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Potions Under Duress Fair Exchanges
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Fair Exchanges

1: 1: The Art of the Deal

2: 2: Fair and Square

3: 3: Old Habits Die Hard

4: 4: Compound Interest

5: 5: The Great Escape

6: 6: The First Brick Crumbles

7: 7: Distillations

8: 8: What Goes Around

9: 9: The Potions Master

10: 10: That Which Does Not Kill Me

11: 11: Reckoning

12: 12: Abandon

13: 13: Sensibility

14: 14: Snape's Worst Week

15: 15: Silver Linings

16: 16: Fever

17: 17: Truth

18: 18: Confrontations

19: 19: Tension

20: 20: Disclosure

21: 21: The Interpretation of Dreams

22: 22: Words of Warning

23: 23: Objects In Motion

24: 24: All The Pretty Horses

25: 25: Answering the Master

26: 26: Survivor Guilt

27: 27: Feast or Famine

28: 28: The Toad's Revenge

29: 29: The Great Escape, Part II

30: 30: A Time To Act

31: 31: Stress Management

32: 32: Atropos

33: 33: Season's End

34: 34: Spinner's End

35: 35: A Breath of Fresh Air

36: 36: His Master's Voice

37: 37: The Return of the Students

38: 38: Hermione Granger and the Half-Blood Prince

39: 39: Defense Against the Dark Arts

40: 40: The Difference Between Day and Night

41: 41: The Three-Body Problem

42: 42: The Challenge

43: 43: 9/19/1996

44: 44: The Gift

45: ??: Day of the Jackal

46: ??: An Uninvited Guest

47: 45: Snape's Best Week

Fair Exchanges

Fawkes_07

909 Reviews   |   909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 75,033 Words 52 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Dolores Jane Umbridge Draco Malfoy Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Ronald Weasley James Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Sirius Black Remus Lupin Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Ginevra Weasley Gregory Goyle Kingsley Shacklebolt Luna Lovegood Millicent Bulstrode Neville Longbottom Nymphadora Tonks Pansy Parkinson Vincent Crabbe Original Character Peter Pettigrew Fawkes Firenze Bellatrix Lestrange Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid

Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.

This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...

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Chapters (47)

Chapter 1: 1: The Art of the Deal

Chapter 2: 2: Fair and Square

Chapter 3: 3: Old Habits Die Hard

Chapter 4: 4: Compound Interest

Chapter 5: 5: The Great Escape

Chapter 6: 6: The First Brick Crumbles

Chapter 7: 7: Distillations

Chapter 8: 8: What Goes Around

Chapter 9: 9: The Potions Master

Chapter 10: 10: That Which Does Not Kill Me

Chapter 11: 11: Reckoning

Chapter 12: 12: Abandon

Chapter 13: 13: Sensibility

Chapter 14: 14: Snape's Worst Week

Chapter 15: 15: Silver Linings

Chapter 16: 16: Fever

Chapter 17: 17: Truth

Chapter 18: 18: Confrontations

Chapter 19: 19: Tension

Chapter 20: 20: Disclosure

Chapter 21: 21: The Interpretation of Dreams

Chapter 22: 22: Words of Warning

Chapter 23: 23: Objects In Motion

Chapter 24: 24: All The Pretty Horses

Chapter 25: 25: Answering the Master

Chapter 26: 26: Survivor Guilt

Chapter 27: 27: Feast or Famine

Chapter 28: 28: The Toad's Revenge

Chapter 29: 29: The Great Escape, Part II

Chapter 30: 30: A Time To Act

Chapter 31: 31: Stress Management

Chapter 32: 32: Atropos

Chapter 33: 33: Season's End

Chapter 34: 34: Spinner's End

Chapter 35: 35: A Breath of Fresh Air

Chapter 36: 36: His Master's Voice

Chapter 37: 37: The Return of the Students

Chapter 38: 38: Hermione Granger and the Half-Blood Prince

Chapter 39: 39: Defense Against the Dark Arts

Chapter 40: 40: The Difference Between Day and Night

Chapter 41: 41: The Three-Body Problem

Chapter 42: 42: The Challenge

Chapter 43: 43: 9/19/1996

Chapter 44: 44: The Gift

Chapter 45: ??: Day of the Jackal

Chapter 46: ??: An Uninvited Guest

Chapter 47: 45: Snape's Best Week


About Fawkes_07

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Fawkes_07

Member Since 2006  |  14 Stories  |  Favorited by 163  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,630 Review Responses

Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.

Wondering why my stories take forever?  Have a look at My Other Time Devourer:  www.willametteartcenter.com  I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon.  We Put The Fun Back In Art. 

    Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too. 

And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time:  If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book.  It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades)  It's here: www.turondo.com  Warning: there's a bad word in the title.

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Reviews for Fair Exchanges

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10/10

blue artemis

That was a lovely reunion. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

aren't they adorable?

10/10

wsanders

Hot chapter with a tender ending

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

That was the idea!  :)

9/10

Snapekat

I REALLY liked this. The intimacy and almost playful touching, yet without changing Snape into something everyone knows he's not. Very lush.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Oooo, nice word--"lush."  I like that.  I hope so, I was really working toward that.

10/10

ayerf

Considering the wait Hermione (and Severus, come to that) have had for that moment, I can't call either of them lucky. I can, however, be jealous. Of a fictional character.Regardless, please say that there's more where that came from!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

*grin* That was just the beginning.

