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A Change is Going to Come
livvy61,513 Reviews | 7.08/10 (1,513 Ratings, 0 Likes, 730 Favorites )
NOW COMPLETE!!! An accident with a Time-Turner in 1993 sends Hermione Granger back to 1973, and she is unable to return.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
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wow. then ending to this chapter is POWERFUL. I can see it all play out clearly in my head....
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you will like the next chapter as well.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Very well done. I can imagine that this was difficult to write, but I think you got it right. I am glad that you had Severus tell Hermione about the Unbreakable Vow. Keeping something that important from her would have been quite a beach of trust. Keep up the good work. I love your story!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! I hope the next couple of chapters will get everything straightened out as to their plan.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
WOw... great chapter. I'm not done reading yet, but I have a question. You have Severus say that a Horcrux can be destroyed by goblin-wrought metal. Did you mean for this to be different from canon? I thought that the reason that the sword of Gryffindor was able to destroy the Horcruxes in DH was because it had absorbed the basilisk venom when Harry used it to kill the basilisk (gobin-wrought metal absorbs substances that strengthen it).
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh, my. I hate it when that happens! I'll have to adjust it. That's important. Thanks! Livvy
Oh too funny, and just how will she be able to face her fellow Aurors?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
LOL! Wait til the next chapter where she DOES face them. They won't let her live it down :)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
What happened! We went from a fun time out on the town, a little kiss and walking along innocent-like, holding hands to dark magic, mayhem and death. These poor kids don't even have the time to react to one thing before something else happens. The crap thing about murder/suicides is you never get to ask why the one thought it was better to kill themselves and leave loved ones behind. I can see where Eilene thought she was protecting Severus by killing Tobias, and I know some women think they love their abusive spouse so much that they can't live without them [bah], but at this point you'd think she'd seen what life with her son could be like and would want to stay with him and help him become a better man than his father proved to be.Ah well, our dear Severus has lessons to learn...
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
There was no way Eileen was going to leave her home, as the Ministry suggested, and there there was no way that Tobias would have let her alone. That man was pure wickedness. She knew him enough that he would have never let her live her life now that she had turned on him and put him in jail. He would have killed her, so she decided to do it on her terms. There was no way she would escape Azkaban for premeditated murder. She didn't want that for her son to live with, so she figured a fresh start with Hermione and no psychotic father or a murdered mother ( or one in Azkaban) to haunt him would be best.Thanks!Livvy
Wow -can you write!! Just started with this piece and am totrally drawn in with your plot twists. Thank you so much for your hard work - and I can't wait to see where you take this!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! I hope you keep enjoying it!Thanks,Livvy
Oh, wonderful! This story has been featured. Very well deserved. Another satisfying chapter, through and through. I think Avery is becoming my favorite character in this. I love the way you are writing him. Do I see some type of competition for Hermione's attentions? Avery would make for a twisted love triangle... not that SS/LE/HG isn't twisted enough!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Avery's days at Hogwarts are numbered, since he will be finishing school. However, we'll still have some rather interesting moments with the two of them!Thanks,Livvy
OMG, how sad. I guess you could see it coming but, I just didn't want to. They had such a wonderfule night together and then Wham! And Avery, Blech. What a creepy dude, I'm so glad Hermione didn't go with them over there. It was also nice to see Severus understand her reasons for not wanting to go. I was totally afraid that he was going to guilt trip her into staying with him. I'm glad Dumbledore is going to teach her Occlumency and that he's trying to convince her that she's already messed up her time line, so why worry. Seriously she's been there too long to not have changed stuff, she needs to accept that. Anyways I'm going to stop rambling. Can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! Yes, things are really going to be difficult for the next couple of years for them, but they will get through it.Thanks!Livvy
God I love your writing!!! Seriously I should just print and keep this stuff in hard copy cuz its amazing! Your characters are fleshed out and complex, the outer players utlizied as much as the main. Amazing!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks so much! I've had such a crap day, that just make me smile! Thanks for your kind words!Livvy
A twist! A good twist . . . yay for you!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! Sorry so late getting back to you!Livvy
great update! you certainly put dung in a new light. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! I always thought Dung had potential for more, so I decided to go ahead and do what I wanted :)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
yeow! i don't think jkr ever said in canon what happened to severus' parents but your scenario is most plausable. great update! thanks so much and i look forward to the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! I hope to have the chapter up in the queue tonight.Thanks!Livvy
