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Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
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Difficult to read... Severus doesn't seem to be convinced how he wants to progress with Hermione. It's like he's torn. There were moments of brutalness and caullousness that made me cringe, then moments that seemed normal, but not quite. I am not so sure about Hermione's understanding of his previous actions as he is. Guess I'll have to wait and see. I don't know if it was your intent to create that feeling of being torn between what seems to be two Severus', if you did, I thought you wrote it well. Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are sooo right. He is torn. And he is a very creepy person. He doesn't know how to treat her without some force behind it. He really wants to be soft, he really wants to love her, but he has never loved another person, and never been loved, so he doesn't know what to do, besides the same roughness that he knows. He is not a black and white person. There are many shades of grey, most darker than others. And Hermione is NOT listening to her dreams--they tell her things. So, since we don't really 'know' Severus, that yes, he is torn, and it WAS my intetnion to create that feeling, I will take all of that as a compliment. So, thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are sooo right. He is torn. And he is a very creepy person. He doesn't know how to treat her without some force behind it. He really wants to be soft, he really wants to love her, but he has never loved another person, and never been loved, so he doesn't know what to do, besides the same roughness that he knows. He is not a black and white person. There are many shades of grey, most darker than others. And Hermione is NOT listening to her dreams--they tell her things. So, since we don't really 'know' Severus, that yes, he is torn, and it WAS my intetnion to create that feeling, I will take all of that as a compliment. So, thanks!
Lemons are indeed a pain to write, but they are so wonderful to read--especially when they are as intensely detailed as this. Wonderful! Glad you didn't go with "Severus and Hermione Shagged." Perfect title, by the way.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you!!!!! Wow! you made me smile with the 'intensely detailed'. Yeah, they are a pain, but... so worth it, yes? Thanks for mentioning the title, I really thought it was perfect because there is each BLOOD, and SUGAR, and SEX and MAGIC in this chapter! hhahahahahaShell~
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
I loved that RHCP album. My mom asked me what cds I wanted for x-mas when I was 17, and I asked for that one, Achtung Baby by U2, Disintegration by the Cure, and a Chieftains cd. Guess which one I didn't get? Glad my bff had no compunctions about copyright infringement! Naughty, naughty little thoughts encouraged by plenty of hot lyrics... sigh...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you!!!!! Wow! you made me smile with the 'intensely detailed'. Yeah, they are a pain, but... so worth it, yes? Thanks for mentioning the title, I really thought it was perfect because there is each BLOOD, and SUGAR, and SEX and MAGIC in this chapter! hhahahahahaShell~
Response from emmeline33 (Reviewer)
I loved that RHCP album. My mom asked me what cds I wanted for x-mas when I was 17, and I asked for that one, Achtung Baby by U2, Disintegration by the Cure, and a Chieftains cd. Guess which one I didn't get? Glad my bff had no compunctions about copyright infringement! Naughty, naughty little thoughts encouraged by plenty of hot lyrics... sigh...
This is really one great and well writen chapter . I love yours Severus and he is done Hermione experience of lousing virginity a wonderfoull thing.I wonder what wos hapend before in Hogwarts in Groto or wos this only dream . Pleas update soon because I can wait to know what is it that make Voldermort angry whit Severus . Could it bee possible that Voldermort can fill happiness and satisfaction in Severus and that is reason he is angry.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
. The Grotto was very real. And it will be coming back soon! I'm glad you like how he took her, we will see what Hermione thinks about it in the next chapter.Good guess about Voldy, too! But, I won't tell you if you are right or wrong... answer will be in later chaptersthank you so much for you review
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Thank you,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
. The Grotto was very real. And it will be coming back soon! I'm glad you like how he took her, we will see what Hermione thinks about it in the next chapter.Good guess about Voldy, too! But, I won't tell you if you are right or wrong... answer will be in later chaptersthank you so much for you review
I have very little to say except that obviously, this chapter is fucking ace.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I fucking love you.hahahahahah. Thank you so much!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I fucking love you.hahahahahah. Thank you so much!
Severus, what a commanding and communicative lover! About Hermione's virginity, does this mean that Severus used the back passage when he raped her, or that he somehow repaired her hyman? Or was that previous incident all in her mind? Hum. And what's Voldy-butt angry about this time? Did he not know that Severus was taking a little fieldtrip?Great job as always.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
!! So very nice to see you again! I was wondering if you stopped reading...That previous incident was all in her mind. Just a dream about him raping her, but the part with the blood and him licking off his fingers, was real. So her dreams tell her things, but in a strange sort of way... and she doesn't really listen to her dreams. Shame on her.
