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Consuming Me

1: No Longer a Student

2: Require Your Assistance

3: Slytherin Tactics

4: What I’d do For You

5: Promises, Promises

6: Dreams

7: The Wicked Games We Play

8: I Want You To Want Me

9: Horcrux Surprise

10: Trust in Me

11: I'll Be There For You

12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

13: Expect the Unexpected

14: Intimidation

15: The Storm is Brewing

16: Unsettling Surprises

17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

18: Man That You Fear

19: You Can't Handle the Truth

20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

21: Secrets Revealed

22: Battle of Evermore

23: Whispers of Treachery

24: Retaliation

25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

26: Pieces of My Heart

27: Come Break Me Down

28: A Curse Between Us

29: Stronger as One

30: Deceitful Strategies

31: Living Nightmare

32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Consuming Me

shellsnapeluver

656 Reviews   |   656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Smut Psychological Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 120,252 Words 32 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.

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Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: No Longer a Student

Chapter 2: Require Your Assistance

Chapter 3: Slytherin Tactics

Chapter 4: What I’d do For You

Chapter 5: Promises, Promises

Chapter 6: Dreams

Chapter 7: The Wicked Games We Play

Chapter 8: I Want You To Want Me

Chapter 9: Horcrux Surprise

Chapter 10: Trust in Me

Chapter 11: I'll Be There For You

Chapter 12: Blood Sugar Sex Magic

Chapter 13: Expect the Unexpected

Chapter 14: Intimidation

Chapter 15: The Storm is Brewing

Chapter 16: Unsettling Surprises

Chapter 17: Do Not Touch What is Not Yours

Chapter 18: Man That You Fear

Chapter 19: You Can't Handle the Truth

Chapter 20: Shame On Me For the Ruse

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Chapter 22: Battle of Evermore

Chapter 23: Whispers of Treachery

Chapter 24: Retaliation

Chapter 25: Dangerously In Safe Hands

Chapter 26: Pieces of My Heart

Chapter 27: Come Break Me Down

Chapter 28: A Curse Between Us

Chapter 29: Stronger as One

Chapter 30: Deceitful Strategies

Chapter 31: Living Nightmare

Chapter 32: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning


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shellsnapeluver

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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.

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Reviews for Consuming Me

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10/10

Maddie

At last Hermione realizes she has been an idiot, then she leaves Headquarters and continues to be an idiot. Aaarrrggg. Bloody typical. Exciting though. Poor Snape has to become a woman. I think this is Dumbledore punishing him; perhaps hoping Snape gets raped. Since Snape did not inform Dumbledore in advance of the attack, maybe this is a set up to dump his spy who is no longer useful. Not really fair since Hermione is the one who blabbed. On the other hand, Snape is responsible for setting up Jezzie as a spy for him to utilize to save him butt if needed to satisfy the Dark Lord. And he needed her to survive, didn't he?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

At last she understands. Somewhat... And of COURSE she would leave--it wouldn't be exciting if she didn't! hahahaahha.About Snape becoming a woman--in a way, yes, I think it is some sort of a punishment... however, he really was thinking about Snape's safety. Thanks for the review and rating my dear

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

At last she understands. Somewhat... And of COURSE she would leave--it wouldn't be exciting if she didn't! hahahaahha.About Snape becoming a woman--in a way, yes, I think it is some sort of a punishment... however, he really was thinking about Snape's safety. Thanks for the review and rating my dear

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!!!!

10/10

jasmineleigh

no no no thats a horrid cliffie its not nice update again soon.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hello

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

! Thank you for reviewing and posting a rating, they mean a lot to me. Updating soon, I promise.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hello

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

! Thank you for reviewing and posting a rating, they mean a lot to me. Updating soon, I promise.

10/10

Nessa

Naughty Naughty!!!!! But.. I love the wickedness!! MuHAHAHABut don't be to wickedly long on updating will you? x

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!! Hi, dear.Thanks for reviewing!!! *smoochees*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

!! Hi, dear.Thanks for reviewing!!! *smoochees*

10/10

braye27

OMG!  Hermione is in grave trouble, and all because she couldn't resist telling Jezzy the Secret to Beauxbatons.  On top of that mistake, she left Grimmauld Place to see Jezzy and find out who she might have told.  And now she has been taken captive by Fenir Greyback and Rodolphus Lestrange.What in the world is going to happen to her?  Will Severus be able to get Dumbledore or some of the Order members into Malfoy Manor, AND save Hermione without getting killed himself?This was an evil cliffie you've left us with.  But, since you are the author, you can do anything you choose to do and we, loyal readers that we are, will wait upon your good grace until you deign to favor us with the next chapter.  And make it snappy!Great chapter, dear.Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hello my dear Beth,Oh yes, Hermione is in a lot of trouble. It's hard to be so mad at her when you know what is coming...

