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A Change is Going to Come

1: In Medias Res

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Ad Vitam Aeternam

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

51: Chapter 51

52: Chapter 52

53: Chapter 53

54: Chapter 54

55: Tempest Fugit

56: Chapter 56

57: Chapter 57

58: Chapter 58

59: Chapter 59

60: Chapter 60

61: Chapter 61

62: Chapter 62

63: Chapter 63

64: Chapter 64

65: Chapter 65

66: Chapter 66

67: Chapter 67

68: Chapter 68

69: Chapter 69

70: Amor Ignorat Tempus

71: Chapter 71

72: Chapter 72

73: Chapter 73

74: Dulcius ex Asperis

A Change is Going to Come

livvy6

1,513 Reviews   |   1,513 Ratings, 0 Likes, 730 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 286,373 Words 74 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

NOW COMPLETE!!! An accident with a Time-Turner in 1993 sends Hermione Granger back to 1973, and she is unable to return.

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Chapters (74)

Chapter 1: In Medias Res

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Ad Vitam Aeternam

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Chapter 55: Tempest Fugit

Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Chapter 70: Amor Ignorat Tempus

Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Chapter 74: Dulcius ex Asperis


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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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10/10

gabi1791

Wow, you are awesome, there is nothing else to say!!!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Thank you!!!Livvy

10/10

Nessa

Great update. I was wondering why Severus was going to Azkaban, then I realised in GOF the memroy shows Dumbldore testifying for him. You have woven yet a another great story.

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it. We're coming up real soon to another be reveal!Livvy

10/10

Lioness Rampant

"I will never stop loving you. Time can’t change it because what we have is real.”

Is this to be Severus's future response to Hermione then? =) I hope so - for her sake...

Excellent chapter - I know that you don't like changing the past - but PLEASE don't hurt the Longbottoms, at least not as much as they're hurt in the book - let them have a good ending?..

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

I'm sorry, I truly am. But at this point Hermione only knows Neville's parents are dead and that's why he lives with his Gran. It isn't until fifth-year that she learns the truth, so she has no way of knowing to stop them from getting hurt.Livvy

10/10

freeluciusnow21

I can think of nothing scarier than thinking of a formidable Severus trying to wake me up. Lovely chapter. I enjoy your take on Moody a lot, in previous chapters and now. He's got the right sternness: creepy but vigilant. Can't wait for more...

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Yeah, especially when the man is in his "bat suit" that she saw every day for two years as a student. That would scare anyone!Thanks!Livvy

10/10

debjunk

I'm not quite sure what the connection with Severus possibly going to Azkaban and her not telling him of the future is.  It would seem that now would be a great time to come clean.Loved Moody's reaction.  I just wanted Hermione to give it to him, though.  She showed much restraint.I'm just dying to know when you'll send her back, IF you'll send her back!  I'm sure there's lots in between, but I love to think ahead at what will happen then. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Well, Hermione doesn't want to ruin their "reunion" with such a shocker. But she will tell him soon. She didn't want to put that in his head and then have him sent off to Azkaban for a few weeks where he could go mad thinking about all the depressing outcomes.Hermione knew that it was only natural that Moody would be furious and suspicious with her, but in a much later chapter, Moody will get to see how his work didn't go to waste!Thanks,Livvy

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

OH, I get it!  That makes a lot of sense, actually!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Another great chapter, Livvy.  I'm an avid reader of your work, but I don't review often enough.    I think you are a terrific writer.  I have especially liked your SS/HG centric stories Bookends, Full of Grace,and Longing.  You have a compelling style, always leaving me wanting to read more.  Your story lines are logical and easy to follow.  Of course you write lemons quite well, indeed.  I hope the muse continues to inspire you for as long as you desire.

