23- The Next Morning... Ready For Breakfast?
Chapter 24 of 84
Good_WitchHermione gets a startling wake up call from Snape, followed by even more nerve-wracking exchanges with her parents. And, somehow, breakfast never tasted so green.
ReviewedStandard disclaimer goes here as usual.
Author's Note: The sugar warning continues, but at least this time, I think your teeth are safe. Cheers!- Nicole
Chapter 23- The Next Morning... Ready For Breakfast?
Hermione woke in the pre-dawn darkness to the feel of something hard and warm pressing against her arse. As her mind cleared and she remembered that she was curled up against Snape, she realized that that something was his cock, nestled against her, twitching. She glanced at the clock and saw that the alarm would be going off in about 25 minutes. Staying still, she listened to Snape's steady breathing, realizing that he was still asleep. He was still wrapped tightly around her, and she felt a tingle go through her every time his cock prodded her. Experimentally, she wriggled back against it. She stifled a gasp at the forceful jump it gave in response. Feeling her pulse speed up, she rocked back again. She froze as Snape inhaled deeply and flexed his hips forward in response.
Did I wake him?
She lay there, tense, until he settled again. Then, just as she was relaxing, he flexed again, grinding against her. The arm around her squeezed tighter as well, and he sighed. Every nerve in Hermione's body seemed to be super-charged, and she bit back a squeak at the surge of feeling that shot through her body. Just as she was wondering if she should go ahead and get up, since she knew she'd not fall asleep again after such an arousing wake up call, Snape stirred once more. He pressed his body closer to her and his hand slid down from her collarbone to cup a breast as his hips flexed. A rumbling growl bubbled up from deep within, and Hermione gasped in response.
Is he still asleep?
She turned her head toward him, trying to see, but it was too dark. His hand twitched spastically on her breast, and he rocked against her again. Hermione knew, by the throbbing in her clit, that her knickers were getting freshly dampened. Snape started moving more, squeezing and rocking, and Hermione heard the disjointed mumbling and moaning behind her.
Oh gods, is he dreaming?
She turned her head a bit more and whispered, "Severus?" There was no response except for continued grinding. A little louder, she repeated, "Severus?" Obviously it worked that time, as Snape suddenly froze, and she heard his sharp intake of breath. She could almost feel his rapid calculations, trying to remember where he was, and what he was doing. Abruptly, she felt him start to pull away, his hand flattening rigidly as he lifted it from her breast. She grabbed at him and pulled him back, whispering, "Severus, it's all right."
Snape woke at the sound of his name, but he had been in the midst of a particularly sensual dream involving a certain bushy-haired Gryffindor, and it took him several moments to recall his whereabouts and situation. His mind raced to clear the erotic images and regain his usual alertness. As soon as he realized that his hand was cupping a soft round breast, he snapped to attention. His awareness extended to the fact that he had been thrusting his erection against Hermione's arse, and he recoiled in embarrassment. It was one thing to get hard for her, but it was another entirely to use her like that for pleasure, especially after what had transpired before they had gone to bed! He stilled at her hands on his, and her words, but he kept his hips as far back from her as he could.
In a strained whisper, he said, "Hermione, I apologize. I... don't know what to say..." He trailed off in chagrin.
Hermione smiled in the darkness, glad he couldn't see her. Composing herself, she murmured, "It's all right. You don't have to apologize." Once again glad that he couldn't see her in the darkness, as she felt the flush staining her cheeks, she added, "I... was enjoying that."
Snape blinked. Hermione giggled. She could almost feel his incredulity. Saucily, she scooted backward, wriggling against him. Snape's eyes closed and he hissed. His cock bounced in response and Hermione hummed.
In a strangled rasp, Snape said, "Bloody hell, Hermione, don't do that!"
She chuckled low in her throat in response and repeated the gesture. Still gripping his hand, she placed it back over her breast, holding it there. Snape groaned into her neck. In a threatening purr, he said, "That's not fair, Hermione. We've had this conversation already..."
Hermione smirked in the dark and ground her arse back more. She reached back and slid her hand along his hip, splaying it against his arse, pulling him closer. She felt his sharp exhalation in response and stifled a wicked giggle. She was completely taken by surprise when he abruptly wrapped his leg over hers and pulled her leg straight, sliding his hand down her front, and yanking her nightgown up. She gasped as he covered her mound with his hand again, his voice icy as he murmured, his lips brushing her ear, "Have you forgotten so quickly? Do not push me."