And yes, we all want Snape to save her!!

But... will he??

*shrugs*

I'm such a tease, I know. I'll behave next chapter...

*giggles*

Hugs,

Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hello my dear Beth,Oh yes, Hermione is in a lot of trouble. It's hard to be so mad at her when you know what is coming...

And yes, we all want Snape to save her!!

But... will he??

*shrugs*

I'm such a tease, I know. I'll behave next chapter...

*giggles*

Hugs,

Shell~

10/10

Lkmaide

.....

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Wow. That bad? Confused?Worried?WTF is going to happen now?lol.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Wow. That bad? Confused?Worried?WTF is going to happen now?lol.

10/10

Byrony

Stupid, stupid Hermione.. Love the story.. : )

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, she did a stupid thing. But, she is not perfect. And she's 17. But more on that later...Thank you for reviewing! I hope to see you more often!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yeah, she did a stupid thing. But, she is not perfect. And she's 17. But more on that later...Thank you for reviewing! I hope to see you more often!

0/10

Terab

Oh that was mean!!!!  Please tell you we won't have to wait long to find out what happens?????

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Was it really? *cackles*No, the wait shouldn't be too long... Thanks for your review!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Was it really? *cackles*No, the wait shouldn't be too long... Thanks for your review!!

10/10

kizzy7

Up next Hermione dies?! For half a second I believed you, lol. Although, our clever Hermione has not been very clever, now has she? And what will Severus do?! I have no idea. Gah, update soon!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

heheheheh... Well, I got ya for that half of second! So, I must squeee to that. No, she hasn't been clever. But she has her reasons. Don't be so hard on her... poor little deary *cackles evily*Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

heheheheh... Well, I got ya for that half of second! So, I must squeee to that. No, she hasn't been clever. But she has her reasons. Don't be so hard on her... poor little deary *cackles evily*Thanks so much for the review and rating!

10/10

sinbad

Definitely an evil author...OK, Hermione figured out her mistake, will Jezzie help her?  Or at least try to?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

lmao. Yes, yes I am. So, hmmm...what about Jezzie.... I dunno what is in store for her right now... But, I wouldn't worry about Jezzie helping her. Hermione has other things to worry about. Thank you so very much for the review.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

lmao. Yes, yes I am. So, hmmm...what about Jezzie.... I dunno what is in store for her right now... But, I wouldn't worry about Jezzie helping her. Hermione has other things to worry about. Thank you so very much for the review.

0/10

Isode

Agh! I can't read with my hands covering my eyes!

Response from Isode (Reviewer)

A quote came to mind after I submitted this in regards to Hermione. "All things truly wicked start from an innocence." Ernest Hemingway, A Moveable Feast

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes you can! Just peak through your fingers--you can do it!!! hahahahah.And wooo. That quote. That's deep,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

. I love it.Thanks so much!

Response from Isode (Reviewer)

A quote came to mind after I submitted this in regards to Hermione. "All things truly wicked start from an innocence." Ernest Hemingway, A Moveable Feast

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Yes you can! Just peak through your fingers--you can do it!!! hahahahah.And wooo. That quote. That's deep,

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

. I love it.Thanks so much!

10/10

mummy

Oh your'e one bad, bad girl ....leaving chapter like that. As usual  haven't an idea what the hell going on but that's why I love this story Many thanks

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I'll take spankings!!!! *bends over*What? no?lol.Yes, I think it is safe to say,"Shit is starting to hit the fan!"YOu will find out soon what it is all about... soon...Thank you for the rating and review! *hugs*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I'll take spankings!!!! *bends over*What? no?lol.Yes, I think it is safe to say,"Shit is starting to hit the fan!"YOu will find out soon what it is all about... soon...Thank you for the rating and review! *hugs*

