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Fair Exchanges
Fawkes_07909 Reviews | 6.76/10 (909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )
Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.
This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...
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Member Since 2006 | 14 Stories | Favorited by 163 | 109 Reviews Written | 1,630 Review Responses
Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.
Wondering why my stories take forever? Have a look at My Other Time Devourer: www.willametteartcenter.com I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon. We Put The Fun Back In Art.
Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too.
And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time: If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book. It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades) It's here: www.turondo.com Warning: there's a bad word in the title.
Reviews for Fair Exchanges
That was a lovely reunion.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
aren't they adorable?
Hot chapter with a tender ending
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
That was the idea! :)
I REALLY liked this. The intimacy and almost playful touching, yet without changing Snape into something everyone knows he's not. Very lush.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Oooo, nice word--"lush." I like that. I hope so, I was really working toward that.
Considering the wait Hermione (and Severus, come to that) have had for that moment, I can't call either of them lucky. I can, however, be jealous. Of a fictional character.Regardless, please say that there's more where that came from!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* That was just the beginning.
What a nice balance to the chaos in the rest of his life. I really enjoyed their unadulterated delight in each other.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Tell ya a secret--that was kind of my goal with the whole "fair exchanges" concept. Something's gotta give...and in this case, it looks like it'll be Hermione (snerk).
Oh, a sweet interlude. They've deserved it, methinks.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Me too. I've tortured Snape for so long now, I gotta give him a break.
Will the next one be on this website soon?? PLEASE!! I love this story!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I'm trying--but my son got The Barfs last week and now I've got them, so all my fics have ground to a halt.
Errr, it already feels so dark knowing what's to come. Nice job writing Voldy. He always exudes an air of menace, but like Snape I have to agree that he can be kind of funny on occasion. Brill again. Update when you can.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! Workin' on it...
This is a damn good story...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*grin* Thanks!
The last sentence is very near of an open admission of what Voldemort's plans are. I'm sure that Severus will make the connection.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
It's tricky though--because they both know he'll be leaving the position of DADA teacher by the end of the year--so Voldy has still left him hanging...
Thanks for persevering with this story. It seems like there's a lot more chapter left in this story.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yeah, there's a whole year to go.
Excellent chapter! I do so love how this runs concurrently with the book canon...more please! :D~HR
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! It's coming!
Very good chapter. I'd love to see Snape squash Wormtail! And Severus does a very good job of holding it together in front of Voldy. More soon?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I hope so...and Herms is about to re-enter the scene.
You do amaze me, having the DL make a joke about Binns and then smirk over Delores's exit escapade. The DL possessing a sense of humour is still rather creepy though. I look forward to the start of the new school year and more interaction between our favourite couple.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Me too. As for Voldy--he was once handsome and charismatic, which means even if he doesn't like Teh Funneh, he probably knows how to fake it at least. And something tells me that if he does have a sense of humor, it would be even darker than Snape's.
ok, I am ready for him to get back to hogwarts, thanks for the update, can't wait for more.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yeah, I am too. Heh heh heh.
hmm...any idea when this will be updated?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
sigh...not till I finish Heirs.
Interesting meeting and he leaves without pain, but completely in the dark. Well, except for hints that he won't be working for Dumbledore for much longer.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yeah, and he knew that going in...poor guy. He's in an information potential well.
OMG!! It's about time!! I waited 4ever for this chapter! And I still love your writing, as always. Still waiting for Hermione to return.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Soon, soon...summer's long, after all.
I can't believe you pulled the whole slash thing off. I can't believe you did it. oh. my. god. sirius black! oh my god. um. I guess I've kind of been in shock since umbriged was raped by the centaurs (and the reason snape missed the whole thing at the ministry was that he was having a centaura orgy---clever, that) and this was just the last straw. I don't know how you write this and still make it seem plausible to me.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
LOL! And it'll get worse before it gets better...
I don't understand what the sunban potion would do for his hand? Thank you for the update and I hope there is another soon :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, it's a little sketchy but this is how I envision it: the Sunban potion is a preventative to keep burns from happening, right? Dumbledore has this magical burn that is slowly spreading from his hand inward. So the sunban potion puts a stop to it. Which means it can't cure the blackened bits, but it can keep it from getting any worse. Which fits with Canon, because at some point Dumbles tells Harry that Snape fixed up his wounded hand as best he could...
Nice....can't wait till he sees Hermionie again though.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Next chapter...as soon as I get a chance to write it.
I notice the OWL awards have a best cliffie category. This has to be one of the most - ahem - frustrating!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Snerk... yeah, I know. I just have one more chapter of Heirs to write, and I can finally get back to all the others.
Great! I love your story so much i just had to follow after reading it on mugglenet! keep up the good work!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! I have plans to continue it once I finish some other stuff.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! I have plans to continue it once I finish some other stuff.
Good one! Adding Snape's thought processes to this well known scene heightened my enjoyment. I howled over Snape's addition to Wormtail's drawers. What an image. I know I'm behind in my reading, but isn't it time for more? please...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
I'm trying, I just have so many fics going, I can't get to them all!
Wonderful rationale about Dumbledore's hand. I haven't seen this particular explanation before and I quite like it. It's plausible, especially given your set up. I also loved the idea that Severus spends time by the lake when the students are gone.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! Yeah, it kinda came to me last night, that of COURSE Dumbles had to remove Snape from Hogwarts when he figured out the Horcruxes, because that's his secret weapon--he absolutely can't afford the chance that Voldy will pry it out of Snape. Best of all, it fits both camps--if Dumbles doesn't trust Snape, then that's all the MORE reason to get him out of Hogwarts and far, far from Harry. And of course the only way to get rid of him "seamlessly" is to give him the DADA job--so Voldy's own curse will remove Snape as a spy.