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Fair Exchanges
Fawkes_07909 Reviews | 6.76/10 (909 Ratings, 0 Likes, 358 Favorites )
Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Severus Snape is not known for his generous nature. Both may learn more than they bargained for before the tale ends.
This is canon-compliant with books 5 and 6 and provides a behind-the-scenes story that JKR never even guessed...
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Someone who really, REALLY ought to be doing something else, but just keeps on writing.
Wondering why my stories take forever? Have a look at My Other Time Devourer: www.willametteartcenter.com I'm both the webmaster and the president of the Friends of the Visual Arts, a 501-C3 nonprofit in Salem, Oregon. We Put The Fun Back In Art.
Having 2 sweet little boys tends to drag things out too.
And what the heck, as long as it's self-pimpage time: If you just can't wait for the next chapter of Fair Ex, you can always go buy my book. It's not HP or fanfic but it's got that Fawkesy snark (in spades) It's here: www.turondo.com Warning: there's a bad word in the title.
Reviews for Fair Exchanges
This chapter makes a good contrast with the prior one as you present Snape's interaction with another female who is totally different from the last. I'm hoping the vow he made her never comes directly to a test.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
That was just what I was shooting for--that Snape is such a slick smoothie, he's like two different people depending on whom he's with. As a matter of fact, though, Snape's vow does get tested in about Chapter 40 or so, but not in the way you'd think.
awwwww...*sniff*...that was so sweet. Who knew ole' Sev had it in him?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Apparently not Lucius...
Awww...The little babie cetnaurs were so CUTE! <3 the story! p.s.: are snape and hermione gonna make-out soon?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
They'll get there...patience, grasshopper!
Oh, my, the Centaura, and now Draco? What next? You've got a very wicked imagination, and I like that.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Hee hee hee. Me too. *preens*
WOOt for another chappie! I LOVE how the story is going along, everything fits in so well! LOL...'I was being laid'-brilliant! XD
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Someone told me they snorted their drink all over their screen when they read that line...death by fanfic.
You can't leave it like that !(Pout) I have to admit I never would have seen that coming if it hadn't been for the warning at the top of the chapter. Oh man, you are good; now I am practically salivating to find out what Severus is going to do! You darn brilliant writer with your cliffies! :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snort* I try. I love springing surprises on people.
You really made me feel for Severus, and I actually pity him. I used to think he deserved what he got for joining the Death Eaters, but this chapter truly evokes my sympathies.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
The guy just has a miserable existence (at least when I have the chance to write it).
I've finally found time to reread your story rather than just resuming where I left off over there. I'm enjoying it all over again.This chapter is exceptionally funny, showing the interaction of two very socially stiff characters (as perceived in canon at any rate). The humor builds along with the tension as he tries to elude her manipulation finally lying to escape her sexual attention, a step too far over the line even for the sake of duty as far as he's concerned. It's delicious that he sets up potential retribution for Lucius too. Good job.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks! Ch. 5 is still my favorite too, although I love the owl that comes along later.
::gasp:: What an absolutely brilliant device to introduce for the tension between the two later on. ::applauds wildly::One of the things I like best about your story is its inventiveness.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
THANKS! That's EXACTLY what I'm shooting for--setting up the tension in Book 6 (but don't tell anyone, I want it to be a surprise)
Dear Merlin, ANOTHER side trip? Are you getting bored with the original plot, dear Author?
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Heck no! The original plot is to torture Snape mercilessly, and I'm in full swing!
I'm not too sure I like this twist---a little too creepy for my taste. Snape has been like a father to him--it smacks of incest. Let's hope Snape get's out of this one quickly! Overall a fabulous tale though!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, yeah, but sometimes life's like that...
Good grief, first the centaura, now Draco? I suppose I shouldn't be surprised if the every inhabitant of Hogwarts right up to the giant squid makes a play for Severus next. Then if Voldemort learned of it, Harry wouldn't need to kill him as said Dark Lord would probably laugh his head off. This story is getting ever more surreal, but that's not a bad thing- just... different.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Well, he's really just having one of Those Days. It'll get normal again before too long.
oh goodness! Sev is getting people throwing themselves at him left and right. Hopefully he won't have to deal with the Headmaster too..
