Retaliation
Chapter 24 of 32
shellsnapeluverDumbledore vs. Snape
A/N: Okay, I have been wanting to write this chapter since I started this story. Squeee! I hope you enjoy it!
With the killing curse on the tip of his tongue, Snape reached into his pocket for his wand. With a smooth, fluidic motion, he was holding Albus Dumbledore at wand point. Before he was able to cast the curse, his wand was snatched out of his white-knuckled grip, and his body slammed into a wall of shelves where several books and trinkets toppled onto his head and shoulders.
Snape moaned as his surroundings came back into focus. He rolled his neck to the side, cracking the bones before he stood on weak legs, snarling at his audience.
Lupin stepped forward, his wand jutting out in front of his body.
"No, Remus! Stay where you are. Let me deal with him. For now," Dumbledore instructed.
"Deal with me, old man? Your powers are useless against my own. Do you not remember training me to be your secret weapon?" Snape slowly crept away from the wall, keeping his eyes locked on his prey. In his most perfect Dumbledore impersonation he mockingly said, "No, Severus! Control yourself and focus--you'll never master Legilimency and be able to conquer Voldemort without it!" Snape took a breath and continued, "Get off your knees and do it again, Severus; ancient magic isn't as easy as today's! You will practice all night until you get it!"
"Severus--"
"Or how about when you dueled me? Remember that? I do! I loathed you for making me feel so weak as I fell to the ground, sniveling like the child I used to be! 'Get up, Severus! How will you ever face Voldemort if you are crying at his feet? Bury your pain, stand up and face me!'"
"Severus, please--"
"NO! You used me for too long, Dumbledore. Just like Voldemort. Just like my father!"
Everything Snape remembered of his father, the hatred he had of Dumbledore and Voldemort and any other person who ever wronged him, flooded his mind as a strong wave of magic, dangerous magic, boiled to the surface where Snape couldn't, and didn't want to, contain it any longer.
Aiming his wand directly at Dumbledore, Snape released the restraints on the unstable magic, violently shaking as his powers erupted from him.
Panic rushed through Hermione as soon as the Portkey Dumbledore had given her activated, bringing with it the horrible and familiar feeling of being tugged from behind her navel.
Nausea swept through her as she roughly landed on her knees, skidding across the brick footpath, grunting in pain. She ignored the warm blood that trickled down her knees as she pushed herself off the ground, standing on weak legs and surveying the structure in front of her.
A small, cottage-like home was hidden behind a wall of ivy and a canopy of trees, the cobblestone chimney the only area that wasn't covered in greenery. A faint, yellow flicker danced behind the curtain in the picture window, catching Hermione's eye. She froze in her tracks, waiting for someone, or something, to jump from the shadows, her ragged breathing the only sound that reverberated through the dark night.
Where am I?
After several intense moments in the silence, Hermione decided that she couldn't stand in front of the house forever. Taking a deep breath, she walked forward, the key weighing heavily in her hand. She knew it unlocked the door, and that she was supposed to go inside, but walking blindly into a strange location was dangerous and stupid.
However, Dumbledore had given her this key, and he had arranged for her to be Portkeyed from the situation in the office. She trusted Dumbledore.
Snape's highly volatile magic jolted out of him in multiple jets of light, each of them directed at the man opposite him. But instead of hitting Dumbledore, a glass-like wall reflected the magic, directing it back towards Snape, who instantly took flight, barely dodging out of the way of the deadly beams. The magic burst through the castle walls, exploding the heavy oak door into tiny splinters and dust, leaving a gaping hole and a pile of stone rubble.
Silence filled the room as Lupin and McGonagall stared at the destruction. Snape softly landed on the ground, his eyes still locked on Dumbledore's blue ones. The raging loss of control that he had felt only seconds before obliterating half of the headmaster's office was now filled with confidence and an authority he had never known. Finally, after years of practice, dedication, and education, he had confirmed what he had known all along: Snape would be the only person in the wizarding world who could defeat Albus Dumbledore. Voldemort, who had a single-track mind and used only Dark magic for his purposes, had nothing on Severus Snape.
"Killing me will not satisfy your thirst for revenge, Severus."
"No, but it's a start."
A rain of fire shot out of Snape's wand, but Dumbledore swirled around and disappeared before it hit him.
Ignoring the other two occupants in the room, who were now standing on guard, putting out the flames he had created, Snape paced around, his wand waving widely in the air.
"You're not fooling me, Dumbledore! Everyone who has ever seen you do this disappearing trick thinks you have the power of invisibility! But I know the truth, and if you don't want me to shower this room in a Muggle pesticide, killing these other two fools in the room, then show yourself!"
