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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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kthewitch

i have just spent the last 3 days reading this, and i absolutely loved it!! So many twists and turns, it kept me thouroughly engrossed. I think you did a wonderful job with this. your plot is very strong, characterizations are great, and snark is top notch. Thank you for sharing. Kelly :)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell... 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell... 

10/10

Nessa

Well i've re-read it. Bloody brilliant and I love the ending, I love a ending where I know that SS/HG will have a positive future together. Your a very talented writer. Please keep them coming. Wished I could give your more than 5 stars

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you for taking the time to re-read this! Thank you so much for the review and the stars~

0/10

fleetzz

Unable to find the deleted scene--perhaps a link?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

http://shellsnapeluver.livejournal.com/19013.html#cutid1It should be there...

10/10

braye27

This ending is entirely satisfactory!  Thank you so much for this amazing tale of redemption and resolution.You've written both Severus and Hermione true to character, and made both of them work like hell to maintain their faith in themselves and each other.Of course, Severus would have barred Hermione from visiting him in Azkaban.  He'd made her promise to make a life for herself without him.  The idea of tying her to him while he rotted away in prison was too painful to contemplate.  And of course Hermione would try to keep her promise to him.  But our Hermione wouldn't stand for him paying such a dear price for finding a way to defeat the Dark Lord.  There is nothing so fearsome as a Gryffindor witch who wants her wizard.  Kudos to her for earning her law degree and then using what she'd learned to clear him of those ridiculous murder charges.  In less than two years they will be able to begin their happy life together, and isn't that what we all want for these amazing characters?  I have loved reading every chapter, every word of this story.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a fabulous love story.  I hope to see more stories from you in the future.  Congratulations on a job well done!  Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Beth,I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews, I always looked forward to hearing from you. Many hugs and lots of luv.Shell~

10/10

rons_love

awww... :)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hehehhe... :)

0/10

Tzentel

Mwhahahahaaaaaaa!  Great story.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thanks!!!

0/10

zenobia

whoo, thank you, I read this with much joy.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thanks for reviewing and reading it!Shell~

10/10

Lkmaide

Well SHell, I suppose you could always write an alternative ending as a one shot, just for those who need a dark ending to go with the dark plot.  Seriously, he just goes soft. . .  please, this dark and maniacal Severus dominated the story, and then he goes all Fluff. . .   geeze woman!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahha, I could... I don't think this is too fluffy, though. You might be the only one who wanted that darker ending (besides me), because no one is else speaking up! Hahahah.

10/10

rcardon

Well done, Shell! Very nice ending to a great story! I find it interesting that you chose to make Ron and Harry friends with Severus, I never would have imagined that happening.I like that you had Hermione keep working on Snapes appeal, and that something Severus had deemed inconsiquential ended up working to his benefit. Very well done.Reed

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, H and R did that for Hermione's sake, to try, and they found out that they could be friends. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

tenoh27

Thank you very much for the hopeful ending!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You are welcome! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

makaem

That was a wonderful ending.  You did a great job with that final chapter. I had no idea what to expect. I alternated between thinking she was dead and that she was Harry's new romance. I can't wait for your next story.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, good! I kept you guessing! LOL!I'm glad you likey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Lots of luv!Shell~

10/10

saravasti

Great! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story! I enjoyed reading it. <3

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Awee, thank you!

10/10

Jinxie

Lovely ending, thank you for sharing!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thanks!!

10/10

Darque Hart

It's over? But, but ... what will I read now?  You're the only one that writes Severus this way.  I love Severus, but I REALLY LOVE Severus the way you write him.  He's sort of like the essence of, 'what doesn't kill us, makes us stronger.'  Everything that happened to him as a child and young adult seems to have forced him to be this way, just to survive.This is actually one of the few stories that I caught at the beginning [without playing catch up] and probably the story I have reviewed the most.  I will definitely miss the all and powerful Snape; evil bastard extraordinaire.  In case you're in doubt, I truly loved the story.  Thanks!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

,I'm grinning from ear to ear. Your words really warmed my heart, thank you for saying that. I love writing Severus like this because to me, that IS who he is. Sometimes evil, sometimes a lover, but always, always mysterious and I-will-always-keep-you-guessing. So, I'm really happy you like him too the way I write him. Thank you for reviewing as well! Lots of Luv and many hugs! Shell~

10/10

Anonymous

shocked outbursts of ‘Shell, you’re EVIL’ have truly warmed my heart

Awww. And I think this says a lot about you, my dear! LOL!