However, with that said. At first, yeah, I was going to have him rape her and repair her hyman, but I had to change that because it wouldn't work for the ending of the story.
And voldy... hrm... wouldn't you be mad if your most trusted servent took a "little fieldtrip" without your knowledge? hehehehehehe...
Thank you for your review and rating--it means a lot to me!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
!! So very nice to see you again! I was wondering if you stopped reading...That previous incident was all in her mind. Just a dream about him raping her, but the part with the blood and him licking off his fingers, was real. So her dreams tell her things, but in a strange sort of way... and she doesn't really listen to her dreams. Shame on her.
However, with that said. At first, yeah, I was going to have him rape her and repair her hyman, but I had to change that because it wouldn't work for the ending of the story.
And voldy... hrm... wouldn't you be mad if your most trusted servent took a "little fieldtrip" without your knowledge? hehehehehehe...
Thank you for your review and rating--it means a lot to me!
My god! Incredible adventure! Thanks.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh squeee! Thank you so much!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh squeee! Thank you so much!
LORDIE!!!! OMG I nearly died from holding my breath for so long!! And then to deny me a lemony death-- oh you are a big meanie shellsnapeluver and all you helpers too!!! oh well, at least my heart finally slowed down again! looking forward to more soon!!!Mental note, in the beginning Snape was REALLY dark and now he's kinda grey, do you have any idea why the poor man needs to have layers like and orge? ( or onion for that matter>) Heehee Shrek humor there
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hello, hello! Are you breathing okay now? hahahahah. You crack me up. "Big meanie shellsnapeluver and all your helpers too!" OMG, I am SOOOO going to have to share that with my team! hahahahahah. You are going to be SCREAMING at me by the time the next chapter ends! hahahahah. Love the Shrek humour, but you are so right. He does have a lot of layers. It's like this:Layer 1: DARKLayer 2: Dark greyLayer 3: DARKLayer 4: Dark greyLayer 5: DARKLayer 6: Light greyhahahahah. See, what I mean? The dark!Snape comes in and out, in and out. He has a lot of issues. :)Thanks for your review!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hello, hello! Are you breathing okay now? hahahahah. You crack me up. "Big meanie shellsnapeluver and all your helpers too!" OMG, I am SOOOO going to have to share that with my team! hahahahahah. You are going to be SCREAMING at me by the time the next chapter ends! hahahahah. Love the Shrek humour, but you are so right. He does have a lot of layers. It's like this:Layer 1: DARKLayer 2: Dark greyLayer 3: DARKLayer 4: Dark greyLayer 5: DARKLayer 6: Light greyhahahahah. See, what I mean? The dark!Snape comes in and out, in and out. He has a lot of issues. :)Thanks for your review!!!
I was wondering what you could have written that deserved that great 'build up' at the beginning in A/N ... now I know! And it did deserve the great build up as it didn't disappoint. The Adventure's of Spinner's End Snape and his faithful sidekick Know-it-all Granger. [Well, maybe that title needs some work?] Great chapter!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I'm so glad you liked that chapter!!! I love your little title! hahahhah, so so very true! Thank you for your review, I really enjoy reading them!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I'm so glad you liked that chapter!!! I love your little title! hahahhah, so so very true! Thank you for your review, I really enjoy reading them!
wheeeeeeeeeee! shades of indiana jones! specially loved the ending and i can't wait for the next chapter. thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yippie!!! What a ride, yes? Next chapter in queue!! I'm writing as fast as I can!! Thank you for you review!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yippie!!! What a ride, yes? Next chapter in queue!! I'm writing as fast as I can!! Thank you for you review!
