Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
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So what's Severus's real intentions? Does he love Hermione? Is for the light? Oh please say yes to both!! I can't stand He and Hermione not being together!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo! Questions! I love questions!!Real intentions? Hrm... cant tell you that. Does he love Hermione?With ever once of his soul, mind, body, spirit, being... so, um. yes.But you didn't ask me if she loves him???Well... I guess you will have to wait for that answer.Thanks~~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo! Questions! I love questions!!Real intentions? Hrm... cant tell you that. Does he love Hermione?With ever once of his soul, mind, body, spirit, being... so, um. yes.But you didn't ask me if she loves him???Well... I guess you will have to wait for that answer.Thanks~~
Oh, not the place to leave us hanging (actually, it's a great place). Sorry real life is sucky right now, I hope it gets better.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
RL is getting somewhat better. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
RL is getting somewhat better. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Did,nt see that coming, so my idea's were all alot of crap.Wonderful chapter,loved it. Many thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hahahha, no, I am sure your ideas were fine. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hahahha, no, I am sure your ideas were fine. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Excellent as always!
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Thank you
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That is a great chapter You write.I hope that he will free him self from the grasp of that last horcruxs . It was a surprise that he has it. Strong grasp that indicate horcrux has on him obviously cause his strange behavioral .
Great job . I look forward to the next .
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, yes the horcrux does play a small role in why he is the way he is, but he has done horrible things and behaved badly even before he had the horcrux, don't forget that. Thank you so much for reviewing, I loved it.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, yes the horcrux does play a small role in why he is the way he is, but he has done horrible things and behaved badly even before he had the horcrux, don't forget that. Thank you so much for reviewing, I loved it.
Ok, so much makes sense now. Wow, that was some revelation. No wonder he could do such evil things. The horcrux would have such an iron grasp on him. It would have encouraged him to do what ever came into his mind. Not to mention getting outed to Hermione about his obsession. Great chapter, look forward to the next. Go, kick some RL arse, lol.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
See, I think you are the thrid person who has said, "no wonder he could do such evil things" yes, the horcrux does have some sort of an effect on him, but don't forget... he has been doing very bad things even BEFORE he had the horcrux....I am kicking RL RIGHT NOW! lol. Thanks for the great review, I just adore it!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
See, I think you are the thrid person who has said, "no wonder he could do such evil things" yes, the horcrux does have some sort of an effect on him, but don't forget... he has been doing very bad things even BEFORE he had the horcrux....I am kicking RL RIGHT NOW! lol. Thanks for the great review, I just adore it!
Chuckles all around. What control does the horcrux really have on SS that he's been denying to himself all these years? Maybe it's a low-grade control that he's simply so used to that he thinks it's part of his natural make-up. And does the horcrux give HG extra power to stop SS from preventing her from reaching DD's office? And if HG does reach DD's office, what will she really do? How will SS explain not coming forward with the horcrux? Oww. Yes! The race is on! Good job. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, a 'low grade' control is right. Remember, he has done some pretty awful things even before he had the horcrux! I love all the questions... Let's see, what else?? Reaching DD's office?? Must.read.on. hehehehehehAnd yes, Severus will have a LOT of explaining to do about the horcrux! And yes, the race... GO! Thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
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Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, a 'low grade' control is right. Remember, he has done some pretty awful things even before he had the horcrux! I love all the questions... Let's see, what else?? Reaching DD's office?? Must.read.on. hehehehehehAnd yes, Severus will have a LOT of explaining to do about the horcrux! And yes, the race... GO! Thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
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*snigger* I expected the turn from the moment I had read the first chapter, dear. Your Snape is malicious - trust him to grab her and crush her when she wants to follow her own will.But then - will he really?Very well done, dear, as usual. And some hugs for good measures accompany this review!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, I know he IS malicious, huh? But, he does really love her, so... hopefully that will help.I love your hugs. And miss them too.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, I know he IS malicious, huh? But, he does really love her, so... hopefully that will help.I love your hugs. And miss them too.
no indeed, i did not see that coming! i can't wait for the next chapter. thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You didn't?? Really??? hahahahahahahha.
Thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You didn't?? Really??? hahahahahahahha.
Thanks!
I'd love to know how Headmaster Black knew Hermione was trashing Severus's office. Was it a lucky guess? Or, perhaps some other means.Poor Hermione, she must be very hurt.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
No, not a lucky guess... the head of slytherin has a potriait for the only headmaster of slytherin in his office. So, he could see what was happening. Well, hurt, yes. But. She's destorying his office for ANOTHER reason.... *giggles*Thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
No, not a lucky guess... the head of slytherin has a potriait for the only headmaster of slytherin in his office. So, he could see what was happening. Well, hurt, yes. But. She's destorying his office for ANOTHER reason.... *giggles*Thanks!
