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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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0/10

septentrion

My mind boggles with all that manipulation afoot!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

LOL! Thank you, sweetie!

10/10

severuslover

Wonderful chapter. I'm glad Hermione forgave him. I'm interested to know what the two rare ingredients were that Severus was able to acquire. Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Jen

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi Jen! Oh, I'm so glad you are happy that she was able to forgive--I felt that it was important that these two could have problems, work them out, and now are moving on... The two ingredients are in the story... if that helps any...muwhahahahah

Shell~

10/10

Nessa

I can probably guess one. But the other has got me thinking. I'm so glad they are going to be able to put things behind them, and Severus has changed. I'm looking forward to these last few chapters.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you so much for the wonderful review,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

. Yes, I am sure you can guess the one, just like the others who have reviewed have said... but it's that second one that has everyone guessing--this makes me so excited!! muwhahahahahah*hugs*

10/10

braye27

Splendid!  I'm so glad that they have managed to put the past into the past.  Neither of them will forget what has happened, but they have moved on with forgiveness for past wrongs and a determination to rid the world of the Dark Lord forever... and save Harry.So what are the last two ingredients?  Hermione's virginal blood and the hair of the banshee?  Or something else that has slipped by me unnoticed as I read?How long do they have before Voldemort comes to Severus?  Will he be outraged tath Severus has not answered his Summons?  Will he try to harm Hermione?  Will Severus be able to protect her from his wrath?Good lord, woman!  You've set the stage perfectly for the showdown of the century, and I can't wait to see how you work all this out.  Dumbledore will have to be confronted for using both Hermione and Severus is such diabolical ways, but will they forgive him and go on to forgive him?  Or will they want to extract their pound of flesh for the way he as used them both?Only a few more chapters?  I will be sad to see this story end, but I will be happy to see the world rid of the Dark Lord, and happier still to see Severus and Hermione make a life for themselves free of the evil that is now threatening to end their world as they know it.Great chapter, Shell!Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you, Beth! You always encourage me to keep writing! And yes, I think that other ingredient has slipped past you--it may not be in this chapter--but it's there... lol.

I will be sad to see it end as well, but it's time, you know? Have to tie up all the loose ends, dumbledore being one of them...

Thank you for the support!

Love,Shell~

10/10

Clairvoyant

Excellent chapter.  I feel relief now that she has forgiven him.  Your last few chapters created tremendous angst for me, not knowing if she could get beyond the terrible things he had done.  Kudos for Severus' total honesty.So now they have the chance to move on and destroy Voldemort with a potion.  Two special ingredients, you say?  Hmm?  I guess virgin's blood and... aw, shoot, I'm all out of clues.  Banshee hair?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you, Clair... Yeah, I really wanted my readers to feel the hurt/angst that those two were feeling, and by the sound of it I succeded, so thank you for telling me that. And yeah, you got that first ingredient correct... oh, the clue is SO in the story--you just gotta think really hard... and think back... hehehehehehhe

10/10

makaem

When I think back on how this story started, it is amazing that Snape and Hermione could have the conversation they have in this chapter. He's changed. But so has she. She can meet him more as an equal. Only a few more chapters, huh? I'm sad.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, they have really grown over this, which is important to do because they couldn't stay the same, could they? It wouldn't have worked... so I am thankful that you see that as well, *hugs*Yeah, only a few... I'm a bit sad too...

10/10

color

*Two* ingredients?  Okay.  One is HG's virginal blood.  The other... umm.  Something Zeki brought?  A part of the horcrux SS had been hiding?  Banshee hair?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah... two. And you got the first one right... but the other... heheheheheh... thanks for reading!

10/10

jadedfandom

I just re-read this story and I'm hoping you'll update soon! It's one of my favorite WIPs!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you so much! I am working on the next chapter now! Don't worry... I hope to hear from you more!Shell~

10/10

Nessa

How intense was that! Brilliant.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thank you nessa!!

10/10

Lkmaide

THAT! Was worth the wait!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Heheheheheh, your so funny, Thank you!

