Whispers of Treachery
Chapter 23 of 32
shellsnapeluverDumbledore arrives and causes problems for Severus.
Severus Snape had witnessed Albus Dumbledore angry before. He had seen pity in his eyes more than once, had even been on the receiving end of one of those looks. But never had he found himself at the mercy of a wizard whom even Tom Riddle was frightened of, and never had he watched as the kindly twinkle in the old man’s eyes had been extinguished, replaced by utter rage and pure loathing.
Of course, he knew that the storm in Dumbledore’s face had to do with the way Snape had… well, handled the situation after having been caught attempting to murder his beloved.
As soon as Snape carefully landed on the ground, his mind began whirring, thinking of ways to extricate himself from the mess he had created. He knew that Dumbledore had seen everything--he had seen Snape drop Hermione to what should’ve been her death from over seven storeys high, and the vicious glint in his eyes told Snape that the man standing before him was not the same person for the ‘light’ who everyone thought they knew. If Snape hadn’t known any better, he would’ve sworn that the man in front of him was a Death Eater, wand in hand and ready to kill.
Dumbledore’s jaw was set tight, his eyes narrowed and his teeth clenched as he said, “Step into my office.”
Ignoring his orders, Snape reached for Hermione, who had her faced buried in her arms, crying. He wanted to soothe her, but Dumbledore held his arm out, blocking him.
How dare the old fool keep you from her! She’s yours--not his!
Snape took another step toward Hermione, but Dumbledore threw up a protective shield around her. “Leave her alone. I said go to my office. Now!” Dumbledore snapped.
Growling, Snape turned on his heel and marched up to the headmaster’s office. From behind him, he heard Dumbledore speaking gently to Hermione, telling her that she was safe now.
Safe. From him. From Severus Snape? From the one person who would do anything for Hermione, who would murder to keep her safe! Disbelief flooded through Snape as he walked up the stairs, thrusting him into a near catatonic state.
What have you done to her? She’ll never want you after this--after attempting to… kill her.
The look on Hermione’s face as she fell flashed through his mind--the shock, the fear…
Snape’s feet had carried him, robotically, to the front of Dumbledore’s large desk where he stood, staring off into the distance and waiting for the storm to arrive. He knew with a sick finality that after the events of this evening, everything that he had worked so hard for was over, gone to him.
Hermione would never forgive him; Dumbledore would have him thrown in Azkaban for his betrayal or even perhaps throw him to the fucking wolf to be dismembered limb from limb--wasn’t tonight the full moon? It didn’t matter. Either way, he deserved it.
How could you let this happen? How did she find that fucking book?
He vaguely noticed McGonagall stepping out of the Floo as he argued with himself in his mind. She might have said something to him, but he ignored her. A few minutes later, Lupin followed. Snape snorted when he saw the man. Perhaps tomorrow is the full moon. Am I so rattled that I do not even know the lunar cycle? I must compose myself at once.
The heavy wooden door slammed opened behind him. He didn’t dare turn around, but he imagined that Hermione was disheveled and red-eyed. He wanted to hold her.
“What is the emergency, Albus?” McGonagall asked.
Dumbledore said nothing, heading to a hidden door that was behind a large portrait near his desk. The book was still within his grasp, and Snape noticed that his hands were shaking, his knuckles deathly white. After a few moments in an uncomfortable silence, Dumbledore emerged from the room--the book no longer in his hand.
“Albus?” Minerva asked again.
“Miss Granger has located the last remaining Horcrux. It was that book. I have secured it until we are ready to destroy it.”
“That is good news. Then why do you look so angry, Albus?” Minerva asked.
“As it turns out, a Death Eater had it the whole time.”
“So? That’s not surprising. Lucius had the first Horcrux, which happened to be a book, so it seems only natural for another to have one as well,” Lupin said.
“Exactly. But I never expected the last Horcrux to be in the hands of someone we trusted.” Dumbledore’s heavy glare rested on Snape.
