Chapter 42
Chapter 42 of 74
livvy6Hermione's POV from the night of the third task, and the revealing of Moody's impostor.
A/N: Here we are! This is the last chapter before things take a detour. Thanks for keeping up with the story, and I hope you will enjoy the new life Hermione and Severus will be planning for themselves. Thanks to WriterMerrin and luvsev, and thanks to all of you who have been following! So you know, this chapter is heavy on canon; although, it is from Hermione's POV. So I have placed in italics what is straight from JK Rowling's words from GoF.
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Harry and Hermione continued to work hard, grabbing any spare moment they could to practice. McGonagall got frustrated with walking in on them constantly, so she gave them their own empty classroom to work in. Harry was doing brilliantly. He had a natural talent for Defense. Hermione was a good teacher, and sure, she could duel, thanks to the hard work of the missing Moody, but she didn't have the talent to make the wand sing and move with all the power and grace that came with being a brilliant duelist. Harry was beautiful, so beautiful she wanted to cry.
It took her back to that day all the Gryffindors had had to stay in the common room because Voldemort was coming. They had all banded together and helped one another in different subjects. She had watched with awe as Marlene...little, timid Marlene...took on James and Sirius, and they'd both had that beauty of motion. Harry was just like James, athletic and powerful in his movements. Marlene had been so fluid and skillful. Hermione would never forget the look on Sirius' face when she had finally bested them both. He had declared he was in love. Of course, everyone laughed, thinking it was a joke, but it hadn't been. Hermione wondered how much he had loved Marlene. She was glad they'd had that week to be alone and declare their love in all the ways they needed to so they could do the work the Order needed from them.
Sirius kept sending Harry notes of encouragement and direction. He tried to keep Harry on point, focused on what was his responsibility: getting through this last task. Hermione agreed wholeheartedly. She told Harry the same thing. After the Tournament was through, the impostor of Moody would be dealt with accordingly.
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The day of the last task came, and at breakfast, Hermione opened the Daily Prophet to an article about Harry. The Slytherins were all sniggering and laughing. She scanned it quickly and reluctantly handed it to Harry.
The headline read Harry Potter, Disturbed and Dangerous. Hermione was beside herself. "How! How am I not catching this?"
"Gone off me a bit, hasn't she?" Harry said, brushing it off.
"How did she get all this? Harry, was the window open at the time?" she asked.
"I opened it when he collapsed!" Ron said quickly. "I didn't know what the bloody hell was going on. I figured he needed some fresh air with all that perfume and crap Trelawney's got up there."
"Damn!" Hermione said as she slapped her hand on the table. "I will get that cow. I swear I will."
Ron leaned over and whispered, "You know I think you're brilliant...but sometimes, Hermione, you're dead scary."
Hermione snorted as she laughed. "Oh, Ron!" she exclaimed. "What would I do without you?"
"I have no idea," he replied, looking a bit frightened.
***
The Weasleys came to give moral support as Harry's surrogate family. Hermione joined them, but her heart and mind were with Severus. Was he still holing up in his dungeons, scared to come out? She decided to give her excuses and make a detour. She snuck into the dungeons and tapped on the door. Again, just a sliver opened, and when Severus saw it was she, he grabbed her, held her to him, and closed the door behind him. He was filthy and reeked of firewhisky. He started grabbing her in very inappropriate places and whispering very naughty things that were quite dangerous in her condition of being perpetually randy.
"Remember how I took you in your old bed at Spinner's End?" he asked, slurring slightly.
"Remember how I told you how hard I got seeing you in your pink knickers? God, Hermione, would you wear knickers like those when we get married? I want to do so many things. I've been learning," he said importantly.
"Really?" she said, trying not to laugh as she tried to distract him. Cor, Blimey! He needs a bath!
"I've been forced to watch the revels. Some of them aren't all raping and shite. Some are very willing and erotic. I've watched and seen how to pleasure a woman in many, many ways. I have read and was fortunate to have friends to demonstrate the pictures. I can't wait to try it out. I am sick of wanking. Let's have a bit of fun, 'Mione," he said as he swayed. "Would you help me and bring me off?"
