Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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shellsnapeluver
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
Reviews for Consuming Me
As much as I am appalled by Severus' actions, I'm -almost- equally impressed with how smoothly he does the appalling things! Sometimes it is really difficult to love the 'bad boy'. Great writing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahahah... he is smooth isn't he? Like glass...Very sneak Slytherin, indeed.Thank you for your support!Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hahahah... he is smooth isn't he? Like glass...Very sneak Slytherin, indeed.Thank you for your support!Shell~
Okay this is such a change from your other piece, 'The Time Turner" that I don't know what to make of it.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you for reading TTT... and I am really glad you are reading this one. Yes, it is a huge change from what I have done in the past. Not only is the story totally dark, but my writing has grown and I am really proud of this one, even though I am making my readers push themselves outside of their own comfort zones...So, I hope you keep on reading... Thanks~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you for reading TTT... and I am really glad you are reading this one. Yes, it is a huge change from what I have done in the past. Not only is the story totally dark, but my writing has grown and I am really proud of this one, even though I am making my readers push themselves outside of their own comfort zones...So, I hope you keep on reading... Thanks~
Wow. Before, I was merely hooked. Now, I'm incontrovertibly addicted to this fic. Wow, that doesn't make any sense, but still. I love the deviousness of Snape. He's so dark and manipulative. Even though he's evil, I just love him!!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo, I got you addicted!! I love it! Thank you so much for your reviews and thoughts, I hope I keep on hooking you! lol
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo, I got you addicted!! I love it! Thank you so much for your reviews and thoughts, I hope I keep on hooking you! lol
I know that this is supposed to be a dark fic and Severus is a very dark and twisted individual in this fic but I can't stop myself from asking why Hermione is being so mean to him!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You know what? I am SOOOO thrilled that you asked me that because there's a reason for everything!Thank you for reading and leaving a review!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You know what? I am SOOOO thrilled that you asked me that because there's a reason for everything!Thank you for reading and leaving a review!!
Can I cast another vote for horny!Snape? Ha! Love him. LOVE him.I'm sooooo excited about this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. I sort of get the impression so far that Snape's undoubted evil is mingled with a terrible subconscious insecurity, and that's such a dangerous combination. *jumps and down in the manner of a hyperactive child* More! More! :-)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Horny!Snape!!!! Vote has been cast and results are in--ummmm yes. lol.Your impression of Snape is right on. Insecurity. Fears. Veryyyy dangerous. Your excitedness for this story makes me just want to stay up and write all night long, so thank you! More is on the way!Hugs,Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Horny!Snape!!!! Vote has been cast and results are in--ummmm yes. lol.Your impression of Snape is right on. Insecurity. Fears. Veryyyy dangerous. Your excitedness for this story makes me just want to stay up and write all night long, so thank you! More is on the way!Hugs,Shell~
Love evil!Snape. This story is just so delicious and creepy. Can't wait for more!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Delicious and creepy. I love that description!Thank you for your review~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Delicious and creepy. I love that description!Thank you for your review~
okay so I get that this is all dark, disturbing, twisted and completely wrong but it stilled made me laugh, does that make me bad?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Snuggleslut!I just revieved an Owl regarding you and the message reads:To my Slut,Yes, there is seriously something wrong with you and the men in the white coats will be snatching you any day now.You are a bad, bad girl and when, if ever, you get released from the place with lots of iron bars on it, you must serve a months worth of detention with nasty old Filch. Wearing only your knickers.Many Hugs,Lulabelle72Bwhahahahah... LB72 is so funny. Now, I say: I have my humour moments in this story... so it's okay to giggle... but laughing too much will result in another... punishment... lolThank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from snuggleslut (Reviewer)
I love you two, you're awesome.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Snuggleslut!I just revieved an Owl regarding you and the message reads:To my Slut,Yes, there is seriously something wrong with you and the men in the white coats will be snatching you any day now.You are a bad, bad girl and when, if ever, you get released from the place with lots of iron bars on it, you must serve a months worth of detention with nasty old Filch. Wearing only your knickers.Many Hugs,Lulabelle72Bwhahahahah... LB72 is so funny. Now, I say: I have my humour moments in this story... so it's okay to giggle... but laughing too much will result in another... punishment... lolThank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from snuggleslut (Reviewer)
I love you two, you're awesome.