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Don't feel bad about the reviewing. I don't review as much as I should. THere are so many excellent fics out there that blow my mind away.As for lemons... my husband is my muse ;) He's from Italy and you know what they say about what Italian men are good at: making love and singing opera!Thanks!Livvy

0/10

sunny33

Nicely tied in with canon! :)

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Thanks! It took some hard work, but I'm glad so many have liked it!Livvy

0/10

rhiannon113

I'm happy and terrified, and also dying to know what  else you've got up your sleeve!! Brilliant, and devious!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Oh, the next reveal will be soon. I can't wait for the reactions. I hope it goes over well.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

Dianne64

I understand Moody's reaction.  He had spent all that time and energy training a "warrior" only to have her retreat when the war started.  I am anxious to see what happens in eleven years.  Does Hermione just lose all of her experiences since she time travelled?Great work!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

VERY good question... and I wish I could answer it, but I can't. Sorry. You'll find out soon the next big reveal. And that was the reaction I was hoping to garner about Moody. WHo wouldn't be suspicious of her? What do they know? ANd all that work he put into her? Well, he'll see it won't have gone to waste. He'll just have to wait a while.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

indigo_rose

Loved this chapter!  But Hermione still hasn't told Severus that she's from the future... oh dear.  I hope she gets around to it before that little eleven year old girl shows up to be Sorted!   That would make things rather difficult to adequately explain...  I am particularly interested to see just how events will diverge from "canon" once we get to the point where Hermione disappeared in third year.  Or will they...?  Hmm...  Hermione and Severus might have just created a replacement for the third member of the Trio without realizing it yet...   Either way, this is a fascinating ride and I'm on the edge of my seat.  Keep up the great work!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Oh, there is soooo much I could tell you, but it would ruin the surprise! All I can say is that Hermione WILL tell Severus about who she really is and it won't be long now.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

makaem

This was great. You did a fabulous job adding all the details that Hermione learned on her return. Does Severus know that she is from the future? If not, how willl she explain her knowledge of events?

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Oh, she will tell him. Not too far off either. Thanks!Livvy

10/10

indigo_rose

Been a while since I last read this story-- now there's a few chapters all at once waiting on me!  Whee!  Last chapter was interesting, though it seemed to be more of a transitionary one than anything else.  This chapter is where things start really happening again!  Liked the tie-in with the very first chapter; when you re-read it again after having read this one, hidden depths become clear and it's even better.Severus really had that slap coming, but what a hard price to pay for Hermione.  And terrible to see all the things you know will happen unfold around you, and despite everything your love and loyalty apparently isn't enough to make a difference.  But has Hermione thought of how much worse things could have been if she hadn't been there?  Perhaps she couldn't make a change because she had already made it...  Argh, now I'm giving myself a time travel headache! On to the next chapter!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Yea, got to be careful about those :) I'm glad you like the tie-in. THat is why I named the chapter "In the Middle of Things" because I wanted to grab the reader's interest right from the start. I'm glad you took the time to go back and see how it all clicked in place. But we aren't half-way done yet. Almost, but not quite. Lots of stuff to put our Sev and Hermione through yeat.Thanks!Livvy

0/10

rachow

Things are really getting interesting.  You must be studying GoF quite a bit.  I would never be able to keep up with all those details.  I glazed over a lot of the history.  This is going to be fascinating to read.  Keep going!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

I literally had GoF next to my computer for a long time. I remembered a lot... I got my degree in History, so facts and chronology are what I work well with. I also adore researching. So I had a bit of fun trying to pick out things to add. I also made a lot of notes-that helped too.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

beaweasley2

Wow, Moody was a right, sh-te, wasn't he? I really loked Hermione's reaction to Severus and his 'teaching voice'. The review of the events an the summary of the war - well done. It'll be weird to see little Hermione nad older Hermione face each other? Let's see how you handle that one.

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Hee-hee! I can't wait to do the other big reveal!Thanks!Livvy

10/10

Hanagasume

Oh my!I've been waiting for this!Great job filling in the holes!Looking forward to the next!A~~

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter should be in the queue soon!.Livvy

9/10

jacqui

This is such a fascinating time turner story. Most seem to have her in the past for awhile and then return to the present at the same age. It will be interesting to see what happens in a decade when, like Hermione mentioned, an 11 year old little girl named Hermione Granger shows up at Hogwarts. Can't wait!!I do have one question, Hermione talks to Dumbledore in this chapter about Voldermorts return. But he doesn't return till the end of Book 4 and I thought she broke her Time Turner at the begining of Book 3. Or is the strictly AU and I am overthinking things?Ok, I lied... one more question. Why is Severus going to Azkaban?Still LOVING this story! Thanks so much for updating!!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Well, she knows that he was living off of Qurrel's head, so she knows he is not dead and he is back, trying to get to Harry She believes his return is imminent. And I mentioned about Azkaban because Severus Had been a death eater. He had to be held accountable. But of course we all know how he esscaped that with Dumbledore testifying about his defection. But THey don't know what's going to happen at that point.Thanks!Livvy

Response from jacqui (Reviewer)

Ooooohhhh! Ok I totally get it now. Thanks for clearing that up for me.