It was tempting, and it was what she had wanted for so long. Her thighs ached and mouth watered, but she couldn't do this. He was blotto. When he sobered, he would be so distraught...it wasn't worth it.
"You want me, Hermione. Touch it, just touch it," he pleaded.
She went and got a sobering-up potion and called out to him from the next room, "I will touch it if you drink this." She gave him a sweet smile and unbuttoned a couple of buttons on her shirt to sweeten the pot. She poured it down his throat, and in a couple of minutes, he looked horrified.
She threw him a towel. "Your bath awaits, Professor," she said sweetly.
Before he disappeared behind the door, he asked. "How long?"
She smiled. "Two and a half months," she said slyly.
"Dear God," he moaned. "Can we do that thing we did once?"
"Sure," she said as she began to unbutton her pants. Soon, they were on opposite sides of the door, not seeing or touching, but satisfying themselves the only way they knew how.
***
Hermione joined the Weasleys in time for the third task. Although Hermione felt sick, everyone was excited. She just wasn't sure about this going all right. She searched for Severus, and he was there, sitting with his Slytherins and the Durmstrang crew...Karkaroff having done a bunk after the whole debacle with Crouch near the forest.
Suddenly, the four champions appeared, and the four Heads of houses, along with Dumbledore and the Moody impostor, went up to examine the various portions of the maze. McGonagall was giving directions of some sort to the champions. Hagrid went to wish Harry good luck, as did Ludo Bagman.
On Bagman's whistle, Harry and Cedric entered the maze first. After a suitable interval, Viktor entered, and then lastly, Fleur.
It was rather nerve-wracking, hearing intermittent blasts from wands and the roars and screams from animals that were lying in wait to attack them. A scream ripped through the air. After a while, Fleur Delacour's wand shot a warning blast into the air, and she was Levitated out of the maze. Only three were left. Hermione was wringing her hands; she kept glancing at Severus, not knowing what to do, afraid for him. Severus' face remained impassive and emotionless. She knew though that he did care; he was a nervous wreck as well.
There were more blasts and hollers from deep inside. The wind was picking up deep inside the maze. Hermione could see the tops of the hedges, and they were winding crazily, as if a mini tornado was in the midst of it all. Suddenly, Viktor's wand sent sparks into the air and soon his body was Levitated and was being cared for by Professor Snape while Madam Pomfrey tended to Fleur.
For a long while, it was silent. Everyone knew now that Hogwarts would win, but whom? Were Cedric and Harry still all right? The silence was more terrifying than the wind, screams, and blasts from the wands.
Soon, a huge blast sounded from deep within, and it was repeated again and again. The sound of far-away shouts that had to be from Harry and Cedric came intermittently with horrific blasts, and a mighty wind from inside the maze. Then there was silence. For an eternity, there was silence.
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The silence went on for so long many of the teachers were beginning to whisper. Krum was talking animatedly to Severus, who was looking very worried. Dumbledore was with Fleur, and she was hysterically telling her story. Madam Maxime took her in hand to get her to calm down.
Still, no one knew what was happening to Cedric or Harry.
The crowd was restless. It was taking too long, and people were whispering about Viktor and Fleur, who were still shaking their heads and talking heatedly. Hermione darted around and could not see a glimpse of Moody's impostor. She began to stand up and watched as Albus, Minerva, and Severus spoke with each other. It seemed there was nothing that could be done but wait.
So they all sat as the hour grew late. Suddenly, a burst of light shot from nowhere, and there were Harry and Cedric sprawled on the ground. Harry was clutching the Triwizard Cup and Cedric's shirt in desperation. Hermione walked slowly closer to the bottom of the stands. Something was dreadfully wrong. Her hand calmly went for her wand as she moved closer.
Cedric wasn't moving, and Harry was crying. Suddenly, some of the girls started in their direction, and Dumbledore and Severus dashed towards the young wizards. Harry was fighting them off; he didn't seem to want to either release Cedric or the Cup. Minister Fudge went forward and whispered amongst the adults gathered there in hushed tones. Finally, a scream ripped through the air, ending the confusion. "Cedric Diggory is dead! He's dead!" Hermione's head jerked towards the yelling. "Dead! DEAD!"
