Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
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My mind boggles with all that manipulation afoot!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
LOL! Thank you, sweetie! 
Wonderful chapter. I'm glad Hermione forgave him. I'm interested to know what the two rare ingredients were that Severus was able to acquire. Can't wait for the next chapter! ~Jen
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi Jen! Oh, I'm so glad you are happy that she was able to forgive--I felt that it was important that these two could have problems, work them out, and now are moving on... The two ingredients are in the story... if that helps any...muwhahahahah
Shell~
I can probably guess one. But the other has got me thinking. I'm so glad they are going to be able to put things behind them, and Severus has changed. I'm looking forward to these last few chapters.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much for the wonderful review,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
. Yes, I am sure you can guess the one, just like the others who have reviewed have said... but it's that second one that has everyone guessing--this makes me so excited!! muwhahahahahah*hugs*
Splendid! I'm so glad that they have managed to put the past into the past. Neither of them will forget what has happened, but they have moved on with forgiveness for past wrongs and a determination to rid the world of the Dark Lord forever... and save Harry.So what are the last two ingredients? Hermione's virginal blood and the hair of the banshee? Or something else that has slipped by me unnoticed as I read?How long do they have before Voldemort comes to Severus? Will he be outraged tath Severus has not answered his Summons? Will he try to harm Hermione? Will Severus be able to protect her from his wrath?Good lord, woman! You've set the stage perfectly for the showdown of the century, and I can't wait to see how you work all this out. Dumbledore will have to be confronted for using both Hermione and Severus is such diabolical ways, but will they forgive him and go on to forgive him? Or will they want to extract their pound of flesh for the way he as used them both?Only a few more chapters? I will be sad to see this story end, but I will be happy to see the world rid of the Dark Lord, and happier still to see Severus and Hermione make a life for themselves free of the evil that is now threatening to end their world as they know it.Great chapter, Shell!Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you, Beth! You always encourage me to keep writing! And yes, I think that other ingredient has slipped past you--it may not be in this chapter--but it's there... lol.
I will be sad to see it end as well, but it's time, you know? Have to tie up all the loose ends, dumbledore being one of them...
Thank you for the support!
Love,Shell~
Excellent chapter. I feel relief now that she has forgiven him. Your last few chapters created tremendous angst for me, not knowing if she could get beyond the terrible things he had done. Kudos for Severus' total honesty.So now they have the chance to move on and destroy Voldemort with a potion. Two special ingredients, you say? Hmm? I guess virgin's blood and... aw, shoot, I'm all out of clues. Banshee hair?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you, Clair... Yeah, I really wanted my readers to feel the hurt/angst that those two were feeling, and by the sound of it I succeded, so thank you for telling me that. And yeah, you got that first ingredient correct... oh, the clue is SO in the story--you just gotta think really hard... and think back... hehehehehehhe
When I think back on how this story started, it is amazing that Snape and Hermione could have the conversation they have in this chapter. He's changed. But so has she. She can meet him more as an equal. Only a few more chapters, huh? I'm sad.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, they have really grown over this, which is important to do because they couldn't stay the same, could they? It wouldn't have worked... so I am thankful that you see that as well, *hugs*Yeah, only a few... I'm a bit sad too...
*Two* ingredients? Okay. One is HG's virginal blood. The other... umm. Something Zeki brought? A part of the horcrux SS had been hiding? Banshee hair?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah... two. And you got the first one right... but the other... heheheheheh... thanks for reading!
I just re-read this story and I'm hoping you'll update soon! It's one of my favorite WIPs!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you so much! I am working on the next chapter now! Don't worry... I hope to hear from you more!Shell~
How intense was that! Brilliant.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you nessa!!
THAT! Was worth the wait!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Heheheheheh, your so funny, Thank you!
