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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


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10/10

kizzy7

I am utterly captivated by this story! Thanks for the long-awaited update, and I look eagerly forward to more!! ~hugs to you both~

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you very much! I hope that these Christmas holidays will give me the opportunity to at least catch up with Marisol (who is at Chapter 29 now).

10/10

Persevero

'Push them away before they can reject you' maybe?  I hope that he realises that he holds Hermione's life in his hands as well as Albus Severus's.  I know one shouldn't harrass the hard-pressed translator, but (stamps foot) *more*!!! 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, that's it. And I am going to work on it - promise!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Come on, Ginny! Kick some sense into him!Lovely chapter, Hermione's description of how she falls for him is so beautiful. Dying for more!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh my, please don't die, it's just a little piece of fiction!

0/10

Past

I really have been enjoying this story, I thank you for your effort in translating it you have been doing a great job. Only 5 chapters left!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

5? Marisol is at 29 now and says she has 3 more chapters plus an Epilogue...

0/10

cmwinters

Ooooooooooooooooh boy.  Ginny's gonna get an earful.(So's Severus, I imagine, the prat!)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

The next chapter will reveal it all.

9/10

kittylefish

i'm glad hermione has ginny to help her through the rough time. i am looking forward to seeing her confrontation with severus - soon, i hope!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I am starting the translation right now. Please understand that the beta-readers are having a busy time because of all those Yule challenges and the typical end-of-the-year rush...

0/10

StarryEyedNoOne

A Weasley on the warpath... He may as well change his name and address right now...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*giggle*

10/10

livvy6

Damn right he does! I bet he's been beating himself up for how he treated Hermione and playing the "poor, woe is me. I'm so unlovable, I had to drive her away" bull crap. I hope Ginny kicks his ass!Livvy

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

you will see, my dear, you will see.

0/10

kimjo2

you go, ginny!  great update.  thanks so much

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Good to have friends like this, heh?

0/10

joyfulheart

Poor Hermione, this is the time when a girlfriend like Ginny is not only wanted but needed. I know Severus is hurting too. For such a brilliant man he is such an idiot when it comes to women. I guess thats why we love him so much, we all want to save him from himself!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

From My Fair Lady: "have you ever met a man of character where women are concerned?"

10/10

lora

Now , I can t wait for next chatper . Will you hurry up with translating it as soon as possible . I really like to know what will Ginny say to Severus and how that will affect Severus . Really wonderful story.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Nothing better than reviewers who beg for more...

9/10

Nessa

Well Well Well.. I wonder what Ginny has to say to Severus? And what is she wondering about? That Severus kicked Hermione out before he let he feelings show/ because he is to scared? Look forward to the next update.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

At least she feels that something is off there. I am working on the update thing...

10/10

Elisabeth

Severus and Ginny -- now that's a conversation I really want to hear. I can see her laying down the law for him, much as she did with Hermione. Hope you don't leave us hanging!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I would never leave you hanging. At least not for too long. The next chapter is almost ready for being beta-read.

10/10

braye27

My heart breaks for Hermione.  Her feelings of having been used, of feeling like she was a stupid woman, all this just fell on her like a ton of bricks.  Thank goodness that Ginny sought her out and made her get up and talk to her.It would appear that our Potions master is not doing any better despite what he told Miss Granger.So sad.  Please update soon.  8^)Beth

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes. As I said in another review: I guess Ginny will try to help them both.

10/10

pyjamapants

Wow! What a cliffhanger! It will be very interesting indeed to see how this conversation goes!Thank you for the update. Happy holidays!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

And happy holidays to you! I will try to get some work done.

8/10

harrypotterwanter

It appears that Severus didn't take the night with Hermione as light as he said. Hopefully Ginny can talk some sense into him. Then he'll need Hermione to forgive him. At least Hermione seems to be a forgiving soul.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Much too forgiving if you ask me!

10/10

makaem

Thank you for translating this wonderful story.  Once again, I am in awe of your skills. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*takes a deep bow* I live to serve ;-)

0/10

rhiannon113

Ginny is a wonderful friend. I hope she can get thru to Mr. Cranky-pants. Usually I don't go for wallowing, but in this case, you made it feel necessary while still acknowledging the futility. that's great!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Can anyone get through? We will see...

10/10

ClayPotter

Oh boy, that was rich! I can hardly wait to hear what Ginny dishes out for our icy but obviously suffering potions master.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Well, knowing Ginny, I suspect she will try to help them both...

10/10

potterbrat

Dang it.  I don't like when I chapters are so good and then POOF, it ends.  Very, very good.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

All good things have to end, dear.

0/10

pookah

Thanks for the update!  I am enjoying this and looking forward to more.  Yay, Severus gets to play the hero!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I live to please ;-) But it's an interesting view you are taking...

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

By 'play the hero' I don't mean he's playing a game or a role, but that he gets to do the heroic thing and get credit for it.  Like Harry has done more than once. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I live to please ;-) But it's an interesting view you are taking...

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

By 'play the hero' I don't mean he's playing a game or a role, but that he gets to do the heroic thing and get credit for it.  Like Harry has done more than once. 

10/10

makaem

That was a great chapter.  I guess they will have to work together to save the boy.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I guess they will, yes.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I guess they will, yes.

10/10

kitlucky13

Oh no!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Sad, but: yes...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Sad, but: yes...

10/10

potterbrat

Ugh!!  I have chills!!  Please, I need more!! 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Dear Lady. You seem to have a bad case of FanFic abuse. Please contact your nearest Healer.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Dear Lady. You seem to have a bad case of FanFic abuse. Please contact your nearest Healer.

10/10

Callywaggy

So, so good.  I can't wait till the next part is up.  Glad you had a wonderful holiday though.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you!

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