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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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salvamea

I thought you named it so because they are both safe: packed away from the front linebut dangerous: because both used as pawns in this play and because of the misuse that was done to love. as if it wouldn't matter what is growing here, because in a short while the one or the other will not be anyway. So, everybody has ones ideas. but we are all sure, that you have your reasons. the devilish laughter alone lleads one to this conviciton.They meet again. And that quick. And he agrees to open for her? wow. How much did he show her, I am eager to know.What happens to two minds that are used to do overwork, and are now bound to take a "holiday"? dangerous indeed.they will bite each other. or whatbutnot.quick. next chapter pleeeeeaaasseeesalva

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oooo, Yes! I love your thoughts about the title! And I believe they are true as well! thank you for sharing that. Oh, yes, 'two minds that are used to do overwork and are now bound to take a holiday' You got it, babe. Dangerous indeed. Very much so... Especially when one of them is prone to incrediable pains on the left forearm. Next chapter as soon as I can! Thank you for the review!

10/10

braye27

The confusion in Hermione's mind about her relationship with Severus – what she knows for certain and what she still wonders about – must be truly tormenting for her.She know she still loves him yet can't imagine why.  I hope she and Severus are able to finally talk to each other about what has happened all along... but maybe she will give up on him if and when he is completely honest about what he as done. I wonder just what memories Severus has left for her in the vials... • his spying on her• entering her room at her parents home• Jezzy• why he hid the Horcrux• his activities on behalf of the Order• activities on behalf of VoldemortI have a lot of quetions, but you have left me with one very clear thought:  Severus is fed up with being controlled by two manipulative Wizards, and he could very easily become much more of a loose cannon than he has already become.Oh Lord! girl, you have to update... soon!  Please?Beth 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, if that confusion in her mind is tormenting her BEFORE she knows the truth about things... then just.you.wait. Poor girl. And, Beth... you finally have got the answer:Severus is fed up with being controlled by two manipulative Wizards.So, if you were in his shoes... what would YOU do? Thank you as always for the wondeful, well thought-out reviews. You are bloody fantastic.

10/10

Nessa

Hmm interesting chapter. I wonder what Severus has to share. And when you say heated? You mean heated  ? Or just a few hexes going about the place- hope that's not the case though. I adore this story. Look forward to more.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

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Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well heated:As in passioniteandhexes and words flying about...so, both! Should make for some good make up smut, yes? lolThank you,

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Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

'Indeed' as Severus would say lol.

10/10

couture2468

Very intriguing start!  You've tapped into all the darkness that allowed him to be a successful Death Eater and Voldemort's right-hand man for so many years.  Well done!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, thank you for starting this! I do hope it holds your intrest and I can't wait to hear more from you! *hugs*

10/10

color

Ah, ha!  So that's how you're working Hermione-control!  I didn't realize it was going to be by locking the two of them up together; although that's a great way to force them to confront their differences, and certainly those that extend beyond the Horcrux and the attempted murder-by-dropping-Hermione-seven-floors.So, what are in those vials?  Is SS relationship-suicidal enough to include early memories of when he attacked and Obliviated Hermione?  Given the extreme guilt he's feeling, it's quite possible that he's going to do the full confession.  Yeowch!  If he does that, I hope that he's at least sane enough to include memories showing the positive aspects of his devotion.  As a former roommate used to say, "Him's not too stable."I was surprised by how understanding DD was.  Is DD reeeeally being that nice, or is it another manipulation case of attracting more flies with honey?  Me thinks the latter.  DD has treated SS as a disposable commodity too many times for me to think that DD is rooting for the HG-SS relationship and SS's happiness out of the goodness of his own heart.  Conniving ba*tard, that one.And since you dropped the clue... which big bad wolf will be knocking at the door come red-light time?  Hummm.  Could it be the the biggest baddie of them all:  Super V?  (Reminds me of the song, "Super Freak", by Rick James.)Fabulous as always.  Update soon!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!!You've asked so many good questions again! Now, about DD... what do you really believe??? I spell Dumbledore like this:M-A-N-I-P-U-L-A-T-O-Rhrm. And the big bad wolf... well... hehehehehehhehe.And I think Severus is pretty damn desperate to tell her the truth--he really loves her. And will risk everything to be honest because that is what she deserves. Thanks, as always, for an awesome review! me loves them. hehehehehShell~

10/10

Dianne64

Wow -- presenting Hermione with the pensieve was very "Sererus"...I can't wait to see what Hermione thinks!  I think she will forgive anything.Keep up the great work!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I think she will forgive as well, BUT, and there is a MAJOR BUT... not before she says her peace. Thanks Dianne!