Hermione swallowed nervously and nodded. Snape slowly released her and trailed his hand back up, but as he went, he grazed her skin, sliding under her nightgown until he reached her breast again, where he gently caressed her, palming the soft skin and feeling her nipple harden in response. He sucked on her earlobe, worrying it lightly between his teeth. Hermione moaned faintly, her senses buzzing. She squirmed to turn in his arms, and he lifted his body over her. His hand travelled to her other breast as he kissed her, his body pressing against hers. Hermione's hands slid around him, splaying across his back. She could still feel him hard against her hip, and his hand was teasingly light caressing her breast. She arched her back up to him, pressing her breast into his hand, and he responded by cupping her firmly, squeezing. Her nipple dragged across his palm, stiffening, and she sighed in pleasure into his mouth.
Suddenly, they heard a soft thud. Both froze. Hermione's eyes widened in horror as she recognized the sound of her parents' door shutting. Quite unnecessarily, Snape lifted a finger to his lips, frowning for her to stay quiet. They heard footsteps coming down the hall, stopping between their respective doors. With another display of his impressive speed, Snape rolled, grabbed his wand, spun around, pulled Hermione to her feet, wrapped his free arm around her, and Apparated them to her room, just as they heard Mr. Granger knocking on Hermione's door and softly calling, "Hermione?"
Hermione gasped as they stumbled in her room, Snape whipping away from her and backing against the wall behind her door as she leapt into her bed. The door opened slowly and Hermione sat up quickly, feigning having just been roused.
"Huh? Who's there?" she mumbled, trying to mask the petrified shaking of her voice.
The door opened farther and Mr. Granger popped his head in. "It's Dad, honey. I know it's early, but I'm meeting a friend for an early morning jog and some racquetball and I wasn't sure if I'd be back before you and your professor left for your tour. I didn't want my little girl to leave without me saying goodbye." He stepped into the room, wearing sweatpants and a windbreaker, smiling fondly at Hermione. Behind the door, Snape gestured frantically to Hermione to speak.
Hermione shook her head and said, "Oh, Dad! That's so sweet!" As she spoke, Snape cast a barely audible concealment charm, and Hermione watched him fade from view. She hastily stood and heaved a ragged sigh of relief as she hugged her father. He hugged her tightly until she squeaked in protest. Then, he released her and sat her on the edge of her bed, sitting with her. Hermione curled her legs up and pulled her covers over her lap. She hoped her father couldn't hear her pounding heartbeat.
"I'm really glad you got to come visit, even if it was for such a short time. We miss you, you know."
Hermione smiled. "I know, Dad. And I really appreciate all you did for me. The show was wonderful, and dinner was incredible, and I know the tour will be amazing..."
Mr. Granger patted her hand. "It was nothing. I'm just glad you enjoyed it. It was nice to meet your professor. You're right; he's quite the interesting fellow."
Hermione swallowed nervously. "He... uh, Professor Snape really enjoyed the show too. He said to thank you again."
"I'm sorry I won't see him again before you go. I think it'd be fun to show him around the Muggle world a bit more. He seemed quite intrigued when I showed him the computer and tried to explain how it worked. Asked all sorts of questions. He's a right smart one, isn't he? But, I guess he'd better be, if he's to teach you lot." Mr. Granger eyed Hermione with mock disdain before dissolving into a chuckle.
Hermione nodded, flicking her eyes toward the spot she had last seen Snape...had he left through the open door?...and said, "He's remarkably intelligent and even more clever. It's quite fascinating to be in his class, realizing how much he knows and how much he can teach me."
Heartily glad that he was concealed from view, Snape choked on the implications of Hermione's words, noticing that she was looking toward him, even though she couldn't see him.
Mr. Granger chucked Hermione under the chin and grinned. "I know my girl, and that's one thing about her, she's always bent on learning everything there is to know. You do us proud, Hermione."
Hermione looked down and smiled modestly. "Thanks, Dad."
"Your Mum will be up in about 45 minutes to go start breakfast. Oh, speaking of, did you two enjoy dessert when you came back last night?" Mr. Granger grinned indulgently at his daughter, knowing her rabid penchant for chocolate.
Hermione blinked, memories of the night before cascading over her. She was glad it was still fairly dim, so he couldn't see the colour burning into her cheeks. Swallowing carefully, she manufactured a smile and said brightly, "Yes! It was wonderful... Mum's so thoughtful to make my favourites."
Mr. Granger laughed. "You did leave some for the rest of us, right?" he added, teasingly.
Hermione grimaced and retorted, "Yes, I did! We each had a bowl. I'm not that bad, to pig out in front of my professor!" Hermione flicked her eyes toward the wall by her door again.
Well, apparently she wasn't exaggerating when she said she loved chocolate... Snape thought, amused. He felt his pulse slowing as he stayed plastered against the wall, invisible.
