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Love Remains

1: Before

2: After

3: Reconciliation

4: Restored

5: The Birth of a Family

6: Wanting

7: Denial

8: Resolved

9: The Death of a Family

10: Silence

11: Compassion

12: Denied

13: Loathing

14: Wanted and Unwanted

15: A True Father

16: Love and Hate

17: Young Women

18: Fathers and Sons

19: Confusion

20: Consequences of Normalcy

21: Between Wanting and Having

22: The Small Questions

23: Pure-bloods and Muggle-borns

24: Learning

25: Testing

26: Confessions

27: Warmth

28: Christmas at the Burrow

29: Choices

30: The Birth of a New Family

Love Remains

livvy6

500 Reviews   |   500 Ratings, 0 Likes, 31 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 72,103 Words 30 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Ginevra Weasley James Potter Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Rubeus Hagrid Sirius Black Original Character Hermione Granger Neville Longbottom Lucius Malfoy Poppy Pomfrey

Lily's life doesn't end when Voldemort hexes her. Instead, she and Harry go into hiding, but are things truly any better for her?

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Chapters (30)

Chapter 1: Before

Chapter 2: After

Chapter 3: Reconciliation

Chapter 4: Restored

Chapter 5: The Birth of a Family

Chapter 6: Wanting

Chapter 7: Denial

Chapter 8: Resolved

Chapter 9: The Death of a Family

Chapter 10: Silence

Chapter 11: Compassion

Chapter 12: Denied

Chapter 13: Loathing

Chapter 14: Wanted and Unwanted

Chapter 15: A True Father

Chapter 16: Love and Hate

Chapter 17: Young Women

Chapter 18: Fathers and Sons

Chapter 19: Confusion

Chapter 20: Consequences of Normalcy

Chapter 21: Between Wanting and Having

Chapter 22: The Small Questions

Chapter 23: Pure-bloods and Muggle-borns

Chapter 24: Learning

Chapter 25: Testing

Chapter 26: Confessions

Chapter 27: Warmth

Chapter 28: Christmas at the Burrow

Chapter 29: Choices

Chapter 30: The Birth of a New Family


About livvy6

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livvy6

Member Since 2007  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 655  |  625 Reviews Written  |  6,131 Review Responses

I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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Reviews for Love Remains

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phoenix

Poor Severus having to be reminded of his failure at every turn. I can only imagine how horrible that must feel. No wonder he behaved the way he did.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, it is a very difficult for him to continue. He is eaten up with so many various emotions, it is easy to see how he can act so bitterly

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, it is a very difficult for him to continue. He is eaten up with so many various emotions, it is easy to see how he can act so bitterly

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phoenix

Oh, Lily. If only you had known the consequences of your actions, that Severus would not get Harry that you were sending him to your sister. Painful, but a good way to jump back to canon. I can see Severus asking for that, that Harry not know what had happened.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you. I do enjoy weaving in canon when I can. Yes, a lot of pain still to come.Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you. I do enjoy weaving in canon when I can. Yes, a lot of pain still to come.Thanks!

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phoenix

Oh, Lily, you aren't.... Please let Severus or someone stop her. No matter what Harry needs her.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Lily unfortunately is very mentally unstable and is not thinking correctly. However, later on in the story we will learn of an aspect of wizarding life that Lily is aware of and Severus has turned a blind eye towards because of his love for her. It will make her decision less selfish

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Lily unfortunately is very mentally unstable and is not thinking correctly. However, later on in the story we will learn of an aspect of wizarding life that Lily is aware of and Severus has turned a blind eye towards because of his love for her. It will make her decision less selfish

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phoenix

Oh, Remus, you know how to hit below the belt. I think Lily needed to hear it, but it's always harsh having someone confront you with the truth. I really hope she doesn't give up on her own happiness just for Harry. It is important for both of them to have happiness.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, Remus was a bit blunt there. Not exactly what Lily needed to hear.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, Remus was a bit blunt there. Not exactly what Lily needed to hear.

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phoenix

Poor Lily. I can really see her being so conflicted with everything that is going on. She loves Severus as a friend but nothing more, but that Harry has found someone stable in him. It really is a deep pickle that she's in.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, she's really setting herself up for a heartbreak.Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yes, she's really setting herself up for a heartbreak.Thanks!

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phoenix

Wonderful job working that bit of canon with Sirius in. I was wondering if he was still going to go after Peter, albeit a few days later. And nice confession scene with Severus baring his soul to Lily. I think that was very well done. I can see her being horrified, but still accepting of the fact that he had changed.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed how I worked with canon into the story.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed how I worked with canon into the story.Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

I can definitely see Sirius having a meltdown over that. And Severus is being a good and decent man by turning away her affections when she's not ready for it. I'm really enjoying how this is unfolding and hope to finish it tonight or tomorrow.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you are enjoying it. I hope that you continue to like where I take this story.Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you are enjoying it. I hope that you continue to like where I take this story.Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

Nicely done. I like that Harry would not judge Severus and play with his nose. And I can see Severus focusing on Harry's eyes and not his hair.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you liked how it was written. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you liked how it was written. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!Thanks!

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phoenix

Nice job showing the raw emotions that there would be in the aftermath. Though I do have to wonder if Severus will be able to face Lily knowing that he told Voldemort about the prophecy that ultimately led to James's death.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

They will defiantly have a lot to work out, that's for sure!Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

They will defiantly have a lot to work out, that's for sure!Thanks for reviewing!

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phoenix

Interesting start. I love that her love could be powerful enough even without her death. How different it would have been for Harry to grow up with his mother and presumably the wizarding world, and no Dursleys.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy where I take this Prompt. I'm glad you liked the beginning!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy where I take this Prompt. I'm glad you liked the beginning!