Hmm... this just keeps getting more and more curious! I can't wait to see what Severus tries next.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yes... he tries and does a lot more!The plot keeps getting thicker as more chapters post! heheheh...Thank you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yes... he tries and does a lot more!The plot keeps getting thicker as more chapters post! heheheh...Thank you!
Anonymous
Hehe, I love horny!Snape, even if he's also evil!Snape. Maybe more if he's also evil!Snape... Hmm...
Great work! Chilling and creepy, but great!
First reviewer! Na nana na na!
Author's Response: Do you not remember your own warning about being the first reviewer??
Oh, wait.
You'd probably ENJOY having a happy face tattoo...
So, since you are reviewing first for a Death Eater what shall the torture be...
Well... do you remember Chapter 10 that you just got done betaing?
Pick a girl. And we'll use that.
Muwhahahahahahah...
j/k... or am I?.... or am I kidding about that? Hmm... I've confused myself now. heheheheh.
How about I just hug you till you turn blue.
lulabelle72's response: um, hug, please!
I must second that emotion that lulabelle72 wrote: I love horny Snape!! I don't mind evil Snape, dark Snape, or bastard Snape as long as Hermione is wise to his BS. It looks as though she's not going to be hoodwinked easily. I hope she remains strong and combative against Snape's evil intentions.Can not wait for more!!!!Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hhahahah, yes horny!snape is great! Wise to Snape's BS... well... I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say... it will all start coming back to her.Thank you for supporting me, Livvy!Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
hhahahah, yes horny!snape is great! Wise to Snape's BS... well... I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say... it will all start coming back to her.Thank you for supporting me, Livvy!Shell~
So I was browsing back through the WIP's I'm following, and read your last review for this chapter. You say that you thought people had given up on this one. I hope that is in jest. You dragged me kicking and screaming and forced me encouraged me to read this story, and it turned out to be absolutely fabulous. Don't you dare leave us dangling forever! If you do, I swear I will go round up Severus Snape myself and send him right over to your house to... wait, I was supposed to be thinking of a punishment. Damn! But RL, I can understand. So, just putting in my two cents worth. We're all still out here waiting for the next installment of this great tale!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are such an awesome little gift to me... thank you for such a wonderful review and a bit of an ass-chewing out. I loved every minute of it. heheheheh... Well, honestly, I did think that because it's been so damn long since an update and I'm like 2 chapters from being finished. Shame on you, Shell! But, thank you for sticking around and waiting on the ending--I worked on it over the weekend.. .I know it's not much, but just know I think about getting this story done everyday. Love ya!
Love, love, love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ooooo, thank you~ Can't wait to hear more of your thoughts!~
Oh wow, he has a way of destroying the Horcuxes and saving Harry? I gasped when Sverus said that the Horcruxes could be destroyed by a potion. Gads - and that Harry ... I am really looking forward to reading the next few chapter. Sorry, it took me so long to read this one. BUt I've been typing like a mad woman between every thing going on in RL. How are you, doll?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh gosh, I thought everyone had given up on me and this story! I haven't updated in MONTHS... I understand it's hard to catch up on things between RL and writing and ... everything in between... I'm just busy working, moved and today is first day with internet. Too much going on, not enough time to get back into fandom...How you doing?
S~
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Of course I'm following this story! Even if I have to quickly review the previous chapter to remember what had happened... (Only had to do this this last time, lol) But I like it, so unless you abandon it, I'm here for the long haul. (I'm just as bad, I really need to update Parchment.)I'm doing well. Typing when I can, but Mum's needed me a lot lately, the holidays have made work really busy, and now Christmas is looming ... lol M~
OOOH I LOVE MORAL-LESS COLD HEARTED ANGSTY SNAPE- 
AND IT WAS SCARRRRRY HOW SNAPE BEHEADED THOSE MEN
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you!!!!! I loved writing that! Keep reading and reviewing--I'd love to hear more from ya! Shell~
lovely twists and turns! thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
No, thank YOU for reading!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
No, thank YOU for reading!