The whole scene was pandemonium. Hermione strained to see what was happening, but the screams were awful, and Amos Diggory was sprinting across the field to see the body of his dead son. People were starting to rush, and out of the corner of her eye, she saw the impostor make his way to Harry and steal him away towards the direction of the castle. Hermione fought and strained to make her way through, but she couldn't. She wanted to scream at Severus and Dumbledore that the impostor now had Harry in his grasp and in mortal danger. However, she could do nothing in the mighty sea of people.
She found a small hole between the rows and took its path that led under the bleachers. She skirted the edge and found Dumbledore and Severus. They were conferring with McGonagall. Before she could reach them, they were off into the night, going towards the castle.
Hermione sank onto the ground and wept. She felt so afraid. Then she felt the familiar friendly hands of Ron around her.
"Come on, 'Mione," he said softly. "Let's go and get a cup of tea or something."
She nodded as she sobbed against his shoulder. She wished Sirius were here, she wished Severus were the one holding her and comforting her, but Ron, sweet Ron, wasn't so bad in a pinch.
***
It had seemed like forever until Harry entered the infirmary. Hermione had been waiting there with all of the Weasleys waiting for the news. Molly Weasley broke down crying and moved to gather Harry into her arms as she wept.
"Harry! Oh, Harry!"
Dumbledore stopped her. "Molly," he said as he held up a hand for a moment. "Please listen to me. Harry has been through a terrible ordeal tonight. He has just had to relive it for me. What he needs now is sleep, peace, and quiet. If he would like you all to stay with him," he added, looking at Ron, Hermione and Bill, "you may do so. But I do not want you questioning him until he is ready to answer, and certainly not this evening."
Mrs. Weasley nodded. She was very white. She rounded on Ron, Hermione and Bill and hissed, "You hear? He needs quiet!"
Madam Pomfrey asked Dumbledore about the dog. Dumbledore smiled and said, "This dog will be staying with Harry for a while, and I assure you, he is very well trained. Harry...I will wait until you are in bed."
Madam Pomfrey led Harry behind a screen to undress into a nightgown. They all remained silent, waiting for him to re-emerge.
Dumbledore spoke to Harry for a while and then left. Madam Pomfrey gave him some potions, and he drifted off to sleep. Hermione had in her rucksack all of her essentials, and she wasn't going to budge until she knew she was going to get answers from someone. Staying with Harry seemed the only thing to do. So she sat silently as everyone paced, dozed, and then woke again, all the while, Sirius, in his Animagus form, curled up and rested by her feet.
Right outside of the infirmary door, voices were being raised. Mrs. Weasley was getting upset.
"They're going to wake him if they don't shut up!" she whispered.
"What could they be shouting about?" whispered Bill. "Nothing else could have happened, can it?"
Hermione's heart skipped a beat and she felt her face grow numb. Where was Severus? Did he get hurt? Did they find Moody? Was he dead? Oh, please God; let Severus be all right! she prayed.
"That's Fudge's voice," Mrs. Weasley whispered. "And that's Minerva McGonagall's, isn't it? But what are they arguing about?"
Hermione looked at Ron, and he shrugged.
"Regrettable, but all the same, Minerva..." Cornelius Fudge was saying loudly.
"You should have never brought him into the castle!" yelled Minerva. "When Dumbledore finds out..."
The doors of the infirmary burst open with Fudge leading the group with Minerva hot on his heels followed by Severus. Hermione jumped up. She felt relief wash over her. He was all right. She listened as she slowly sat down. Severus caught her eyes and she swallowed. His eyes left hers and focused on the two squabbling people in front of him.
"Where is Dumbledore?" he asked Mrs. Weasley.
"He's not here!" Mrs. Weasley said angrily. "This is a hospital wing, I would think you'd..."
Dumbledore came in, his robes sweeping the floor. "What has happened?" he demanded sharply. "I asked you to guard over Barty couch, Minerva, I'm surprised at you!"
"Oh, there's no need to stand guard!" Minerva snapped angrily. "The Minister has seen to that!"
Hermione was watching people she had worked with and fought with now fight amongst themselves. She had never seen such a display. And it seemed Barty Couch had been found, but which one?