9/10

Hunneigh

So, I'm assuming that Voldemort fell the same way in your story, which means James and Lily are dead. Does Snape not know that part, or does he just not feel the remorse the same way he did in JK's version?

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

He doesn't feel the consuming sadness and regret because he had stopped loving Lily. His mission was now to protect Hermione and all Muggleborns. He still has his issues with the Marauders, but he feels about James and Lily's death as he would for any other Order Member. So in there lies the difference.Thanks!Livvy 

Response from Hunneigh (Reviewer)

Ahhhh, I see I see. It's very well written. I can't wait for future chapters. :)

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh* finally, the deflowering...of both!  wonderful stuff.  thanks so much

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

LOL! Yes, finally! Glad you enjoyed it!Thanks!Livvy

10/10

Zigflorian

That was so sweet!   Well worth waiting for!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

I'm glad you enjoyed it!Thanks!Livvy

0/10

mom7knox

Yea - they are finally together - I know it won't last or be easy - but I am so looking forward to your next chapter - thanks for all of your hard work!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Thank you! It's going to get rather interesting these next few chapters!Thanks!Livvy

10/10

Lioness Rampant

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Damn, you can write a love scene and some of the "naughtier" parts were a turn on! But now that their back together and their going to keep going through the decades - and she won't just pop back into her own time. Which I am happy about, I love this story line! But how will it work out when she catches up with her own time line? Because Harry and Ron do need Hermiones brilliance to get through their school years - I'm positive of it. So how is that going to be accomplished?.... Just curious ;)

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Sorry I can't reveal much... but she will have to return. Not soon, but she will have to go back because of the little Hermione Ganger that will be coming to Hogwarts in 1991. Also, Hermione has to figure out how she's going to tell Severus about who she really is.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

Sampdoria

Though I am sure there will be more drama to come, I really enjoyed this chapter. Not only due to the lemons, (though they were brilliant:-)) but because of the love they have for eachother. I look forward to read more!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Yeah! It's going to get a bit complicated for sure.Thanks!Livvy

10/10

countrymouse

Lovely!  But, as others have said, I'm confused--and worried---about the time-turner thing, and time-warps and paradoxes and the "We MUSTN'T be seen!" that the 'other' Hermione explained so assiduously to Harry in CoS.  In that book, a character's going back in time did NOT 'erase' them in 'this' time---i.e., they existed, for a short time, as a double of themselves--which is why they "could not be seen" (Hermione's warning in the book to Harry that wizards had been known to kill themselves accidentally).  So, since Hermione was 2 years old when V. was defeated, in your story does that mean there is a "baby" Hermione Granger somewhere, who will in 10 years enter Hogwarts as a first-year?  And if so, what will they do then about the very obvious paradox of a 'duplicate' Hermione Granger, one who is a student and one who is Severus' wife? (and maybe even mother of his children, by then).  Then, when the 'other' Hermione Granger reaches her thrid year, and catches up to when she 'disappeared' with the time turner, the two will merge into one---but ... how CAN they?---since one will be aged 10 years or more than the other, and one is a grown woman, a married wife, and the other a 14-year-old female student?You've got my head spinning here, trying to figure this out.But I'm clinging to your promises (above) of a happy ending!  (buckling my seat belt against angst, ahead!)

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

I've got it all sorted and I hope that it won't be a bummer. It certaintly will make things interesting between Severus and Hermione. But Hermione is quite aware of the clock ticking.Thanks,Livvy

10/10

debjunk

Well, I suppose things will lighten up for a little bit, as 'Ding dong, the wizard's dead.'  It's nice to finally see them back together after so long and that they both still love each other immensely.  Now, she's going to tell him she's from the future, right?  Can't wait for that little tidbit of reveal!

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

All in good time. There still are Death Eaters on the loose, and Hermione wants to enjoy just being with Severus. But yes, she will have to tell him.Thanks,Livvy

0/10

sunny33

They are going to sleep for a week after all that activity! :)

Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)

Aww, they're young! They can bounce back, hell, they're only 21/22!Thanks,Livvy

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