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Phantom of Hogwarts
Good_Witch1,533 Reviews | 7.33/10 (1,533 Ratings, 0 Likes, 788 Favorites )
*NOW COMPLETE* How in the world does Hogwarts come to be doing a performance of The Phantom of the Opera? And just why is Snape so pissed about it?
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Good_Witch
Member Since 2005 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 360 | 32 Reviews Written | 2,096 Review Responses
I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY
Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts
Dear Good_Witch.Congratulations!! What a wonderful, sweet and happy ending.Your story has been a joy to read, and I look forward to re-reading it again and again in the future (especially with the soundtrack to "Phantom" playing softly in the background).
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so sweet! I hope that if you do reread it, it will flow better, as I've edited the whole thing and reuploaded it right before finishing. LOL Thank you so much for your support and reviewing! :)
Nicely finished with the little snippets from both before and after the wedding. Congratulations on finishing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the end of this epic journey. LOL Thank you so much for your continued support over all this time! :)
Congratualtions on finishing this behemoth of a fic.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wipes brow* LOL Thank you! :)
What a surprise to see this posted tonight! I will be worthless at work tomorrow thanks to you, but I just couldn't go to bed without knowing how it all turned out. This is like the end of an era *sniffles*How on Earth you managed 84 chapters and still went out on top I'll never know. This was so wonderfully done, I'm just like needing to spew forth happy sentiments but the words are failing me at this time of night... um morning. But this couldn't have ended any better.I liked so many things and I'll never be able to remember them all. The format with the timestamps worked so well. I also thought that Hermione's phone conversation with her dad was a brilliant way to give a lot of info in a condensed timeframe while feeling realistic.The wedding was perfect, and while I've read a million of them, this one actually brought back memories of the feeling of being the bride for some reason. Their phantom "vows" in any other wedding would have had me rolling my eyes *hopes that you didn't pull this from your own wedding or I'll rush to the ER to treat my foot in mouth syndrome* but here it was perfect. I so love it when a story comes full circle and you've done this quite nicely. I was tickled that the cake had layers of their mousses in it.I liked the fact that it was emphasized how the friendships that were made during the Phantom production still hold post Hogwarts. And how much of an impact it had on their lives. I was pleased that he made amends with Dumbledore, but it wasn't like they became best buddies and was the star of the wedding party or anything. That would have felt wrong.I am pleased that they stuck to their guns on the no kid policy. I love stories where they have children, but I wouldn't have liked it here because it would have either been an accident, or them changing their minds about something they felt very strongly about. It was just as it should have been. And ending with them going to see the boys in a Hogwarts production, and the revelation that Phantom will be coming again next year was so absolutely perfect.I'm sure I've left something out but I've rambled on quite enough for one story. Bravo to you for not letting us down at the end of such a lenghty but satisfying journey! So, what's next from you?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*laughing and crying at the same time* You totally made my day. *sniffle* It IS the end of an era for me. LOL And I know I'm going to feel quite bereft when it all sinks in. Don't worry, you don't have to rush to the ER... *cackles* I agree that those vows would have been over-the-top sappy in reality, but in this fairy-tale candy-floss confection of a story epilogue, I think they were okay. ;) And I'm so glad you picked up on what i was trying to show: how much something that can seem so trivial (being in the play) can really change one's life, and the bonds forged can last a lifetime. As for the no kids--well, I had to follow my heart with that, as I'm living it, and I wanted to show that it's a valid choice. ;)It makes me so happy that I didn't let you down with the ending. As I posted on my LJ, I literally had NIGHTMARES about it! *snerk* I'm so glad you enjoyed it.As for what's next from me? Well, I'm planning on working on an original story with my husband, in the hopes that we can get it published. But, I'll be more than ready to write fic if and when inspriation strikes. (I just don't think I'll ever do something of this length and soul-eating intensity again. LOL)Thank you so much for your continued support and such lovely reviews over all this time. :)
Aww. :D Yay! You're done -- congratulations on the journey. This was just the perfect end to the story... I loved seeing the little short snips from so many time periods. Each one was just the right length. Now you can take a well-deserved break. ;D
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm using my break to finally respond to all the reviews that have piled up in the last few months. *snerk* I'm glad you enjoyed the ending to this journey. And thank you so much for all the support over the years! *hugs* :)
sniffles..i can't believe it's over!what a wonderful story.though i missed the babies...lol what can i say i am a sap.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Well, I had to write what was in my heart... sorry! ;) But, I'm glad you enjoyed it otherwise, and thank you so much for your continued support. :)
Response from chyara (Reviewer)
What will we do with ourselves now that we don't have PoH to look forward to?I guess you have to write another epic. *winks*
Oh, a lovely ending! I LOVE Hermione's dress. I had a silver wedding dress too, but I have dress!envy now.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Ooo!!! I'd love to see a silver wedding dress (other than in my imagination, LOL). I'm glad you enjoyed the end of this journey. Thank you so much for your continued support! :)
Beautiful story, absolutely beautiful. So Severus and Hermione decided not to have any children? Well, at least they have their godchildren. Are you going to be writing a new story?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Why, thank you! Nope, no kids. They were firm on that from the start--hence the anticipation of that long-lasting potion! LOL As for writing another story, I hope to work on something original (and therefore publish-able) with my husband soon, but I do plan to keep writing fic as the inspiration strikes. I doubt I'll end up with anything as long and soul-eating as this though. *snort* Thank you for all your support and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
I can breathe now. Poor Severus spilling his heart out like that. I do hope Mr Granger accepts them eventually. Great chapter.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Yeah, our dear Severus has come a long way, hasn't he? Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