Severus spoke in a low tone. "When we told Mr. Fudge that we had caught the Death Eater responsible for tonight's events, he seemed to feel his personal safety was in question. He insisted on summoning a Dementor to accompany him into the castle. He brought it up to the office where Barty Crouch..."
"I told him you would not agree, Dumbledore!" Minerva interrupted. "I told him you would never allow a Dementor inside the walls of this castle..."
"My dear woman!" roared Fudge. "As Minister of Magic, it is my decision whether I wish to bring protection with me when interviewing possibly dangerous..."
"The moment that...thing...entered the room, it swooped down on Crouch...and..." Minerva's voice failed her.
"Not so much a loss!" Cornelius reasoned. "After all, he is responsible for several deaths!"
"Yes, but now he cannot give testimony," said Dumbledore smoothly. "He cannot give evidence about why he killed in the first place."
"Why he killed them?" sputtered Fudge. "According to Minerva and Severus, he seems to have thought he was doing all of this on You-Know-Who's orders!"
"Lord Voldemort was giving the directions, Cornelius," Dumbledore explained. "Those deaths were mere by-products of a plan to restore Voldemort to full strength again. The plan succeeded, and Voldemort has been restored to his body."
Hermione gasped. She was glad Mrs. Weasley did at the same time. She felt sick...so sick. All this time, after all of this waiting, he was back, and she would have to leave again! No! I won't go. I'll stay and fight this time. I won't let them take Severus from me again! she thought angrily.
Everyone was goggling at Dumbledore, except for Minerva and Severus, who knew the truth, and Hermione, who tried to feign shock anyway. Hermione's head spun as Dumbledore and Fudge went round and round over Voldemort's regeneration. Dumbledore was trying to make the Minister see reason, but for some reason, he didn't want to.
"You are prepared to take Mr. Potter's word on this, are you, Dumbledore?"
Suddenly, Sirius began to growl and his hackles were raised, his teeth baring at Fudge. Hermione leaned down and petted him to help him calm down.
"Of course," replied Dumbledore. "I heard Crouch's confession, heard Harry's version, and the stories make sense including the disappearance of Bertha Jorkins."
"You take the word of a lunatic and a boy who...well...is a Parselmouth, has fits, hallucinations?" Fudge said warily.
"Been reading Rita Skeeter, have we," asked Dumbledore jovially. "I assume you are referring to the pains Harry has experienced due to his scar?"
"Listen, Cornelius," Dumbledore said as he took a dramatic step towards the Minister. "Harry is as sane as you or I. I believe that scar hurts him whenever Voldemort is close by or is feeling murderously angry."
Fudge was not moved. "I have never heard of a scar that operated as an alarm bell before..."
Suddenly, Harry was upright in bed, screaming at Fudge, rattling off the names of the Death Eaters he had seen. Hermione was gobsmacked. The names were a roster from days gone by: Lucius Malfoy, Avery, Nott, Crabbe, and Goyle.
The Minister brushed it off as nothing. These men had been cleared, he said, and he still maintained that Harry was mentally unstable.
"You fool!" hissed Minerva. "Cedric Diggory! Mr. Crouch! These deaths are not the random acts of a lunatic!"
Aha! So it had been Barty Jr. all this time, Hermione thought.
"I see no evidence to the contrary!" Fudge bellowed.
Hermione could see Dumbledore was at the end of his rope. "Voldemort is back. If you can accept it, then steps must be taken. First, the removal of the Dementors; they are Voldemort's most loyal followers. They will join him the minute they are asked. If you do not act now, we shall be where we were thirteen years ago!
"The second task is to send an envoy to the giants; otherwise Voldemort will once again have them at his beck and call."
Fudge sputtered about the end of his career and other such rubbish. Hermione was disgusted at his blindness and selfishness.
Dumbledore descended upon him and vocalized everything that was in Hermione's heart at that moment. The man was blinded by the power of the office he held. He loved it so much he was willing to risk the lives of the very people he had sworn to protect. Dumbledore pleaded with him to act now for his own good or later, he would lose everything he loved so dearly.
Hermione was light-headed. It was like Barty Crouch Sr. all those years ago happening over again.