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*snort* He's lucky Voldy didn't take a hankering to him...
Uh oh. It's just one complication after another for poor Severus.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Exactly. I have days like that all the time. Ergo, Snape will too.
I'm glad things seem to be returning to normal. The last few chapters were...surreal, to say the least! Were they planned from the beginning? While I enjoyed the farcical interlude for it's own sake (much like the dramas of old, eh?), it seemed to be quite a departure from the initial tone of the story. Oh, & I do hope Herms forgives Severus for his 'indiscretions' with the centaura, or better yet, never finds out!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Heh, funny you should ask. This story was ONLY ever meant to be about Hermione's dream, actually. I'd come up with that idea during the process of writing Heirs of Slytherin, but that topic was obviously not something for my 9 year old to read! In my mind it played out between Harry and Hermione and was rather cute, but when I decided to go ahead and write it, I figured I'd use Snape instead. Sheesh. Big mistake. All I'd wanted to do was set up a situation where she would be permitting him to do Legilimency on her but without letting him see the dreams. But then I realized she needed a way to Floo into his room with Umbridge watching the fireplaces...and then that he'd be too paranoid to handle that...and then that Umbridge was bound to come and ask for Veritaserum...and the rest is history. It just took off on its own. The fact that the tone changes is OK, I think, because it reflects Snape's emotional state--at first he was cold and reserved, then warming up, and right now he's in a huge turmoil because of all that's happened...I think it's working. Maybe. But there's still a lot of turmoil and I have a little more torture to inflict on him before things settle down...as you'll soon see.
This is a great story and I hope you continue it! I look forward to the next chapter! I really enjoy the way you portray Snape...He's come alive here. Very witty and clever, and I like the asides within the characters minds (esp his)
Thanks for a great read! PLease update!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Thanks for the kind review!
It was not until he closed and locked the door to his private chamber that Snape fell to his knees, his mouth stretched wide in a silent scream.Sometimes I wonder how this man is able to balance it all and retain his sanity. He walks on the edge of a knife and a slip in either direction could prove deadly. Good thing the centaura have added mirth to the story he gave his Dark Master. It sucks that one of his spells was mutated and used against Hermione. I am glad he was able to deduce this after questioning Neville so she could be treated properly.This chapter was brill, just like all the others. The humor you inject make the moments of angst so much more bearable.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
All things lead to the glory of Illuvatar. I like to think that the angst makes the humor bearable. *wink*
1. best wishes for a full recovery posthaste!2. can't wait for the next chapter-in-line... :)3. hee hee hee hee hee hee hee....
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
:) Thanks!
I enjoyed this chapter and do like the fact that you are creating a story not just a torrid fic about sex and completely unrealistic relationships.Elen
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Heh, well, I don't know about THAT--better withhold judgement until you read the next 5 or so chapters...*sheepish grin*
As always, another great chapter! Thanks again for keeping us so entertained.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Anything for such nice reviews... ;)
Oh this story just gets better and better. Thanks for the imagery of the centaurs and their young. For some reason, I never thought about what their foals would look and act like. I can't wait to see what you present next. Thanks for posting. JoAnne
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
*bows* :)
Terminally cute! But way too short. You are rapidly running out of canon, though.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
What do you mean, I have a whole nother book!! ;)
Lovely chapter. LOL, poor Severus, he's probably on every Centaur's hit list, and on every Centaura's wish list all at the same time.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Isn't it awesome? Now we know who REALLY rules the forest.
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
LOL, yeah I loved that the little Centaur made the declaration and then the little Centarua basically crapped on it. And I love how she asked Severus for some strawberry scented shampoo, that was cute.
Lovely, lovely. What a great twist to make Dolohov's curse a twist on a curse Severus himself created. What marvelous transitive guilt! He's quite right about Wormtail keeping a closer eye on him ... at least Severus is still at Hogwarts where there is some privacy, but you set up the events of the summer with great plausibility.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Fair Exchanges)
Yah, that'll be fun to play out once I get past Book 5.