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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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sunny33

Black is a smart ass Slytherin.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, yes he is. And I just LOVE writing him

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sunny33

Maybe he didn't need the potions?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

maybe...

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sunny33

She may not feel so sorry for him if she knew his deepest , darkest thoughts.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahhahaha, that's right, you got it!

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sunny33

Sneak! Using Legilimency on Jezzie!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

He's so good, though!

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sunny33

definitely creepy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, yes. Thanks for starting to read this!

10/10

Persevero

Blimey.  And I'm supposed to sleep after that? Brilliant fic - update soon, pleeease!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, gee, I'm sorry!  Thank you so much and sleep tight!

10/10

sinbad

Wow, definitely action packed.  I'm betting one of the portraits did get the Headmaster...or was it just luck?  Either how Albus is infuriated.  I wonder how Hermione will cope?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Knowing DD, someone informed him! lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing

10/10

laurenhermione

that was amazing please please update and continue this story it really really good!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

wow, thanks!!

10/10

Severina52

Love it keep going

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you so much~

10/10

Maddie

Ooo, what a place to stop. Great chapter, though. Exciting.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Of course I would stop there! I looooove cliffies! Thanks, maddie!~

10/10

braye27

OMG!  This was very action packed, and a very evil cliffie.Since it's Christmas, I do hope this means that you will have a present for us shortly... next chapter, perhaps?I'm still as hooked on your story as I was the day I started reading it!  Well done.Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, it wash, hmm? No, prezzie, sorry. Soon, though. I'm happy to know you are still hooked, I was worried that it was getting too long and people will lose interest. Thanks, B

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kimjo2

yike!  evil cliffie personified!  yes, i can believe he dropped her in his confusion of the warring feelings.  faboo update.  thanks so much

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, good, so you don't hate him too much about him dropping her, then hmmm??? hahahah Thanks~

10/10

Muggline

And what an evil cliffie it is! This chapter actually makes me reconsider my wish that they manage to overcome their difficulties...

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Of course it's an evil cliffie! That's what I do. And stop, you KNOW you want them to kiss and make up! hahahahahahahh. Thanks!!!

10/10

chivalric

This is getting really addictive, dear. More soon, please!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Wow thanks, love!

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salvamea

oh no, now Dumbledore got the horocurx.bad thing this is.what will happen next.oh my.he lost her trust in him forever.at least when it comes to flying.she will never do that again. (if she ever comes to do anything again - with or without him  - safed or not)what a horrible experience, falling to your death  - and caused by your lover. waaahand then being safed in the last moment.these blasted slytherins- even in death they stick together like glue! even as a portrait.I can only hope, that snape had his horror-moment, too, and that he now finally realises what horrible game he is playing, and that he has to do something about it.whatsoever.at least not playing games with hermione.sigh. really action -packed

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes! You got it! hahahahah, blasted slytherins, indeed. ANd itsn't it just horrible? Falling to your death because of your lover! Meep! *hugs*thanks

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salvamea

"embrace you inner darkness"a perfect name for a  horocrux - hidingplace.now everything will be up.the cousin-matter will be out too, I think.how will Hermione manage the bad effect of the "book" on her.It is so funny to remember the scenes in his office with knowing this now, this sly thing. 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I think you are right about the cousin matter! Everything is just unfolding so fast for him! ANd yes, those things she did in his office was because of the book--like snooping through his files... Thanks for reading~

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Phoenix_Fire

OMG! OMG! OMG!  I cannot believe it!  Wonderful update - action, terror, and a cliffhanger at the end.  What will Dumbledore do?  Oh I so want Snape to be on the good side.  Although I don't know how Hermione could ever forgive him after this.  Update soon please!!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Squeeee!! You make me laugh! Thank you for the review! And, you want Snape on the side of good... got it. Of course, your wants and what is going to happen might be two different things, but, I'll talk to the lady in charge... hahahah j/k Just give the story some time, k? Thanks~

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livvy6

Holy F*&#!!! What the hell is going on here? Please update soon!Livvy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I don't know. Lots of madness in this world... hahahahThanks livvy~

10/10

makaem

Thank goodness Dumbledore was there. Snape has a lot of explaining to do to get back in either of their good graces. 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, good for who? YOu don't think SNape would have saved her? And you KNOW he doesn't want DD around--he's in a boat load of trouble!  And if DD doesn't do the job, Hermione will. lol.Thanks for reviewing

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Marble Meadow

damn!!!! I don't even know what to say. My mouth is flopping around like a fish!I can't wait for Dumbledores reaction. Muahahaha