Mr. Granger's grin faded into a wistful smile and he sighed. "No, I don't suppose you would do that. You've much more poise than that. My little girl is growing up." He patted Hermione's hand. "I know it's silly of me to go on about it, but I was so looking forward to having my girl home for the holidays, for one last time before you go off into the world on your own. I know you've been gone, either at school or working for the Order, and we haven't had you back much the past six years, but once you finish school, you'll never be my little girl again." He cleared his throat and glanced around. "When I look at you, here, like this, it's like you're still ten years old and we had no idea you were a brilliant witch. But when I think about how elegant you looked last night, and how grown up you were, especially next to that imposing professor of yours... I realize that you're a woman grown..." He trailed off.
Hermione felt tears threatening and her lips were trembling even as she smiled at her father. She knelt forward and enveloped him in a tight hug.
Snape felt like an intruder. He knew he was witnessing something that he was no part of, and he felt decidedly uncomfortable. He didn't dare move, though. He found that he couldn't help but watch the pair, almost hungrily. The kind of bond between them was one he had never experienced. Part of him was even jealous. He had finally realized that he loved Hermione, and he knew that she had feelings for him as well. But to watch her so clearly showing her love for someone else...even if it was her father, for Merlin's sake...made him jealous. He wanted her love. He wanted to be the only one she loved. It was ridiculous, of course, but the possessive urge was there nonetheless.
"I'll always be your girl, Dad, no matter how old I am. But I'm glad you think I've grown up. I just hope other people recognize it as easily as you have." She cast a meaningful glance at the wall, hoping Snape was still there.
Mr. Granger chuckled. "I'm guessing some already have. You did say you dated Harry, didn't you? I daresay he noticed..."
Hermione's eyes widened and she thinned her lips. "Da-ad! I told you, it was a mistake. We're just friends!" She looked dismayed, and worried her hands together in her lap.
Mr. Granger covered her hands with his, stilling their nervous movements, and he chucked her under the chin again, lifting her chagrined face to his. With a properly contrite expression, he said, "About that... I'm sorry I embarrassed you in front of your professor. Your poor old Dad was just having some difficulty accepting the new, adult version of his daughter!" His expression sobered even more and he gripped Hermione's hands firmly. "I know we've never had much of a chance to talk with you about relationships, what with everything that's happened, but we hope you'll find someone who appreciates you for you. You deserve to be happy as much as the next person, so don't settle for anything less than what you want. If you say Harry wasn't that, then I believe you. You're smart enough to know your own heart. We can only hope that you'll end up as happy as we are." After a short pause, he smiled faintly and then gave her a mock-severe scowl. "Of course, if anyone ever breaks my girl's heart, he'll have me to answer to." Hermione giggled and Mr. Granger dissolved into a chuckle.
"Oh, Dad, you're incorrigible." Hermione playfully buffeted his arm. In the silence that followed, her smile faded into a thoughtful expression. Her father was staring at her hand in his, pensively. Haltingly, her eyes repeatedly flicking toward the wall, she said, "So... if I find someone who loves me... and I... love him... and I'm happy... happier than I've ever been... you'd be okay with it? No matter what?" She gazed at her father, owl-eyed.
He nodded reassuringly. "As long as you're happy, and you truly love each other, I couldn't wish anything better for you. We just want to see you happy, but we also don't want you to settle for less than you deserve, just to be with someone. Keep that in mind, Hermione. You're different than so many other people, even people in your world. Don't short-change yourself."
Hermione nodded, a faint smile on her lips. "Thanks, Dad. I'm glad you came by. I would have been disappointed if I hadn't seen you before we left. Besides, who can object to being woken up to have all sorts of wonderful things said about them?" She grinned impishly and her father laughed.
"I was hoping you wouldn't be upset, being woken up so early." He sighed. "Well, I better get going. You two enjoy the tour, and owl us when you can. We'll see you for the performance over Easter. It's too bad I have to go; I was hoping to hear you sing a bit. Ah well..." He shrugged resignedly and quirked a grin at Hermione, then stood and straightened his jacket. "It was great to have you home. You take care of yourself, you hear?"
Hermione stood and hugged her father. "I will. Thanks for everything, Dad."
Mr. Granger hugged her tightly, as if loath to release her. He sighed and squeezed her once more.
Her voice muffled by her face being pressed into his windbreaker, Hermione murmured, "I love you, Daddy."
"I love you, kiddo." He released her and stepped toward the door. Hermione sank onto the bed. "Sorry there's not much time for you to get any more sleep. You may want to just get up and start getting ready, so the bathroom will be free when your professor wakes. Tell him it was nice to meet him, and thank him for bringing you to visit."
