Poor Severus and it's not like the year will get better.

I love your Severus!  He is just so in character as himself and any other man who was 'interrupted'.  LOL

I've been catching up on my reading from August and skipped a few chapters in my haste to read your story.  It's simply wonderful and I've enjoyed seeing Severus and Hermione together again.  It's been a long time for them and it's lovely to see them so happy together.  Livvy, you're writing a wonderful story and I'm so happy to read it.

Incredible chapter.

wonderful!  i adore how you've combined your story with ootp.  great stuff.  thanks muchly

Fantastic update.  I love that they are finally able to express their needs and desires for each other without restraint.  Lovely!  :D  p.s. (Umbridge is vile; I can't wait until she gets hers.)

Finally! I've been waiting to read more of this story and this chapter was great! I don't know why but it looks like difficult times are coming, am I right? .. Its just a feeling I have, but I know I will have to wait! Hope you continue with the story soon, I like it a lot :)

When Harry was showing his temper with Hermione in the Great Hall, I really liked the way she put him in his place with a few reminders of how he should be behaving instead of causing himself more trouble and quarreling with his friends.I couldn't be happier for Severus and Hermione!  The time they have together now is glorious, and I'm glad that they are able to explore their love life and find ways to make each other happy. When they were making love and Severus told her how much he needed to hear her say that she would never forsake him, I felt a shiver move over me at her reply, “Severus, I will never abandon you. Only death can take me from you, and then, in death, we will be reunited. I will never give up on you. Even if the world turns its back on you, I will be your champion. My love will never end,” she swore.  When I read what she said, all I could think about was Nagini.  Oh, dear god, not that.  Not that!  Please protect them.  BTW, I love your story!Beth

I hate it when she and Harry are at odds.  So nice that Severus can spare her a bit...during daylight hours only :)  She is going to have to remember that she doesn't know too much dueling magic when they start the DA.  Is Harry already getting curious about Snape and Hermione, or was he just making a lucky guess during his little fit?  I really liked their conversation at the end when they are revealing fantasies and such.  They are really bold with moments of shyness which is oh so sweet.  I think they are slowly settling into their relationship from years gone by.  Yeah them!  Why do I know that all is not right in the world for long...

Can we castrate Tobias?  What a evil man... thank heavens Severus helped Hermione out.  Does Dumbeldore know just what a prize Sev's parents are?  In canon he wasn't particularly good at protecting his students.  Severus was used and he must have known that Harry's relatives were at best neglectful and at worse outright abusive...

Lilly strikes me as an insecure woman in this chapter and I wonder why she's into Hermione the way she is?  Is she a bisexual?

It is so interesting to see Hermione 'knowing' the marauders even though she doesn't have all the facts.  She 'knows' Sirius is the one who betrayed James and Lilly.  I wonder what she will think after time tells it's own tale.

Very enjoyable start, although Hermione is lucky she didn't get addicted to the cocaine.

What a brilliant chapter. The interactions between Severus and Hermione are beautiful. Keep the chapters coming.

Very sweet chapter!

I'll make this short, simple and sweet in just two words... "LOVING IT!!!"

Keep the chapters coming and NEVER let the story end lol

AWW!!  I just loved it.  "I'm your girl and you are my boy."  AWW!!!!!! So sappy so cute...I loved it.

It's good that she is connecting with Harry again. I hoep this time around the DA is larger and Severus gives a hand - even indirectly!

Another great chapter.  I look forward to your updates.  I like seeing things from Hermione's view.  Especially her inter actions with both Umbridge and Harry.

Just keep on reassuring him, Hermione.  He's going to need all he can get. :)

What an absolutely beautiful chapter.  I thought the wedding night was a pinnacle, but this one ranks right up there with it!  I love this story.  I'm sorry that Sirius is being such an ass still, but I'm loving the change in the relationship between Hermione and her friends and how she's doing her best to bolster Harry's self-esteem.  Severus brought up the fact that Dumbledore will ask him to teach Harry Occlumency, and I'm wondering how those sessions will play out in this altered timeline!  Severus has a lot more memories to store in a Pensieve than just the one with Lily and the Marauders... will Harry see Hermione with a teenaged Severus?  I can't wait until we get to that point, so that I can find out!Great work, and I eagerly await the next chapter!

Dayamn and wow. I am awed and exhausted by that chapter. You dried up all my words. Simply, thank you. Truly.~Mia

*sigh*  that was a lovely ceremony and night.  thanks so much for finally bringing them togther

That chapter had so much. I loved it!

I read this chapter at Ashwinder..and believe me the ending there really just killed the joy for them...of waiting so long...finally getting married and then...nothing...not lovemaking..that was really sad...i cudnt wait for u to write next chapter and post it there.....so even though i didnt had any account at Petulant Poetess...i made one..just so that i cud read the proper ending of this chapter...it was really great!!.....a job well done......now lets see how do they end this war together!....good luck for more plot bunnies....