Snape never let his gaze drop from Dumbledore’s--he had nothing to be ashamed of. He had his reasons as to why he’d had the Horcrux in his possession, reasons that could be carefully explained. The only thing Snape was concerned about was losing Hermione. He didn’t care what Dumbledore or the other two fools in the room thought of him. No, Hermione’s opinion was the only one that mattered. If he could only talk to her, hold her…
“S-severus?” McGonagall gasped.
Lupin shot him a disapproving look and then faced Dumbledore.
“You’ve had it the entire time! Why?” McGonagall demanded.
Snape clenched his jaw, holding his tongue. Of course I had it, woman--who else would’ve been powerful enough to keep something like that hidden for so long!
Out of the corner of Snape’s eye, he saw Lupin looking fiercely at him.
“Answer me!” McGonagall demanded.
Snape cut his eyes at her and just before he could reply, Hermione viciously said, “Because he is a scheming bastard!”
The words, and the vehemence with which they’d been uttered, stabbed him through his heart. The disgust in her face, combined with the even more wrenching regret for loving him in her eyes, tore through him. The horrible image of his boggart sprang into his mind, and he remembered the words his Hermione-boggart had yelled at him.
I hate you… You disgust me… Pathetic excuse of a man…
“No one asked for your opinion, Miss Granger!”
Hermione gawked at him, and Lupin growled before he said, “How dare--”
“Severus!” Dumbledore roared. “Do not speak to her! This is about your betrayal, not hers! ”
Snape turned his head, glaring over his left shoulder. “My betrayal? My betrayal?” Snape faced Hermione. “Why don’t you explain to Dumbledore about your betrayal, Miss Granger?”
Hermione’s jaw went slack in shock.
“What is he talking about, Hermione?” Lupin asked softly.
Hermione sighed and closed her eyes. “It’s my fault Beauxbatons was attacked. I foolishly told my Muggle cousin the Secret-kept location, and that’s how I believe Severus knew the Secret and told it to Voldemort. He must have seen the location in her mind…”
“Miss Granger?” McGonagall asked softly.
Snape smirked--the pressure was off him. While they focused their attention on her, he could Oblivate them and keep his secrets safe…
Dumbledore sighed. “My presumptions were correct then--Severus was the one who told Voldemort about the location. However, now, I’m not sure if it was out of loyalty to the Order or to Voldemort.”
“He may have told him, but it was my foolish mistake--”
Lupin stepped forward. “That Beauxbatons situation doesn’t matter now. The focus should be on Severus! He purposely lied; he knew that we were in desperate need of the last Horcrux, and he had it--”
“Piss off, wolf,” Snape grumbled.
“Enough!” Dumbledore shouted. “We don’t have time for petty nonsense. I returned here looking for Severus and Hermione to discuss information I have learned, and instead, I not only have found Severus with the Horcrux, but he nearly tried to kill her due to the power it had over him!”
Snape snorted.
“And now, I have to instead do something that I will regret doing, but in order for us to defeat Voldemort… I must.”
Snape hardly noticed what Dumbledore was rambling about. He was already planning what spells he would use to escape, while bringing Hermione along with him.
Dumbledore opened the top desk drawer and pulled out a long, bronze key. He walked around his desk and handed it to Hermione.
“What’s this for?” she asked, taking the key from his outstretched hand.
“Your own good,” Dumbledore said, taking a step away from her.
Hermione was plainly confused, but before she could utter a word, there was a bright flash of light, and she was gone.
“A portkey? Where did you send her?” Snape demanded. His mind frantically raced. How dare the old man take her out of his presence!
Think! Where could she have gone? Hog’s Head… Burrow… Grimmauld Place… Out of the country… Fuck!
“Where did you send her?” Snape demanded again, his voice low and harsh.
“To safety.” Dumbledore slowly removed his half-moon spectacles and carefully slipped them inside a pocket in his robe.
Safety? How is she safe if she isn’t in my arms, under my watchful eye? No one can protect her as I can!
“Bring her back. She isn’t safe away from m--Hogwarts,” he said, nearly snarling his words.