Come fly with me, come fly, let's fly away...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahahahahhahah! Yeah, I thought of that too!
What a tangled web Severus has put himself in. It sounds like it's coming undone very soon and I'm glad Hermione is willing to hear his side of the story. I was kind of surprised that Dumbledore and Snape didn't communicate as much as I thought they would. It's not going to be pretty when everything comes out but life rarely is in difficult situations. As far as Greyback and Lestrange are concerned, I wasn't fussed *kind of thought they got off easy*. But I believe they are they kind of enemy you shouldn't let live. Looking forward to Hermione's and Severus' talk.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Very tangled. And yes, coming undone very quickly! She is willing to hear his side, and I am glad you saw that because it is importnant later on. There is a reason why they don't communcate as much as you think... but I can't tell ya. lol.And they got off easy! hahahahah, yeah, they could have lived and been tortured for ever! But, like you said,it wouldn't be good if they lived. Thanks for reviewing!!
Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)
Lol, my idea of revenge *if it's really worth getting revenge* is to extract payment over a long length of time, and I admit I am a little blood thirsty, so... No, really, the revenge doesn't bother me. Not like how Severus treated Hermione at the first of your story. That was really upsetting to me. Thanks for the story, it definitely makes you think.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, well, Sev... is not a nice guy. He really isn't. No matter HOW much I love him. And he was very much obsessed with her then, and was angry for letting himself fall for her, so he took it out on her. But he's changed, I think, over time... And I hope that I show that. But, never forget that in this story, Severus is really not a nice man. And for Hermione, love is blind. He is beyond dangerous-and you will see what I mean in the next few chapters, I hope.Thanks, for your response!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Very tangled. And yes, coming undone very quickly! She is willing to hear his side, and I am glad you saw that because it is importnant later on. There is a reason why they don't communcate as much as you think... but I can't tell ya. lol.And they got off easy! hahahahah, yeah, they could have lived and been tortured for ever! But, like you said,it wouldn't be good if they lived. Thanks for reviewing!!
Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)
Lol, my idea of revenge *if it's really worth getting revenge* is to extract payment over a long length of time, and I admit I am a little blood thirsty, so... No, really, the revenge doesn't bother me. Not like how Severus treated Hermione at the first of your story. That was really upsetting to me. Thanks for the story, it definitely makes you think.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, well, Sev... is not a nice guy. He really isn't. No matter HOW much I love him. And he was very much obsessed with her then, and was angry for letting himself fall for her, so he took it out on her. But he's changed, I think, over time... And I hope that I show that. But, never forget that in this story, Severus is really not a nice man. And for Hermione, love is blind. He is beyond dangerous-and you will see what I mean in the next few chapters, I hope.Thanks, for your response!!!
Ok, even though this story has really pushed my comfort zone, I'm glad I stayed with it. In some ways it's like Hermione's and Snape's relationship, the shocking parts of your story ARE like being attacked and smacked around the head and shoulders. But having persevered this far, I am enjoying your story and eagerly look forward to the next chapters.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much for sticking around! It means a lot to me!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much for sticking around! It means a lot to me!!
This is either my second or third attempt to read your story. It's definintely pushing me beyond my comfort zone but the recs on livejournal are intriguing. I'm just curious why the RoR didn't show a location for Snape? Was it because he was out of the castle at the time? Is this really Snape at his most honest or is he under an imperius? Will keep reading, thanks for the story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow! Thanks for reading (several times lol) even though it pushes you! I will say that he is NOT under the imperius. As far as honest... will... hrm.... lol.Thank you for coming over here from LJ! I really appreciate that!
I hope to hear more thoughts on this from you!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow! Thanks for reading (several times lol) even though it pushes you! I will say that he is NOT under the imperius. As far as honest... will... hrm.... lol.Thank you for coming over here from LJ! I really appreciate that!
I hope to hear more thoughts on this from you!!!