A buzzing tickled his left ear, and Snape swatted the air around him. When he was still again, he realized that sitting on the tip of his nose was a tiny bumblebee. Snape stared down at the bee. It was periwinkle-blue with silver sprinkles dusted across the furry body. Snape slowly and carefully lifted the tip of wand towards his nose. As soon as he thought the words to blast the bee into a million of pieces, a prick stabbed through his skin, stinging him. Snape stumbled backward, groaning and holding his nose. "Damn you!"
Dumbledore transfigured out of his Animagus form and quickly whispered something to Lupin and McGonagall as Snape cast a quick Healing Charm on his face. His eyes instantly stopped watering, and Snape noticed that Dumbledore had placed a protective shield in front of the other two.
Snape side-stepped to the left, his wand ready and his mind sharp. Knowing Dumbledore, his next move would be some sort of binding spell. Snape shut out the panicky whispers of the portraits around him, concentrating solely on his next move.
Dumbledore struck first, not surprising Snape one bit. "Incarcerous!"
"Diffindo!" Snape shouted back, his hex shredding the ropes in mid-air, falling uselessly to the ground before him.
"Pathetic, Dumbledore. Potter could do better than that."
"I do not wish to harm you, Severus. Settle down and let's discuss--"
"NO!" Snape frantically waved his wand in front of his face in an almost dance-like motion, and a thundering bang rumbled across the room as a streak of light hit Dumbledore squarely in the chest. He stumbled backwards, his mouth opening to shout in pain, but no sound escaped him. Snape grinned, casting another version of the spell before the old man could protect himself. This time, Dumbledore clutched his face, flinging his glasses off the tip of his nose, rubbing his eyes.
"It's about time you used the spells I taught you!" a voice cried out from the right side of the room.
Snape grinned wickedly, glancing at the only other Slytherin in the room. "Touché." Taking away one's senses had been a brilliant curse, but Snape had always preferred to keep that spell hidden for as long as possible.
But now was the best time to use it. Dumbledore's loss of sight and speech affected him, but it wouldn't hold him off for long. Again, Snape cast the third variation of the spell attempting to deafen his opponent.
But Dumbledore's cast a nonverbal Shielding Charm, blocking the magic.
"Remember his hearing senses are heightened, Severus," Phineas bellowed.
Dumbledore stood perfectly still as he used his new found awareness. Snape froze, knowing he was going to have to use nonverbal spells to continue. Before he could cast his favorite Slicing Spell, Dumbledore's hands jolted out in front of him, magical fire spilling out of his upturned palms. A roar filled the room as the fire twisted into thin ropes, launching towards Snape, enclosing him in a cage-like barrier.
The heat around Snape suffocated him, singeing his delicate skin. The horrid smell of burnt hair offended his nostrils. No amount of water would get rid of the fiery hell he was placed in, and no spell he cast removed the barrier, giving Dumbledore time to remove the enchantment Snape had placed on him.
Not having any other option for escape, Snape pointed his wand at the floor beneath his feet. He turned his face to the side as he blasted holes through the stone until it finally crumbled beneath him, his body falling through the floor. Rubble rained onto Snape's head as he took flight, dodging the deadly rocks. As Snape flew around the room, he realized that he was in Dumbledore's private apartment, which happened to be below the office. He noticed a wrought-iron staircase in the corner of the room and used that to head back up to the office, intent on finishing this battle.
When he landed back in the destroyed room, Dumbledore had released the other two from their protective ward. Lupin and McGonagall were repairing the gaping hole Snape had created in the floor as Dumbledore stood in the middle of the room, facing the entrance to his private suite, waiting for Snape to return.
"Enough is enough, Severus," he said as Snape softly landed.
"I agree. These physical attacks on one another are ridiculous." Snape smirked, lightly wiping his arms free of the grey dust that had powdered onto his black attire. He took a single step forward. "I prefer destroying you from inside out. Legilimens!"
Snape painstakingly rammed against the wall of stone that he met in the other man's mind. Dumbledore blocked every attempt Snape made as he tried to break the lock that held Dumbledore's most guarded secrets.
Over and over Dumbledore thwarted him, but Snape pressed on, determined to find the code to unlocking the old man's past. It wasn't until he used physical magic to weaken Dumbledore's concentration that Snape finally found the key to opening the hidden door that housed all Dumbledore's secrets.
Snape burst through, rapidly sorting through every hidden thought, memory, and secret that Dumbledore had filed away. He began pulling them out one by one, causing Dumbledore to relive the most horrifying pains of his life.
