Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
Reviews for Consuming Me
Devil on left shoulder saying "Don't stop there" and angel on right saying "Whoa! Stop the bus". Jesus Shell, that was mind blowing. I mean I know Sev can be a right bad bastard but if he was abusing her when she was a wee lassie like a typical Death-eater then he really does need taking to task over it. But that said, you are judge and jury in this court and thy will be done. Brilliantly written as always. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
BWHAHAHAHAHHA! Oh, that's great--love the little devil/angel thing! bwhahahah. Yeah, his past with her-very creepy and bad, but he has changed. He has. And he really didn't 'abuse' her... until she was of age... He was just very very intrigued with her for so long... And, I like that--judge and jury in this court! hehehhehe, so... shall I kill them off? j/k. mwhahahah.Love Shell~
You're back! Excellent chapter, as always. HG's certainly got a lot to slug through, but she seems to have a grasp on it... for now. I'm wondering what the next day will bring once she's had more time to process. Don't take so long to update the next one!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I'm sorry I take so long... real life gets in the way. So, thank you for keeping up with me when I do post. Yes, HG really has a lot to think about! Thanks for reviewing!!
That is just nuts! For Snape to turn it all around like that and try to push it off on her? That is typical abuser behavior. It is no excuse. He was her teacher, she was his student. Then after that was over, he stalked her and violated her body! I don't know if this is a Snape Hermione should take back. He is very twisted and needs dominance over his obsession to compensate for his own inadequacies. That is how women get killed.Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hey Livvy! I know this is nuts, but I intended this Snape to not be good when I began writing this story... How have you been? I emailed you a while ago... Miss you.Shell~
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
I was waiting for you after I sent you all the chapters for the fic you are beta-ing. Something exciting might happen tonight. I write you tonight when I get the news.Livvy
Very intense chapter. Severus certainly did some creepy things.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes he did! Thanks for reading~
This was an intense and excellent chapter! I loved it. Thanks for updating, shellsnapeluver!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
*giggle*, thank you Saravasti!! *hugs*
Poor Hermione. She has to be so confused.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, a bit--but she has a lot of time on her hands with being locked away, so... they will hopefully work through it. thank you!
That was an incredible chapter. I like that Hermione didn't forgive Sev without at least some fight!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, of course she would put up a fight! She's a fiesty little thing! lol! THank you for reviewing!
OH wow! That was worth the wait!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, thank you very much!
Wow!! Lulabell72 suggested this fic, and I have to say that I love it!!! They are in character as much as they can be and my heart is racing! Can't wait for more!! I am only rating 4 because it is hard to rate a story this soon, but I like everything so far!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
OMG, wow for me too! Thank you for coming over here from Lulabell's deviantart... that means the world to me. So glad that I didn't freak you out, because it is very dark and touches on a lot of issues and scary things... And thank you so much for reviewing... and I'm happy to know I got your heart racing, that's good--hopefully it will stay like tht through the entire story! heheheh... Shell~
Well, I must admit, this does creep me out! I have an extremely hard time trying to imagine Severus being like this. Therefore, if Severus were everything that I cannot imagine him to be, this might be what he would be like... [I was never one of those that doubted his loyalties to the Light.] Aside from that, I do not understand the pleasure some people derive from abusing another, especially as a form of sexual thrills.
Since it is an interesting [i.e. twisted] story, I will ‘put up with your creepiness’, too, as I want to know what your intentions are with the story. Hang on Hermione … seems you’re in for a bumpy ride!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I never doubted Severus either, that is why I am challenging myself and writing this... believe me, this is very hard to do, all my other stories are with a Severus who wouldn't do this--mean and cynical, yes--but not like this. I don't think either of us could understand the mind of someone who is like this... he is VERY decitful in this and you are right, she IS in for a bumpy ride--it gets worse before it gets better...But any time you feel like it's too much and need to bow out, I'll understand, I'll hate to lose you as a reader, but I know this fic is difficult for many... Thanks!
Response from Darque Hart (Reviewer)
You are a very good author and believe me, I've read enough fanfiction over the years to recognize what a rare breed good authors are ... so, no, you won't lose me as a reader.Besides, I am quite old mature enough to know a story can't hurt me. Squick briefly, but not hurt. [All us mature people use the word 'squick'.]
