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! She never asked... Thank you!
I've just flown through the last several chapters, held in thrall to this story! This is just genius, you know, starting at a place of total desolation - this terrible post-war dystopia - and taking all the elements from DH (the prophecy from Severus, the Hallows, even walking beside the dead and moving with them before returning to earth - thanks particularly for including Draco with the others), using them as they were meant to be used, finding another way of stopping Voldemort and reenvisioning a new world in the aftermath.
And I love seeing Snape marked as the Man Who Lived! And a father! And the Minister! (And that proposal? Mmm-hmm... clearly, he has caught on to everything Hermione's been teaching him!)
You strike such a great balance between comedy and high drama. It's such a pleasure to read.
Oh, Goyle. Goyles will be Goyles, I suppose!"I think you have just been metaphorically peed on." Oh, I love this line... particularly since Severus' possessiveness towards Hermione is such a strong part of his character (which is why his reluctant willingness to 'share' Hermione rather than lose her was SO terribly shocking).
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Thank you! And I think, by his behavior in this chapter, you can see he tacitly took those words... back.
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
Oh, absolutely! That's what's so marvelous to see in this Snape. He acts impulsively so often, and then immediately knows that it's not what he really wanted, and is slowly learning to keep it all in check as he accepts the fact that she really loves him and that he's truly safe with her.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Hannah and Neville! Woo-hoo! (You can just feel the little triumphs along the way - things are getting brighter all the time!) And the lack of trust between all parties involved... yes, that feels completely, completely believable.(Also,I don't know that I've ever met an original character that I've liked, but Peaches is fantastic. Just fantastic. You make me change my mind on a lot of things, I think...)
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I intentionally started this tale as dark as I could make it, and then slowly let the light in. Neville and Hannah were such a beacon of hope...
Ah, the trust between the two as they examine the girls! And her red robes... yes, I imagine Severus doesn't want Hermione in anything less than a high-necked robe in front of her old beau.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Trust is something they thought they had, but as you can see, they are both too emotionally unsophisticated to not end up with issues.
Whoa, whoa, whoa... Elder Goyle and Ma are two revelations here, aren't they? As for the former, it really makes me wonder (again and again) what Voldemort's plan was 'when' he won. Why cheat Death if you have nothing to live for? For someone as hypothetically long-sighted as he was (looking to an eternity of power and control over the wizarding world), he's remarkably short-sighted here (what do you do now that you've won?). You raise all sorts of fascinating questions here. And Ma, with the Veritaserum? Grand.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Ma was intended to just be a stock vilain, but she elbowed her way toward three dimentional. I was very happy with the way she worked out.
The robes! Wonderful, wonderful, all around, from Hermione's comfort in them and the note exchange.Charlie and Viktor? You're really getting things moving here, aren't you? Momentum. You're really a master with creating a momentum that just pulls a reader through the story. I don't mean just here, but everything I've read up til now - it's so well paced and unfolds so naturally. In case I haven't said this in a chapter or two, thanks so much for sharing this.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I was very attuned to the pacing of this tale. It was my very first mult-chaptered fic and getting the pacing down right was one of my primary concerns. Thank you so much for reviewing it!
Hooray! I love what you've done with Theo Nott. The second guessing and the regret shows how easy it was for misguided, then-ambivalent people to latch on to Voldemort's coat tails. (Cloak tails?) Very like Severus at that age, no?You're also hilarious, but I suspect you know that. "Conjure myself some decent clothes?" FABULOUS.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
Exactly! I saw Theo as not being wildly different from young Snape, just perhaps a bit more entitled. I am so glad you liked this.
Wow. There are so many things I love, love, love in this chapter. First off, the relationship between Severus and the Malfoys. (Ach, and the horror of their deaths!) Next, Dumbledore's attitude. I, for one, have a tendency to vilify the man. Reading the repentance he shows here makes me rethink a lot of things about him. (So thank you for challenging me!) But you're right - we have a lot of evidence in DH that there are many unspoken things in his past that explain his present actions. And, of course, it's just a relief to see that he finally has someone to tell all this to, someone who will care for him and stand by him through it all. This is just wonderful, and I'm completely loving your writing and this story!
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I also have a tendancy to vilify Dumbledore, but I know that was never JKR's intention, so every so often I try and reset my thinking. Then I backslide. lol.
There are so many reasons I love this story... wonderful narrative flow, seamless incorporation of canon devices (Hallows! Can't wait to see them in action!), a fresh perspective on the nature of evil in the Voldemort regime, a place to see regrets worked out and atoned for.But the single greatest reason why this is so fabulous is your clear vision of your characters. What we know of them from JKR is fleshed out so beautifully here, and it's not a happy-go-lucky, cleaned up and sanitized version of the very broken people we know (and love), but a hard look at the mistakes they make and how they learn together to move on and forgive one another in a much deeper understanding of who the other really is.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
This chapter was my impetus for writing the whole fic. I wanted to get to this scene. Of course, once I did, I then had a Ministry to over throw... lol.