When Snape came across Dumbledore's memory of learning that his sister had been brutalized by three Muggles, Snape pounced, using the Dark Magic he had learned from Voldemort to place false images in the Headmaster's mind, forcing the man to believe everything Snape planted, starting with Ariana's gruesome attack.
Ariana screamed for her mother as the three young men ripped the pink satin bow out of her hair, tying her wrists behind her back with it. She squirmed when the taller boy stood behind her, gripping her shoulders and keeping her still while the other squeezed her cheeks, opening her eyelids, poking and prodding her skin, examining the unusual little girl.
"ENOUGH!" Dumbledore bellowed, his mind fighting, sending a stream of images back into Snape's. This time, Dumbledore had found the weak stone in Snape's wall, yanking out all the images of his father's abuse.
However, Snape's mind had grown immune to these haunting memories, and he found himself unfazed and even able to retaliate physically, attacking Dumbledore once more.
"Crucio!"
Instantly, Dumbledore fell out of Snape's mind, his old body twitching and convulsing across the ground. As he raised his wand, ready to end the fight, Dumbledore fought against the Unforgivable, using the last of his strength to send a stream of visions into Snape's mind. Images that Snape had never seen before, images that he had actually lived through, and worse, false images of the future, weakening Snape beyond anything he had ever imagined.
Hermione as she ran from a three-headed dog. Hermione using a mirror to peer around a corner, her body frozen by the Basilisk...
Hermione unconscious as a swarm of Dementors closed in around her...
Hermione hidden from sight as the Dark Mark lingered in the sky at the Quidditch World Cup...
Hermione chased by the Death Eaters in the Ministry of Magic...
Hermione battling Death Eaters the night Hogwarts had been attacked...
Hermione held hostage against Bellatrix's crooked knife...
Hermione Apparating in quick succession to get away from the Death Eaters...
Hermione as she fell into a pit of blackness while a horrid mummy attacked her...
Hermione thrown against the wall by Greyback and Lestrange, their filthy hands all over her...
Hermione's widened eyes as she had fallen to her death...
Hermione dancing, her arms around another man, her hips swaying too closely to his groin...
Hermione in a wedding dress, standing at an altar with a tall blonde...
Hermione on her back, moaning as the same blonde had his face buried between her legs...
Hermione looking out her bedroom window, a devious smile playing across her face as she watched Snape watching her as she fucked the disgustingly handsome man ...
Snape's legs gave out, and he fell to his knees, the shooting pain unnoticed as Dumbledore finished him off.
Not having the strength, or the desire, to fight anymore, Snape succumbed to the horrible images that Dumbledore had been showing him.
Hermione, her life, her very being, had always been his weakness. And now, Dumbledore knew it.
The older man towered over him, his brows creased and his breathing ragged. "Do you love her, boy?" Dumbledore asked, his voice gruff and hoarse.
Hermione's pain, the many times she had been on the edge of death, the thought of her disappearing from his life, overpowered his desire to rid Dumbledore. She was his entire world. The reasoning behind his actions. Did he love her? Love was such a pathetic word for how he felt for Hermione. He had no other reason in the world to live if she wasn't alive--if she wasn't his.
Snape sucked in a jagged breath, attempting to control his emotions. "Y--yes," he mumbled, mortified that he was exposing his vulnerability in front of the others.
Get control of yourself, you sniveling bastard! Show no emotions!
As he wallowed in his self-hatred, unable to gain back the drive to fight, a wicked chuckle abused his ears, taunting him. He glanced at the angry faces that were glaring at him, but no one was laughing.
Snape sighed. Of course.
The Horcrux had finally turned on him. After all the years of loyalty, the fragmented soul had weakened him beyond repair. Even locked behind Dumbledore's wall of magic, the Horcrux had affected them both, playing on their emotions. With a disgusted realization, Snape knew he had made a grave mistake--allowing himself to love Hermione. Because he had, the Horcrux had taken it as the ultimate betrayal. Instead of bestowing his once loyal servant the added strength to conquer his equal, the Horcrux shared its Dark magic with Dumbledore, which allowed him to overpower Snape.
"Albus, don't trust him!" Minerva shouted, interrupting the horrid laugh that plagued Snape's ears.
Snape ignored the remark, his body trembling too hard to react, his heart aching too much to care.
"I don't, Minerva. Except for this. Hermione is his life--his very reason for living. It's the only thing that matters to him."
