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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge Love Remains
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Love Remains

1: Before

2: After

3: Reconciliation

4: Restored

5: The Birth of a Family

6: Wanting

7: Denial

8: Resolved

9: The Death of a Family

10: Silence

11: Compassion

12: Denied

13: Loathing

14: Wanted and Unwanted

15: A True Father

16: Love and Hate

17: Young Women

18: Fathers and Sons

19: Confusion

20: Consequences of Normalcy

21: Between Wanting and Having

22: The Small Questions

23: Pure-bloods and Muggle-borns

24: Learning

25: Testing

26: Confessions

27: Warmth

28: Christmas at the Burrow

29: Choices

30: The Birth of a New Family

Love Remains

livvy6

500 Reviews   |   500 Ratings, 0 Likes, 31 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 72,103 Words 30 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Ginevra Weasley James Potter Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Rubeus Hagrid Sirius Black Original Character Hermione Granger Neville Longbottom Lucius Malfoy Poppy Pomfrey

Lily's life doesn't end when Voldemort hexes her. Instead, she and Harry go into hiding, but are things truly any better for her?

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Chapters (30)

Chapter 1: Before

Chapter 2: After

Chapter 3: Reconciliation

Chapter 4: Restored

Chapter 5: The Birth of a Family

Chapter 6: Wanting

Chapter 7: Denial

Chapter 8: Resolved

Chapter 9: The Death of a Family

Chapter 10: Silence

Chapter 11: Compassion

Chapter 12: Denied

Chapter 13: Loathing

Chapter 14: Wanted and Unwanted

Chapter 15: A True Father

Chapter 16: Love and Hate

Chapter 17: Young Women

Chapter 18: Fathers and Sons

Chapter 19: Confusion

Chapter 20: Consequences of Normalcy

Chapter 21: Between Wanting and Having

Chapter 22: The Small Questions

Chapter 23: Pure-bloods and Muggle-borns

Chapter 24: Learning

Chapter 25: Testing

Chapter 26: Confessions

Chapter 27: Warmth

Chapter 28: Christmas at the Burrow

Chapter 29: Choices

Chapter 30: The Birth of a New Family


About livvy6

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livvy6

Member Since 2007  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 655  |  625 Reviews Written  |  6,131 Review Responses

I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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Reviews for Love Remains

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10/10

blue artemis

Severus is being an idiot.  Ah, well.  What Harry wouldn't give to know that he was loved like that. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

He will find out the truth and it will take a series of many discussions between the two before a resolution can be made.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

He will find out the truth and it will take a series of many discussions between the two before a resolution can be made.

9/10

kittylefish

interesting take on why he was so nasty to harry.  kind of exciting now that we've moved forward in time.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks! I hope you keep enjoying the reest of the fic!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks! I hope you keep enjoying the reest of the fic!

10/10

Muggline

Some parents never get the difference between teaching the children the ways of the world, offering them a safe haven in the process, and torturing them day and night. Thanks for updating!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

True, especially when their own example of parenting was just as torturous. Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

True, especially when their own example of parenting was just as torturous. Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

kittylefish

this chapter was so sad, starting as it did with him brooding over harry, and then moving on to his next painful rejection from a woman.  i'm very nervous of how he will react to this setback.  however, i did not really like the idea of a more intimate relationship between them, given how their acquaintance began.  so frankly, i'm kind of relieved that didn't go where he wanted it to, although i feel for his pain, which will probably transmute into some kind of awful rage.  having read the reviews and your responses, i am glad to know that things will take a turn for the better soonish. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, it really could not happen between them, it would never have worked. Although an emotionally healthy person could understand, we know Snape is not emotionally stable and has a huge chip on his shoulder, which is why he goes and sleeps with prostitues instead of going for relationships anyway. Now with this rejection, he will descend into his lowest period of self-loathing. The next chapter will be very difficult to handle, but I promise after that, things will start to slowly turn upwards for Snape. He will rekindle his friendship with Lupin and work on focusing on Harry's well-being, albeit from a distance.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, it really could not happen between them, it would never have worked. Although an emotionally healthy person could understand, we know Snape is not emotionally stable and has a huge chip on his shoulder, which is why he goes and sleeps with prostitues instead of going for relationships anyway. Now with this rejection, he will descend into his lowest period of self-loathing. The next chapter will be very difficult to handle, but I promise after that, things will start to slowly turn upwards for Snape. He will rekindle his friendship with Lupin and work on focusing on Harry's well-being, albeit from a distance.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

reets67

Another great chapter it dovetails in with Canon so well. With the previous warning that you have given in the back of my mind this turn of events will not be good.Cheers.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter will be the worst, but then the story will take a change and will start to move in another direction that will bring Severus towards finding true love.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter will be the worst, but then the story will take a change and will start to move in another direction that will bring Severus towards finding true love.

0/10

elsolel

OW.  That had to hurt. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah, life sucks right now. But in a couple of chapters things will start to turn.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah, life sucks right now. But in a couple of chapters things will start to turn.

0/10

kimjo2

it really sucks to be severus.  what a wrenching story but you are doing it beautifully.  thanks

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you are enjoying it! THanks for reviewing.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you are enjoying it! THanks for reviewing.