"I will. Bye."
Mr. Granger waved and quietly shut the door behind him as he exited. She heard his footsteps dying away as he descended the stairs. In the silence that followed, she sat rigidly, ears straining for any indication that Snape was still in her room. Several moments passed, and she hesitantly whispered, "Severus?"
Snape was still against the wall, trying to compose himself. He was unutterably moved by the deep love and respect between father and daughter, and he was almost afraid to believe what it seemed she had meant by her comments to her father. Did she feel the same way about him that he felt about her? Did she really mean it when she said she was the happiest she had ever been? He felt his chest and throat tighten in the now-familiar way it did around Hermione. Slowly, stealthily, he glided to her and caressed her hair. She started, but her expression melted into one of relief.
Hermione felt a phantom hand grazing her face, and invisible lips brushed hers before she heard a disembodied purr in her ear, saying, "I'm here."
The bed moved as he sat. Her eyes darted around the space beside her, trying to picture him. Suddenly, he shimmered into view, and she found herself gazing into his deep black eyes. Her breath caught at the bare emotion pouring out of them. Swallowing thickly, she stammered, "W-were you there... the whole time?"
Snape nodded slowly, never blinking. Hermione's gaze travelled over him, taking in his lean frame, the green satin perched low along his hipbones, his strong, capable fingers lightly splayed on her knee. She reached out and slid her hand lightly along his bare chest, over his ribs and back up to rest over his heart. Snape inhaled deeply, his lungs filling under her hand. Hermione felt the strong pulse and closed her eyes, trying to pace her heartbeat with his. She opened her eyes when she felt him grasp her hand and lift it from his chest. His eyes were heavy-lidded as he lifted her palm and placed a gentle kiss on it. Resolutely, he settled her hand in her lap and straightened.
Hermione stared at him, unable to speak, but her very soul screamed at him through the rapt eyes trained on his.
He stood, his lips thinned in regret. In a low murmur, he said, "Your father was right."
Hermione blinked, distracted. "About what?"
Snape smiled faintly. "About a great many things, but the most pressing one was that you should start getting ready for the morning. When you no longer need the bathroom, knock on my door. I shall see you at breakfast."
Hermione didn't want him to go. She wanted to continue where they left off before her father interrupted them. She wanted to tell him so many things. But all she said was, "Certainly."
Snape cast one last look of longing at her before he Disapparated back to his room. Hermione fell back into her bed, overcome with the roller coaster of emotions that had already made up her morning.
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Hermione showered, washing the styling products from her hair. Her thoughts kept straying to her stolen moments with Snape. As she washed, she remembered the feel of his hands on her skin. Her shower was a bit longer than usual, as she lingered under the warm water, revelling in the sensations she excited, mimicking Snape's touch. Finally, frustrated and pruney, she finished her shower and dressed. Again grateful that she was a witch, she cast a drying spell on her hair. She courteously charmed away the steam and condensation before she exited and strode down the hall to knock on Snape's door.
"Professor? It's all yours."
From behind the closed door, she heard, "Thank you."
After a moment, in which she stood at his door, waiting for him to open it, she realized that he would not come out until she had left. Sighing, she crossed the hall to her room, shutting her door behind her. There was a pause, and then she heard the door open across the hall. Quietly, she opened her door and watched Snape sweeping down the hall to the bathroom, once again clad in his robe, carrying his travelling bag and the clothes that he had transfigured back into his original jumper and trousers. He disappeared into the bathroom and Hermione stepped out to listen for her mother.
Her mother had come out of her room while Hermione had been in the shower. Fortunately, Hermione had remembered to lift the Silencing Charm from her parents' door as she headed to the bathroom. Her mother had knocked on the door and told Hermione that she was going down to start breakfast. Hermione had called back through the door that she'd be down in about 20 minutes.
Hermione stood at the top of the stairs and heard the radio playing in the kitchen. The smell of coffee and toast was wafting through the house. She heard the sizzling sound of frying bacon and knew her mother was busy. Creeping down the hallway, she paused at the bathroom, hearing the shower going. The frustrated part of her kept urging her on, but the shy virgin part begged her to reconsider her rash idea.
Taking a deep breath against the pounding of her heart, she opened the door and stepped into the steamy bathroom. Almost instantly, Snape's face appeared from behind the shower curtain, eyes wide in shock. His hair was plastered down his face and water dripped from his nose as he hissed, "What the bloody hell are you doing in here?"
Hermione sagged against the door, her knees trembling. Chewing her lip, she stared at him blankly, unable to answer.