Wow...great chapter. I love the fact that Hermione is sure that she and Severus aren't ready for the next step. I hope Lily and James don't get killed too soon. That would be a bit of a downer.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Things are going to get very complicated, but don't worry about Lily and James just yet!Thanks,Livvy
Well it's all happening!I feel that Hermione and Severus are going to end up keeping more things from each other, although Hermione is doing that already, But what choice does she have? (Silly Time Turner's!) Look forward to more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
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Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
THere will be a lot they will have to keep from each other, for self-preservation's sake. But they can handle it.Livvy
I cna't wait for he next update! This is great work!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter in the queue by tonight!Thanks,Livvy
Fabulous chapter. I'm running late this morning, but when I saw the update alert in my email, I couldn't resist.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I'm grateful you took the time to revuew!Cheers,Livvy
I like the concept of Avery and Hermione being the true heads of the houses.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It brings a lot of drama to the story, but that is how the SLytherins are, they like having leaders and pomp and circumstance.Thanks,Livvy
As much as I'm a fan of the story - it bothers the hell out of me, when Hermione acts soap opera all over: "It’s just we’re not ready for that step, and we would be making love for all the wrong reasons..." I mean, the kid is how old ? 16/17 ?:D Really really, I like the story, but such dialouges are...brrrrrrr. Romance novel - bad ones.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Well, Hermione has had the experience with Lily and she doesn't want to make the same mistake over again. I was trying to make her sound responsible and having learned from her mistakes. She really loves Severus and doesn't want to screw it up. I guess it's how you look at it.Thanks for reviewing,Livvy
Oh, she has really made a mess of things. Head of Gruffindor, the interest of Voldemort, Occulmency with Dumbledore - who'd love to know what she knows! From what I can tell - she's already messed with Severus - he won't be the same, and Avery is curious about her. Hmmm
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Well, yes, but Severus is changing for the better. But I agree, things are going to be shaky.Thanks,Livvy
Wonderful chapter! I just keep telling myself to remember the oaths they made. I truly have faith that they will have a happy ending, but please tell me that there will be a few sweet moments between them. It kills me to think that it’s going to be all angst and not a little bit of loving – just a tiny bit?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh, rest assured, there is going to be some very hot and steamy sex later on down the road. I can't give an angst fest without some sexual gratification. It will be frustrating for both of them because things are going to be difficult at school, but I'll have some smutty moments, but all stemming from the deep love and respect they have for each other. They are dedicated.Thanks!Livvy
Response from maramyanet (Reviewer)
So glad to hear that, and the fact that they share such strong feelings of commitment and respect, in my opinion, only further sweetens the (smutty) moments they will share, plus it’s hot as hell = at least in my book it is. Fidelity is a huge turn on! Plus, I’m glad to see that Hermione isn’t a tease like Lily.
Great last line. It seems that they won't be happy for a while... if ever(?) Hermione is really stuck between a rock and a hard place. I didn't guess that daddy dearest would come and ruin everything. I just thought Eileen had some incurable disease. It's truly started things up, hasn't it?
Interesting status Hermione has. If only they knew how muddy her blood was.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It will continue to be difficult, and even after they get through this hurdle. But their love is so strong, it will not break.Thanks,Livvy
OMG, I want another chapter pronto lol. I've been switching back and forth between reading this story here and reading it on Ashwinder - I'm completely hooked and since you said you actually have the story finished I would dearly love it if you could update... say daily? I'll give you a cookie... =)
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
LOL! I am at the mercy of my beta. She can only do a chapter a week now and that is the waiting time for TPP, so I get these chapters in the queue as fast as I can. I wonder if I tried doing one with just my one beta. I'll have to see sometime. I wish I could put the whole friggin' story on all at once! But we are getting close to the halfway point, there are still many twists and turns ahead!Thanks,Livvy
I don't think I was expecting a murder/suicide. Somehow it all seems to fit, even if it makes it all so complicated. I'm sad Hermione and Severus are being separated... I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It will be even more important to remember the oaths they made. Their love will continue to be tested these next two years and then will be graduation, and then we know what happens in CHapter 1 that Hermione goes into hiding. It's going to be difficult, but they will survive it.Thanks!Livvy
Oh no! Poor Severus, poor Severus. And his training is to begin...how ominous. Another excellent chapter :)
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Yes, his training and Hermione's as well by Dumbledore. It's going to be a weird next two years before graduation!Thanks!Livvy
I can see how deep the ravine is from the edge of the cliff here.... Please say you're updating soon!!!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I try man! I do! It just takes time with the Admins so busy and the queue has lots of people in it, so it'll probably be another week, we'll see.Thanks!Livvy