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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

The Godfather

Muggline

828 Reviews   |   828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Arthur Weasley Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Filius Flitwick George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Original Character Pomona Sprout Poppy Pomfrey Rita Skeeter Rolanda Hooch Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape

Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: The Visit

Chapter 2: The Christening

Chapter 3: Happy Holidays?

Chapter 4: Christmas Eve

Chapter 5: Christmas Eve continued

Chapter 6: Christmas morning

Chapter 7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

Chapter 8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

Chapter 9: Gone for Good

Chapter 10: Much Ado about Something

Chapter 11: Birthday Party

Chapter 12: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 13: Alumni Ball

Chapter 14: A Dance

Chapter 15: Denial

Chapter 16: Scales are falling

Chapter 17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

Chapter 18: Havoc

Chapter 19: Hope and Despair

Chapter 20: Waiting

Chapter 21: Relief

Chapter 22: Profound Communication

Chapter 23: The Dance

Chapter 24: Relapse

Chapter 25: Aftermath

Chapter 26: A Pensieve Memory

Chapter 27: Career Advice

Chapter 28: Family Affairs

Chapter 29: Where are you?

Chapter 30: Reciprocating

Chapter 31: Earthquake

Chapter 32: Constant Dripping...

Chapter 33: Housewarming

Chapter 34: Epilogue


About Muggline

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Member Since 2008  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 61  |  849 Reviews Written  |  1,064 Review Responses

Reviews for The Godfather

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10/10

emmeline33

It was as if she was tasting some fruit she had never seen before. A fruit whose aroma she had been thinking about for a very long time and which turned out to be completely different from her expectations. She was unable to tell whether it tasted good or bad, it was just... different. Not unsavoury, simply different. It made her want to taste more.Those lines were so elegant and poetic.  This story is so gentle and profound. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes. Marisol for president! (and boy did I have a hard time translating this... )

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes. Marisol for president! (and boy did I have a hard time translating this... )

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite lovely.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, my dear, lovely indeed ;-)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, my dear, lovely indeed ;-)

10/10

potterbrat

Yep, you should be ashamed of yourself with a cliffy like that.  Excellent!!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Don't be so hypocritical – I know that this is just what you like... ;-)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Don't be so hypocritical – I know that this is just what you like... ;-)

0/10

sunny33

yep, it was a good cliffie!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You're actually the first one who finds it good - thank you!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I just checked - the next chapter has moved to #5 in the queue, so it might even post tonight...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You're actually the first one who finds it good - thank you!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I just checked - the next chapter has moved to #5 in the queue, so it might even post tonight...

10/10

kittylefish

ok, i guess you made it clear we can't blame the messenger for another evil cliffie. little james's reactions to severus are very well-written and tugged at my heartstrings. thanks so much for translating this story for us as i would never have been able to read it otherwise. :D

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*Takes another bow*

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*Takes another bow*

10/10

WickedlyWanton

*snicker*  Now I see why the warning at the beginning was needed!  I promise not to berate you, but I make no such concession to Marisol!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yeah, she's quite a cliff-junkie that one!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yeah, she's quite a cliff-junkie that one!

9/10

magalena

Oh you evil, evil author!!! Way to leave us hanging!!   I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I know it sounds mean, but that was the intention behind it all...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I know it sounds mean, but that was the intention behind it all...

0/10

Nessa

Now thats not very nice!?! A cliffe hanger like that!! Please to leave it to long to update pretty please!!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I already updated it and if the admins keep up their frantic pace, it ought to post during the weekend.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I already updated it and if the admins keep up their frantic pace, it ought to post during the weekend.

10/10

Maggie

That is a really evil cliffe......  Don't make us wait as long....

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

As I said, next chapter's in the queue.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

As I said, next chapter's in the queue.

10/10

geomancer

Ohhhhhhh, that is NOT cool....Evil, Evil Cliffie. OK I am over that, looking forward to MORE SOON!!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, Ma'am!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, Ma'am!

10/10

bournespeed

ooooooo so evil.....how are we to sleep without knowing how the little'un is?Waiting on tenderhooks

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

erm – in your bed, lying down? ;-) *pats shoulder* it's only a story, my darling...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

erm – in your bed, lying down? ;-) *pats shoulder* it's only a story, my darling...