Snape no longer cared that Dumbledore was still attempting to control him--he had given up. All he wanted was Hermione, safely in his arms. The memory of her falling to her death--all the wrongs he had ever done to her--plagued his mind, haunting him to his very core.
"Bring her back to me," Snape whispered under his breath as the others continued discussing his future. "Bring her back to me."
"Is he having a fit?" Lupin asked, breaking Snape's solemn chant.
Dumbledore kneeled next to Snape and placed his arm on his back. "Ah, Severus, it seems you've kept a secret from me. Perhaps I misjudged you all these years, thinking you immune to the foolish stirrings of affection. But now I see that you will be of great use to us."
"J-just let me have her," he whispered. "Bring her to me."
"You can't be serious, Dumbledore! Don't let him anywhere near Hermione!" Lupin shouted.
"After all the lies and deception, Albus!"
"I am afraid I have done worse to him, Minerva. The only reason I will not turn him over to the Aurors is his capacity to love. It is the one magic that I have always claimed would be the defeat of Voldemort. And it's the only thing that will save Severus from the damage that he is capable of."
"Because of his love for Hermione?" the older witch asked, her voice shaky and full of confusion.
"Exactly. She will not live in a world with Voldemort. Only she has the power to manage him, to keep Severus on our side. I no longer am able to, as you have just witnessed."
Dumbledore sighed. "He's been right the whole time; I am an old fool."
A/N: Thanks to my ass-kicking, get-it-done-right-Shell-or-don't-do-it-at-all beta team. You know who you are. You girls have really made my vision of this chapter come true. Many hugs to Dari_67 for her priceless suggestions regarding taking away one's senses.
I really enjoyed having a fight between these two. It has been a long time coming, don't you agree?
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i have just spent the last 3 days reading this, and i absolutely loved it!! So many twists and turns, it kept me thouroughly engrossed. I think you did a wonderful job with this. your plot is very strong, characterizations are great, and snark is top notch. Thank you for sharing. Kelly :)
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oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
oh, kelly, thank you for spending the time with thi story. thank you for the wonderful review. so happy you enjoyed the adventure1 shell...
Well i've re-read it. Bloody brilliant and I love the ending, I love a ending where I know that SS/HG will have a positive future together. Your a very talented writer. Please keep them coming. Wished I could give your more than 5 stars
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Thank you for taking the time to re-read this! Thank you so much for the review and the stars~
Unable to find the deleted scene--perhaps a link?
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http://shellsnapeluver.livejournal.com/19013.html#cutid1It should be there...
This ending is entirely satisfactory! Thank you so much for this amazing tale of redemption and resolution.You've written both Severus and Hermione true to character, and made both of them work like hell to maintain their faith in themselves and each other.Of course, Severus would have barred Hermione from visiting him in Azkaban. He'd made her promise to make a life for herself without him. The idea of tying her to him while he rotted away in prison was too painful to contemplate. And of course Hermione would try to keep her promise to him. But our Hermione wouldn't stand for him paying such a dear price for finding a way to defeat the Dark Lord. There is nothing so fearsome as a Gryffindor witch who wants her wizard. Kudos to her for earning her law degree and then using what she'd learned to clear him of those ridiculous murder charges. In less than two years they will be able to begin their happy life together, and isn't that what we all want for these amazing characters? I have loved reading every chapter, every word of this story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a fabulous love story. I hope to see more stories from you in the future. Congratulations on a job well done! Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Beth,I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews, I always looked forward to hearing from you. Many hugs and lots of luv.Shell~
Mwhahahahaaaaaaa! Great story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!!!
whoo, thank you, I read this with much joy.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks for reviewing and reading it!Shell~
Well SHell, I suppose you could always write an alternative ending as a one shot, just for those who need a dark ending to go with the dark plot. Seriously, he just goes soft. . . please, this dark and maniacal Severus dominated the story, and then he goes all Fluff. . . geeze woman!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahha, I could... I don't think this is too fluffy, though. You might be the only one who wanted that darker ending (besides me), because no one is else speaking up! Hahahah.
Well done, Shell! Very nice ending to a great story! I find it interesting that you chose to make Ron and Harry friends with Severus, I never would have imagined that happening.I like that you had Hermione keep working on Snapes appeal, and that something Severus had deemed inconsiquential ended up working to his benefit. Very well done.Reed
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, H and R did that for Hermione's sake, to try, and they found out that they could be friends. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Thank you very much for the hopeful ending!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are welcome! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
That was a wonderful ending. You did a great job with that final chapter. I had no idea what to expect. I alternated between thinking she was dead and that she was Harry's new romance. I can't wait for your next story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, good! I kept you guessing! LOL!I'm glad you likey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Lots of luv!Shell~
Great! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story! I enjoyed reading it. <3
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Awee, thank you!