I'm glad Severus overheard Hermione in the bathtub. He now knows she does want him, and his tactics to force her is not necessary. This will leave him open to show her how he feels for her. Perhaps while they're in Egypt. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he shouldn't have to force her... but habits are hard to break. Yes, Egpyt should proove... interesting. Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he shouldn't have to force her... but habits are hard to break. Yes, Egpyt should proove... interesting. Shell~
Have I bowed at the alter of your muse yet? Cuz I think if I can kiss the hem of your robe and pay homage to your muse we will get an update faster!! Heehee I love this story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
*gigglesnort* My alter of my muse! Thanks for your sweet review! I wish I could update faster... but when you are ,ike number 32 in line... well, it takes a while... hehehehehehHugs~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
*gigglesnort* My alter of my muse! Thanks for your sweet review! I wish I could update faster... but when you are ,ike number 32 in line... well, it takes a while... hehehehehehHugs~
Field trip! This should be very interesting. It looks like Sevy is beginning to turn on the Snape charm.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, a 'field trip!' hahahahah... Well, he will be trying, at least.Thanks for your review and rating! Much love! Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, a 'field trip!' hahahahah... Well, he will be trying, at least.Thanks for your review and rating! Much love! Shell~
Ha ha! A nice Snape! Lol
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes! See, he cannnn be... nice. But will it last?*snickers*
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes! See, he cannnn be... nice. But will it last?*snickers*
Ooh, an adventure is afoot! And Hermione's a bit unbalanced by Snape's lack of rancor. Wonderful!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
lmao. 'afoot'! how adorable are you!!! I love that word 'afoot!' Yes... a adventure, indeed. lots and LOTS going to happen very quickly, so just hold on for the ride!Thanks for your review! Love you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
lmao. 'afoot'! how adorable are you!!! I love that word 'afoot!' Yes... a adventure, indeed. lots and LOTS going to happen very quickly, so just hold on for the ride!Thanks for your review! Love you!
thanks so much for the great update. i look forward to the next installment.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!
Just finished... WOW! One of the best stories I've read on here!
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful vision of these two!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
LOL! Thank you!!! Thank you for reading it! And so quickly!
Just started this story today and haven't been able to stop reading long enough to review. I had to take a moment to voice my suspicion about the impending return of Headmaster Black to someone. :)
I noticed from other reviews you seem to be getting a hard time about how violent and downright evil you portray Severus... I say his character is perfectly written! He will have to undergo many trials to emmerge a decent human being and it is great you are not rushing this! It has, so far been believingly drawn out!
Also, let me add a loud 'bravo' to your writing style, being both an avid reader and an English Education major I do consider myself hard to please ;)
I will comment again when I can manage to pull myself from your intriguing tale
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much for stopping and voicing your thoughts, I really appreciate you taking the time to do so.And, I am speechless about what you said regarding the writing style. I will admit, I always hated writing and was horrible at it, until I found fanfic. I had some really amazing beta/teacher's helping me on the way. It's been a learning experiance, I will tell you! And now, I love creative writing! So, for someone as yourself to say that--wow. Thank you. Shell~
I really enjoyed this story and the way Severus and Hermione develop their relationship BUT it really didn't need the detailed description of the torture. That was completely unnecessary. If I was to read the story again, I most certainly would skip these scenes.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, that's how it was written--it's not for everyone, and it's okay to skip certain scenes. But thanks for giving it a try at least...
OK. First of all, I think the order in which you wrote of the events served to maintain a high level of interest making this reader want to read further. I had a sense that the one piece of information I needed to put all the pieces together was "just around the next corner."Jezzie comes up with the perfect excuse why she was on Hermione's door step at 2:08 AM. Hermione blabs to her about the Secret Keeper plan and the location of Beauxbatons. The next evening they go to the dance club where Hermione meets the blond American, and suffers from breaking the Promise she made to Severus in the Grotto.The next thing I read is that it is Monday morning, and Severus is at her home ready to escort her safely to Hogwarts. This was brilliant — whetting my appetite to discover just what the hell had been going on with SNAPE!!!Severus is pleasant, and hints that he, too, has an obsession — just not books, nothing inanimate — He chuckled. “I’m positive that you’ll guess mine over time.” Only then do you let the reader know what Severus's weekend had been like, and that he felt the same gut wrenching pain that the object of his obsession had felt when she had been tempted to have a fling with the blond in the bar.We see how Snape is amazed to discover his ability at Legilimency from across the continent, and then his determination to strike out, to find a few blond oafs and beat the crap out of them. Here he is all about vengeance.Next we see Severus going directly from Italy to Hermione's home, his hasty decision to break her wards, and sneak upstairs to confront her, to berate her with insults and demands. And then he hears her whimpering and decides to kill whomever is causing her this distress., only to discover she is in the throes of her fantasy — about making love to HIM!!!Then the last image you leave with the reader (and this is what completely blew me away) is that of Severus confronting his boggart, the same boggart he has NEVER defeated. And he finds the courage to realize an essential truth about himself: he is worthy, and he defeats his boggart. He is NOT the person he has been led to believe he is for his entire life. And this self-discovery allows him to to decide to be honest with Hermione, to find out if she could ever love him. For the first time in his life, the man has hope.It was your masterful construction of the chapter that made it such a magical thing for me. Blew me away... totally.Again, 1000 Points to your House.I remain your faithful servant,Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, Beth. You really are a faithful servant. You deserve many rewards. Thank you for explaning everything to me, I highly appreciate it! 'just around the coroner' I love that.
