Consuming Me
shellsnapeluver656 Reviews | 7.09/10 (656 Ratings, 0 Likes, 373 Favorites )
What would Severus Snape do to get what he desires the most? Anything--no matter the consequences.
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Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
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Ha! Good old Hermione putting Severus in his place!! Looking forward to the kissing and making up now!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, the kissing and makeup will be waiting for a while--we are NOT over yet. Lots more angst and drama--like I said, you have no idea what I am about to throw at you. I can't wait! hahahahah.
"Not here. I want to go somewhere private. Somewhere no one could bother us for some time.” She rested her warm cheek against his and whispered in his ear, “Take me to the Grotto, Severus.” How very Slytherin of our Hermione!And now that she is free from the promise made in the Grotto, Hermione is in Severus' office "...destroying it.” Hell hath no fury like a certain pissed off Gryffindor witch!LOL, poor Severus. Yes, he deserves some level of retribution, but having his office torn apart? Umm umm umm umm umm. How will he repair his situation with the witch of his dreams?You were right. I did not see this coming. I had thought she would go think about what Phineas had told her, and come up with a plan, but I never considered the kind of utilitarian seduction she perpetrated on our Potions Master. A very clever witch, she is!!!I love "Consuming Me" and the way you tell their story is brilliant! Keep it coming, dear, and thank you.Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, I agree--when that witch gets pissed off--of.shit. However, I PROMISE you, it is NOT what you think as WHY she is in his office doing that.Thanks for the words--hopefully it will help with the muse!!Love Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, I agree--when that witch gets pissed off--of.shit. However, I PROMISE you, it is NOT what you think as WHY she is in his office doing that.Thanks for the words--hopefully it will help with the muse!!Love Shell~
Okay, so I totally suck at predicting plot lines... I am so glad I continued reading this story, it's so good. The first few chapters were so dark that I wasn't certain about this story, but I love your writing so I decided to stick with it.(Your TimeTurner story is the bookmark link that leads me to PP). Anyway, fabulous story, I love it with the zeal of a convert.
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I am so glad you contiuned on as well, but I am going to warn you, it is about to get dark again. I mean, can't you just SEE everything crashing down around him? Poor Severus. And WOW! Really, that is awesome about Timeturner leading you here! Thank you for sharing that with me. (you should be happy to know that is my next project, writing tt 2 ) thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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I am so glad you contiuned on as well, but I am going to warn you, it is about to get dark again. I mean, can't you just SEE everything crashing down around him? Poor Severus. And WOW! Really, that is awesome about Timeturner leading you here! Thank you for sharing that with me. (you should be happy to know that is my next project, writing tt 2 ) thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Great chapter!Oh dear Severus isn't going to be very happy. But i think he's going to have o spill a few home truths to get her back.
Update again soon please!! lol
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I suspect he will be very angry that his office is getting destoryed. Oh, yes. Spill his guts... but not yet. Thank you for the review!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I suspect he will be very angry that his office is getting destoryed. Oh, yes. Spill his guts... but not yet. Thank you for the review!
*snicker* go Hermione, go!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are such an instigator. bwhahahahah.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You are such an instigator. bwhahahahah.
Purrrrr... An angry, strong Hermione - do you have any idea how much I like that? Facing him, making him do what she wants, and he honest enough to tell her the truth (well, at least about that bit ;-) Well done, dear. And destroying his office would be a thing only a young and upset woman would do. Fits perfectly.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you for reviewing, doll. I do like angry Hermione--she is very fun to write. And yeah, that is true, a young upset woman would do that, but I am telling you, you have no idea what is coming as to WHY she is tearing it up. *snickers* I can't WAIT for the next chapter! You will be shocked.I hope.Love you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Thank you for reviewing, doll. I do like angry Hermione--she is very fun to write. And yeah, that is true, a young upset woman would do that, but I am telling you, you have no idea what is coming as to WHY she is tearing it up. *snickers* I can't WAIT for the next chapter! You will be shocked.I hope.Love you!
Damn. You are right. I have no idea where you are going next. I feel a major pout coming on. 
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
A major pout! hell, she is destroying his office--more than that!! hahahahahah. Won't you be surprised in next chapter when you find out the truth...*snickers*Thanks~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
A major pout! hell, she is destroying his office--more than that!! hahahahahah. Won't you be surprised in next chapter when you find out the truth...*snickers*Thanks~
All right! Hermione getting her fight on! I love it. Now the pecker is going to get it royally! As he should!Great chapter!Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, yes he should. He has done some very bad things... but more on that next chapter!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes, yes he should. He has done some very bad things... but more on that next chapter!