Just as your death would’ve destroyed me, being aware that you were out there in the world, living a happy life without me, devastated me.

It is unhealthy and unjust for him to compare those things similarly, of course, but then, that is exactly what Snape thinks. And if we're honest, that's how many of us feel in the same situation, if someone we love leaves us behind and is happy in their new life while we still want them with us. And I think that's what you tapped into with this story -- those untold truths of human psychology, however dark and however much we would like to believe we're above them.

Great work. I'm very proud of you.

Author's Response: Squee!

I didn't realize I was tapping into those untold human truths! But, I'm glad I did, becasue the way you say it, sounds so awesome! LOL!

Thanks for all you did.

XOXOXO
Shell~

10/10

severuslover

Wonderful ending. I loved it. Great job! I'm glad everything is working out for Hermione and Severus after all. ~Jen

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, me too! I feel good about giving them a life in the future! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

10/10

livvy6

I am so glad you finished this story. It sounds like you really struggled with how you wanted to end the fic. You are very talented, and I can not wait for the next one! :)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank Livvy! Yes, I did struggle, but in the end, I owed it to all the loyal readers to give these two a good ending. Thank you so much! LoveShell~

10/10

HBAR

Congratulations on a job well done, Shell!  I nearly fell out of my chair when I saw that this was updated and finally finished.  I love what you did with this and it couldn't have ended any better.  It wasn't some ridiculous happily ever after.  That would have felt inappropriate considering the tone of the story as a whole.  But it made me happy that Ron and Harry and the twins were friendly with Severus.  While I think it was only appropriate that he spend some time in Azkaban, I'd have hated to see him rotting away there by himself.  And whether she thinks so or not, it really was good for Hermione to get away and make an attempt to move on so she can be sure that he is what she really wants.I had no idea what the new evidence would be, and was still surprised when I found out.  But what a great moment to bring back up, because while I as a reader felt like he really was a good guy, despite some of his previous actions, it was nice to be reminded that he really did do some good things throughout, even if sometimes misguided.Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story with us.  And a special thanks for forcing me to read this.  Yes, I started out reading through squinty eyes, but you held my hand and dragged me on through and I couldn't be happier about it.  You've done a fantastic job and I hope to see more from you in the future!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you so much! Yes, it was very good of Hermione to get away, go into another world and really test her love, because now she knows for sure. I'm so glad I surprised you with the new evidence! I was hoping someone would say so, so thanks. See now, I told you it was going somewhere, even if it did start off really dark... LOL! Thank you for reviewing.*hugs*

0/10

septentrion

You managed a HEA! Kuddos. I loved that story, from beginning to end.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

LOL. Thank you so much for reading this! Massive Hugs!

10/10

June W

Hey, this story is listed as "Completed: Yes" -- where's that last chapter????

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

It is still in queue--they are taking longer than usual, but it should be posted here in next few days. Lol, sorry!

Response from June W (Reviewer)

You know your story is good when you have stalkers begging for updates.

10/10

pearl city princess

What is Severus up to now?   I was afraid he could not be trusted.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Lol, just keep reading!! thanks~

10/10

pearl city princess

Very lemony.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahaha, yep it is!

10/10

pearl city princess

They definitely know how to have an adventure.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, yeah! I love writing action-packed adventures!

10/10

pearl city princess

I can see that Snape is trying to be kind to Hermione but I don't know if I trust him.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Trust is a hard thing to come by, hopefully he will earn it from you.

10/10

pearl city princess

A trip to egypt, that does sound like fun.  I wonder how Hermione will react to flying with Severus.  I thing it sounds like tons of fun.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I think flying with him would be awesome! lol!

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