Whew, intense. I have to admit, I never expected Lily's continuing attraction to Hermione. I expect a dire reaction from a scorned Lily. Heaven help them, if Lily doesn't turn to James. Can you imagine the future? ~boggles the mind~

That last scene was pretty... hot - I think I need to open a window or something. ;) I feel sorry for Remus and Lily is just killing me, she seems so... fake - your not writing her wrong, it's just how your characterizing her... the popular snob. Anyways, I want another chapter update as soon as possible... Lovin the story as usual!

Wow the whole Lily thing just blew my mind...

Wow, very intense. I liked it a lot!! Great work, keep the chapters coming!!gab

what a great job with your story arc!!  Didn't see that coming from Lily - and I am thrilled that Sev seems still reachable.Thank you so much for your hard work and for sharing!!  Keep it coming!

What's going to happen with Lily! I'm sorry Hermione is one lucky witch in this chapter, but I think I know who i'd choose and it's not the wolf or the girl with the pretty green eyes. Look forward to more.

Oh, the choices!  Know who I'd prefer! :)

And the next chapter is...where????  :PGreat fic and I'm dying to read the next chapter!!  Poor Remus, though...

Lily and Remus better start keeping their clammy hands off Hermione, she belongs with Severus and will never chose one of them above him. That said, I am very pleased about the reassurance she gave Severus at the end of this chapter, that she is still his and that she still loves him. Both of them will probably need the comfort and strength the love they have for eachother gives. I look forward to read more!

Loved what you did with Lily, it explains a lot. Can't wait to see where this story continues to go.

That was lovely.Sad and tragic, but still beautifully written.Looking forward to the next installment!Angela~~

Well, I guess that explains a lot about Lily.  She's nutters.  Not sure why she'd choose James over another girl, though.  Or is her patronus an otter now and it'll never change?It was nice to see that Severus' act was just that, an act.  I'm sure it will be an interesting year.I feel a bit bad for Remus.  At least Severus caught Hermione before she decided to give Remus a try.

Amazing, simply amazing. I love this story so much!!

It reminds me of the bit in 'Romeo and Juliet',  "...like powder and fire, which as they kiss consume."  Such passion, with no outlet is sad. How many times can she be propositioned in one day?? LOL

Wow. Nothing like three sexual advances in one chapter. I'm excited to know the full conversation that was quoted in the first chapter... Oh, I wish Hermione and Severus could get together sooner! It's painful. I love the story so far. You're writing is amazing. 

Good for Hermione chewing everyone out for not giving her all the information. How is she supposed to help Harry if she's not informed of all the pertinent information? I'm also glad for her that Poppy had something to help her with her hormones.  And as I have been all along, I am so sorry for Severus. I'm glad his life is much better in this story than in cannon, but I can't see a way for there to be a Severus Snape story where he doesn't get the shaft and he doesn't deserve it. They have a lot of make up sex accumulating.

She should have waited to come back. She should have stayed with him longer and come back when she was getting close to coming to Hogwarts. 

Why doesn't she wait and go back when she is about to turn 11 years old? That way Severus won't have to wait for as long for her to come to Hogwarts. As long as she doesn't meet herself isn't she OK? I know she risks changing her timeline but she's already been there a decade. A few more years with Severus in her disguise should be worth it for the two of them. That way she comes to school and he only has to wait 3 years for her to remember they are a couple. He won't have to wait for her to grow old enough to even start school.  Why wouldn't she do that for him? 

This has been on my 'to-do' list for a while (I think since chapter two or twelve) but wound up taking a hiatus from computer-reading and never quite made it back until I made the connection between you and La Chasseresse... Now I'm waiting for La Chasseresse to update and Love having this to read through. Hermione going back before even learning what she did in PoA is interesting--it's been a long time since reading a time-turner fic that started so young, if I even have. I like it. Love how everything's played out so far, and I quite enjoyed the opening glimpses of the discotheque era. I'm excited to continue.Ok, I'm going to shut up now so that I can go back to reading until my eyes drop :)

‘The prince of darkness is a gentleman.’ That quote sums Severus up perfectly. I do hope Severus can manage without Hermione because he doesn't seem he is able to at the moment.

I am hooked on this story. Sirius is a jerk, but we knew his relationship with Severus was always this way. So nothing new there. I love how Hermione knows exactly when things will be good between them. But I know there will be alot more drama before then. Thanks for the update and I look forward to more.

Wow, that was the longest fic I've ever read! Took me days! Great story. Nice to see them FINALLY get their happy ending. 

very sad.  i think he was a manipulative old bastard.  great update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Just heart breaking. So lovely and well put together and absolutely crushing.~Mia

I am thrilled with the new chapter. That was a lot of information for Severus to impart to Hermione and I think you did a good job of making it flow. Out of curiosity, will we be loosely following canon for the rest of the story with a camping trip and the Deathly Hallows and all that? Obviously the locket has already been destroyed. I'll follow you to the end, bub I think it would be more fun to deviate a little (besides removing Hermione) from canon. It just seems like I've already about a dozen of them.