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A Change is Going to Come
livvy61,513 Reviews | 7.08/10 (1,513 Ratings, 0 Likes, 730 Favorites )
NOW COMPLETE!!! An accident with a Time-Turner in 1993 sends Hermione Granger back to 1973, and she is unable to return.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for A Change is Going to Come
Wow. So I guess Hermione is done pretending she's a teenager. I'm never one to question your creative genius...But Sirius was locked up for his attack on Hermione... Didn't she know there was no way he was in the department of mysteries? Are you going to age Hermione back up to her actual age now? Too many questions... Sorry. I really enjoyed the chapter as always...I just hope there is an update soon.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Kicking ass and saving teenagers from Death Eaters took precedence, but Snape did tell him to remain behind. That will be brought up in the next chapter. Sirius is never one to follow the rules.I get the next chapter up as soon as I can!Thanks!Livvy
Wow, Hermione is going to have some serious explaining to do. This is so cool!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh, yes. A lot. And it's not going to be all that well received. Sooo, a tad uncomfortable...eeek!Thanks!Livvy
Very good detail and fighting. Really a struggle and so much was revaled in the process. Will Hermione finally face up to the truth to Harry or will she cowardly Oblivate him again?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
LOL! Tempting, eh? But, no. It's all over for that. Neville, Ginny, Luna, Ron, Harry... they all heard and the DE there know it too. It's useless to hide the truth now. So, now that the kitty is out of the bag, Hermione won't be coming back to Hogwarts for sixth year. She'll be taking a different road now, but there is still that one secret about Sirius Black. That will come back to destroy a lot between her and Harry during a very critical point down the line.Thanks for your reviews! I've been appreciating how you've continued to challenge me to think about different viewpoints. I hope you'll continue. I'm eager to read what you will think about Harry and Hermione's relationship down the line.Livvy
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
count on it!
Interesting, I wonder how things are going to develop from here?
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Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Well, as much as I would love to spill all the twists and turns, I cannot :)It's going to be a hell of a ride, though!Thanks!Livvy
From your A/N I'm taking it that Toby only attempted to rape her. I realize you were vague on details on purpose and the ‘intent’ IS clear, however, in reading that section three times, I still cannot figure out from the story just how far he managed to take it before Severus came back into the room.
From the line, '...she felt fumbling', left me thinking she felt him fumbling with his own pants and himself but her reactions don’t reflect being touched internally. However, since Toby knew Severus had not ‘made her a woman’, would indicate that he had touched her internally. That’s followed up with, she ‘…felt like her hips were broken’ seems to indicate that he did more than just touch her with his fingers. But, the final aftermath does not indicate that he had penetrated her except when Toby’s hit with the spell, you refer to him as her ‘rapist’ rather than her ‘would-be rapist’, or ‘attempted rapist’. So yes, Toby’s intent is very clear, but what actually happened …not the details, but the outcome, is rather ambiguous.Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I say "rapist" because that was his intent, and I did leave it ambiguous since she is only fourteen and the rules of this site are clear on no explicit details of sexual acts of those under the age of consent. So I made it purposefully vague. When I originally wrote it, I had it that he had placed a finger inside her and that was why he knew she was a virgin. That itself is rape. He didn't break her hymen, but it was still forcible penetration. When Severus cursed him, he was about to "do the deed", as it were. So that is the back story on that.Hermione is still intact after this assault and will remain for quite some time. The first chapter had Severus asking Hermione outside the disco if she were still "intact," and she had said yes. So, we know that Hermione was still a virgin in September of 1981.I hope if anyone who reads this review isn't offended by it. I know others read reviews, so please let me know if this has bothered anyone. Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
Wow, this was a nail biter. I think your version is just as action packed as JK's. I look forward to your next update.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh, yes. There's going to be a lot of 'splanin' to do! LOL!Thanks for your compliments!Livvy
Severus was so gentle and protective of Hermione after his awful father tried to rape her. I'm glad he Petrified the horrible pig and hopefully he will not get into any trouble for using magic.As terrible as the experience was for Hermione, I'm glad she got a chance to see the real Severus beneath all his hurt feelings.Who was Severus writing to just before he came to bed to keep Hermione warm? Hummmm... she likes his scent. (Don't we all!)Great story, livvy!!!!!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
He was sending an owl to his mum so she could get home. This will be the start of a new turn in their relationship. I thought I would put that in there to test the waters. If she likes his scent, then an attraction will happen sometime :)Thanks!Livvy
please continue! you're story is wonderful and a different spin on the usual time travel stories!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! The story is finished and I post on a regular basis, so you don't have to worry about it being abandoned. I hope you continue to enjoy it!Thanks,Livvy
Great Lord! What a mixed up set of students. Lily seems very self-centered and controlling, Severus is so possessive, and Hermione is caught in the middle.What could Dumbledore have been thinking? Sending Hermione to spend a month with the Snapes... well, she will definitely have a perfect understanding of his growing-up years were like and the influences those years had on him.Great chapter!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh yes, there is so much dysfunction to go round! Dumbledore was so concerned about saving Severus that he didn't even consider Hermione's well-being, but that's Dumbledore for you. Yes, Hermione will know exactly how the Snape household is run.Thanks!Livvy
Brilliant...!