This chapter was a biggie for me. I have always wanted to do Snape's boggart--and it of course be Hermoine.
I also wanted it to be his first time at beating the damn thing--I mean we see Snape in MANY fics as the man that can do everything--he is brilliant in all aspects, but something that has to do with his fears, especially coming from him, would be most something that he wouldn't be able to do easily. Many thanks for your insight and praise.Next chapter is a bit short, though, I will warn you. It's more of a 'set-up' than anything... *kisses*Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, Beth. You really are a faithful servant. You deserve many rewards. Thank you for explaning everything to me, I highly appreciate it! 'just around the coroner' I love that.
This chapter was a biggie for me. I have always wanted to do Snape's boggart--and it of course be Hermoine.
I also wanted it to be his first time at beating the damn thing--I mean we see Snape in MANY fics as the man that can do everything--he is brilliant in all aspects, but something that has to do with his fears, especially coming from him, would be most something that he wouldn't be able to do easily. Many thanks for your insight and praise.Next chapter is a bit short, though, I will warn you. It's more of a 'set-up' than anything... *kisses*Shell~
ohhhweeee that is one messed up man! i loved how yoou showed him facing his boggart. great stuff. thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi! Yeah, but don't you feel sorry for him? Just a tad...?? lol. Thanks for saying something about his boggart, I thought I would get more of a reaction out of people about that than I did.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi! Yeah, but don't you feel sorry for him? Just a tad...?? lol. Thanks for saying something about his boggart, I thought I would get more of a reaction out of people about that than I did.
Ah, so he sees now that love is special. Defeating the boggart was so pivitol to his change of heart. Very angst-filled. I'm curious to see how he's going to go about letting Hermione inside.Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he does see that. But can he truely love? Maybe... the boggart was very important! thanks for your review!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he does see that. But can he truely love? Maybe... the boggart was very important! thanks for your review!
Granted I havent been out to the bars in ages, is there really an orange colored shot?10 points to your house for the spell that protects the under age students at Hogwarts. There was a really creepy story about that type of spell specifically over at FFN. Did you ever read it? I am shocked and awed that Snape didnt jump in the tub with Hermione when he realized she was thinking of him. Such restraint or rather shock huh?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, you silly girl... the shot glass was orange, not the drink! bwhahaahah... you crack me up.I got 10 points for Slytherin! woo hoo!!!! Snape will be so proud, maybe he will reward me by some snogging after class! I have not read that story on FFN, send me the link. Of course he didn't jump in the tub, he was in very shocked indeed! So shocked that he went back to face his boggart because he WANTS to jump in that tub, but he is scared.
Hugs,
Shell~
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Took me a bit to recall the story. Here it is!http://www.fanfiction.net/s/666297/1/Sixty_Mondays
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, you silly girl... the shot glass was orange, not the drink! bwhahaahah... you crack me up.I got 10 points for Slytherin! woo hoo!!!! Snape will be so proud, maybe he will reward me by some snogging after class! I have not read that story on FFN, send me the link. Of course he didn't jump in the tub, he was in very shocked indeed! So shocked that he went back to face his boggart because he WANTS to jump in that tub, but he is scared.
Hugs,
Shell~
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Took me a bit to recall the story. Here it is!http://www.fanfiction.net/s/666297/1/Sixty_Mondays
Ouch, some serious self-loathing and esteem issues Severus is dealing with. I don't know if someone who is obessed with another can love unconditionally the way true love does? People learn to love by being loved, it doesn't seem Severus has had any experience on that front. I'm afraid he is going to missunderstang the relationship between Hermione, Harry and Ron, you can't just turn off an obsession.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, major issues is right! But, can he pull through them and really love her? We shall see. And if Hermione starts loving him, then he can learn from her??? We shall see. Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, major issues is right! But, can he pull through them and really love her? We shall see. And if Hermione starts loving him, then he can learn from her??? We shall see. Thanks for reading and revieiwng!