Unsettling Surprises
Chapter 16 of 32
shellsnapeluverHermione and Severus go to headquarters to find out what happened at Beauxbatons.
AN: To: Lariope, Lulabelle72, and RedSkyAtNight: You girls are wonderful and put up with so much of my madness, thank you. I also wanted to thank OpalJade for... using her. (You know what I'm talking about, darling. I love you!) And finally, thank you to my readers--I know this is a long and dark tale, but I appreciate you all very much and adore your reviews. *hugs*
"How did this happen?" Lupin yelled to no one in particular.
The kitchen at Grimmauld Place was buzzing loudly with people shouting, questioning, and demanding explanations.
The oak door leading to the hallway swung open, and Dumbledore stomped through the doorway with Madame Maxime towering behind him, lowering her head as she walked under the threshold.
"Silence, please," Dumbledore commanded, addressing the room. He stood at the head of the kitchen table, commanding attention.
Instantly, the room became quiet, and all eyes turned towards the man in the long purple cloak--a man who had conspicuously lost the twinkle in his eye.
Snape hovered near the back corner, leaning against the pantry cupboard, watching the scene unravel before him.
About thirty minutes previous, Snape, along with a few Aurors and Order members, had received a Patronus announcing that Beauxbatons had been attacked, and an emergency meeting would be held at headquarters. Hermione had been with Snape and had insisted on accompanying him--against his wishes. When Snape had arrived, he had been bombarded with questions from the others--everyone demanding that the Death Eater tell them what had happened. He had casually and quietly stated that he had no information and had taken his place in the back of the room as Hermione sat at the table, behaving as if he hadn't been in the room, just as she used to.
"Death Eaters raided the school a few hours ago, attacking only Muggle-borns. Two sixth years fought off a man who, when they described him, fits the description of Dolohov. Unfortunately, they were no match for him, and he... molested them and..." Dumbledore cleared his throat, "and preformed unspeakable sexual acts to them. The girls are severely injured, and both are now resting in France's wizard hospital. Nine other girls, ages ranging from twelve to seventeen, are missing. One fifteen-year-old was found dead, and a letter was tied to her wrist. It appears to be written by Voldemort, but I cannot be positive until tests are run on it." Dumbledore paused and cut his eyes towards the Golden Trio.
"That letter was addressed to Hermione Granger."
The room filled with gasps. All eyes turned towards Hermione, who looked frightened and positively sick to her stomach. Although he wanted to comfort her, Severus stood in the back of the room, knowing what was going to happen. Hermione had been so blind when it came to Muggles--especially her cousin. She had never found the harm in telling Jezzie about her activities with the Order, because she was just a Muggle, and a Muggle that had no connections to the wizarding world. Oh, how she would be ashamed of herself if she only knew that her harmless chit-chat would cost her in the long run.
"What did it say, Albus?" Minerva asked, her hand over her heart and her brows furrowed.
Dumbledore's blue eyes bored into Hermione. Snape had seen that look before--the old fool was worried, confused, scared, and was taking a peep inside her mind, looking for answers.
Dumbledore opened a small piece of parchment, untied a green, sheer ribbon, and read the message out loud. "Your secret was invaluable. We shall meet again."
"I--I don't understand? W-why would he address it to me?" Hermione cried, shaking her head, her hair bouncing with each movement.
"We were hoping that you could tell us, Miss Granger. But that isn't our first concern at the moment. Right now, we need get those girls back. Everyone, you know your roles. The French Ministry and its own department of Aurors are going to help us attack Malfoy Manor as well as any other known locations that Voldemort has been spotted. Severus? Do you have anything to add?"
Snape stepped out of the shadows, disregarding the distraught girl who sat before him. "It is highly unlikely the girls are still alive. Especially if Dolohov was involved. And if they are at Malfoy Manor, there is no way inside, unless you are Marked. Or have a house-elf," he explained.
"A house-elf?" Arthur Weasley asked.
"Their magic is beyond ours--if I attack Malfoy Manor, then I will lose my position as a spy, but I do know that a house-elf will get anyone through the Dark Lord's wards."
"If you can't help us then what will you be doing, Snape?" a former student, who was now an Auror, angrily shouted.
Snape snarled at the boy. How dare he question me? "I can examine the letter, discuss the possible 'secrets' with Miss Granger--"
"No, Severus. I need you to take some of the Polyjuice Potion that I brought with me and help us attack the Death Eaters. We don't know if the girls are dead, and we need your help," Dumbledore demanded, pulling a phial from the deep pockets of his glittering robe.