Lovely ending, thank you for sharing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks!!
It's over? But, but ... what will I read now? You're the only one that writes Severus this way. I love Severus, but I REALLY LOVE Severus the way you write him. He's sort of like the essence of, 'what doesn't kill us, makes us stronger.' Everything that happened to him as a child and young adult seems to have forced him to be this way, just to survive.This is actually one of the few stories that I caught at the beginning [without playing catch up] and probably the story I have reviewed the most. I will definitely miss the all and powerful Snape; evil bastard extraordinaire. In case you're in doubt, I truly loved the story. Thanks!
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Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
,I'm grinning from ear to ear. Your words really warmed my heart, thank you for saying that. I love writing Severus like this because to me, that IS who he is. Sometimes evil, sometimes a lover, but always, always mysterious and I-will-always-keep-you-guessing. So, I'm really happy you like him too the way I write him. Thank you for reviewing as well! Lots of Luv and many hugs! Shell~
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shocked outbursts of ‘Shell, you’re EVIL’ have truly warmed my heart
Awww. And I think this says a lot about you, my dear! LOL!
Just as your death would’ve destroyed me, being aware that you were out there in the world, living a happy life without me, devastated me.
It is unhealthy and unjust for him to compare those things similarly, of course, but then, that is exactly what Snape thinks. And if we're honest, that's how many of us feel in the same situation, if someone we love leaves us behind and is happy in their new life while we still want them with us. And I think that's what you tapped into with this story -- those untold truths of human psychology, however dark and however much we would like to believe we're above them.
Great work. I'm very proud of you.
Author's Response: Squee!
I didn't realize I was tapping into those untold human truths! But, I'm glad I did, becasue the way you say it, sounds so awesome! LOL!
Thanks for all you did.
XOXOXO
Shell~
Wonderful ending. I loved it. Great job! I'm glad everything is working out for Hermione and Severus after all. ~Jen
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, me too! I feel good about giving them a life in the future! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I am so glad you finished this story. It sounds like you really struggled with how you wanted to end the fic. You are very talented, and I can not wait for the next one! :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank Livvy! Yes, I did struggle, but in the end, I owed it to all the loyal readers to give these two a good ending. Thank you so much! LoveShell~
Congratulations on a job well done, Shell! I nearly fell out of my chair when I saw that this was updated and finally finished. I love what you did with this and it couldn't have ended any better. It wasn't some ridiculous happily ever after. That would have felt inappropriate considering the tone of the story as a whole. But it made me happy that Ron and Harry and the twins were friendly with Severus. While I think it was only appropriate that he spend some time in Azkaban, I'd have hated to see him rotting away there by himself. And whether she thinks so or not, it really was good for Hermione to get away and make an attempt to move on so she can be sure that he is what she really wants.I had no idea what the new evidence would be, and was still surprised when I found out. But what a great moment to bring back up, because while I as a reader felt like he really was a good guy, despite some of his previous actions, it was nice to be reminded that he really did do some good things throughout, even if sometimes misguided.Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story with us. And a special thanks for forcing me to read this. Yes, I started out reading through squinty eyes, but you held my hand and dragged me on through and I couldn't be happier about it. You've done a fantastic job and I hope to see more from you in the future!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much! Yes, it was very good of Hermione to get away, go into another world and really test her love, because now she knows for sure. I'm so glad I surprised you with the new evidence! I was hoping someone would say so, so thanks. See now, I told you it was going somewhere, even if it did start off really dark... LOL! Thank you for reviewing.*hugs*
You managed a HEA! Kuddos. I loved that story, from beginning to end.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
LOL. Thank you so much for reading this! Massive Hugs!
Hey, this story is listed as "Completed: Yes" -- where's that last chapter????
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
It is still in queue--they are taking longer than usual, but it should be posted here in next few days. Lol, sorry!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
You know your story is good when you have stalkers begging for updates.
What is Severus up to now? I was afraid he could not be trusted.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, just keep reading!! thanks~
They definitely know how to have an adventure.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yeah! I love writing action-packed adventures!
I can see that Snape is trying to be kind to Hermione but I don't know if I trust him.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Trust is a hard thing to come by, hopefully he will earn it from you.
A trip to egypt, that does sound like fun. I wonder how Hermione will react to flying with Severus. I thing it sounds like tons of fun.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I think flying with him would be awesome! lol!