Fudge refused to comply. He argued that Dumbledore was trying to work against him, to which Dumbledore insisted it was not the case. Finally, the man was reduced to sheer denial that Voldemort could be back. Then Severus did something so powerful, so noble, it took her breath away.
He strode to Fudge, past Dumbledore, and pulled up the left sleeve of his robes as he went. He stuck out his forearm and showed it to Fudge, who recoiled.
"There!" he said harshly. "There. The Dark Mark. It is not as clear as it was an hour ago, when it burned black, but you can see it. Every Death Eater has it burned into his flesh by the Dark Lord. It was a means of distinguishing one another...and his means of summoning us to him. This Mark has been turning blacker all this year. Why do you think Karkaroff left so suddenly? He fled when we felt the Mark burn. We knew he had returned. Karkaroff fears for his life. He had betrayed too many of his fellow Death Eaters to be welcomed back into the fold. He feared the Dark Lord's vengeance."
Fudge was taken aback, disgusted by the Mark Severus had shown him, still shaken by the events, and too far into denial to accept anything. He stammered his excuses and told Dumbledore he would be in touch tomorrow about the running of the school.
After he had left the bag of Harry's winnings on his table, he left. Dumbledore turned to face the remaining people.
"Molly, I can count on you and Arthur?" he asked.
"Of course, Dumbledore," she whispered.
Dumbledore spoke quietly with her, and Hermione tuned out, stroking Sirius' fur and trying to process all that was happening. Then she heard him speak to Minerva.
"I want to see Hagrid in my office as soon as possible, and Madam Maxime, if she is willing."
"Madam Pomfrey, would you please go down to Professor Moody's office? A house-elf named Winky is there. Would you be so kind as to get her safely to the kitchens? A house-elf named Dobby will look after her."
Then came the coup de grace. Dumbledore announced it was time for two of the remaining number to recognize each other. Sirius sprang to his human form, and he and Severus glared at each other. Mrs. Weasley went into a hysterical fit. Severus was calm and cool.
"What is he doing here?" Severus snarled.
"Sirius is here at my invitation, Severus. Now I trust you both, and it is time to lay aside the differences and stand united. I will though, in the short term, settle for a lack of open hostility. Now shake hands."
Hermione knew Dumbledore was still talking, but she was dumbstruck at the thought of Severus actually allowing Sirius to touch him. They shook hands, and Hermione forgot how to breathe for a few moments.
He gave Sirius his orders, to go to Lupin's and rustle up the old crowd who were already on stand-by.
After Sirius left, he turned to Severus. "If you are ready, Severus, you know what I must ask you to do... if you are prepared..."
"I am," said Severus.
Hermione wanted to speak to him. He looked so pale. She thought she might cry. He was returning to Voldemort. She knew it. She couldn't stop herself. She dashed out and ran to him.
***
"Hermione," he said sharply as he drew her into an alcove. "What are you doing?"
"I can't let you go without speaking to you one last time. What if you don't come back?" she cried.
"I will. Wait for me in my rooms. I shall be back by tomorrow." He caressed her face and hair.
"Such a lovely, young woman you are becoming, Hermione," he whispered as he drew her towards him and kissed her. She let his hands wander as she clung to him. He felt so strong. She never remembered him being this strong the last time. She couldn't wait for the summer to fly by and for them to be married and properly together.
"I think we are fools, Severus," she whispered as he nibbled on her neck. She felt a tingle, and her nipples hardened.
"Why?" he asked.
Hermione sighed. "Because we are going into this mess for the second time, and you are still the most important thing that matters. I won't leave this time. I'll stand by your side through it all. Please come back to me," she begged him.
"Soon," he whispered as he placed his forehead onto hers. "Meet me in my rooms. I have the wards set to acknowledge your wand." He grabbed her by the back of the neck and kissed her passionately. Then he was gone.
Hermione pulled herself together and went back into the infirmary. Mrs. Weasley was talking softly to Harry and hugging him. Ron was standing nearby, red-faced and sober. Hermione saw something by the window. She slowly reached inside her rucksack and took out her jar. With one swift movement, and a terrific slam, Hermione had everyone nearby jump in fear, looking at her curiously. Hermione apologized hastily and smiled at her captured prey.