10/10

color

I can't say that I'm particularly upset right now.  You said it:  HG's arrogance, carelessness, indiscretion and willfulness are catching up with her.  Clearly, the Order misplaced their trust in her (loved the piercing look from DD), and I'm surprised that they trusted someone so young and inexperienced with such an important secret in the first place.  The girl is clueless, and unfortunately doesn't have the sense to realize it and to listen to those who do know.  What a painful way to learn her lesson, though.  Still, maybe it takes a mistake of that magnitude for HG to learn humility and her lesson, and I'm sure it will crush her self-confidence.  Will SS be able to raise her back up?  That would be a nice equalizer.I'm taking the HG of this story as a substantial liberty from Canon HG.  While Canon HG is arrogant when it comes to her studies, she isn't careless, impetuous (e.g. tries to talk Harry out of his rescue of Sirius at the MoM), or indiscrete (e.g. keeps mum about Lupin's condition).  She's humble enough to listen to others' judgment (e.g. trusting DD's faith in SS), and to know that she might not have all of the information to make a wise decision (e.g. again, the rescue of Sirius and trusting DD's judgment).  And while Canon HG is determined to succeed, she is not Harry-level willful.  This story has a much more immature HG, but it could be that your HG is more realistic than that of JKR.  What under-20 girl-woman, no matter how bright, is fully experienced and fully tested?  I'm sure Wonder Woman made big mistakes when she was young.Soooo... what's going to happen when things catch up with SS?  Will DD uncover Jezzie's obliviates?  Will another Deatheater tell DD or HG of SS's duplicity?  Will HG find out that SS is Jezzie's controller?  Will HG even care that that's how SS was able to save Jezzie's life?  Will SS let HG hang for her indiscretion?I assume that Greyback/R. Lestrange sent the "Voldy" note.  Will Voldy stay true to his word and let SS take revenge?  I hope so.  I'd like to see just how powerful and skillful SS really is in a duel.  Unfortunately, we never get to see the full scope of his dueling abilities in Canon.Ah, I've rattled on long enough.  Great job!  Loved it!  UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Response from color (Reviewer)

D*mn!  I assume that Chapter 17 is where HG's rape dream comes to fruition.  Ouch!  Another very painful way to learn humility and prudence.  From the rape dream, I assume that SS (out of commission due to injuries) will not rescue her in time.Whew!  You certainly don't pull your punches.  (That's a good thing.)  I wonder if you're going Karmic:  HG getting raped to balance the rapes/deaths of the Beauxbatons students.  If she gets raped, one can only hope that the Order (i.e. DD) will forgive her enough to help her cope/recover; but I wouldn't want to see her rape as a get-out-of-jail-free card for her indiscretion.  While Karma might tie the two incidents together (as well as the same HG shortcomings), they are still separate issues.  Take care of her, but make sure that she learns.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi, dear...Wow!! I am... all tongue tied at your WONDERFUL review. Thank you so much.Still, maybe it takes a mistake of that magnitude for HG to learn humility and her lesson, and I'm sure it will crush her self-confidenceThis was perfect because sometimes, it takes something HUGE to open a person's eyes, don't you agree?What under-20 girl-woman, no matter how bright, is fully experienced and fully tested?  I'm sure Wonder Woman made big mistakes when she was young.Brilliant. You've said it! Thank you so much. This is the point that I am making here... Hermione MAKES mistakes. Now, like the Canon HG vs this one, we see Hermione from Harry's POV, and he sees her as the one with all the answers. Yes, we know she does those things, but we don't really see her falter... too much. She DOES break into Snape's store. The point is that HG does fuck up. And when she does, it is usualy a big time thing. Also, her converstations with Jezzie is important. She tells her things for a reason. But it really just makes my point that she isn't 'wonder woman' and that we cant forget that she is 17.As far as the note from 'voldy'. You got it. G and L sent it. Good call.

And we WiLL get to see Snape battle, if all keeps going the way I have it planned, but not with G and L... he does... other things...

And you are right again about HG's dream coming true... *cue scary music*

No, I don't 'pull my punches' bwhahahah that was funny, I tell it ALL.

Believe me, I will take care of hermione and she is going to learn, not straight away... but over time.

Thank you again for such a well thought out review. I really appreciate it.