Hermione needs to stop beating herself up over telling Jezzie about Beaubatons, yes it was foolish, but anyone she told could have been captured. Hermione's insight into Severus' reasoning gives credence to her part in the realtionship. Phineas' concern for Severus is touching, and his backhanded compliment of their love was priceless. I really like Albus's explination of how Severus knew about Beaubatons, he's right, it is Severus' job to disseminate information in a way that will benefit the Order (sometime it's not pretty.)My compliments on your Severus, you've added a new element that I have never read before. I find him to be raw and coarse in a natural way regarding his feelings toward Hermione. It lends an element of unpredictability to his character. Many writers try to convey this but the formality to his nature often gets in the way. You are the first in my impression to accomplish both. Great update can't wait for more.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
She'll stop beating herself up... over time. Glad you like Phineas , he is fun to write! Yes, it IS his job to do that, but. Yes, there is a but. And I can't say anymore. Wow! Raw and coarse! I love how you say he is unpredictable! Because he is. You'll see so very soon how much he is.Thank you for a beautiufl review.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
She'll stop beating herself up... over time. Glad you like Phineas , he is fun to write! Yes, it IS his job to do that, but. Yes, there is a but. And I can't say anymore. Wow! Raw and coarse! I love how you say he is unpredictable! Because he is. You'll see so very soon how much he is.Thank you for a beautiufl review.
Who is it!?!?!Update soon!! lol x
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I dunno!!!!!! Are you on edge??? lolThanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I dunno!!!!!! Are you on edge??? lolThanks!
Interesting chapter, you certainly had my head whirling. I think the best part was Hermione's question to Dumbledore. "Do you trust him?" Is such a simple sentence with a wealth of meaning.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Really?!?!? Cool! Oh yes, questions may seem simple, but they are usually not.Thanks for reading!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Really?!?!? Cool! Oh yes, questions may seem simple, but they are usually not.Thanks for reading!
OMG! Severus has been found out, and Hermione is doing her own plotting to find out just what is going on with the Potions Master.but now I'm wondering just who is this 'unwanted guest' at Severus' door?Wonderful chapter, Shell! 
Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he's in trouble. Hmmm, yes, who IS at his door? Thanks for reviewing Beth!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, he's in trouble. Hmmm, yes, who IS at his door? Thanks for reviewing Beth!
Oooo.... can't wait for Hermione's little chat with Severus!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ah yes! It'll be... interesting. Thanks for reading!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ah yes! It'll be... interesting. Thanks for reading!!!
Severus, you are so busted! Here's hoping they will both open up and have an honest talk.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hhahahahhahahaah. Busted, indeed! Thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hhahahahhahahaah. Busted, indeed! Thanks!
if anyone can out slytherin him hermione can figure it out. i thot what albus said about severus was spot on. thanks for the lovely update and i look forward to more.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I have always thought of Hermione having more Slytherin qualites than most. But, honestly... well... a WOMAN quality is more like it (you'll see next chapter)Thanks for the read and review!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I have always thought of Hermione having more Slytherin qualites than most. But, honestly... well... a WOMAN quality is more like it (you'll see next chapter)Thanks for the read and review!
Unwanted guest, I'm assuming that is not Hermione. How much does Dumbldore know? As always, wonderul chapter.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hmmm... You know what happens when you assume, don't you? hahahhaha, j/k. Dumbledore, well... he knows a lot. But not enough, does that make sense? Of course not, Shell. Lol! Thanks for reading
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hmmm... You know what happens when you assume, don't you? hahahhaha, j/k. Dumbledore, well... he knows a lot. But not enough, does that make sense? Of course not, Shell. Lol! Thanks for reading
Hermione reacted to her conversation with Headmaster Black better than I thought she would. If she plots against Severus like she does an adversary he is in for trouble. Although Severus is an experienced master of manipulation and evasion. It will be interesting to see how their "match" goes.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, she did react well. For now. Thanks for reading my dearest!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, she did react well. For now. Thanks for reading my dearest!
Hermione starts plotting - go Hermione, go!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, Hermione, woman! Hear her ROAR! lol.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, Hermione, woman! Hear her ROAR! lol.
Thinking back on canon information or insinuation, one thing is definitely clear in my mind ... our dear sweet little Hermione, inch-for-inch, pound-for-pound was by far the more devious, quick thinking plotter and doer, than Severus Snape could ever want to be. So, I'd have to say at this point in the story - Severus Beware! 
Death Eaters my Aunt Sadie ... little girls with nose in book, wearing cute school uniforms with knee socks and maryjane's are the one's you want to watch out for. 
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I SOOOOOOO agree about what you said about Hermione. VERYYYY devious little girl! And one that will tear you limb from limb if you aren't careful. hahahahahahahThanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I SOOOOOOO agree about what you said about Hermione. VERYYYY devious little girl! And one that will tear you limb from limb if you aren't careful. hahahahahahahThanks!