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

BWHAHAHAHAHAHH!!!! SUrprises, huh?THanks, Shell~

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color

Fantastic!  Fabulous!!  Unforgetable!!!  Whew, that was exciting.  So, back to the questions.  (1) It's understandable that the horcrux tried to kill HG, given that she's a threat.  Still, SS helped HG get the soul-revealing book.  Does that mean killing SS was next on the horcrux's list?  Or has SS proven himself to be such a good caretaker that the horcrux decided to keep him around?  (2) Will DD be affected by the horcrux, or is he powerful/good enough to stay immune and destroy the damn thing?  (3) What's going to happen to those uncooperative portraits?  I propose that DD unlock Headmaster Black's strangle-hold on the portraits.  That or burn a few of them.  Tough times call for tough measures, after all.  (4) Can we call this a mere hick-up in the HG/SS relationship?  SS... poor bugger.  Keeps on digging himself further into the hole.  Maybe now he'll be forced to start climbing his way out.  So, you can tell meeeee, how's he going to do it?Great job!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, hi there! Thank you so much for the review!! YOu know I just love your questions and thoughts. So, let's see if I can answer any of them...Okay, the Horcrux never intended to kill Snape--just HG because you are correct, she is a threat. WHy? because she confuses his heart and his mind. The horcrux wants him to be evil, but she is the light and messes that evil up, so it wanted her dead, hence the 'dropping-to-her-death-scene." I think the Horcrux WILL affect DD. He is powerful, yes, but remember his state of mind--he is beyond pissed off that Snape had the blasted thing AND that SNape is trying to kill Hermione-so his rage will be... hightend. And, oh, yeah. That hole is VERY deep!! Poor sev. Thanks~~~

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Nessa

No! Please say he is for the light and he loves her!! Please- Its Christmas! Happy Christmas.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

He loves her. Does that help?And hope you had a wonderful holiday! I did.  THanks for reading and reviewing~~

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rhiannon113

OMG! That is one of the scariest things I've ever read... I don't know what's worse: the thought of falling down loads and loads of stairs, or the thought that he dropped her! I shrieked out loud as I read it! Truly unsettling. Happy Christmas!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you so much for such a wonderful response! I would have loved to hear you scream!! What IS worse? I think falling... I could handle him dropping me, because then I could deal with that. But actually falling--holy crap no way. I'm terribly afraid of flying, just like Hermione, and believe me, this was difficult to write. Thank you!

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mummy

I think this chapter is the best one yet. I love stories that are a little bit unique and were I haven't got a clue what's going to happen next...well  this is such a story  and I'm just enjoying so much. Many ,many thanks

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, wow! Thank you sooooo much! I have to say, that there have been SOOOO many stories out there, that are a good mystery and I don't know what is going to happen, but then... like right in the middle of it, I figure it out. "Oh, it's Snape, disguised. Oh, Snape came back from the dead. Oh, Snape is a vampire..." and I get a little sad because the guessing game is over. So, with this story, I am trying really hard to keep it all hush hush... you can't really figure out what is happening until the very end. You know those movies where the ending happens and you are like hitting your head against a wall saying "OMFG I DIDn't SEE THAT COMING!!! NOW I HAVE TO RE-WATCH IT TO CATCH ON!!" That is what I am going for. So, if all goes well, you will be guessing until the end. I hope. Thank you for the review!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, wow! Thank you sooooo much! I have to say, that there have been SOOOO many stories out there, that are a good mystery and I don't know what is going to happen, but then... like right in the middle of it, I figure it out. "Oh, it's Snape, disguised. Oh, Snape came back from the dead. Oh, Snape is a vampire..." and I get a little sad because the guessing game is over. So, with this story, I am trying really hard to keep it all hush hush... you can't really figure out what is happening until the very end. You know those movies where the ending happens and you are like hitting your head against a wall saying "OMFG I DIDn't SEE THAT COMING!!! NOW I HAVE TO RE-WATCH IT TO CATCH ON!!" That is what I am going for. So, if all goes well, you will be guessing until the end. I hope. Thank you for the review!

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nastygrl

Oh! Sweet one, I love it!  So, Severus wasn't polyjuiced and Lucius is still an evil bastard, damn his beautifulness.  Not the best way to admit you love someone, but it proved the point, didn't it?  The many sides of Hermiome are showing, the grown-up explorer, the newly discovered sex kitten, the giddy school girl who wants to share secrets with her best friend and one-third of the Golden Trio with the bad guys after her.  And poor Severus! Hermione going on and on about her new lover is going to make life so much harder when Sev's misbehavior comes out.  Can't wait to read what made Voldy so pissy and why he took it out on Severus.  Keep Writing!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, Lucius is evil in this one... *sighs* I love that you caught on about the 'many sides of Hermione' You are totally right about that! What a perfect definition for this hermione, thank you. Oh, yes, Hermione is going to be... not thrilled... when the truth comes out. And the answer to the last question is in the next chapter. *hugs*Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, Lucius is evil in this one... *sighs* I love that you caught on about the 'many sides of Hermione' You are totally right about that! What a perfect definition for this hermione, thank you. Oh, yes, Hermione is going to be... not thrilled... when the truth comes out. And the answer to the last question is in the next chapter. *hugs*Shell~

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