10/10

reets67

GAAAHHH! Such a throughly evil cliffie! I'm off to try and read it in my fractured German. As always great story!Cheers

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Now isn't this a great educational feat? I am enticing people to brush up their German! I ought to get money from the Goethe institute!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Now isn't this a great educational feat? I am enticing people to brush up their German! I ought to get money from the Goethe institute!

10/10

livvy6

Glad you warned us. Goodness! I hope this will be good news and that this will finally bring Severus and Hermione together and they will stop fighting their feelings!Thanks :)Livvy

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

With a little bit of luck I might put you out of your misery within the next few days. But It won't suddenly become a fluffy story...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

With a little bit of luck I might put you out of your misery within the next few days. But It won't suddenly become a fluffy story...

0/10

Hegatha

nooooooooo!! you cant leave it like that

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

As I said before – yes I can ;-)

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

As I said before – yes I can ;-)

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

Thank you for an excellent chapter.  I think you both did a good job expressing the way it feels to wait for someone to live or die.  I admit I am happy to see the next chapter is in queue.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you! And Marisol even promised to write the remaining chapters soon!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you! And Marisol even promised to write the remaining chapters soon!

0/10

ivys

hey,you can't stop here,I need new chapter soon,I mean you have 5 minutes to update...by the way this is a great story and thanks  for posting it

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I actually posted the next chapter only two days after this one. But there are many marvellous stories to validate, so my chapter has to stand in line with those.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I actually posted the next chapter only two days after this one. But there are many marvellous stories to validate, so my chapter has to stand in line with those.

10/10

sregner

That is cruel...but it's her story!  Poor baby James!  And poor, poor baby Albus!  And I will wait for the next installment with bated breath!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you for your review, but try not to suffocate until the next chapter, okay?

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you for your review, but try not to suffocate until the next chapter, okay?

10/10

snitchette

Even with your warning it's evil. MAybe I should look into my old school manual of German and see if I can grasp anything from the next chapter. *wish I practiced more german in the past*

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

No need to worry. The next chapter has already moved to no. 10 in the queue...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

No need to worry. The next chapter has already moved to no. 10 in the queue...

0/10

CharmedForce

Gah! What an evil cliffhanger! The pain that Hermione, James and Severus are feeling is very apparent. Well done!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*Takes a bow* I live to please...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*Takes a bow* I live to please...

10/10

emmeline33

Ooh, Marisol, evil, evil cliffhanger!  Oh, well, I can tolerate it, because this is such a phenomenal story.  I was very glad to see the update!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you (in the name of Marisol) for your review! You might be glad to hear that Marisol posted Chapter 25 on the German page today and promised to update weekly from now on to the end of it!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thank you (in the name of Marisol) for your review! You might be glad to hear that Marisol posted Chapter 25 on the German page today and promised to update weekly from now on to the end of it!

10/10

braye27

Another cliff hanger!  What a wonderful chapter, and I am happy to see that the next one is in the queue.Well done!Beth

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, things are going a little faster this time.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, things are going a little faster this time.

0/10

Enitna

Rahhhhhhhh UPDATE please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I hate suspense like this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!And this is a great story.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*snicker* oh yes, keep begging...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*snicker* oh yes, keep begging...

10/10

braye27

This story is amazing, wonderful... and this chapter is heart wrenching.  My compliments to the author and to you for making it available to us.  Thanks you!Beth

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You're welcome!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

You're welcome!

10/10

Marble Meadow

Oh no....I can't imagine all of this! I'm sad and hopeful at the same time. I really hope he didn't die...Wonderful translation... it's a beautiful story.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Now get yourself a nice hot cup of tea and relax. The next chapter will be online in no time. (Am I evil if I relish in the fact that I seem to make you beg? ;-)  )

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Now get yourself a nice hot cup of tea and relax. The next chapter will be online in no time. (Am I evil if I relish in the fact that I seem to make you beg? ;-)  )

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

For the love of God, UPDATE!!!! What a horrible cliffy! Update, please, please, please!!!!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, I love it when they beg...

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, I love it when they beg...

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