Snape's eyes narrowed in indignation. In an icy growl, he said, "Get out, now. I will not tolerate such a blatant disregard of the rules. You are treading a fine line, and I suggest you retreat behind it before you get us both in trouble!"
Hermione stood, frozen. They stared at each other, eyes locked. Snape realized that she seemed to be stuck, and cursed. His jaw clenched, he aimed the spray against the wall, yanked a towel from the bar and wrapped it around himself. Irritably jerking the shower curtain back, he stepped out of the tub and crossed to Hermione, glaring furiously at her. He gripped her upper arms and scowled into her petrified face. His hands left wet marks on her shirt and his hair dripped onto her chest.
"You just don't get it, do you? We. Can't. Do. This. Now. Think before you get any other crazy idea like this in your head! If you can't stop yourself from pulling these kinds of foolish stunts, you will cause everything to fall apart! Don't ruin this, Hermione." His expression seemed to crumple into one of pained entreaty. He continued, in a hiss, "Please, this is... good. We... can be good together. Don't cock things up by being rash!" He squeezed her arms and murmured, "This is worth waiting for. Trust me. If you meant what you said to your father, then get out and be patient."
Hermione nodded. Impulsively, she launched herself at Snape and wrapped herself around him in a tight bear hug. Snape made an exasperated noise in his throat and tried to disentangle himself. "Hermione, you're getting all wet!"
Hermione's inability to move disappeared and she started laughing in relief. Releasing Snape, she backed away, giggling up at him. "It's certainly not the first time!" She sputtered anew at the comical play of reactions across his face. Finally settling on haughty outrage, he backed away from her. The effect of his stern glare was compromised as his towel began to slip, and he had to frantically grab for it before he lost his dignity entirely. Hermione's giggles were cut short as she gasped at the near miss and blushed furiously. Wildly, she spun and flung herself out of the bathroom, before Snape could rip her apart with a few more well-placed words. Besides, her little jaunt brought her...almost...face to face with the knowledge that she just wasn't ready to cross that line, no matter how much she might think she wanted to.
She sped to her room and slammed the door behind her, panting. She sank into her vanity chair and gathered her things with shaky fingers, then packed everything and made her bed, shrinking her bag and pocketing it. Finally, she made her way downstairs, noting that the shower was off, but Snape was still in the bathroom.
She stepped into the kitchen to find her mother dishing up a plate of bacon and putting it on the table next to the toast and eggs. "Morning, dear!" Her mother bustled up to her and hugged her, kissing her cheek with a smile.
"Morning, Mum. Breakfast smells great." She sat at the table and began making her plate.
Mrs. Granger turned the radio off, poured some orange juice for Hermione, and said, "I do hope your professor likes bacon and eggs. And I hope he likes wheat toast. Does he take jam with his toast? I have strawberry preserves and orange marmalade. I made coffee. Does he drink coffee? I can always make tea if he'd prefer it." She fluttered around, arranging the dishes on the table and smoothing her apron.
Hermione stared at her mother. Mercy, is she nervous? She's acting like a schoolgirl with a crush! She snorted to herself. And I should know, since I was the one doing that not long ago! Trying to hold in her amazed grin, she answered faintly, "I'm sure everything is fine, Mum. Professor Snape loved your cooking. He even said to make sure he expressed his appreciation of dessert..."
At that, Mrs. Granger smiled smugly and sniffed. With a preening air, she smoothed her hands over her own unruly locks and said, "Well, I do enjoy making something tasty."
Hermione looked intently at her mother and realized that she was wearing makeup...and that early on a weekend! Feeling a pang of jealous suspicion, she sipped her juice, remaining silent.
Mrs. Granger glanced at the door to the kitchen and asked, "Is Severus up?"
Hermione choked on her juice. She didn't like hearing her mother calling him Severus, not when she was being all twitchy. Coughing a bit, she muttered tersely, "Yes. He was done with his shower when I came down. I'm sure he'll be here shortly."
Mrs. Granger simpered and shot to her feet. "Good. I hope he won't be long. I wouldn't want things to get cold."
Hermione smirked at her mother and said, "Mum, he's a wizard. He can just cast a warming spell on whatever he wants. As a matter of fact..." She pulled out her wand and cast a stasis charm on the food dishes, keeping them from cooling any more. Her mother blinked at her in surprise.
"I don't think I'll ever get used to that."
Hermione snorted and took another bite of her breakfast. Mrs. Granger got up to make a cup of coffee and turned back to Hermione with a quizzical expression.
"Is there a particular reason all of your hairpins were on the counter?"