Snape cursed under his breath. How could he possibly go into battle right now? He needed to watch over Hermione.
Because something was dreadfully wrong.
Voldemort doesn't leave fucking notes. And if he did, they would be on a large scale, such as a message written on a wall in the victim's blood--not tied up in a scroll with a green ribbon. Unless... he is tricking me into thinking that this is out of character for him. This wasn't the plan! I told him the location, to keep him off my back about the fucking Horcrux spell! He was to abduct the girls and that is all. How did this get out of hand?
The room thinned out with each person going to a separate room in the house to meet with their team members. Dumbledore handed Snape the phial, looked at Hermione and said, "If you don't mind, Miss Granger, please stay behind--I fear it isn't safe for you tonight."
In a daze, Hermione nodded her head and slowly looked at Snape, looking for any sign from him. As much as he wanted to comfort her, he couldn't. Not in front of Dumbledore. He popped the cork, tipped his head back and drank the contents.
The effects were immediate, and he felt awful, as if he might be sick, but it didn't last long, and before he knew it, he was the spitting image of Tonks. He had been Polyjuiced into a woman before--but at least she had been... plain and average, not something that stuck out like a sore thumb. Yes, he would be so helpful with his pink hair, lighting the way up a dark path at Malfoy Manor.
Fucking brilliant.
Snape glared at Dumbledore. Out of the corner of his eye, Hermione's hand shot to her mouth, suppressing a giggle.
"You must be having a laugh, old man."
"Not tonight, Severus," Dumbledore said solemnly. "If you are caught, they will not murder you right away because you are a woman. You and I both know they will try to satisfy themselves, giving you enough time to wandlessly and wordlessly defend yourself, alert us, and catch the bastards."
Dumbledore headed for the door and stopped. He looked over his shoulder at Snape. "Although it is nice to see you in a shade other than black."
Snape fumed as he followed Dumbledore out of the kitchen. As he walked by Hermione, he lightly caressed her back and whispered, "It will be all right, sweet one. I promise."
Hermione sat in the kitchen, alone, thinking about the personal letter from Voldemort. The noise from the rest of the house quickly died down as each team left in search of the missing girls.
What the bloody hell does Voldemort want with me? What if he saw something in my mind?
Hermione slammed her elbows on the table and dropped her head in her hands, trying to grasp the situation. She thought back to the night that he had looked into her mind--what could he possibly see that allowed him--
Oh, dear gods.
Hermione leapt from the table, pacing up and down the kitchen, arms clutched to her sides. "Did he see me telling anyone the location to Beauxbatons? Is that how he got in there? Wait. That wouldn't be right. It is a Secret Kept building--even if he looked in my mind, he wouldn't be able to hear me say it, because it wasn't directly to him."
Hermione noticed the small note from Voldemort sitting on the edge of the table. She picked it up and plopped down into a chair. With shaky hands, she untied the ribbon and unrolled the parchment.
Your Secret was invaluable.
We shall meet again.
"My secret is invaluable? What the fuck does that mean--my secret? My secret? Myyyy... My Secret! The 's' is capitalized! Oh, shite! He is referring to me being the Secret Keeper! But why me? I was just the first Keeper. That changed to Madame Maxime after I told ten people!" She threw the note across the table in anger, leaping to her feet. "I don't understand! Why me?"
She bit her lower lip, chewing on the skin as she always did when she was deep in thought. What if someone that I told had informed the snakey bastard? But who? Everyone on my list was a person in authority--someone in the Order or an Official.
Again, she paced, ticking the names of people she said the secret to. "Madamee Maxime, Dumbledore, McGonagall, Kingsley, Lupin, Moody, the French Minister, his assistant--the one with the curly mustache, Mademoiselle Lane, the Beauxbatons healer, and... and... Oh, bugger, who else did I tell? I can't remember!" Again, she ticked off the names, thinking about each occasion and conversation she had with them. Surely Mademoiselle Lane hadn't been the last person... She had conveyed the secret to someone else....
Hermione stopped walking and stared at her reflection in the glass cupboard doors. How could the know-it-all have been so stupid?
"Jezzie," she whispered to herself, finally understanding where her mistake had been.
I told Jezzie the location.
This means that Jezzie became a Secret Keeper. The only people who know of Jezzie are Harry, Ron... and... no. "NO!"