10/10

makaem

There's concern about our reaction to the cliffhangers and you leave an author's note like that? New chapters would be a great way to atone.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, dear. New chapters coming as fast as I can write them. hahahahahhahah.Thanks for the review!

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rhiannon113

Thanks for the extra info on the titles, that's something I struggle with myself. I appreciate the insight into your process. I love the chapter, yes, I wish it was longer, and I must curse you and your cliffies. However, I also love your wicked suspense. LOL =] Can't wait for more...

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh! I'm glad you liked my ramblings about titles and such.. .hehehehe. Oh, wicked suspense, eh? *blush* Thank you.

10/10

MollysSister

He could have left a sandwhich with the memories right? Next chapter better come pronto sister! I am very curious about what Severus has to share. Very.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I know! HOw rude of him! I'd be starving by then! Thanks for reading!

10/10

Persevero

Oh my.  This fic seems to inspire(?) me to write highly unintelligent reviews, because I am too stunned to say anything more complex then 'Blimey!' 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, you are just too funny! Well, thank you for being stunned, jaw slack, and well, everything else! I like to do that to my readers! Many hugs

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, you are just too funny! Well, thank you for being stunned, jaw slack, and well, everything else! I like to do that to my readers! Many hugs

10/10

Darque Hart

What I don't get is why is the Horcrux trying to get Hermione to locate it, and take it? Her intent is to destroy it ... unless the Horcrux's intent all along was to get anyone to take it to Dumbledore and Severus has had it hidden away all this time [either not knowing how to 'kill' it or having to have it at hand in case the DL asks for it] to protect Albus.At any rate, I'm sure whatever is revealed in the next chapter will be just as exciting and thought provoking as usual.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, I should make you wait for this answer... but, I am in the giving mood. Why does it want her to find it? Well, because the Horcrux knows...Oh, guess what.That giving mood just disappeared.You'll have to wait for the answer!! But, there IS a reason as WHY the Horcrux was doing that. Thank you for your therory and review!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, I should make you wait for this answer... but, I am in the giving mood. Why does it want her to find it? Well, because the Horcrux knows...Oh, guess what.That giving mood just disappeared.You'll have to wait for the answer!! But, there IS a reason as WHY the Horcrux was doing that. Thank you for your therory and review!!!!

10/10

Maddie

I have one thing to say . . . eek! Who will reach Dumbledore first? OK, two things.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I LOVE EEK!! One of my favorite words! Yes, the next chapter shall be pretty exciting, yes?Of course!! thanks!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I LOVE EEK!! One of my favorite words! Yes, the next chapter shall be pretty exciting, yes?Of course!! thanks!

10/10

braye27

Wow!  I was totally caught off balance with this chapter!!!That Severus had the Horcrux explains so much... how he could do some of the things he does.  His changes in personality were possibly caused by "thoughts" put into his mind by that piece of Voldemort's soul that he has kept hidden in his chambers.  Holy crap, Batman!  You gotta come to your senses.I can't wait to find out what happens in the race to Dumbledore.  Now that the Horcrux is out from behind the protective wards Severus had placed on it, it is badly affecting both of them, and unless they can get to Dumbledore before one of them does something regrettable, the outcome could be very bad indeed!Fabulous chapter, Shell!  Keep up the good work.A Thousand Points to Your House!Beth*sending hugs, good vibes, and Calming Drought for RL  *

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, Beth, does it REALLY explain so much about Severus? I mean, he has been doing some pretty rotten things since BEFORE he had the horcrux... *hint, hint* But! It does have some effect on him.Oh, you can bet your sweet little bottom that the exposed horcrux will have a BIG effect on them. Thank you for your contiunous support and hugs and good vibes and Calming Drought!!!!!! *hugs and kisses*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Well, Beth, does it REALLY explain so much about Severus? I mean, he has been doing some pretty rotten things since BEFORE he had the horcrux... *hint, hint* But! It does have some effect on him.Oh, you can bet your sweet little bottom that the exposed horcrux will have a BIG effect on them. Thank you for your contiunous support and hugs and good vibes and Calming Drought!!!!!! *hugs and kisses*

10/10

nastygrl

Holy hell, Shell!  I don't even know  where to start!  That Severus has a horcrux - but of course, there has to be a good reason for that.  That Hermione found the photo, oh, that isn't good for our man :(But why didn't she find the Horcrux when she was wandering the school? And that the book had been calling her, is that part of the reason for Severus's obsession?   So many questions!!!!!!!!But damn, this was so freaking good!  And oh, "I'm afraid I can't let you do that, Miss Granger." Gone is the lover, back is Snape. *gushes* I love Severus, bad and all!!!Keep writing!!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

She didn't find the Horcrux while wandering the school because she wasn't looking in his office!!! No, the book was calling her for another reason...Yes, we BOTH love bad severus!!! We are so horrible.