*breathes a sigh of relief* at least they're not forbidding it.I think that might have broken Hermione, just a little.Awesome chapter though :D And I can't wait until the next one - as usual, lol - I want to know if Ginny and Dumbledore managed to sort things out with the rest of the cast.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL I know you're instaiable, darlin. ;) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
*grins* somebody has to be ;p
Oh Wow. How realistic! This chapter was sooooo worth the wait. I loved the silent argument The Grangers had with eachother. That totally reminded me of my husband and I! hahaha. I seriously felt for them and the whole situation. Thanks for the update! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* It makes me so happy that you thought it was realistic. And the silent conversation--I know so many couples who do that! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! OMGosh, I was so worried about how Hermione's parents would react..I'm so glad they are going to accept the relationship...I Love the way this was handled, and had to laugh when Dione excused herself to change into socks...This chapter was so wonderful and I can't wait for more....WHOOHOO!!!((HUGS))
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Well, I know that sometimes it's the simplest things in life that end up as the most amusing. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Really enjoyed this chapter! you see it was familar as my cousin who was in uni was dating her teacher and then she had to tell the family and i was there. it was soo action pack. and my uncle was acting exactly like mr granger! really well done on this chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Wow! That's wild! LOL I'm glad it rang true. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
yay a new chapter. LOL now that brings back memories of having to tell my parents of my engagement lol. As always GW you weave magic.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I remember me and Brad each on an extension and sitting at opposite ends of the hallway in my condo, both talking to my folks to tell them that we were engaged. *giggle* Ah, good times! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
i love it. as simple as that.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Excellent! Then I shall offer a simple thank you for reviewing. :)
oh dears T.T
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!! Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Ahhhhh, lovely update :) Very realistic scene with the parents, and Dione's reaction (and nightshirt) was quite funny! I do hate to see this story winding down, but alas, I know it must come to an end. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cough* I own that nightshirt (or at least I DID, until it disintegrated completely a few months ago--the least I could do was commemorate it here. *snerk*). *cough*I'm so glad you thought it was realistic. That makes me really happy! Thanks so much for reviewing :)
That went about as well as could be expected. I am, positively, surprised by Dianes reaction, I would have thoght she would be the hard one to convince. Then again, quite a few fathers would probably nod agreeably with Hermoines father:-)) As always very well done, and as usual my compliments for writing such an amazing story; it really stands out from the crowd!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Well, Dione did already like Sev, and she could rather understand being enamoured of him... ;) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
What a good scene there! realistic and natural reactions from Hermione's parents. As I think I mentioned in a review MANY chapters ago, as the mother of a 'theatre person,' I warned my daughter of the dangers of 'falling in love' with someone because you are thrown into a play together. She has stated that she will not date someone she meets in a play until a year after the play is over. I'd be happy if she waited six months, even! Now, at age 21, she is pretty serious about the current boyfriend, who is not a theatre person at all, (which may be a better choice after all.)But what works in real life is not always needed in fiction. I can suspend my disbelief for this tale, but if I were Hermione's parents, I'd hope she would follow my advice of a cooling-off period where they could write each other - but not see each other - for six months or so. True love waits.thanks for another chapter of suspended disbelief!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! Try telling these two to wait any longer and see what bits you have left after they start hexing! *snort* ;) Hope your daughter has found a keeper. I'm so glad you thought it was realistic and natural. That makes me so happy! Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Well that was probably one of the more realistic Parental visits to break the news I've ever read. I adored how you protrayed Geoff. It was sneaky and devious Hermione and Severus poping back in - (Didn't they make a pop or a crack when they Apparate? Everyone else does in canon?) - And I really hope the parents don't find out about that.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Yay! I'm glad you thought it was realistic. That makes me happiest. As for the crack--I subscribe to the (fanon, but not completely negated by canon) belief that the crack of apparating can be got rid of by practice and/or training. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing :)
That was simply wonderful. The conversation was realistic and you gave me a Slytherin ending. What more can I ask? As many others have said, I will really miss this story when it's over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Well, I know it's the Slytherin in me that gives me these ideas, so I run with them! Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Now that wasn't so bad...ok completely nervewracking. but realistic. Great chapter, as per usual. Poor Severus. I don't know anyone who could have weathered that quite so well. Can't wait for more!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*happy dances* Yay! I'm so glad you thought it was realistic. That makes me happier than anything else. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing :)
YEA! I was hoping it would be there and there is was! Thanks!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL You're quite welcome. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
sigh...its a sweet chapter :-) I'm very glad you concentrated just on the family for this one, even if it means waiting for the next chapter to be posted. I'll be sad to see this tale end
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Yeah, I know these things are all important in their own right, so I have to make sure they're given their due. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
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Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
If you're gonna knead so much, I better make sure your claws are trimmed. ;)
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
Ooh, pedicure! *purrrrr purrrrrr*Waaaaaait, shouldn't you be writing instead of trimming? *hintofaprickle...*~Lotm