Hermione choked again. Shite! She made a show of clearing her throat and drinking more juice to give herself time to think. Hoping that she could lie convincingly enough, she said, "Oh, those. Well, I'm not used to having my hair up like that, and it made my head ache, so after we got back from the show, I took them out so I could relax while I had some dessert."
Mrs. Granger's face lit up eagerly. "And you said Severus liked it too?"
Before a decidedly disgruntled Hermione could answer, Snape swept into the kitchen, a politely inquisitive expression on his face. "What was it you wish to know if I liked?"
Mrs. Granger started and flushed. Hermione nearly gaped at her mother's juvenile behaviour. With a tinkling laugh, Mrs. Granger waved her hand airily toward the refrigerator and said, "Oh, I was just wondering if you liked dessert last night."
Snape shot Hermione a knowing glance before he smoothly answered, "Indeed I did, Dione. It was as delicious as your dinner. Generally, those who are skilled cooks can carry those skills over into potion making. If you were a witch, perhaps you would be a promising potions student."
Hermione narrowed her eyes. Now he seemed to be flirting with her mother! Mrs. Granger looked away modestly and batted her hand toward Snape. "Oh, stop. You're embarrassing me." She giggled girlishly and waved Snape to the table. Casting a coy glance at him, she asked Hermione, "Are all wizards this charming?" Then, she bolted upright, a look of surprise on her face. "Oh! Charming! How ironic!" She chuckled again as she turned to get the coffee pot.
Snape shot Hermione an amused glance and she glared back at him. His lips twitched. He began serving himself from the dishes on the table as Mrs. Granger brought him a steaming cup of coffee.
"Would you like cream, sugar?"
"No, thank you. I prefer my coffee black."
Mrs. Granger cast an appraising eye over his snug jumper and trim trousers and quipped, "Like your clothes, apparently."
Hermione snorted and hastily retreated behind a napkin, muttering, "Excuse me."
Snape cocked an eyebrow severely at Hermione as he said to her mother, "You are indeed correct, madam."
Mrs. Granger laid her hand on his arm. "Now, now, none of that nonsense. I'm Dione, remember? Not 'madam.'" Hermione bristled at her mother touching Snape and he stiffened, still unused to casual contact.
Flashing a conciliatory smile at Mrs. Granger, he said, "Of course, Dione. My apologies." She beamed at him and moved back to the counter. Hermione continued eating her breakfast, blackly eyeing her mother and Snape.
Snape began eating, and a slightly tense silence fell. Mrs. Granger kept bustling about the kitchen, and Snape started feeling uneasy around the fidgety woman. Eventually, she fluttered back to the table and asked brightly, "So, how was the play?"
Both Snape and Hermione swallowed hastily and answered.
"It was wonderful, Mum. Thanks so much."
"It was truly an amazing experience. You and your husband have my sincere gratitude."
Mrs. Granger beamed even more. "Oh, it was our pleasure. Speaking of, Severus, Geoff wanted me to thank you again for bringing Hermione for this visit. He's sorry he couldn't be here, but he had a previous commitment." Snape nodded gravely. Mrs. Granger continued, "I can't wait to come see your performance. I know it'll be spectacular."
Hermione and Snape exchanged glances. Hermione finally relaxed and cracked a smile. "No doubt it will be. Especially since everything can be magically enhanced."
Mrs. Granger's expression changed to one of perplexed inquiry. "What do you mean?"
"Well, the headmaster bewitched the Sorting Hat to cast it, those who can't sing have a spell cast on them to give them a good voice, and the sets and even what will be the theatre space will be magically transformed. And, from what we've been told, even the instruments will be bewitched to play, so we don't even need people to play them. I mean, with all that, how could it possibly be bad?"
Mrs. Granger's eyes widened. "So, not everyone in it can sing? But, you're not using the spell, are you?"
Snape interrupted. "Certainly not. Her talent is such that the headmaster believes we could win the competition on her merits alone. She has a true gift." He gazed soberly at Hermione.
Hermione fired right back, "So do you." She looked at her mother and added, "Professor Snape managed to keep it a secret that he has a wonderful singing voice, but it's no secret anymore." She smiled at Snape.
Mrs. Granger's anxious expression dissolved into one of delight. "Really? Oh, Hermione, do sing for me. Your father wanted to hear you sing, but there wasn't a good time for it before you had to go to the play. We haven't heard you sing in so long, dear. Please?"
Hermione looked between her mother and Snape in chagrin. Snape's eyes sparkled and he smiled faintly at her. Silkily, he added, "It couldn't hurt to practice, could it, Miss Granger?"