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow, I am very touched to know I won't lose you as a reader, thank you, really. You're right, it won't hurt you, squick, oh yes! Make you think and bother you, I hope so... I try to push the limits on things with this story and my art, mostly my art and I cause a lot of problems with it and get it kicked off deviantart, but I need to push limits and challenge myself. I just hope, by the end, Snape's reasons are clear and I dont' look like a fool for writing him in this way! hehehe...
Wow, Severus is definitely manipulative and very dark here -- I'm not used to reading darkfics, but I can definitely say that I am enjoying this one! Good job!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, yes he is. This is not fluff, although I will tell you he does have a heart and he does end up loving her, but his actions get much worse before that happens... Thank you for reading and trying out this darkfic!
Anonymous
Still love this scene. There is something seriously wrong with me... Hahahaha!
You're doing great. Let's see what the evil bastard gets up to next. (evil Snape?oh noes, but Snapey is such a teddy bears! oh noes!)
Author's Response: bwhahahahah... you got it babe! Teddy bear snape my ass! And something wrong with you??? Shit... I wrote the damn thing... what do you think that makes me!!! hahahahah...
Well, your Snape is definitely creepy. I hope he gets what he deserves soon.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi Sunny,No, it will not be soon... Thanks for reading, though!
I'm still unsure where exactly this is going, but I'll keep reading!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thanks gabi, there are reasons behind everything, which will be discovered at the end, so I hope you can contiune to read because it will get much worse before better...
The ending was the best. He is one sick and twisted fuck, I tell ya! Will we ever know what happened to Hermione that gave her such a bruise?Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Glad you like the ending--that was my fav!!! The bruise was from the previous chapter when he attacked her in her bedroom and snatched her face, he squezzed it so hard that he bruised her...:)
i've heard of a "pearl necklace" not sure what the M.I.N.E. thing would be called. i think Severus is going to be having a hard time trying to break Hermione's mind, she's so strong.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ah yes! The pearl necklace... lol. Hermione is very strong... but let's not forget, that Snape has been trained by the two most powerful wizards... and he is the master of knowing how to push buttons... Let's just say, Hermione--watch out. Thank you for reading!
Very evil, obsessed Snape! Great writing. Can't wait to see what's next.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you! Very obsessed indeed!
Oh drats! I can't believe there is only one chapter! I was all set to go onto chapter two and there was no forward button. Please make more chapters 
. I'll sit right here and wait while you type...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hehehee... sorry about that! Many more chapters to come, I promise! Thank you for reviewing!! :)
Love it! Intriguing start, my dear!You've got me hooked. I very much like your darker Snape...creepy!By the way, I have no problems with Snape correcting his own exams. All my profs did in college! I mean, who else is knowledgeable enough to assess at the N.E.W.T level? IMHO, as long as someone else invigilated the exam, then the proper assessment procedure as been followed!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, thank you! I didn't expect you to read this right now... with trying to do everything else!! So, this is a nice surprise!(Glad you through that thing in there about the exams... heheheh.. thank you!)
well he is definitely bad in this one, not much hope for redemption there.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Bad? Really... you think so? heheheheh... maybe not... heheheh... but maybe so...
I think you are brilliant! THe twinge of remorse, the blatant hatred of being called names, the stalking for three years- Good Lord! I've added this to my favs. I hope you'll update soon. And I know abouth the Grotto- he-he. Sometimes I love nasty bastard Snape! I just hope eventually she'll kick his ass into shape!Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you, dear! Oh, good, you are the first to mention the Grotto--just you wait... I hope you can handle the next chapter, it is MUCH worse than this one... heheheh
Wow.What a chapter.I like it. Your Severus is really dark, he's a bastard. But I think their entanglement will be quite interesting.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Bastard is a perfect term. Just wait until the rest of the chapters pop up... you'll be calling him a f*** bastard... Thank you for reviewing!
I love this story and hope you update soon!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
*blush* Thank you! I'm thrilled to know that you love it espeically in the first chapter! More is on it's way very soon!
I'm not sure what to think right now, but I'm very intrigued!!Good start, I'm looking forward to more.gab
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi there,Glad you are intrigued... even though you are a little unsure of how to react--that's okay! More is on it's way!thanks for reviewing!