Not Severus... Please... Oh, gods! I have to find Jezzie!
Hermione Apparated to Jezzie's pub, pushing her petite body past the groups of people socializing and the people dancing obnoxiously with beers in their hands, and headed straight for the bar. The pub offered half-priced drinks at this hour which unavoidably brought in the students at the University and the 'younger crowd.'
An elbow was shoved in her ribs as she slid in between a woman and a man snogging while waiting for their drinks. Jezzie was behind the counter, along with two other girls, rushing madly around, mixing drinks, collecting money, and taking orders.
"Jezzie!" she shouted over the loud music and chatter of the crowd, but she barely heard her own voice and knew her cousin certainly hadn't heard her.
She wanted to talk to her cousin to see if she had accidently told someone about the location for Beauxbatons. Finally, Jezzie walked over to her and noticed her for the first time.
"What are you doing here?" her cousin said loudly, leaning over the bar, close to Hermione's ear.
"We need to talk!"
"All right! Give me forty minutes--I'll be on my break then!" Jezzie reached to her left and grabbed a chilled bottle of beer, popped the top and handed it to Hermione. "Drink this and be patient!"
Hermione seized the bottle and took a sip. And waited. Around her, the noise became louder, the gentle shoves of her body as people stood next to her at the bar became more frequent.
Those girls are hurt or worse, dead because of you, Hermione. You and your stupid blabber mouth! It's all your fault! You don't deserve to sit in this fucking pub drinking, while those poor girls... Those girls were probably raped and died terrified!
Hermione swallowed another gulp of her beer and noticed Jezzie was standing in front of her, watching her carefully. Hermione shrugged her shoulders, slid off the barstool and followed her cousin to the back room of the pub, where the sounds that had been echoing off the walls and hurting her ears were muffled.
"Remember when I told you the location of Beauxbatons?" Hermione said, suppressing a belch.
"Yes, why?"
"Did you tell anyone about the location?"
Jezzie looked at her, dazed. "Of course not--I know how dangerous it is for anyone to know about the wizarding world. Why do you ask?"
Hermione sighed. "Jezzie, Death Eaters attacked the school tonight--many young girls were hurt, and some might even be dead. The only logical explanation would be that someone I gave the Secret to informed someone who was then able to ambush the school. I told people who were in the Order... and you. Madame Maxime and Dumbledore were next in telling the location. Then it would have been you. I accidently made you a Secret Keeper--this is all my fault, and I just wanted to know if you mentioned the location to anyone--if anyone has been bothering you... if... if you told Severus."
"Hermione, I did not tell anyone, I promise. I haven't even seen Severus since... since..." Jezzie furrowed her brows, as if she remembered something.
"Since?"
"Well, I just had a strange feeling that I saw him just today... sitting on one of the benches at the park across from your house... but, no. That's not possible."
"Jezzie, when it comes to magic, anything is possible. How many times have I told you that? Try to remember--was it him or not? Did he say anything to you?"
Jezzie stared at the cracked tile floor and shook her head. "I must have been mistaken. I'm sorry. Do you suspect Severus of something?" Jezzie asked, tilting her chin up, looking at her.
Hermione rubbed her palms over her eyes. "I don't know. I don't know what to think! All I know is that someone I told the location to informed the Death Eaters--Dumbledore and Madamee Maxime wouldn't have been so... stupid! So, that only leaves me!"
"Oh, Hermione... "
"And they won't even let me help search for the girls! But there must be something I can do to help the situation," she shouted, her shaky voice reverberating off the white walls.
Jezzie hugged her and walked back to the bar where she made a drink for Hermione and had her sit on another stool.
Hermione slurped her martini and slumped against the bar. I should go back to headquarters, she thought, rubbing her temples in small circular motions.
She lifted her aching head from hand and noticed the two men on either side of her. The one on the left was a dark-skin man with a shaved head. On her right was a blonde.
The same one that she had drunk with once before--the surfer.
The blonde leaned over to Hermione and whispered in her ear, "Hello again."
A shiver ran across her spine as her heart began racing rapidly.
She shook her head, backing away from him. She remembered what had happened last time this man had talked to her.
"Leaving so soon?" he said loudly, and the bald man turned around, leaned his back against the bar, and watched her, grinning wickedly.
An uneasy emotion set in the pit of her stomach. It was the same reaction she'd had the last time the surfer had approached her.
Hermione fled.