Shell~

Response from color (Reviewer)

D*mn!  I assume that Chapter 17 is where HG's rape dream comes to fruition.  Ouch!  Another very painful way to learn humility and prudence.  From the rape dream, I assume that SS (out of commission due to injuries) will not rescue her in time.Whew!  You certainly don't pull your punches.  (That's a good thing.)  I wonder if you're going Karmic:  HG getting raped to balance the rapes/deaths of the Beauxbatons students.  If she gets raped, one can only hope that the Order (i.e. DD) will forgive her enough to help her cope/recover; but I wouldn't want to see her rape as a get-out-of-jail-free card for her indiscretion.  While Karma might tie the two incidents together (as well as the same HG shortcomings), they are still separate issues.  Take care of her, but make sure that she learns.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hi, dear...Wow!! I am... all tongue tied at your WONDERFUL review. Thank you so much.Still, maybe it takes a mistake of that magnitude for HG to learn humility and her lesson, and I'm sure it will crush her self-confidenceThis was perfect because sometimes, it takes something HUGE to open a person's eyes, don't you agree?What under-20 girl-woman, no matter how bright, is fully experienced and fully tested?  I'm sure Wonder Woman made big mistakes when she was young.Brilliant. You've said it! Thank you so much. This is the point that I am making here... Hermione MAKES mistakes. Now, like the Canon HG vs this one, we see Hermione from Harry's POV, and he sees her as the one with all the answers. Yes, we know she does those things, but we don't really see her falter... too much. She DOES break into Snape's store. The point is that HG does fuck up. And when she does, it is usualy a big time thing. Also, her converstations with Jezzie is important. She tells her things for a reason. But it really just makes my point that she isn't 'wonder woman' and that we cant forget that she is 17.As far as the note from 'voldy'. You got it. G and L sent it. Good call.

And we WiLL get to see Snape battle, if all keeps going the way I have it planned, but not with G and L... he does... other things...

And you are right again about HG's dream coming true... *cue scary music*

No, I don't 'pull my punches' bwhahahah that was funny, I tell it ALL.

Believe me, I will take care of hermione and she is going to learn, not straight away... but over time.

Thank you again for such a well thought out review. I really appreciate it.

Shell~

10/10

makaem

Normally, I feel a little odd when I review this story.  I like it so much, but I'm never really certain what I'm feeling.  But today I'm irritated. At Hermione, I think; although the other characters are on my list too.  Oh, and that was a mean place to end the chapter-- a really good place in terms of the story, but a mean thing to do to your readers.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*hugs* Don't feel odd, please. It's okay. I understand why you are so irritated with her! But, I promise, she has her reasons as why she tells Jezzie things... SOOOO glad you liked the ending  Thank you for reviewing. Really. It means so much to me.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*hugs* Don't feel odd, please. It's okay. I understand why you are so irritated with her! But, I promise, she has her reasons as why she tells Jezzie things... SOOOO glad you liked the ending  Thank you for reviewing. Really. It means so much to me.

10/10

livvy6

Oh crap! What a mess! I hope nothing bad happens to Hermione.Livvy

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, Livvy. You can only hope, but you know the truth... you know what is coming. But. There will be a little twist. Thanks for the reviews!Love Shell~

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, Livvy. You can only hope, but you know the truth... you know what is coming. But. There will be a little twist. Thanks for the reviews!Love Shell~

10/10

Anonymous

You're a nut, LOL. Your sense of humor is not very funny, missy! What were you thinking with those end of chapter notes?

So... want to go have a martini tonight? With moi?

Author's Response: Bwhahahahahhahaah.

i am wicked. I know this.

yes. I will apparate straight away to have a drink (and more) with u! Lol

10/10

ElectricLimeGreen

Thanks for sharing your story!  I admit, there were some tough spots for me to get through, but I knew getting in to the story that it was a darkfic.  I'm glad I pushed through those uncomfortable spots - I enjoyed seeing the twists and turns and your characters were just great.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

I'm really glad you pushed yourself even through those tough spots because let's face it, life has its uncomfortable moments! Thank you for enjoying the twists and turns and thank you for reviewing~!

