Oh that dirty rotten scoundrel. I cannot believe that Jessie just bought into his deception like that! Well, so she's not the shartpest kinfe in the drawer. I had hoped she'd see a little of his wickedness.

Egads! I think I missed that part about this being so dark. He's horrible. I hope Hermione starts to get her wits about her. She is going to need all her intelligence to surrive him. (I really really hope he gets caught)

Hermione did not deserve that grade! If this is Severus' idea of how to get someone...oh does he have a lot to learn. He's horrible in this...

Love Jessie, btw~!

I ... have ... to ... stop... I only ... got ... two chapters ... left... But this is so GOOD! And you are right with that last sentence: If Sevi's not getting more careful very, VERY soon, Hermy really will be his COMPLETE undoing... Severa

Oh, oh, oh...I don't have time for more, I NEED to read the next chapter!Severa

Youuuuuu! It was nice of you to spare Sevi's books (at first) - that was the ONLY nice thing you did in this chapter! SeveraPS: That is, beside entertaining me a great deal.

Hermione in a destroying his office ... well, I guess it could use some fresh paint anyway. Maybe some Gryffindor red and gold? Is it only my imagining or was this chapter rather short? Somehow it was over before it really began - which leaves time for another one! Severa

An unwanted guest, hm? YOU are really sneaky too, the way you're lurking me into the next chapter every time - not that I wouldn't read them anyway. So Hermy is finally catching up a bit; oh poor Sevi. I'm not sure I wanna know what lies in store for him... Severa

That's it. Great work, Sevi. He made a big mess out of it though... Not that I mind, hehe.And he's got some new ingredients! I wonder when they will come into play...But poor Poppy... So concerned, so brushed off... See you tomorrow,Severa

Those ... those... - excuse my language - %&§"! %$&§ $%$%§%" "§$%§ (that's about the way it would have been written in a mickey mouse comic).I very much liked the exchange between Sevi and Harry & Ron. It's so lovely how they all care about her...I'm a little late today (it's nearly 7 am; I had to work last night) but I'll read another chapter. Can't wait to see what Sevi does to those two §"%!&$%. 'GO SEVI, GO' Severa

Sometimes sleep-sacrifice is worth it:I had a good laugh in the scene where Sevi turns into Tonks! It's great - and it SO makes sense. (Although I don't wanna imagine Lucius trying to rape poor Sevi) I got a little confused with Hermione's listing until i figured out that Mademoiselle Lane and the Beauxbatons Healer are actually the same person; otherwise they would have been eleven...And there! You admit it! You're teasing me! I'm contemplating leaving it off here though (although the 'Up Next'...)But this way I'll have something to look forward to next night. Besides there are only nine chapters left till I have to get involved in the REAL teasing of waiting for a new chapter.So... good night - I mean morning. (it's a quater past five) SeveraPS: Please don't feel sorry for keeping me up!

Again I can't say more than great work!But you really tease me with your 'Up nexts' I ... just CAN'T STOP! Severa

*Sigh*How very beautiful...*I wanted to take a break after this chapter (it's 4 am again) but your hint for the next chapter just doesn't allow fallen asleep. Severa

Oh merlin's beard what's he doing??? I have a small remark:Sevi's Patronus being a doe, doesn't that figure for a warning like 'DH Spoilers'? Severa

Finally! And about time!Good work there. The stuff about the virgin blood sounds interesting...Severa

Like I said I KNEW he wouldn't sleep on the couch - but this... I'll repeat for the third time: Sneaky SNEAKY little bastard... Ah, Egypt - I've always wanted to go there. But alas, try finding the time... And it's not always exactly save as well. But it must be magical...Although sneaking into a pyramid - and at night on top of it - seems rather creepy too me. Chambers build SUCH a long time ago... That is truly magical.The Beetles, the dead corpses... sounds a bit like The Mummy.And that flying out of a collapsing pyramid/cave I have some pictures of Aladdin in front of my eye...Is that what inspired you? I don't mean this as a bad thing. Merlin knows what I write is inspired by practically everything I've ever watched or read...I forgot to say that I find the flying a very nice touch! It's like ... there's this one place where he can be truly free... This really WAS a fun adventure!Thanks for that,Severa

I KNEW he wouldn't be sleeping on the bloody couch! That just wouldn't have been any fun...You write something about a delete scene so I checked the website stated in your profile but it seems I have to become a member of deviant art to read the content.Don't get me wrong but at the moment I'm a little tired of signing up for yet another account (I only signed into three fanfiction archives this week )So would you perhaps be gracious enough to send me the text by mail? That would be really great! (I love these smileys )I'll send you a message so you'll know my adress...Severa

A little lovers holiday - how exiting! Can you tell them to write me a postcard? I'll keep reading - and reading. (not very ingenious, I know)Severa

How very sweet...Told you i'd be back. Funny, I've thought for a long time that Sevi was a cat-lover.(Mine is actually lying on my chest right now... - she's black too)But that Boggart is really malicious...Severa

Jezzie... Well that's highly interesting...I'll keep reading.Well that Davis is really... I don't find a word right now.You're right, this chapter was really important to show Sevi's nature in your story. It will be interesting to see what he's doing with Jezzie - and, again, will Hermy ever find out...?Merlin help him if she does!I'm all poised to see his Boggart but alas I'll take a break (after the magical chap 7 :) if only to drag this whole thing out as long as possible and savour it. (Also it's a quart past six...)Hoping to be able to continue tomorrow,Severa

Naughty Phineas...Again I find a small detail a very nice idea of yours: Dumbledore's Muggle books. I can just imagine him in a little garden, outside a cottage. Inside maybe a bread is baking...Lovely...Severa

I'll say it again: Sneaky little bastard... :) - But it's so GREAT!I'm glad Lulabelle inspired you enough to go on with this story; it would have been a shame if it had been covered in dust on your computer!Severa

Nearly five in the morning and I'm still not tired.If I'll ever be I'm sure after this lecture I'll be dreaming about Sevi's 'nice arse'.I very much like your description of his room! It's a little more ... sophisticated is perhaps the word, than always this 'his room was dark, black everywhere etc.' I especially like the candles...And Hermy is so cute in caring for him. Even though - at least it seems to me - she's a little embarassed, intimidated by him. Merlin, everyone would be intimidated by a naked Sevi!Severa

H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S!He really IS one sneaky bastard - and I mean that in a very positive way.I kept laughing out loud all the time (just hope I didn't wake anyone here... :)And when Jezzie asks Sevi to join them for lunch!I'll leap straight into chap 4.And yes I am German. Soon I'll be a half-German, quarter french, quater english though since I'm going to London as an au-pair in a french family. :)About the Gummibärchen: It's funny but when you eat a piece of apple straight after it tastes like blackberry...Severa

You're right: it is a dark fic!But I absolutely love it already...I'm all eager to find out when Sevi will finally stop Obliviating her - and if she'll find out he ever did!Severa