Hermione cut a glance at him and looked at her mother, who was clapping her hands and bouncing, beaming at her daughter. Resigned, Hermione pushed back from the table a bit and sat up. She cleared her throat and took a deep breath. Across from her, Snape too pushed back from the table, but he leant back in his chair, settling himself to listen, a faint smile hovering about his lips.
Thinking for a moment, Hermione decided to sing "Phantom of the Opera." Keeping her eyes cast down, she began, "In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came. That voice which calls to me and speaks my name. And do I dream again? For now I find the Phantom of the Opera is here, inside my mind." She took another deep breath, having planned on only singing that snippet to appease her mother, but she was startled by Snape's voice belting from across the table.
"Sing once again with me, our strange duet. My power over you grows stronger yet. And though you turn from me, to glance behind, the Phantom of the Opera is there, inside your mind."
Mrs. Granger gasped and turned stunned eyes on Snape as Hermione's head whipped up to stare at him as well. His gaze was focused only on Hermione, and she responded to the lure of his seductive voice. She took her cue from him and sang her next verse. They continued the song together, hearing the music in their heads. Hermione perched forward on her chair as she got to the part where she began her vocal acrobatics. Her eyes closed at the deep velvet purr of Snape coaxing, "Sing... Sing, my Angel of Music... Sing for me!"
As her final piercing note died away, she sagged forward in her chair, momentarily dazed by the intensity of their impromptu performance. Mrs. Granger burst into enthusiastic applause, her eyes shining with unshed tears.
"That was amazing! Truly amazing! Oh, now I see why your headmaster is so confident! Hermione, you were so beautiful! And Severus, she wasn't exaggerating either. You two were brilliant!"
Snape and Hermione exchanged sheepish glances as they demurred. Hermione took another sip of her juice, her eyes darting around, embarrassed at her mother's excessive reaction. Snape leant back in his chair, idly swirling the last of his coffee in his cup, staring distractedly into it. Mrs. Granger was gazing between them, her expression beatific.
Hermione glanced up to see her mother gazing at Snape with an almost adoring look on her face. She felt a flare of exasperated irritation. Snape, of course, was completely oblivious. Merlin help me! My own bloody mother has a fan-girl crush on Snape! "Oh, I've never met a hero before." And, "You're so enchanting. You're so charming." Blah blah blah. In her mind, Hermione viciously mimicked her mother in a shrill falsetto. She suddenly wanted to get out of there, and get Snape away from her mother before he did something else to sweep her off her feet. Hermione rolled her eyes and looked at the time.
"It's getting late. We should probably get going."
Snape snapped to attention and noticed Hermione's discomfited expression. Wondering what was wrong, he coolly looked at the clock and retorted, "Yes. We wouldn't want to be late when we are being offered such an opportunity." With his customary fluid grace, he stood, turning courteously to Mrs. Granger and inclining his head in gratitude. "Thank you again for your hospitality. I shall look forward to seeing you at the performance."
Hermione stood and tensely watched her mother and Snape. Mrs. Granger smiled and waved her hand about again, dismissively. "It was nothing! I'm so glad you enjoyed the play. And I hope you enjoyed your little stay at the 'Granger Bed and Breakfast.'" She winked at Snape and laughed again.
Snape cast a meaningful glance at Hermione and politely said, "Rest assured that I most certainly did. The cuisine was excellent, and I haven't slept so well in ages." His lips twitched as he smiled at Mrs. Granger.
Hermione's breath caught and she felt her heart pound. Hoping she wasn't flushing, she glanced warily at her mother. Mrs. Granger, however, was too enamoured of Snape to notice her daughter's reaction.
Hermione rolled her eyes and muttered, "I'll get the coats..."
Snape murmured, "Please do, Miss Granger," and gestured for Mrs. Granger to exit the kitchen before him. Fluttering again at his gallantry, she hurried through the door, as Snape grimaced in rueful bemusement, following her.
Hermione had already shrugged into her coat and was handing Snape his Muggle trench coat, which he had transfigured back and hung again in the foyer closet before he had gone to breakfast that morning. Snape took the coat from her and slipped into it, shaking his hair back from his face.
Looking expectantly at Hermione, he asked, "Ready?"
Hermione nodded vehemently and rolled her eyes toward her mother. Mrs. Granger jumped, restored to her senses after her glazed stare at Snape. She rushed at her daughter, enveloping her in a tight hug. "Take care of yourself, dear. Owl us as soon as you can. We love hearing from you. Don't forget to thank your headmaster for letting you visit. Tell your friends we said hello. Enjoy your tour. And be careful popping about, you hear?" She pulled back from Hermione and cast a stern eye on Snape. "Do be careful, Severus. We don't know what we'd do if anything happened to our girl." She melted into a smile.