“I will give you only once chance to give me the truth--about everything! Or I shall be forced to take it from you.”
“Threatening me, Dumbledore? I never knew you had it in you,” Snape spat.
“If you ever want to see Miss Granger again, you will answer my questions!”
The threat of keeping her away from him was Snape’s undoing.
A/N: Again, sorry it’s been so long since I posted. However, my hours at work have changed and I am home earlier--which means… YES! More writing! Lol! Many thanks to Lariope, Lulabelle72, RedSkyatNight, and a special hug for Dari_67 for her support and cheerleading. But mostly, thanks to all of you--I couldn’t continue writing if it weren’t for your loyalty.
Up next: The master and apprentice duel.
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i have just spent the last 3 days reading this, and i absolutely loved it!! So many twists and turns, it kept me thouroughly engrossed. I think you did a wonderful job with this. your plot is very strong, characterizations are great, and snark is top notch. Thank you for sharing. Kelly :)
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oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
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oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
Well i've re-read it. Bloody brilliant and I love the ending, I love a ending where I know that SS/HG will have a positive future together. Your a very talented writer. Please keep them coming. Wished I could give your more than 5 stars
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Thank you for taking the time to re-read this! Thank you so much for the review and the stars~
Unable to find the deleted scene--perhaps a link?
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http://shellsnapeluver.livejournal.com/19013.html#cutid1It should be there...
This ending is entirely satisfactory! Thank you so much for this amazing tale of redemption and resolution.You've written both Severus and Hermione true to character, and made both of them work like hell to maintain their faith in themselves and each other.Of course, Severus would have barred Hermione from visiting him in Azkaban. He'd made her promise to make a life for herself without him. The idea of tying her to him while he rotted away in prison was too painful to contemplate. And of course Hermione would try to keep her promise to him. But our Hermione wouldn't stand for him paying such a dear price for finding a way to defeat the Dark Lord. There is nothing so fearsome as a Gryffindor witch who wants her wizard. Kudos to her for earning her law degree and then using what she'd learned to clear him of those ridiculous murder charges. In less than two years they will be able to begin their happy life together, and isn't that what we all want for these amazing characters? I have loved reading every chapter, every word of this story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a fabulous love story. I hope to see more stories from you in the future. Congratulations on a job well done! Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Beth,I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews, I always looked forward to hearing from you. Many hugs and lots of luv.Shell~
Mwhahahahaaaaaaa! Great story.
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Thanks!!!
whoo, thank you, I read this with much joy.
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Thanks for reviewing and reading it!Shell~
Well SHell, I suppose you could always write an alternative ending as a one shot, just for those who need a dark ending to go with the dark plot. Seriously, he just goes soft. . . please, this dark and maniacal Severus dominated the story, and then he goes all Fluff. . . geeze woman!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahha, I could... I don't think this is too fluffy, though. You might be the only one who wanted that darker ending (besides me), because no one is else speaking up! Hahahah.
Well done, Shell! Very nice ending to a great story! I find it interesting that you chose to make Ron and Harry friends with Severus, I never would have imagined that happening.I like that you had Hermione keep working on Snapes appeal, and that something Severus had deemed inconsiquential ended up working to his benefit. Very well done.Reed
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, H and R did that for Hermione's sake, to try, and they found out that they could be friends. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Thank you very much for the hopeful ending!
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You are welcome! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
That was a wonderful ending. You did a great job with that final chapter. I had no idea what to expect. I alternated between thinking she was dead and that she was Harry's new romance. I can't wait for your next story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, good! I kept you guessing! LOL!I'm glad you likey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Lots of luv!Shell~
Great! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story! I enjoyed reading it. <3
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Awee, thank you!
Lovely ending, thank you for sharing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!!
It's over? But, but ... what will I read now? You're the only one that writes Severus this way. I love Severus, but I REALLY LOVE Severus the way you write him. He's sort of like the essence of, 'what doesn't kill us, makes us stronger.' Everything that happened to him as a child and young adult seems to have forced him to be this way, just to survive.This is actually one of the few stories that I caught at the beginning [without playing catch up] and probably the story I have reviewed the most. I will definitely miss the all and powerful Snape; evil bastard extraordinaire. In case you're in doubt, I truly loved the story. Thanks!