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a few chapters but I have read. Oh God help Severus. Getting some idea's but I'm sure you'll confuse me again. many thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo!!! Ideas!!! Send them on! lol.Thanks for reading!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oooo!!! Ideas!!! Send them on! lol.Thanks for reading!
blod, gore squick, etc is ok for greyback and rudy. at least i hope that's who it's for. great update. thanks so much 
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yes... you can bet your sweet bottom that is what is up next for those too.Thank you for reviewing!! ANd I love your flame guy!! lol. Go get em!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Oh, yes... you can bet your sweet bottom that is what is up next for those too.Thank you for reviewing!! ANd I love your flame guy!! lol. Go get em!!!
You're right, it could've been much worse for Hermione. I keep forgetting about her promise in the Grotto. I can't wait to see what Severus does to those two, I can't even describe. I know he's going to be very imaginative in his torture of them, that's for sure.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, I hope what I have in store for those two statisfies... That silly promise saved her, hmmm?? Not so silly anymore is it? lol.Thank you so much for reviewing~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Well, I hope what I have in store for those two statisfies... That silly promise saved her, hmmm?? Not so silly anymore is it? lol.Thank you so much for reviewing~
Greyback and Lestrange are not long for this world. Severus is going to tear them, piece by miserable piece, into a pile of bloody guts.I'm glad that Hermione's promise to Severus in the Grotto protected her, and that Ron and Harry found her in time to get her to Madam Pomfrey.This was a very tightly written chapter... everything happened "just in the nick of time." Good job!!!Beth
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You think Severus would really do that? REALLY??? But..but... he's so... nice.mwhahahahahahah. Yeah fucking right. Greyback and Lestrange will WISH he would just AK them, but I promise, pain will be involved. Yep, just in the nick of time is right! Thanks for the support!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You think Severus would really do that? REALLY??? But..but... he's so... nice.mwhahahahahahah. Yeah fucking right. Greyback and Lestrange will WISH he would just AK them, but I promise, pain will be involved. Yep, just in the nick of time is right! Thanks for the support!
I love reading murderous!Snape! Its just....wow. Cant wait to see what he does to them.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ooooo!!! I'm so excited! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! I hope you like the next chapter!Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ooooo!!! I'm so excited! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! I hope you like the next chapter!Shell~
You're evil, but I like it. :D The promise in the Grotto is like a fidelity Unbreakeable Vow. How cunning can Severus be to kill Lestrange and Greyback?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I am evil. Ask my betas. Yes, you are SO RIGHT!!!! ABout the grotto... I love how you put that, "fidelity unbreakable vow" Excellent
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!!! Thanks for reviewing
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I am evil. Ask my betas. Yes, you are SO RIGHT!!!! ABout the grotto... I love how you put that, "fidelity unbreakable vow" Excellent
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!!! Thanks for reviewing
OMG!! I hope you go into excruitiating detail over what he is gonna do to the wolf and Lestrange. And I look forward to relishing every detail. You rock and possibly rule the world! OMG I just realized, those poor boys at Durmstrag heehee veelas.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You know me, lkmaide. You know I'll write the details. heheheheh...Rule the world??? OMG. You are so damn AWESOME! You can one of my confidonts. (spelling, is wrong I know...) And dude. I just realized too about the boys and the veelas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahahah. Hope they have a full supply of contrectipive potions...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
You know me, lkmaide. You know I'll write the details. heheheheh...Rule the world??? OMG. You are so damn AWESOME! You can one of my confidonts. (spelling, is wrong I know...) And dude. I just realized too about the boys and the veelas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahahah. Hope they have a full supply of contrectipive potions...