Oh, now that's interesting... incorporating the Hallows? I think this means we'll get to see some action from the Elder Wand (killing Voldemort?), the Resurrection Stone (Harry and Ron?), and the Invisibility Cloak (I have no idea on this one... it's useful in so many ways). I can't wait to see where they lead!
Severus' thoughts on the ambition of Voldemort five years out are interesting... it certainly does make you wonder - what would Tom have done had he won? Did he have a plan in place? I mean, the fear of ignominious death aside, what was really motivating his actions? What did he envision for the Wizarding world?
There's much that I enjoy in this chapter... the way they recognize each other as being, really, the only people left on earth (that we know of so far) who can really see one another is fantastic. Antarctica banter with penguins! 'Whoever had broken this man deserved to burn in hell.'What I found myself wishing I had here was Hermione's musings on her own sexual history. Was she a virgin before she was enslaved here? I found I wanted this when she first talked about her position as a whore with Snape as well... I just want it sometime. (Maybe it's coming up later? We'll see!) There seems to be space for her to say that she's still a virgin (so to speak) with a great deal of this as well. And defend her innocence. Since she never kissed Ron in the final battle (AU breaks off earlier here, right?), has she even been kissed?
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
(Because Severus very well may be right in trying to stop her... for her own peace of mind, certainly, and for the fact that she's been traumatised for years there. Another sexual experience now may not be helpful on the road to recovery, and he'd certainly be remiss if he didn't know the situation before letting her have her way with him...)
The harpsichord? That's hilarious. Does she tune it herself, as well? All the descriptions of this place add up to a bizarre, depressing, garish nightmare. It's like everyone tossed in their leftovers and out popped a brother, or several people's lives just vomited out all their extras on the (Voldemort-run) street.
Ah, Draco. I'm sad to hear he's lost. I have a soft spot for him as one of the people who gave Severus a will to go on in HBP and DH. I would have liked seeing your Snape deal with him.
That last long paragraph on the enigma of Snape? Spot on. It sums up why he's such a fascinating character in canon: powerful and powerless, beautiful and ugly, lauded and humiliated. The ambiguity of him is so rich, and not in the Dumbledore 'we sort too soon' sort of way, claiming that he's truly a Gryffindor at heart merely because he's on the side of good.
As to protection, well, that's another one of the strongest themes attached to him in canon, isn't it? He's constantly fighting to protect people - even people he despises -and he prepares them all to do the same. Your Hermione's a lucky girl...
Well done, you.
Hmm... "I, too, practice self-denial?" I think he might practice a few kinds of denial here, since he did just move to kiss her. (Of course, perhaps poor Severus doesn't know any better. He missed out on the 'What not to do whilst visiting a whorehouse' lesson in finishing school.) I greatly appreciate a post-DH Snape who doesn't know what to do with a woman... after all, when you poke around in canon, it seems fairly obvious that his social calendar was empty.
I also enjoy the dynamic you're setting up between Hermione and Peaches, the latter of whom is clearly in control of her own destiny in a way that Hermione just isn't... yet.
And...Harry and Ron? What?!?
Oh, gravy! Lime-green peignoirs and silver mules? This is a high class establishment poor Hermione's stuck in. (Although the lime-green clothing is oddly reminiscent of St. Mungo's...)
I love a phrase like "She floated in like a frigate in full sail." Really, the oppressing shabbiness of the place is overwhelming. I'm so very wary of new characters, so I'm really hoping I will like yours... Peaches, maybe yes? Ma, maybe no. Unless we do know Ma or Angel already and they're just under aliases like the Princess?
Drinking Cocoa enticed me back here to revisit this wonderful, deep, rich tale once again, when I should be doing my own writing and in other ways getting the heap of papers on my desk cleared and sorted (not to mention getting to bed at a decent hour). But, no, I had to swallow this beautiful work whole once again, rediscovering all its complexities and marvels, emotions and heatbreak, fascinations and intricacies. And it is now nearly 2am, and I can at last climb into my solitary little bed, wrapped in the warmth of some quite satisfying and delicious writing. Thank you.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
I thank you, truly, for your revisiting this story. Nothing is more satisfying than knowing it is apreciated on a second reading as well. :-)
I give it five years before Brilliant figures out how to spell that journal open and gets the shock of her young life hahahaha.
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! Oh, that would be Brilliant! You need to write that fic!
Response from StarryEyedNoOne (Reviewer)
I haven't wrote HP fanfic since I was the age of a first year lol. I pray to any diety that's listening that NONE of it is still floating aroung out there. :-\
Response from Aurette (Author of The Princess of Gryffindor)
LOL! I understand. I once read that if you aren't embarrased by something you wrote a year ago, you are no longer growing as a writer. Hell, I get embarrassed over things I wrote last week...