9/10

Shadow

No wonder he is so absolutely cold and remote. Every time he tries to open up to a woman she does something to betray that trust he has been so slow to build up. He even feels betrayed by Lupin - the one person he would have called friend. I hope he gets his happy ending.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

He will, I promise! Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

He will, I promise! Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

blue artemis

That isn't going to go well for Severus, is it.  You know, this gets harder and harder to read, because someone can only take so many hard knocks before they really lose all sense of emotional well being.  Not that I think Severus has much of one at this point. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Just remember this fic is called "Love Remains", so don't give up hope! The next chapter will be lowest point, but then things will start to turn around for our favorite Potions Master!Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Just remember this fic is called "Love Remains", so don't give up hope! The next chapter will be lowest point, but then things will start to turn around for our favorite Potions Master!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

snuggleslut

ouch, no oc love for Severus, I'm going to take a geuss and say he has to wait for Hermione to grow up, but maybe that's just wishful thinking

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

We'll have to wait and see :) THanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

We'll have to wait and see :) THanks for reviewing!

0/10

kimbee73

Wow that was cold. I mean she knew him and still was unsure because someone told her to be. I hope he finds true love soon.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

She probably never really loved him to begin with, after all, their inital meeting was not anything she could ever forget. Then there was the fact he never told her he was a Death Eater.But on the whole, she was cold about how she handled it. I promise he will find true love!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

She probably never really loved him to begin with, after all, their inital meeting was not anything she could ever forget. Then there was the fact he never told her he was a Death Eater.But on the whole, she was cold about how she handled it. I promise he will find true love!

0/10

kimbee73

Wow...Snape needs help. Poor Moira, I feel for her but I think he may help....there must be some good in him still.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

There is good in him. There always will be. THanks for reviewing.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

There is good in him. There always will be. THanks for reviewing.

10/10

portugal_faro

I still like you and your story but you've been very mean to poor Snape. I hope you are going to make him happy some time soon.  Many thanks.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I promise he will find real love. I do believe in happy endings!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I promise he will find real love. I do believe in happy endings!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Awww, poor Severus.  Please update soon!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will! Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

sunny33

Oh. you are so mean to Sev! Poor fellow can't get an even break!  I hope you have nice things planned for him later?  :)

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I promise that he will find love- real love. Just hang in there. The next chapter is not going to be nice, but after that, the story wil take another turn for the better.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I promise that he will find love- real love. Just hang in there. The next chapter is not going to be nice, but after that, the story wil take another turn for the better.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Muggline

Poor sod. Will this Snape-bashing ever end? Of course I know that this has to go on until the end of the seventh year, but this does not make it easier to read. On the other hand, the fact that my heart goes out to your version of Severus Snape speaks for your writing abilities. I am looking forward to the next update!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter will be difficult, the lowest point for Severus, however after that, things will start to change. I promise I love happy endings!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter will be difficult, the lowest point for Severus, however after that, things will start to change. I promise I love happy endings!

0/10

StormySkize

Wow, well that wasn't what I would expect of him at all. He needs to pull himself together!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Snape is really spiraling out of control. It will be rough couple of chapters, but with Lupin's help he will find his way out of the darkness.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Snape is really spiraling out of control. It will be rough couple of chapters, but with Lupin's help he will find his way out of the darkness.Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

klschmidt

Powerful.  And that he wanted to make sure she didn't make this a part of her life.  There's still good in there even if he doesn't want to admit it.  :-D

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

There is good in him, although the next two chapters just may send him over the edge. Poor Severus.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

There is good in him, although the next two chapters just may send him over the edge. Poor Severus.

0/10

klschmidt

Wonderful.  So sad at the funeral, and that Harry was ripped from Severus' life.  Then his painful coming-to-grips with Harry coming to Hogwarts.  And finally (for this chapter) dealing with one of the Marauders.  Great job!:-D

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks!Remus will continue to grow in the story and become a close friend of Severus' as time goes by.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks!Remus will continue to grow in the story and become a close friend of Severus' as time goes by.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh I liked the way you handled the conversaton between Lupin and Severus. I know he hates Sirius so much that he's blind - but it will only increase the shock to find out who's right. I like that after, he was willing to help the girl. But why the compasion? He's making himself into such a cold prick... still it's nice to see that he's not all to gone to care anymore.Thia is still one of my faorites for the challenge.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah! Snape is defeinatly going off the deep end. He is so full of self-loathing he is just lashing out where he can. But he still has a ways to go before he can coming to understanding. He will always retain that good part of himself. He loves Harry, he has a promise to keep for him.I'm glad you are still liking the story!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah! Snape is defeinatly going off the deep end. He is so full of self-loathing he is just lashing out where he can. But he still has a ways to go before he can coming to understanding. He will always retain that good part of himself. He loves Harry, he has a promise to keep for him.I'm glad you are still liking the story!

0/10

kimbee73

Oh I hope Lily doesn't commit suicide. So sad she feels she may have to. Update soon.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will update as soon as I can! Thanks for reviewing.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will update as soon as I can! Thanks for reviewing.

0/10

sunny33

oh that is so sad and unnecessary, it must be her depression talking!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, she is so depressed she isn't thinking clearly. So sad.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, she is so depressed she isn't thinking clearly. So sad.

10/10

Shadow

No, Lily! That is never the right solution. rather find another way, but there must be something else she can do. Does she not realise Harry needs much more than an ex-Death Eater as a role model. He really needs her too!Oh, please update soon!!!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will update as soon as I can. It is so sad what depression can do to a person's mind.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I will update as soon as I can. It is so sad what depression can do to a person's mind.

0/10

klschmidt

Oh dear - is this the end of Lily or is she just leaving?  I agree you are a cruel, cruel one!  (lol)  Please don't leave us hanging long.This could be what makes Severus so bitter?Great chapter, by the way.  :-D

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

LOL! I will update as soon as I can!Good question, what is Lily up to?

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

LOL! I will update as soon as I can!Good question, what is Lily up to?

10/10

carley9

Oh my goodness!  I didn't expect to see that coming.  Poor Severus, I hope he does good for Harry.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter is going to be very revealing. I hope you like it.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

The next chapter is going to be very revealing. I hope you like it.

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