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livvy, eventhough I would never get a response from you. As a reader, albeit late, to be honored to know what is inside your alternate universe means so much in this community. This is such a masterpiece. The emotions rolling in such perfect clarity. Though a parody, it brought such happiness to those who say 'what if?'. I'm glad to think that there is this Severus Snape who had his Hermione with a lot of wonderful talented children, happy and content. Although canon already sentenced him to.... I'm still glad to find this universe in your eyes. :)
That was a Very good story. I am very glad you wrote it.Thanks
I don't envy Hermione at all. She's still out of her own timeline and can't really make a real life here. There is still pain for Severus and I wish there wasn't.
Part of me wonders why Dumbledore allows all of this death eater activity to go on in the school grounds. He could expel them but maybe he's afraid of their parents. The school board could make a death eater the Headmaster, but he sure lets the Slytherins get away with an awful lot right now. Why? Has he no power over the students? Why didn't those who raped that muggle-born girl not get called up before the Aurors and the Wizengamot? I don't understand how this all can be going on right under Dumbledore's nose on his own turf!
If Voldemort is not a fool, he knows he would need to woo a truly intelligent and powerful witch to be loyal to him. Especially if he thinks she would be truly useful and doesn't want to waste her by having to kill her for disobedience. He will need her to come to him fully of her own free will.
Well written!!! Great chapter. Intrigue, romance, angst, anxiety, hope, courage. Great character development! Great flow. I feel worried and afraid but have a small amount of hope, just like your characters. I loved the veritiserum save Albus made. Inferi are an absolute horror. I thought they were too scary to be in a children's book when I read that book. I felt DH was way too scary for pre-teen children to be reading. It should have a PG-13 or even a R rating for violence.
What a tragedy for all of them. Broken hearts are everywhere! I'm glad Severus and Hermione still have their love. It will help him be strong. It will give him a reason to not give up like his mum did. I'm a little sorry for Lily that she says she loves Hermione, but I don't like her much. I'm sure she is hurt because she didn't get what she wanted, who she wanted. She used Severus, she used the James and Sirius against Severus. She says she loves Hermione but only if Hermione does what she wants her to do. It's sad that she is such a shallow person. Even if Hermione was gay, she would be too good of a person for Lily. Lily will make a great idealistic, Griffidorish, self-righteous Order Member. Everyone wants her. Only Hermione really knows her. She's just what the cause will need for the perfect Martyr for the side of the Light. Many have died and many will die, but only James and Lily will be hailed as great Martyrs. Hermione's life pretty much sucks. I'm sorry for Remus. He'll have Tonks but not for long. They will die too before they get to see their child grow up. I wonder if JKR considered her story to be a tragedy? I have faith that you will save our heroes, Severus and Hermione in the end and it won't be a tragic ending.
Hermione is as much a prisoner of the Order as Severus is of Voldemort. They are neither free to live thier own lives. Severus loves Hermione and Hermione loves Severus. As long as their Occulumency sheilds hold Tom Riddle and Albus Dumbledore or Alaster Moody don't need to know Hermione and Severus are still friends. I don't like Moody even if he is just doing his job. He may be on the side of the light but he isn't a good person.
Moody is a bastard. War is hell. She isn't any more free to make her own decisions than Severus is. Yet, they both important be held accountable for their actions. I have a bad feeling this gets worse before it gets better.
Possible spoilers....
I don't remember what age Hermione is when she returns to her own time line. I will be such a total bummer if she is younger and doesn't get to retain all this skill and knowledge she is gaining this summer. If she has to start over as a third year it will suck for her, but I can't seem to figure out a way for her to get around it or she won't be with Harry for certain important moments. I wish that before she goes back to her old timeline she could have some memories put in a pensive and Dumbledore would give them back to her at the right moment so that she already knows this stuff. Besides her being able to teach it to others at the DA, she will remember that she loves Severus and he loves her.
What happens to wizards that take oaths that conflict? Can you tell me? Will Voldemort be able to detect Hermione's oaths to the Order? I've never liked Moody because he's always been so mean to Severus. He and Lily are two of a kind. He may be powerful and intelligent but he isn't complex. He's too simple and everything is too black and white unless he wants to do it for what he considers a good cause. Albus is the same way. They would both use dark magic for the greater good while making sure anyone else he wanted disposed of would go to Azkaban for the same thing. Hermione is very mature for her age and very wise.