I like this story so far, Severus' father is a disgusting pig, doesn't matter whose story he's in, he's foul.I think Lily needs some time with Hermione so she can tell her not to let Sev, Petunia & the Marauders play tug o' war with her lol. I presume this is the turning point in Hermione & Severus' relationship yippee. though I'd daresay they still have a hell of a long way to go.Can't wait for the next instalment:DxxBreezy
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Yes, there is a long road ahead for Severus and Hermione, but eventually they will get there.Thanks!Livvy
And Dumbledore sent her there. What was the old coot thinking?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thinking about saving Severus from all of evil influences in his life, but as usual, his schemes have tunnel vision and he didn't even think about what he was sending Hermione in to face.Thanks,Livvy
I'm loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it. It will be a long ride, but like I said, the story is already finished and is now being beta'd (we're ahead a bit) so you won't have to worry about a hanging WIP.Thanks!Livvy
Wow! I've been totally immersed in this story, terrible timing as I should be unpacking from a move but completely worth it. You have a lot of talent, thank you for sharing it with us :)
that was terrifyingly well written. i didn't feel it was gratuitious at all but right for the story. thanks so much for the update.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I appreeciate your words, thank you. I hope you keep on reading and interested.Thanks!Livvy
Well that was unexpected. Poor Hermione having to face Severus's father like that. I like that Severus did not abanden her to his father. What he must face when he is home, I shudder to thing of it. Why would Albus do that to her, he had to know what would happen. How could he! I hope this is the start of a friendship between Hermione and Severus . This story just gets more intriging with each chapter. Can hardly wait for the next one. Update soon please.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you. Well, that was typical Dumbledore. All he could think of was helping Snape to get an influence from a stronger personality to combat those in Slytherin. His one-track mind didn't think of Hermione's safety. But, yes, this will slowly morph into a friendship.Thanks,Livvy
This is a perfect gift the my finals week. I have to say. I'm really enjoying where this is going, and I'm sure it will only get better.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy the ride!Thanks,Livvy
Uuuuh. Poor Severus and poor Hermione. What was Dumbledore thinking? I hate to say wonderful chapter because everything that happened was so awful, but wonderful chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you. Yes, Dumbledore was doing what he does best, thinks of things in the area of the "greater good". He was so concerned about helping Snape and getting him someone who would be a help to him, he didn't even think about what could and almost did happen to Hermione.Thanks,Livvy
Wow, that was nasty. Thank heavens Snape had the presence of mind to come back and save her. It's good to know that neither of them will be killed from this action. They should just kill his father. What a horrible way to grow up.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Yes, another insight into the horror of Snape's formative years. You've got a point there about just offing his dad, though...Thanks!Livvy
I am normally not a fan of time-turner fics. I will be honest and say I almost didn't click the link to your story because of it, but I am very glad that I did! This fic is powerfully moving. We previously had only seen snipits of the abuse Severus bore, but now Tobias is real and has a life (no matter how disgusting he is). I am completely enamoured with your story and can not wait for the next chapter.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Well, I am glad I could keep your interest. I hope you keep enjoying it. I know I have laid a lot of violence at the start and some questionable interactions between Lily and Hermione, but rape and violence is not going to be the norm. Thanks for reading and reviewing!Livvy
urgh. most of the time when people have the squick warning I'm not too bothered, but this is intense.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Yes, it's going to get quite complicated very soon. But there will be more to this story than slash. It is after all, a SS/HG ship.Thanks,Livvy
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
I meant the part with snape's father...the slash didn't bother me really.
The story is really good so far-I love the way you characterized Snape and his father.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! We really have nothing to go by Tobias Snape, except he was a man prone to violent tempers. So, I created my own version.Thanks!Livvy
Oh poor poor Hermione.I think you handled the scene very well. It had to have been hard to write this out.I can't wait to see how everything resolves.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It's going to get rather complicated, that's for sure.Thanks,Livvy
Oh I feel a little teary now.I have been so angry at Sev the whole time up until now!It was very sweet of him to take care of Mione like that.And I get what everyone has been saying about Sev and Lily having a bit of an unequal relationship!He sure doesn't see a good thing staring him in the face!Lol.Anyways I hope to read more soon!Lovely writing as always!xo.Angela
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Angela,There's so much more to come, more complex issues, twists and turns before that fateful moment when Severus calls her a Mudblood. It will be rather interesting.Thanks!Livvy
Absolutely fabulous story...I loved it from start to finish, which is why it and you are now on my favorites list :D Oh, btw, you wouldn't happen to have any kids, would you? cuz the way you wrote this last chapter makes it seem like you have some knowledge about how they can be sometimes.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you so much! Yes, I have a daughter and was a live-in nanny for twin girls and a boy. I also was a preacher's daughter and was in charge of the nursery at age ten for five to ten kids at one time! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic and thanks for reviewing!Livvy