Yes, the Grotto and LB72 are genius, as is your use of it. I have to say I'm relieved... for now. Though your evil A/N has me worried again. Though Hermione has been stupid, she does not deserve to be raped. And I look forward to Snape's revenge. *shudders* You have made him delightfully frightening in this. Oh and I loved Ron in this. And you for making him lovable. Eager for more! ~kizzy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi Kizzy,Thank you for such wonderful compliments, you are too sweet. No, Hermione doesn't deserve to be raped--no one does. But, hopefully a close call will have her thinking next time she does something stupid... hopefully. And you really should be shuddering over Snape. Now, if you saw him coming at you with murder and torture in his eyes, wouldn't you just drop dead from fright?I sure as hell would. Thank you so much about saying you like Ron in this. I feel bad for him sometimes, and I wanted him with the level head rather than Harry...More soon!Shell~
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Hi Kizzy,Thank you for such wonderful compliments, you are too sweet. No, Hermione doesn't deserve to be raped--no one does. But, hopefully a close call will have her thinking next time she does something stupid... hopefully. And you really should be shuddering over Snape. Now, if you saw him coming at you with murder and torture in his eyes, wouldn't you just drop dead from fright?I sure as hell would. Thank you so much about saying you like Ron in this. I feel bad for him sometimes, and I wanted him with the level head rather than Harry...More soon!Shell~
oh, man Snape is going to kill them isn't he? Poor Hermione. That was still awful.Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I believe it is safe to say Snape is going after them, yes.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
I believe it is safe to say Snape is going after them, yes.Thanks for reviewing!
Excellent. I see now. Snape on the warpath, yeah.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Warpath--you know it!!! I'd be shaken in my boots if I saw him coming. wouldn't you? Thanks love!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Warpath--you know it!!! I'd be shaken in my boots if I saw him coming. wouldn't you? Thanks love!
OMG! My heart was pounding so hard in my chest! Hermione got in a few good ones before they got her, and thank God one of Severus's misdeeds came in handy! He may not have been there in person, but he saved her just the same. And he used the "c" word again. Those bastards are doomed!!! Severus is going to lay such a hex weilding smack down on them, and I can't wait! Good for Ron for stepping up and being mature for once. He isn't given enough credit sometimes. Great chapter! Severus should take Hermione home, have gorilla sex, then go and kill some bastards. Then go back and have more sex! I loved this chapter!Get writing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes! His misdeeds came in handy!!! Soooooo lucky for him, hmmm??ANd yes, the bastards have a nasty death waiting for them... I hope you like it. Yes, you are right, Ron isn't the one who gets a lot of credit, so that is why I have him do that. More sex.... on the way... sometime... I hope... hehehehheeheLove you!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yes! His misdeeds came in handy!!! Soooooo lucky for him, hmmm??ANd yes, the bastards have a nasty death waiting for them... I hope you like it. Yes, you are right, Ron isn't the one who gets a lot of credit, so that is why I have him do that. More sex.... on the way... sometime... I hope... hehehehheeheLove you!
Yes, the Grotto scene now makes huge sense. I like this Snape better and better.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Gots to love that Grotto, don't ya??? I sure do... saved my story! Thanks for reviewing and leaving an awesome rating.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Gots to love that Grotto, don't ya??? I sure do... saved my story! Thanks for reviewing and leaving an awesome rating.
I hope Snape locks them in a small room with Hagrid's Skreswts!!! That will be a fun chapter to read.
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OMFG,
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, you are just too funny!!! Can you imagine!! arrrggghhh. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
OMFG,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
, you are just too funny!!! Can you imagine!! arrrggghhh. Thanks for reviewing!
Not bad, I liked the spell's effects.
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
omg that was sooo good! please hurry up and write more!! I can't wait!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ahhhh, thanks. *blush* More coming, soon.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Ahhhh, thanks. *blush* More coming, soon.
so is he evil!snape or not? only time (and you!) will tell. but only after an evil!cliffie (tm reg). i look forward to the next exciting adventure. thanks so much
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
well, kimjo, I dunno. You tell me what YOU think... is he evil or not?And those evil cliffies are not stopping any time soon! lol.Thanks so much for reviewing.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
well, kimjo, I dunno. You tell me what YOU think... is he evil or not?And those evil cliffies are not stopping any time soon! lol.Thanks so much for reviewing.
Oh God! How the hell is Severus going to explain all this to Hermione so won't kill him or blame herself even more? I hope like hell Hermione gets away - I can't believe they used glamours, those bastards! I hope she hexes their bits off! Severus better do something to help her! You are an evil person. Pure evil. Keep writing!!!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, they may be bastards... but darling, you've got to admit, that's pretty smart thinking. Thank you for reviewing. I love them. I love you.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of Consuming Me)
Yeah, they may be bastards... but darling, you've got to admit, that's pretty smart thinking. Thank you for reviewing. I love them. I love you.