0/10

dm41b

I LOVE this story. I had to rush over from the "restrictedsection" site. It is so well written and I love that it's not your typical SS/HG fic. This one definitely keeps me guessing. Can't wait for more!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, thank goodness you followed me from RS, seeing as how I can't post there anymore! Thank you so much for your kind words and I am so pleased that I keep you guessing because that was my intention. *hugs*

10/10

Ligia

I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! Please!!! I will be crazy of anxiety!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, me oh my!!!! *giggles* I love your enthusiasm! I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm slow--it's not easy intertwinning a twisted story such as this! lol. But, be on the look out... Shell~

10/10

Ligia

Please Update!!!!! 

Response from Ligia (Reviewer)

I come here every day to see if you already upgraded.. :(

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I'm working on it...

10/10

magialuna

Oh my! This story is so good.  I am bummed it isn't finished!  I hope there is more to read soon.  I want to know what other memories he gives her to see and what happens next to them.  Lovely story.  - Clare

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, don't worry, it is close to being done *just have to write the damn thing* :P Thank you clare!

0/10

draegon_fire

I wonder what Hermione's opinion of Severus be when she sees his remaining memories.  Will she be disgusted, or will she understand how he was driven?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Thanks for reviewing--I dunno... is she understanding enough?

10/10

sinbad

Obsession?  Perhaps.  Enjoyable chapter although Severus telling Karkaroff off was quite amusing as well as telling.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Lol, thanks Sinbad!

10/10

MollysSister

Well I can see why wants to ease her into viewing the memories. Things are going to get really ugly. OHNOS

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Very. Ugly. mwahahhahahahaha... Thanks~

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh interesting choice of memories. I was really amused by the visit of the student in his office - no, he didn't want jsut any little girl ldid he?  and Karkaoff thinking Hermione was a Slytherin - that was hilarious.  I especially liked Severus reaction to the fact that Hermione brewed Polyjuice her second year, and Dumbledore's comments. Very well done chapter. I'm really enjoying this tale.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahahahha, yeah, there WAS some humour to this chapter, huh? Well, that's good, I guess... Thank you so much for sticking with this... Shell~

10/10

makaem

If she sticks around after seeing the next memories... I love this story, I was so unhappy when I realized I was reading an author's note (not that I don't love reading your notes, but I wasn't ready for the chapter to be over).I'm very curious as to how you will handle her reaction to the rest of the memories.  He's not exactly good boyfriend material.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, Makaem, I'm so sorry it was short--I will really try and make the next one long. I understand how you feel tho, my fave stories do that to me all the time! Argh! No, note a typical 'boyfriend' is he? He's more than that... awell, I think so... kind creepy at times, but... heheheheh lol

Response from makaem (Reviewer)

Oh, no, I meant that as a complement. I was reading along so caught up in the story that I wasn't paying attention to the curser. Usually, I glance at it about 2/3's of the way through-- but I was so engrossed I forgot to look.  The chapter was perfect, you left me wanting more. Always a good thing.MA

0/10

salvamea

If I were a stronger person, I would have done the same as you.”perfectly set words for a great compliment. so many scenes you have composed here. again.So it was Karkaroff who opened his eyes. or his heart for his jealousy.But she did her best to keep her in his mind by all her activities during her years at school.*g*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Wow! Thankssss!!Yeah, LOTS going on again, huh? Yeah, interesting that it was Karkaroff, but... it had to be. Yes yo uare right--she DID do her best to keep his attentions! lmao!

0/10

sunny33

An obsession indeed!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, yeah... But he does love her.Maybe not back then... but he does now. Shell~

0/10

sunny33

poor Sev.  Hopefully she will understand him better after this.:)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I hope so too!

10/10

saravasti

I have faith in you. I know you will try your best in the next chapters. I can't wait to read more. *hugs*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, I will try soon enough... thank you though.*glomps*shell~

10/10

countrymouse

What a lovely glimpse into the early impressions of her that formed the basis for his love for (and obsession with) her.  I'm worried about the scenes yet to come--yet the very fact that he's willing to show all to her, rather than continue to deceive her, speaks worlds about how far he's come from obsession toward true love.  Waiting (with trepidation) for the next!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, thank you for seeing that this is such a HUGE thing for him to do--no one has EVER known the real SS and he has handed his very being to her on a silver platter and that it HAS changed from obsession to true love. Thank you!!

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kimjo2

yeow!  it did start early.  but it was her mind that first attracted him so you've got to give him credit for that.  wonderful update.  thanks so much

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes, her mind--and the fact that she drove him effing mad! lol, thank you!!!

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