A hand gripped her upper arm, guiding her across the room and towards green door. As soon as the door opened, and the cold night's air stuck her face, letting her breathe easy once again, did Hermione turn around.
The surfer had a hold of her arm, and the bald man was standing next to him.
Hermione tried to jerk her arm away, but the blonde man held tight.
"You know, Severus speaks so highly of your intelligence, Hermione, but you have just proven what a fucking idiot you really are. Only a Mudblood whore such as yourself would leave the safety of Dumbledore, especially on a night like tonight. Care to find out what really happened to the girls from Beauxbatons?" the blonde man said, his voice smooth and deadly as he squeezed her arm tighter, wrenching her to his body and dragging her towards the back alley.
Although Hermione was frozen with fear, she attempted to Disapparate, only to find that she couldn't. They had placed anti-Apparition wards around their bodies.
"Finite Incantatem," growled the bald man as they turned the corner, dropping the Glamour Charms and revealing the true identities of her attackers.
Fenir Greyback and Rodolphus Lestrange had found her.
A/N: Sorry this chapter is so short, but there is a lot happening in the fic and I felt it should be broken up.
No, I lied. I just wanted to tease you and make you come back for more. Mwhahahahahah.
"And it's so easy when you're evil. This is the life you see, the devil tips his hat to me. I do all because I'm evil. And I do it all for free. Your tears are all the pay I ever need."
--Voltaire
Up Next: Hermione dies.
Just kidding.
Severus finds out what happened to Hermione.
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i have just spent the last 3 days reading this, and i absolutely loved it!! So many twists and turns, it kept me thouroughly engrossed. I think you did a wonderful job with this. your plot is very strong, characterizations are great, and snark is top notch. Thank you for sharing. Kelly :)
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oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
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oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
Well i've re-read it. Bloody brilliant and I love the ending, I love a ending where I know that SS/HG will have a positive future together. Your a very talented writer. Please keep them coming. Wished I could give your more than 5 stars
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Thank you for taking the time to re-read this! Thank you so much for the review and the stars~
Unable to find the deleted scene--perhaps a link?
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http://shellsnapeluver.livejournal.com/19013.html#cutid1It should be there...
This ending is entirely satisfactory! Thank you so much for this amazing tale of redemption and resolution.You've written both Severus and Hermione true to character, and made both of them work like hell to maintain their faith in themselves and each other.Of course, Severus would have barred Hermione from visiting him in Azkaban. He'd made her promise to make a life for herself without him. The idea of tying her to him while he rotted away in prison was too painful to contemplate. And of course Hermione would try to keep her promise to him. But our Hermione wouldn't stand for him paying such a dear price for finding a way to defeat the Dark Lord. There is nothing so fearsome as a Gryffindor witch who wants her wizard. Kudos to her for earning her law degree and then using what she'd learned to clear him of those ridiculous murder charges. In less than two years they will be able to begin their happy life together, and isn't that what we all want for these amazing characters? I have loved reading every chapter, every word of this story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a fabulous love story. I hope to see more stories from you in the future. Congratulations on a job well done! Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Beth,I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews, I always looked forward to hearing from you. Many hugs and lots of luv.Shell~
Mwhahahahaaaaaaa! Great story.
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Thanks!!!
whoo, thank you, I read this with much joy.
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Thanks for reviewing and reading it!Shell~
Well SHell, I suppose you could always write an alternative ending as a one shot, just for those who need a dark ending to go with the dark plot. Seriously, he just goes soft. . . please, this dark and maniacal Severus dominated the story, and then he goes all Fluff. . . geeze woman!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahha, I could... I don't think this is too fluffy, though. You might be the only one who wanted that darker ending (besides me), because no one is else speaking up! Hahahah.
Well done, Shell! Very nice ending to a great story! I find it interesting that you chose to make Ron and Harry friends with Severus, I never would have imagined that happening.I like that you had Hermione keep working on Snapes appeal, and that something Severus had deemed inconsiquential ended up working to his benefit. Very well done.Reed
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Yeah, H and R did that for Hermione's sake, to try, and they found out that they could be friends. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Thank you very much for the hopeful ending!
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You are welcome! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
That was a wonderful ending. You did a great job with that final chapter. I had no idea what to expect. I alternated between thinking she was dead and that she was Harry's new romance. I can't wait for your next story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, good! I kept you guessing! LOL!I'm glad you likey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Lots of luv!Shell~
Great! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story! I enjoyed reading it. <3
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Awee, thank you!
