I found this chapter to be terribly charming.  It has a sweetness that is surprising considering the circumstances.  I love the playfulness between the two of them, it shows that neither of them is damaged beyond repair.Keep up the excellent work, I can barely stand to wait for the next chapter.  

Wow.  I feel like I've been writing that a lot.  :)  I really think this story just keeps getting better.  I'm struggling with what I want to say here... You have a great style, I feel so connected with your Severus and Hermione and that you've been very true to them both in a situation in which I've never seen them in before.  I hope that conveys what I'm finding hard to describe. 

This was very good. So poignant and passionate, even as they became sexually involved I could see the emotion going through both of them.

Powerful writing.  I'm very curious to see how this story unfolds.

A very bleak start to the story (poor Hermione), but this last chapter is really poignant.  I will put this one on my faves so I know when it's updated.

It's good to see Snape is still full of surprises, and apparently lightning fast when he needs to be.  I hope an update is coming soon.

After the first chapter I was not sure I was going to read this fic but decided it was so well written it would be unfair not to read a few more chapters before deciding.  It's official, I am totally hooked.

What a horrible, bleak situation we find poor Hermione in.  I do hope there is hope for her in the near future.

What an interesting situation for our favorite characters...  very good

This story has me on pins and needles. I'm glad that Snape is not the helpless bastard he appears to be on the outside. I'm also glad that Hermione's feelings were stirred by her interaction with him. She helped him out of a tight spot, and I'm sure he will help her somehow. He will just need time to figure things out.Great job!

Oh. My. Gosh.  Please update soon.  

Poor Severus.  You have me hooked.

Wow. This is well written but very sad.  

Wow.

Wow! Very powerful and great writting.  I look forward to your updates.

This story is brilliant ... I am in love with it already and can't wait to read the next chapter.

"I keep nothing."I had shivers running down my back from this chapter.Great work!

wow very powerful chapter, McNair gives me the creeps and I liked how Severus told him off.  Look forward to reading more.

This one had me crying. Well done!

this is such an interesting concept, i can't wait to see were the story goes, you have a talent for writting. very well done.

wow...what a story!  it seems so grounded in its reality that it carries me along, too.  i look forward to the next chapter.  thanks and smoochies

excellent chapter, Hermione was very smooth when it came to Severus and getting him away from Peaches. Course Peaches didn't mind considering she knew Hermione would take care of him.  I would so love to know whats going through his miind at the moment he saw her.   I look forward to the next chapter and see what happens next.