0/10

Isode

I know, I know, I know that this obsessive maniacally possessive Snape would not do nor let anything hurt Hermione, BUT, I am not sure which side of the fence he is standing on right now. Either he is under the Imperio curse or Voldemort has promissed him anything, or the battle is over and he's just bringing her back to surprise her (that I highly doubt.) After reading this I had such a hard time getting to sleep! Now you have to update this quickly to cure my over-active-imagination-induced insomnia.Great Job, I'm lovin this Snape.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*gigglesnort* I'm glad it isn't clear what side of the fence he is on, because then... that wouldn't be fun, now would it? Your theories delight me--but which one is correct? If any? mwhahahahahahYou had a hard time getting to sleep? REALLY??? Aweee... you have really made me feel special, thank you. Usually, it is ME staying up to all hours thinking about a fic, tearing my hair out over it... so ,really, thanks for telling me that. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! *hugs*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*gigglesnort* I'm glad it isn't clear what side of the fence he is on, because then... that wouldn't be fun, now would it? Your theories delight me--but which one is correct? If any? mwhahahahahahYou had a hard time getting to sleep? REALLY??? Aweee... you have really made me feel special, thank you. Usually, it is ME staying up to all hours thinking about a fic, tearing my hair out over it... so ,really, thanks for telling me that. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! *hugs*

0/10

empathicslytherin

oh shite...the malfoy manor? what the hell. he said he was going to take hermione back to hogwarts!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

He did say that didn't he?Hmm... I guess this is a nice little lesson... do we trust in what Snape says or not?*cackles* Thanks for reading this all the way through!!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

He did say that didn't he?Hmm... I guess this is a nice little lesson... do we trust in what Snape says or not?*cackles* Thanks for reading this all the way through!!!

0/10

empathicslytherin

Omg....snape really loves to pick on peoples sore spots! lol

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahahah, yes, he does! Thanks!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Hahahah, yes, he does! Thanks!

10/10

empathicslytherin

..................god...I am sooo glad I dont piss anyone off and get stalkers...*thanks god*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*snorfle* Yeah... stalkers... pains in the arses!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*snorfle* Yeah... stalkers... pains in the arses!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing

10/10

Lkmaide

HOLY SHIT!!@@@!!  I'm guessing the soul she revealed may not have been her own.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Your enthusaim thrills me. hahahahahActually, the soul was hers, since she was the only person in the room.

Thank you for the review and rating!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Your enthusaim thrills me. hahahahahActually, the soul was hers, since she was the only person in the room.

Thank you for the review and rating!

10/10

theinvisibilitycloak

Oh, god, man, oh man, crap, damn, ooooooh, how I hate and love you at the same time. You're working me up, wrapping me around your finger and dropping me coldly and suddenly all in a matter of minutes. Such a cliffie!!!Lovely story. You certainly know how to draw the reader in. I love your tale to pieces and am extremely excited for the next chapter. Oh, goodness, I can't wait. No seriously, my eagerness is tangible.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

ROFLMFAO.You love to hate me, hmmm? hahahahahah. I AM an evil author!Thank you so much for the review, it really means a lot to me and makes me smile. *hugs*

Response from theinvisibilitycloak (Reviewer)

No problem. Your stories make my day, so we're even. I guess. Although you are a bit evil....damn you. Fuck, I still have that image of Snape peering creepliy at Hermione before taking her to the Manor. I WILL NOT sleep tonight (although he's kind of sexy when he's creepy....man i'm freaky). Now you make me want to write a creepy fic. *hugs back*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

A bit evil? *gigglesnort*I am a LOT evil!

If I can make my readers wiggle, I'm doing something right!

Oh, yes Creepy is an excellent word, my dear!!!

(believe me, creepy or not, I'd still shag the man)

And yes, go write a creepy fic, I'd love to read it!!!!

mwuahahahahah

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

ROFLMFAO.You love to hate me, hmmm? hahahahahah. I AM an evil author!Thank you so much for the review, it really means a lot to me and makes me smile. *hugs*

Response from theinvisibilitycloak (Reviewer)

No problem. Your stories make my day, so we're even. I guess. Although you are a bit evil....damn you. Fuck, I still have that image of Snape peering creepliy at Hermione before taking her to the Manor. I WILL NOT sleep tonight (although he's kind of sexy when he's creepy....man i'm freaky). Now you make me want to write a creepy fic. *hugs back*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

A bit evil? *gigglesnort*I am a LOT evil!

If I can make my readers wiggle, I'm doing something right!

Oh, yes Creepy is an excellent word, my dear!!!