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Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
,I'm grinning from ear to ear. Your words really warmed my heart, thank you for saying that. I love writing Severus like this because to me, that IS who he is. Sometimes evil, sometimes a lover, but always, always mysterious and I-will-always-keep-you-guessing. So, I'm really happy you like him too the way I write him. Thank you for reviewing as well! Lots of Luv and many hugs! Shell~
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shocked outbursts of ‘Shell, you’re EVIL’ have truly warmed my heart
Awww. And I think this says a lot about you, my dear! LOL!
Just as your death would’ve destroyed me, being aware that you were out there in the world, living a happy life without me, devastated me.
It is unhealthy and unjust for him to compare those things similarly, of course, but then, that is exactly what Snape thinks. And if we're honest, that's how many of us feel in the same situation, if someone we love leaves us behind and is happy in their new life while we still want them with us. And I think that's what you tapped into with this story -- those untold truths of human psychology, however dark and however much we would like to believe we're above them.
Great work. I'm very proud of you.
Author's Response: Squee!
I didn't realize I was tapping into those untold human truths! But, I'm glad I did, becasue the way you say it, sounds so awesome! LOL!
Thanks for all you did.
XOXOXO
Shell~
Wonderful ending. I loved it. Great job! I'm glad everything is working out for Hermione and Severus after all. ~Jen
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, me too! I feel good about giving them a life in the future! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I am so glad you finished this story. It sounds like you really struggled with how you wanted to end the fic. You are very talented, and I can not wait for the next one! :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank Livvy! Yes, I did struggle, but in the end, I owed it to all the loyal readers to give these two a good ending. Thank you so much! LoveShell~
Congratulations on a job well done, Shell! I nearly fell out of my chair when I saw that this was updated and finally finished. I love what you did with this and it couldn't have ended any better. It wasn't some ridiculous happily ever after. That would have felt inappropriate considering the tone of the story as a whole. But it made me happy that Ron and Harry and the twins were friendly with Severus. While I think it was only appropriate that he spend some time in Azkaban, I'd have hated to see him rotting away there by himself. And whether she thinks so or not, it really was good for Hermione to get away and make an attempt to move on so she can be sure that he is what she really wants.I had no idea what the new evidence would be, and was still surprised when I found out. But what a great moment to bring back up, because while I as a reader felt like he really was a good guy, despite some of his previous actions, it was nice to be reminded that he really did do some good things throughout, even if sometimes misguided.Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story with us. And a special thanks for forcing me to read this. Yes, I started out reading through squinty eyes, but you held my hand and dragged me on through and I couldn't be happier about it. You've done a fantastic job and I hope to see more from you in the future!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much! Yes, it was very good of Hermione to get away, go into another world and really test her love, because now she knows for sure. I'm so glad I surprised you with the new evidence! I was hoping someone would say so, so thanks. See now, I told you it was going somewhere, even if it did start off really dark... LOL! Thank you for reviewing.*hugs*
You managed a HEA! Kuddos. I loved that story, from beginning to end.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
LOL. Thank you so much for reading this! Massive Hugs!
Hey, this story is listed as "Completed: Yes" -- where's that last chapter????
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
It is still in queue--they are taking longer than usual, but it should be posted here in next few days. Lol, sorry!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
You know your story is good when you have stalkers begging for updates.
What is Severus up to now? I was afraid he could not be trusted.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, just keep reading!! thanks~
They definitely know how to have an adventure.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yeah! I love writing action-packed adventures!
I can see that Snape is trying to be kind to Hermione but I don't know if I trust him.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Trust is a hard thing to come by, hopefully he will earn it from you.
A trip to egypt, that does sound like fun. I wonder how Hermione will react to flying with Severus. I thing it sounds like tons of fun.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I think flying with him would be awesome! lol!