Severus is going to learn the hard way it seems never to keep secrets from Hermione. I have the feeling that he's going to tell her about what he did to Jezzie. Man, will she be even more pissed than she is now. I wouldn't be surprised if she punches him.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh! A punch!! Brilliant! hahahahah, it would serve him right though... Thanks for reviewing!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh! A punch!! Brilliant! hahahahah, it would serve him right though... Thanks for reviewing!!
Still don't know what the hells going on. Well forget what I thought. Brililant. Many thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
bwhahahahahha!! Yeah, it's a crazy ride, isn't it?? lol thanks!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
bwhahahahahha!! Yeah, it's a crazy ride, isn't it?? lol thanks!
The only word I can come up with at the moment is 'blimey'. So - blimey!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I happen to like that word a lot too! 
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I happen to like that word a lot too!
One secret confessed, more to come clean on. Boy, weren't those kids monsters. That was just cruel. Talk about cruel, this was a short but meaningful chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. Maybe Severus will gear up his courage and come clean to Hermione, or not. She is trashing his office after all. ;)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Exactly! And you know what? Kids are cruel. Sooooo very cruel, and for someone like Sev--oh, that is just a break in the ol' self worth. And, all will be revealed soon enough to Hermione. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Exactly! And you know what? Kids are cruel. Sooooo very cruel, and for someone like Sev--oh, that is just a break in the ol' self worth. And, all will be revealed soon enough to Hermione. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
SQUEE!Oh, you kow why I LOVE this story so much? Your characters are so freaking REAL in their thoughts and reactions, although they speak better than I would, lol. That Severus doesn't like surprises because of what he has been through, that he could admit that he was afraid she wouldn't want him, makes him so vulnerable and human despite the nastiness. That Hermione can be mad and hurt and still be thankful and understanding. And revenge, by him and by her, to lash out against those that have hurt them. I so can't wait for the next bit! Thank you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, my lovely.Thank you for reviewing here, even though you have already read this. lol.Everything you said was correct--thank you for picking up on that!
Love you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, my lovely.Thank you for reviewing here, even though you have already read this. lol.Everything you said was correct--thank you for picking up on that!
Love you!
Hope Hermione kicks his butt, but I do want them to work it out. I'm sure she'll be horrified when she finds out what happened to her cousin and how Severus has betrayed her. Great chapter!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, Hermione is pretty fierce! Watch out Sev! I want them to work it out too... but, that depends on them... lol.Thank you for reviewing! *hugs*
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, Hermione is pretty fierce! Watch out Sev! I want them to work it out too... but, that depends on them... lol.Thank you for reviewing! *hugs*
I love this chapter! A sneaky-Slytherin acting Hermione is wonderful. I think it shows Snape she can easily equal him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, thanks! I agree--Hermione can equal him. That is why he is so obsessed with her, he knows that. She is the only one who can, she is the only one who can challange him. He does not want to lose her either.Thank you for reviewing, I really do love to read em!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, thanks! I agree--Hermione can equal him. That is why he is so obsessed with her, he knows that. She is the only one who can, she is the only one who can challange him. He does not want to lose her either.Thank you for reviewing, I really do love to read em!
Another wonderful chapter I am really enjoing this tale so much. I only hope that Severus hasn't lost Hermione for good, I think that he should just come clean to her though, because even though he does love her he needs to tell her of his manipulations. Honesty is always the best policy. Love this so much, love you characterization of Snape, it's totally spot on. Can't wait to see what the other secret is. Great Job!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow thank you! Truths will start to come out, especially after what happens next....It thrills me that you like this Snape! Thank you for telling me. ANd thank you for reviewing, I hope to see many more!Oh yes, that other secret... dun du dunnnn. hehehehe... Thanks~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Wow thank you! Truths will start to come out, especially after what happens next....It thrills me that you like this Snape! Thank you for telling me. ANd thank you for reviewing, I hope to see many more!Oh yes, that other secret... dun du dunnnn. hehehehe... Thanks~
Beware, Severus! The lioness showed its claws.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Rowr!!!! *g*Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Rowr!!!! *g*Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ha! Good old Hermione putting Severus in his place!! Looking forward to the kissing and making up now!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.