I LOVE this story. I had to rush over from the "restrictedsection" site. It is so well written and I love that it's not your typical SS/HG fic. This one definitely keeps me guessing. Can't wait for more!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, thank goodness you followed me from RS, seeing as how I can't post there anymore! Thank you so much for your kind words and I am so pleased that I keep you guessing because that was my intention. *hugs*
I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! I want the chapter!!! Please!!! I will be crazy of anxiety!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, me oh my!!!! *giggles* I love your enthusiasm! I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm slow--it's not easy intertwinning a twisted story such as this! lol. But, be on the look out... Shell~
Please Update!!!!!
Response from Ligia (Reviewer)
I come here every day to see if you already upgraded.. :(
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I'm working on it...
Oh my! This story is so good. I am bummed it isn't finished! I hope there is more to read soon. I want to know what other memories he gives her to see and what happens next to them. Lovely story. - Clare
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, don't worry, it is close to being done *just have to write the damn thing* :P Thank you clare!
I wonder what Hermione's opinion of Severus be when she sees his remaining memories. Will she be disgusted, or will she understand how he was driven?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks for reviewing--I dunno... is she understanding enough?
Obsession? Perhaps. Enjoyable chapter although Severus telling Karkaroff off was quite amusing as well as telling.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Lol, thanks Sinbad!
Well I can see why wants to ease her into viewing the memories. Things are going to get really ugly. OHNOS
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Very. Ugly. mwahahhahahahaha... Thanks~
Oh interesting choice of memories. I was really amused by the visit of the student in his office - no, he didn't want jsut any little girl ldid he? and Karkaoff thinking Hermione was a Slytherin - that was hilarious. I especially liked Severus reaction to the fact that Hermione brewed Polyjuice her second year, and Dumbledore's comments. Very well done chapter. I'm really enjoying this tale.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahahahha, yeah, there WAS some humour to this chapter, huh? Well, that's good, I guess... Thank you so much for sticking with this... Shell~
If she sticks around after seeing the next memories... I love this story, I was so unhappy when I realized I was reading an author's note (not that I don't love reading your notes, but I wasn't ready for the chapter to be over).I'm very curious as to how you will handle her reaction to the rest of the memories. He's not exactly good boyfriend material.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, Makaem, I'm so sorry it was short--I will really try and make the next one long. I understand how you feel tho, my fave stories do that to me all the time! Argh! No, note a typical 'boyfriend' is he? He's more than that... awell, I think so... kind creepy at times, but... heheheheh lol
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
Oh, no, I meant that as a complement. I was reading along so caught up in the story that I wasn't paying attention to the curser. Usually, I glance at it about 2/3's of the way through-- but I was so engrossed I forgot to look. The chapter was perfect, you left me wanting more. Always a good thing.MA
If I were a stronger person, I would have done the same as you.”perfectly set words for a great compliment. so many scenes you have composed here. again.So it was Karkaroff who opened his eyes. or his heart for his jealousy.But she did her best to keep her in his mind by all her activities during her years at school.*g*
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow! Thankssss!!Yeah, LOTS going on again, huh? Yeah, interesting that it was Karkaroff, but... it had to be. Yes yo uare right--she DID do her best to keep his attentions! lmao!
An obsession indeed!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, yeah... But he does love her.Maybe not back then... but he does now. Shell~
poor Sev. Hopefully she will understand him better after this.:)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I hope so too!
I have faith in you. I know you will try your best in the next chapters. I can't wait to read more. *hugs*
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, I will try soon enough... thank you though.*glomps*shell~
What a lovely glimpse into the early impressions of her that formed the basis for his love for (and obsession with) her. I'm worried about the scenes yet to come--yet the very fact that he's willing to show all to her, rather than continue to deceive her, speaks worlds about how far he's come from obsession toward true love. Waiting (with trepidation) for the next!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, thank you for seeing that this is such a HUGE thing for him to do--no one has EVER known the real SS and he has handed his very being to her on a silver platter and that it HAS changed from obsession to true love. Thank you!!
yeow! it did start early. but it was her mind that first attracted him so you've got to give him credit for that. wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, her mind--and the fact that she drove him effing mad! lol, thank you!!!