How awesome and awkward. I imagine she eventually has to go back to her own timeline in order for Harry to prevail. Severus will be bound to her and will remember who she will become when she starts at Hogwarts at 11. But she won't remember him until after she time travels. Remus will know, Dumbledore will know. Will Minerva remember? Will Sirius? Will Dumbledore alter certain people's memories about her at Hogwarts who will meet her again when she is 11 years old and Harry's best friend or will all the Order Members who know her in this timeline remember her and realize she had been time traveling? I hope you can tell me the answer w/o spoilers for other readers but I really want to know! If you can't tell me in the review will you contact me and let me know? Do you write anywhere else? You are a really talented writer. Thanks! breastlady
You weave a fascinating tale of intrigue. It is so sad how little choice Severus has ever had in his life. He will give everything he has and is. He will be alone and despised. And he will end up with absolutely nothing in the end, only to die for no good reason on a dirty floor in cannon. I'm sure you have changed the end or I would not have put this story on my list of favorite years ago. I normally check the end of stories to make sure they end well. If they don't I don't read them. I can't remember anything else in this story due to my own memory issues but I'm glad I saved it. I can't stop reading it.
There's really nothing to say except, poor Severus. Poor, poor Severus. He deserves better than Lily. She can't seem to understand he has to stay on the good side of the Slytherins in order for her to be under his protection. Has Hermione put it that clearly to Lily? Maybe she would say she doesn't need his protection because she has never had a unforgivable cast against her and maybe she really can defend herself as well as Hermione. She doesn't know though because she's never needed to. Does she not believe Hermione when she says Severus would be slaughtered in his sleep? Has Hermione put it that clearly to Lily?
Hermione is quite impressive.
I can never understand how Albus Dumbledore could allow all this bullying to go on. He has to know! What is his problem? Is it some sort of adgenda?
I wonder how long the spell lasts and how long his dad will stay petrified. Maybe he could tie him up and just unfreeze him to feed him then freeze him again. Maybe he should try to send an owl to Albus Dumbledore for help. I don't suppose he has access to an owl.
Nothing ever goes well for Severus. He is up for the most horrible disappointment! I can see how Lily could be torn. She feels obligated to be true to her best friend, Severus, but she isn't attracted to him. He does put a lot of pressure on her to make his life happy. She is everything to him and that isn't healthy. He has nothing and no one but Lily. Lily has lots of people who love her. It does make one rather callow. She doesn't know what it feels like to have no one. She can't. She tries but she isn't a very deep girl. Not everyone is. Hermione is also shaped by her dangerous association with Harry. She is very mature for her age in this story. I guess is is in cannon as well.
Ooooh! Why don't I remember this chapter? Hell, I never remember anything! It does making reading stories over again much more fun, but that's the only silver lining to having memory problems. It must be the almost daily migraines for the last 16 yrs. I'm reading my favorites over again because I've been soooo soooo sad about AR's passing. This is on my favorites list! I remember the basic premise but not many details. At least I'm able to leave reviews now. The first month I wasn't even up to reviews but I know you authors put so much heart into these long stories and all for the price of reviews. And you deserve them for your brilliance and hard work. Thank you so much for sharing your craft in the ff arena for free and thank you for writing this ship. It's still my very favorite all these years later. I started reading when the first movie trailer came out and I found WIKTT way back then by accident. It opened a whole world of how to spend my evenings and weekends instead doing the things I should be doing. But I became addicted and I still am. I'm on to chapter 2. Ta, love!
I wonder if Hagrid recognizes or remembers Hermione when she come to Hogwarts in the future? I can imagine that the other teachers could be in on the secret eventually and know that she's from the future and not treat her any different when they see her again years later, but I don't know that Hagrid could keep the secret. Interesting.
I loved this fic! I've spent all my spare time reading it this week. Thank you for such an amazing story! It really was an emotional roller coaster that I thoroughly enjoyed.
So sweet! Loved every bit of it
Things are looking up
Aww I'm so happy!
Good for her!