Lovely ending, thank you for sharing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!!
It's over? But, but ... what will I read now? You're the only one that writes Severus this way. I love Severus, but I REALLY LOVE Severus the way you write him. He's sort of like the essence of, 'what doesn't kill us, makes us stronger.' Everything that happened to him as a child and young adult seems to have forced him to be this way, just to survive.This is actually one of the few stories that I caught at the beginning [without playing catch up] and probably the story I have reviewed the most. I will definitely miss the all and powerful Snape; evil bastard extraordinaire. In case you're in doubt, I truly loved the story. Thanks!
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Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
,I'm grinning from ear to ear. Your words really warmed my heart, thank you for saying that. I love writing Severus like this because to me, that IS who he is. Sometimes evil, sometimes a lover, but always, always mysterious and I-will-always-keep-you-guessing. So, I'm really happy you like him too the way I write him. Thank you for reviewing as well! Lots of Luv and many hugs! Shell~
Anonymous
shocked outbursts of ‘Shell, you’re EVIL’ have truly warmed my heart
Awww. And I think this says a lot about you, my dear! LOL!
Just as your death would’ve destroyed me, being aware that you were out there in the world, living a happy life without me, devastated me.
It is unhealthy and unjust for him to compare those things similarly, of course, but then, that is exactly what Snape thinks. And if we're honest, that's how many of us feel in the same situation, if someone we love leaves us behind and is happy in their new life while we still want them with us. And I think that's what you tapped into with this story -- those untold truths of human psychology, however dark and however much we would like to believe we're above them.
Great work. I'm very proud of you.
Author's Response: Squee!
I didn't realize I was tapping into those untold human truths! But, I'm glad I did, becasue the way you say it, sounds so awesome! LOL!
Thanks for all you did.
XOXOXO
Shell~
Wonderful ending. I loved it. Great job! I'm glad everything is working out for Hermione and Severus after all. ~Jen
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, me too! I feel good about giving them a life in the future! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I am so glad you finished this story. It sounds like you really struggled with how you wanted to end the fic. You are very talented, and I can not wait for the next one! :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank Livvy! Yes, I did struggle, but in the end, I owed it to all the loyal readers to give these two a good ending. Thank you so much! LoveShell~
Congratulations on a job well done, Shell! I nearly fell out of my chair when I saw that this was updated and finally finished. I love what you did with this and it couldn't have ended any better. It wasn't some ridiculous happily ever after. That would have felt inappropriate considering the tone of the story as a whole. But it made me happy that Ron and Harry and the twins were friendly with Severus. While I think it was only appropriate that he spend some time in Azkaban, I'd have hated to see him rotting away there by himself. And whether she thinks so or not, it really was good for Hermione to get away and make an attempt to move on so she can be sure that he is what she really wants.I had no idea what the new evidence would be, and was still surprised when I found out. But what a great moment to bring back up, because while I as a reader felt like he really was a good guy, despite some of his previous actions, it was nice to be reminded that he really did do some good things throughout, even if sometimes misguided.Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story with us. And a special thanks for forcing me to read this. Yes, I started out reading through squinty eyes, but you held my hand and dragged me on through and I couldn't be happier about it. You've done a fantastic job and I hope to see more from you in the future!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much! Yes, it was very good of Hermione to get away, go into another world and really test her love, because now she knows for sure. I'm so glad I surprised you with the new evidence! I was hoping someone would say so, so thanks. See now, I told you it was going somewhere, even if it did start off really dark... LOL! Thank you for reviewing.*hugs*
You managed a HEA! Kuddos. I loved that story, from beginning to end.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
LOL. Thank you so much for reading this! Massive Hugs!
Hey, this story is listed as "Completed: Yes" -- where's that last chapter????
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
It is still in queue--they are taking longer than usual, but it should be posted here in next few days. Lol, sorry!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
You know your story is good when you have stalkers begging for updates.
What is Severus up to now? I was afraid he could not be trusted.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, just keep reading!! thanks~
They definitely know how to have an adventure.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yeah! I love writing action-packed adventures!
I can see that Snape is trying to be kind to Hermione but I don't know if I trust him.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Trust is a hard thing to come by, hopefully he will earn it from you.
A trip to egypt, that does sound like fun. I wonder how Hermione will react to flying with Severus. I thing it sounds like tons of fun.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I think flying with him would be awesome! lol!