0/10

Bambu

What a nice balance to the chaos in the rest of his life.  I really enjoyed their unadulterated delight in each other.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Tell ya a secret--that was kind of my goal with the whole "fair exchanges" concept.  Something's gotta give...and in this case, it looks like it'll be Hermione (snerk).

10/10

septentrion

Oh, a sweet interlude. They've deserved it, methinks.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Me too.  I've tortured Snape for so long now, I gotta give him a break.

0/10

holyflyingpig

Will the next one be on this website soon?? PLEASE!! I love this story!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I'm trying--but my son got The Barfs last week and now I've got them, so all my fics have ground to a halt.

0/10

Celtickiss

Errr, it already feels so dark knowing what's to come. Nice job writing Voldy. He always exudes an air of menace, but like Snape I have to agree that he can be kind of funny on occasion. Brill again. Update when you can.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  Workin' on it...

10/10

sregner

This is a damn good story...

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

*grin*  Thanks!

9/10

septentrion

The last sentence is very near of an open admission of what Voldemort's plans are. I'm sure that Severus will make the connection.  

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

It's tricky though--because they both know he'll be leaving the position of DADA teacher by the end of the year--so Voldy has still left him hanging...

10/10

wsanders

Thanks for persevering with this story. It seems like there's a lot more chapter left in this story.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Yeah, there's a whole year to go.

10/10

Horserider

Excellent chapter! I do so love how this runs concurrently with the book canon...more please! :D~HR

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  It's coming!

0/10

Kailin

Very good chapter.  I'd love to see Snape squash Wormtail!  And Severus does a very good job of holding it together in front of Voldy.  More soon?

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I hope so...and Herms is about to re-enter the scene.

10/10

casey

You do amaze me, having the DL make a joke about Binns and then smirk over Delores's exit escapade.  The DL possessing a sense of humour is still rather creepy though.  I look forward to the start of the new school year and more interaction between our favourite couple.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Me too.  As for Voldy--he was once handsome and charismatic, which means even if he doesn't like Teh Funneh, he probably knows how to fake it at least.  And something tells me that if he does have a sense of humor, it would be even darker than Snape's.

0/10

wilder0511

ok, I am ready for him to get back to hogwarts, thanks for the update, can't wait for more.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Yeah, I am too.  Heh heh heh.

0/10

mock_turtle

hmm...any idea when this will be updated?

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

sigh...not till I finish Heirs.

10/10

Maddie

Interesting meeting and he leaves without pain, but completely in the dark.  Well, except for hints that he won't be working for Dumbledore for much longer.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Yeah, and he knew that going in...poor guy.  He's in an information potential well.

0/10

mills

OMG!! It's about time!! I waited 4ever for this chapter! And I still love your writing, as always. Still waiting for Hermione to return.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Soon, soon...summer's long, after all.

0/10

mock_turtle

I can't believe you pulled the whole slash thing off.  I can't believe you did it.  oh. my. god.  sirius black!  oh my god.  um.  I guess I've kind of been in shock since umbriged was raped by the centaurs (and the reason snape missed the whole thing at the ministry was that he was having a centaura  orgy---clever, that) and this was just the last straw.  I don't know how you write this and still make it seem plausible to me. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

LOL! And it'll get worse before it gets better...

8/10

mekareami

I don't understand what the sunban potion would do for his hand? Thank you for the update and I hope there is another soon :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Well, it's a little sketchy but this is how I envision it:  the Sunban potion is a preventative to keep burns from happening, right?  Dumbledore has this magical burn that is slowly spreading from his hand inward.  So the sunban potion puts a stop to it.  Which means it can't cure the blackened bits, but it can keep it from getting any worse.  Which fits with Canon, because at some point Dumbles tells Harry that Snape fixed up his wounded hand as best he could...

7/10

holyflyingpig

Nice....can't wait till he sees Hermionie again though. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Next chapter...as soon as I get a chance to write it.

0/10

Persevero

I notice the OWL awards have a best cliffie category.  This has to be one of the most  - ahem - frustrating!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Snerk... yeah, I know.  I just have one more chapter of Heirs to write, and I can finally get back to all the others.

10/10

xVeElAx

Great! I love your story so much i just had to follow after reading it on mugglenet! keep up the good work!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  I have plans to continue it once I finish some other stuff.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  I have plans to continue it once I finish some other stuff.

10/10

casey

Good one!  Adding Snape's thought processes to this well known scene heightened my enjoyment.  I howled over Snape's addition to Wormtail's  drawers.  What an image.  I know I'm behind in my reading, but isn't it time for more?  please... 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

I'm trying, I just have so many fics going, I can't get to them all!

0/10

Bambu

Wonderful rationale about Dumbledore's hand.  I haven't seen this particular explanation before and I quite like it.  It's plausible, especially given your set up.  I also loved the idea that Severus spends time by the lake when the students are gone.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)

Thanks!  Yeah, it kinda came to me last night, that of COURSE Dumbles had to remove Snape from Hogwarts when he figured out the Horcruxes, because that's his secret weapon--he absolutely can't afford the chance that Voldy will pry it out of Snape.  Best of all, it fits both camps--if Dumbles doesn't trust Snape, then that's all the MORE reason to get him out of Hogwarts and far, far from Harry.  And of course the only way to get rid of him "seamlessly" is to give him the DADA job--so Voldy's own curse will remove Snape as a spy.

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