Thanks Dar~

10/10

Lkmaide

Well just tell RL that I NEED!!  your update like the air I breathe.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

RL: "

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

NEEDS ME, so STOP BOTHERING ME!!!"Hrm.I don't think that helped much. But, good news, next chapter is almost done! And it's SOOOOO exciting.Well, I hope it is.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

RL: "

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

NEEDS ME, so STOP BOTHERING ME!!!"Hrm.I don't think that helped much. But, good news, next chapter is almost done! And it's SOOOOO exciting.Well, I hope it is.

10/10

emmeline33

Ooh, intriguing!  I cannot wait to see where you take this.  You are brilliant at suspense.  Hope life smooths out soon! 

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi doll!!! Life is kinda slowing down... Thank you thank you for saying you like my suspense, I always enjoy keeping people on their toes! Many hugsS

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi doll!!! Life is kinda slowing down... Thank you thank you for saying you like my suspense, I always enjoy keeping people on their toes! Many hugsS

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poisonivy1976

well that was unexpected, but great, like all chapters till now. wonder what lies ahead.... thank you for writing this peace of madness.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

BwhhahahahaI love how you say it is MADNESS!! Because, it is!!! Thank you so much for reviewing as well, I really love seeing them. Many hugs,Shell!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

BwhhahahahaI love how you say it is MADNESS!! Because, it is!!! Thank you so much for reviewing as well, I really love seeing them. Many hugs,Shell!

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Isode

On pins and needles.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ooo. Don't hurt yourself. hahahahahah.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ooo. Don't hurt yourself. hahahahahah.

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Duchess_Of_Arcadia

Hehe, he's really in for it now isn't he lol. This will be very entertaining. Btw I love it:P

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Aweee, thank you, DoA. Yes, I hope the race is pretty interesting.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Aweee, thank you, DoA. Yes, I hope the race is pretty interesting.

10/10

Muggline

OMG. This was a painful chapter - thank you for the suspense! I don't know how I will survive here on the edge of my seat until the next chapter, but I guess I'll manage...

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

OOO!! Squeee, thank you!!! Glad you liked it so much!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

OOO!! Squeee, thank you!!! Glad you liked it so much!

10/10

losev

very unexpected not fair short (cliffe) chap hoping that you get more time to write longer chaps soon.plz no more violent scene of sev and mione i thought u had done with them at starting & were going to reveal boggart mione.Will it be a happy end ?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

If you don't like violent scenes, then the next chapter is going to be tough to get through, but I will say this:I like happy endings.Most of the time.Thanks!!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

If you don't like violent scenes, then the next chapter is going to be tough to get through, but I will say this:I like happy endings.Most of the time.Thanks!!!!!

10/10

sinbad

Oh crap!  What a way to end the chapter.  All well, cliff hangers are the prerogative of the author but I have to say you got my interest!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh good! thanks!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh good! thanks!!!

10/10

MollysSister

Your Snape doesnt seem firmly on the side of the Order. He seems like he is playing the middle, helping the dark and light so he will survive whoever wins. This is not a critisism, I like a twisty Snape. And owls have souls. I was surprised by that. Does the color of the soul mean anything? Hermione's was yellow, Snape's was silver....Youve got me thinking Shell

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ah, Molly, molly, molly. Only YOU would understand"firmly on the side of the Order. Playing the middle"Color of souls.... heheheheh...Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Ah, Molly, molly, molly. Only YOU would understand"firmly on the side of the Order. Playing the middle"Color of souls.... heheheheh...Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

10/10

MollysSister

Well that was one hellva surprise seeing Voldy and all the henchmen! Id have been freaked too. Voldy in her mind was especially creepy. I have to tell you when Snape was limping it wasnt a broken ankle I was thinking of. I thought Snape had been punished and violated. I am a sick thing arent I? Mahwhwahahah1!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I love LOVE that you have a sick and twisted and perverted mind! It gets me all excited!!!! thanks

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I love LOVE that you have a sick and twisted and perverted mind! It gets me all excited!!!! thanks

10/10

livvy6

Well, this is f-ed up! I don't even know what to expect next chapter. I kept saying, Oh, shit! over and over. Overall, the chapter was short but sweet.Livvy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

My goodness livvy!!! "f-ed up!" hahahahhaah. your too kind. Yes, it is. Thank you for reading

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

My goodness livvy!!! "f-ed up!" hahahahhaah. your too kind. Yes, it is. Thank you for reading

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