Snape gazed at her solemnly and avowed, "Have no fear on that account. I would never let anything happen to your daughter."
Mrs. Granger pressed a hand on his arm and nodded. "Of course, we know that." She glanced at the time again and exclaimed, "Oh! You must get going! Hurry now..."
Snape lightly gripped Hermione's upper arm and looked inquiringly at her. She nodded and looked back at her mother. "Bye, Mum. Thanks for everything. I'll owl you and Dad about the tour when I get back."
Mrs. Granger darted in and kissed Hermione on the cheek. "Love you, dear!"
"Love you too, Mum. Bye." And with that, she glanced back up at Snape and he cast the concealment charm again. As soon as they were invisible, he Disapparated them back to the same place they had been the night before. He heard Hermione's ragged sigh of relief and felt her groping for him. She buried her face against his chest and wrapped her arms around his waist, leaning on him for comfort and reassurance. Snape draped his arms around her, waiting for her to compose herself. After several moments, she sighed again and lifted her head. Her whisper floated up to him. "Sorry about that."
Snape glanced around and, seeing no one, reversed the charm, gazing down at Hermione's face as she shimmered into view. Her expression was a grimace of aggrieved irritation. He furrowed his brow and asked, "About what?"
"About my mother! Gods, she was just so... so... she was like to drool all over you!" She scowled at him.
Snape stared at her blankly for a moment and slowly ventured, "I thought... you wanted your parents to like me."
Hermione huffed and pulled away, her hands on her hips. Favouring him with an indignant glare, she hissed, "Like you, yes. Crush on you and flirt with you, no!"
Snape's eyes widened in surprise. "Flirt with me?"
Hermione tilted her head in exasperation. "You really are oblivious, aren't you?" She relaxed visibly and shook her head. "Hmph, she was almost as bad as Mrs. Weasley was about Lockhart." She cut him a fierce glance and muttered, "I don't want my mother, of all people, to be swooning over you."
Snape looked down at the irate witch in front of him and laughed. Hermione's eyes goggled at him as the rich, resonant sound bubbled forth. Struggling to speak, he gasped, "You're... jealous!"
Hermione's eyes narrowed dangerously and she pursed her lips. In an icy tone, she ground out, "You think that's funny?"
Snape caught the warning and manfully composed himself, struggling to wipe the idiotic grin from his face. Snorting occasionally at the spasms that threatened, he said, "No. No. Not funny, exactly. Just... oh it's just wonderful!"
Hermione cocked an eyebrow at him and did a creditable impression of Snape as she drawled, "Oh?"
Snape closed the gap between them, his grin softening into a smile. He wrapped his arms around her and looked into her eyes, watching her irritation fade as he held her. Quietly, he murmured, "To think that you would get upset that someone else thought I was impressive, for whatever reason... That just... makes me feel appreciated and wanted. It's not something I'm used to, so forgive me any unusual reactions." He quirked one corner of his mouth up in a saucy smirk, and Hermione relaxed completely.
In a mock grumble, she said, "Honestly! She's married, and she has no business ogling you like that. You're mine." It slipped out before she thought about it. Snape stiffened and his smile dissolved. Suddenly afraid of his reaction, she cautiously lifted her eyes to meet his.
He gazed at her, his expression inscrutable. His body was completely rigid, tense. His black eyes seethed with emotions. Hermione swallowed nervously. "Er..."
Snape interrupted her stammer. In a voice barely above a whisper, he said, "What did you just say?"
Hermione's heart hammered in her chest and she chewed her lip. Her gaze faltering under his intense scrutiny, she mumbled, "Um, nothing..."
Snape's grip tightened on her spastically. Her eyes snapped back up to his. "Did you mean it?"
Hermione stared at him, owl-eyed. "What?"
In a savage rasp, he repeated, "Did you mean it?"
Hermione looked down. Her voice trembling, she confessed, "It was just... wishful thinking. I'm sorry."
She was completely stunned when Snape swooped down and pinned her with a devouring kiss. After nearly consuming her, he pulled away, leaving her breathless and staring at him. He pressed his forehead against hers and breathed, "Don't be sorry."
Hermione sighed in relief. Snape continued, "If that's what you want, you can have it." He smiled faintly at her. "I doubt I can refuse you much at this point."
Hermione smiled back and playfully retorted, "I'll keep that in mind."
Snape regained his equilibrium after her surprising comment and pulled back, eyeing her sternly. Raising one eyebrow, he drawled, "Planning on testing me?"
Hermione grinned impishly and twinkled at him. She lilted, "Perhaps," and twirled away from him, laughing. Snape followed her and they made their way to the theatre.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)