(believe me, creepy or not, I'd still shag the man)

And yes, go write a creepy fic, I'd love to read it!!!!

mwuahahahahah

0/10

kimjo2

whoa...didn't see that coming!  can't wait for the next chapter.  thanks so much

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You didn't?? heheheheh... good! I love being able to throw my readers off balance! (Although, I did title the chapter "Expect the Unexpected")*snerk*Thanks~

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

yes, but even when you expect the unexpected you still don't know what to expect!  *snerk, snerk, snort*

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

You didn't?? heheheheh... good! I love being able to throw my readers off balance! (Although, I did title the chapter "Expect the Unexpected")*snerk*Thanks~

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

yes, but even when you expect the unexpected you still don't know what to expect!  *snerk, snerk, snort*

0/10

Red_Sky_At_Night

Malfoy Manor based shenanigans or not, I'd still shag him.I mean, not that I'm really shallow or anything...Another cracking good chapter. Keep up the good work, eh?

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, darling... you and me both. Good or Bad Snape... I'd have him in my bed... hell, anywhere for that matter, in a heartbeat! Thanks for the review! I love getting them!!

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

Oh, darling... you and me both. Good or Bad Snape... I'd have him in my bed... hell, anywhere for that matter, in a heartbeat! Thanks for the review! I love getting them!!

10/10

braye27

Hermione is in love with Severus Snape!  And..."...she knew that she and Snape fit together......He had fallen in love with her too; she just knew it. She felt it deep in her soul."While Severus had to leave to answer Voldemort's summons, Hermione learned from the Book how to reveal a soul.  But then Severus returned—or did he?  Was that really Severus?  Lordy! I have no idea.  Voldemort could have invaded Snape's mind and gleaned the information to answer the questions Hermine asked to tell whether it was really Severus at the door.  The Dark Lord could have cast a glamor or used Polyjuice Potion to make Lucius or another Death Eater look like Severus...Somehow, the Severus that came back did not seem like the Severus who had left just hours earlier.  There was just something off about his behavior.  He was almost feral in his actions towards her when she allowed him entrance.  It's almost like he would behave rougher than Hermione would have expected, and then catch himself and say something to cover it over.  But when she asked him what happened, had he been harmed, he said something totally unexpected--“If I had any intention of telling you that, don’t you think I would have answered you the first time,” he snapped, turning on his heel and looking sinister. That screamed "Impostor" to me.And then he acted so unlike himself when he was preparing to Apparate them to HOGWARTS, that's what he'd said, to HOGWARTS!  But then they end up at Malfoy Manor!!!  EEEEEEEK!!!Could it have been an impostor?  Lucius or Rodolphus or Greyback or anyone of dozens of other Death Eaters....Evil Cliffie!!!  Shell, you're torturing me here!  Please, pretty please update soon?  This is a great chapter and one of the busiest ones!!!Beth

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*cackles* So, IS it Severus who really returned? He answered her questions correctly, didn't he?

I love your theories! I would like to point out, that yes... he behavior was very off.

Or was it?

He snapped at her, kinda like the 'old days' right?

And taking her to Malfoy Manor! How DARE he do such a thing! heheheheheh. Damn him!

Putting chapter in queue tomorrow...

I love your reactions on this, thank you so much for expressing them!

Shell~

Ps... and ain't it just lovely that they love each other????

Aweeeee.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

YES!  YES!  YES!  Their love for each other is LOVELY!  I can't wait for the update to post cuz I'm gonna go crazy if I don't soon find out what's going on at Malfoy Manor.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*snicker* Your little head hitting wall cracks me up!!!Well, this is a pivotal moment, I'd say...I mean, what is going to happen at Malfoy Manor could go either way... it could be a good thing, or a bad thing.I bet it IS nerve-wracking, hmmm? muwhahahahahahh

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*cackles* So, IS it Severus who really returned? He answered her questions correctly, didn't he?

I love your theories! I would like to point out, that yes... he behavior was very off.

Or was it?

He snapped at her, kinda like the 'old days' right?

And taking her to Malfoy Manor! How DARE he do such a thing! heheheheheh. Damn him!

Putting chapter in queue tomorrow...

I love your reactions on this, thank you so much for expressing them!

Shell~

Ps... and ain't it just lovely that they love each other????

Aweeeee.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

YES!  YES!  YES!  Their love for each other is LOVELY!  I can't wait for the update to post cuz I'm gonna go crazy if I don't soon find out what's going on at Malfoy Manor.

Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)

*snicker* Your little head hitting wall cracks me up!!!Well, this is a pivotal moment, I'd say...I mean, what is going to happen at Malfoy Manor could go either way... it could be a good thing, or a bad thing.I bet it IS nerve-wracking, hmmm? muwhahahahahahh

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