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DCP

beautiful story

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

blue artemis

Lovely ending. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you liked the conclusion. It was a hard and long road for Severus, but now he is a father and a grandfather. He'll never be alone again! His story was like that of Job, who lost everything, but in the end received a double portion of what was lost. Now Severus has not only Harry, but his little daughter, Sarah, and his grandson Severus Harry Potter.Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you liked the conclusion. It was a hard and long road for Severus, but now he is a father and a grandfather. He'll never be alone again! His story was like that of Job, who lost everything, but in the end received a double portion of what was lost. Now Severus has not only Harry, but his little daughter, Sarah, and his grandson Severus Harry Potter.Thanks!

10/10

beaweasley2

OH gads, the CIrcle was hilarous! Especially with the George listening in and give blow-by-blows! I mean giggles-by-giggles! Severus and Harry having that final good bye at the grave, nice closer to that.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah, needed to have some levity and tie up all the loose ends. I hope you like the last two chapters!Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Yeah, needed to have some levity and tie up all the loose ends. I hope you like the last two chapters!Thanks!

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FruGal

This young witch who will be the love of Sev's life, does she have bushy hair and a big brain? Your story has been depressing up to this point, a tribute to how well you write. If it ends with SS/HG I'll be happy.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Absolutely! I may pour on the angst, but it just makes the happy ending that much sweeter. HG/SS always!Thanks for reviewing!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Absolutely! I may pour on the angst, but it just makes the happy ending that much sweeter. HG/SS always!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

braye27

"Love Remains" has been an absolute joy to read, and I thank you for sharing your considerable talents with us.  The over riding theme for me was the power of true love to persevere and remain whole no matter the trials and tribulations that come throughout one's life.Severus loved Harry with a love that could not be extinguished, and he did everything he could do to protect him... even when it hurt... Harry was his son no matter what!!!Severus and Hermione worked very hard to build the kind of loving relationship that only comes from dedication and a firm commitment to see things through.  I was so happy to know they married and had a beautiful daughter.  Sarah will be the most loved and best protected witch in Wizarding Britain... just like her mother.When Harry and Ginny named their son Severus Harry Potter, I got tears in my eyes.  It was totally fitting that Severus had been honored that way.  Just think, if Hermione and Severus have a son, they could name him Severus, too.  Then we would have Severus Snape, Sr., Severus Snape, Jr., and Severus Potter... and a dynasty is born!I've loved this story from the beginning, and I love the ending you have given my favorite characters.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart!Beth

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you. It's only fitting that the man who lost everything, in the end gets everything back two-fold. Reminds me of Job. Severus is now a patriarch of a new family, and he will never be alone again.Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you. It's only fitting that the man who lost everything, in the end gets everything back two-fold. Reminds me of Job. Severus is now a patriarch of a new family, and he will never be alone again.Thanks!

10/10

rodasons

I have loved your story since I first saw it (around chapter fifteen). It's a beautiful story about love and redemption!I hope to read more stories written by you!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

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kimjo2

blast!  you made me cry again!  this was such a wonderful story, so full of pain and angst but the joy at the end was worth it.  thanks so much for sharing your vision, time and talent.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I am glad you liked how I ended it. Thank you for all your compliments.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I am glad you liked how I ended it. Thank you for all your compliments.

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elsolel

Oh, that's so beautiful.  Now I'm all misty eyed. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed it!Thank you!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed it!Thank you!

10/10

gabi1791

What a great story! Again, I am sooo glad I joined the fun! Thank you very much!!!gab

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much!

10/10

Muggline

...and they lived happily ever after...Thank you for an amazing story that brought me close to tears more than once.

Response from Muggline (Reviewer)

Oh, and imagine little Severus having an aunt just three months older than he is! (Theoretically, he might even marry his own aunt one day, as they are not blood relatives...)

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

True, true, they could! I'm glad this story moved you. Thank you!

Response from Muggline (Reviewer)

Oh, and imagine little Severus having an aunt just three months older than he is! (Theoretically, he might even marry his own aunt one day, as they are not blood relatives...)

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

True, true, they could! I'm glad this story moved you. Thank you!

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pookah

very sweet but still some sadness.  (like life)   Harry regreting the childhood he never  had with Severus was very sad.  Thanks for shaing this tale with us, and congrats on finishing it by the deadline.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Oh, thanks to Southern! This fic had been finished and beta'd a long time ago. However, getting all the chapters validated with all the other fine challenge stories out there, she had to work extra hard.But, I am glad that you liked it!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Oh, thanks to Southern! This fic had been finished and beta'd a long time ago. However, getting all the chapters validated with all the other fine challenge stories out there, she had to work extra hard.But, I am glad that you liked it!

10/10

makaem

I'm really glad you gave this such a happy ending.  This wonderful story was so dark at times, I wondered how that would be possible.  But you worked things out for the characters with this very satisfying ending.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you enjoyed this. And of course, I MUST give Severus happy endings. He deserves it so much!Thanks!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I'm glad you enjoyed this. And of course, I MUST give Severus happy endings. He deserves it so much!Thanks!!

10/10

luvinthunder

Fantastic story!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

kittylefish

a sweet and satisfying ending that made the ride worthwhile. :)

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I am so glad you liked the ending! I thought a bit of fluff and some tenderness would be a nice way to end after all the angst and drama!Thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

I am so glad you liked the ending! I thought a bit of fluff and some tenderness would be a nice way to end after all the angst and drama!Thanks!

10/10

potterbrat

Yep, crying again.  Thank goodness I'm at home and not at work.  The epilogue was beautiful.  Great job!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Awww, I'm so happy you liked it so much! Thank you!

Response from livvy6 (Author of Love Remains)

Awww, I'm so happy you liked it so much! Thank you!

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