21- The Play and Dessert
Chapter 22 of 84
Good_WitchSnape and Hermione arrive at the theatre and see the play. Upon returning home, they partake of the dessert Mrs. Granger left in the fridge. The evening is almost ruined when Snape crosses a line, but Hermione manages to salvage it after all. Too bad she ends up frustrated...
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Author's Note: I hope all you folks out there who are desperately yearning for lemons can make do with this chapter, even though the real lemons are ever-elusive. LOL!!
Chapter 21- The Play and Dessert
When Snape and Hermione Apparated to the theatre, they appeared very close to a throng of people milling about out front. It was only through Snape's quick reflexes that they didn't bump into anyone while invisible and cause confusion. Snape had his wand in his right hand, and his left hand was entwined with Hermione's right. As soon as they arrived, he noticed that a couple was about to run into them and hastily yanked Hermione toward him and backwards. Hermione, taken unawares by the abrupt tug, flailed wildly, teetering on her heels, and fell against Snape, who promptly wrapped his arms around her to keep her upright. Thus it was that Hermione was pressed hard against Snape's chest and his arms were wrapped around her, his hands splayed across her chest and belly. Somehow, both managed to keep quiet.
As soon as she felt steady on her feet again, Hermione clapped her hands over Snape's, feeling the quivering in her stomach at the feel of his strong hands very near her breasts. Snape tried at once to pull away, but Hermione held on firmly, tilting her head back and hissing, "Over there. We have to get to those shadows to become visible again. Are you ready?"
Snape nodded, then realized that she couldn't see him and quietly grunted an affirmative, once again trying to regain possession of his hands. Hermione wrapped her fingers around his hands and sighed as she let them drop to her sides, pulling him behind her as she wended her way to the shadows. Once there, she quickly spun around and slid her hands along Snape's arms and over his chest, slipping her fingers up to his neck. Snape stiffened in surprise at her touch and backed away, only to find himself up against a wall. He cursed the fact that she was invisible, because he couldn't get a read on what she might do, but a part of him revelled in the heightened sensations caused by the lack of seeing her. His body responded to the forbidden excitement and allure of being so anonymous while with Hermione.
Hermione felt Snape's reluctance in his posture, but she pressed the issue, delighting in the daring impulse. She anchored one hand against the back of his neck and lightly walked her other fingers over his jaw line to his lips, which thinned and trembled under her touch. With a throaty giggle, she pulled Snape's resisting head down to her and kissed him full on the lips, pressing her body against his.
Snape's mind was reeling. He was being thoroughly kissed by someone he couldn't even see, and no one could see how much he was enjoying it either! A low groan emerged from his throat as he gave in and began kissing Hermione back. He felt a tightening in his loins at her faint moan of delight. After a few moments of passionate snogging, Snape fought to regain his senses and pulled back resolutely.
Gasping, he said, "Hermione, we have to stop. It's time to get our seats for the play. And we have to control ourselves! We cannot allow anything to show in our memories in the Pensieve! Now, I must reverse the concealment charm. Are you ready?"
Hermione voiced an inarticulate noise of impatience and annoyance. Sighing deeply, she composed herself and trailed her fingertips along Snape's invisible lips. She grinned at his involuntary attempt to nip her fingers. Finally, she muttered, "Fine. I'm ready." In her mind, she was screaming, I'm ready for everything! I'm ready for you! She slid her hands down his chest and lightly twined her fingers with his again as he cast the charm. They shimmered into view, cloaked in the shadows.
As soon as they were visible again, Snape squeezed her hand and urged her toward the theatre. Resignedly, Hermione turned and strode toward the doors, with Snape beside her, holding her hand. They made their way into the theatre, offering their tickets to the usher, who showed them to their seats. Snape gazed alertly about him, taking in the décor and the size of the theatre. He realized that they had extremely good seats and reminded himself to thank the Grangers again for their efforts. He guided Hermione to her seat and held her coat for her to slide out of it. He was hard pressed to keep his hands to himself at the sight of her smooth skin and the delectable nape of her neck. Hermione took the coat from him and laid it against the back of her seat.
Snape heard an usher offering him the programme and took one. He turned to sit and was met with the sight of Hermione's thigh peeking through the slit in her dress. Sinking weakly into his seat, he couldn't take his eyes off her leg. She had sat down, and crossed her right leg over her left, causing the slit to spread across her right thigh, showing off the top of her smoky stocking clasped in the suspender. A tiny triangle of creamy flesh was visible above the stocking.
Hermione was absorbed in looking at her programme and didn't realize what effect she was inadvertently having on Snape. After a few beats, she turned to mention something in the programme and saw Snape's expression. He looked rather dazed, and his black eyes were crackling with heat. He even had faint spots of colour burning on his cheeks. Hermione's eyebrows rose and her mouth formed an "o" of astonishment. She followed his gaze and realized just how exposed she was. Gasping in chagrin, she quickly uncrossed her legs, smoothing her skirt. She felt herself flushing in embarrassment, but that turned to calculating amusement as she looked again at Snape. He had shaken his head violently and his eyes darted everywhere but at her. Clearing his throat savagely, he shifted uncomfortably in his seat, his programme conspicuously in his lap.
Hermione smirked to herself. The theatre was filling up quickly and people had taken seats on either side of them. She decided to have mercy on the poor man and affected interest in her programme again until he had regained his composure.
Snape mentally berated himself for his base reactions to Hermione. Good gods, man! Get a grip! You haven't been this out of control in... ever! You have an assignment and you must focus on it. Ignore temptation. You've always managed to stay focused before! Of course, you've never quite been faced with this kind of temptation before either. Bloody hell... I'm so going to lose my job... Snape cradled his face in his hands and closed his eyes, suppressing a groan. Disconsolately, he peered at Hermione and murmured, "Once the play starts, be sure to look at everything onstage, even if it's not the focus of the scene. Dumbledore needs to be able to see the whole set. And, every time it changes, look at everything again. Is that clear?"
Hermione turned solemn eyes on Snape and nodded gravely. Snape continued, in a low hiss, "Remember, he will be able to see everything we see. So, please, if you value your education and care for me to keep my job, please don't let anything slip!" He gazed at her meaningfully. Hermione looked at him, owl-eyed, and nodded again. The lights began to dim and the buzz of conversation in the theatre turned into a susurrus of whispers. Snape sat back in his seat and firmly turned his attention to the stage. Hermione glanced at him one last time before following suit.
The lights went down and the play began. It was fairly easy to focus on it for a while, since it was rather overwhelming, especially with being so close to the stage. Snape had to consciously think about blinking every time his eyes began to water. It was unlike anything he had ever experienced before. He felt like he was caught up with the swell of music and the current of emotions, and his chest felt like it would burst with enjoyment. Hermione chanced a glance at him, on pretence of leaning over to comment on a costume, and saw the rapt light in his dark eyes. Snape barely registered her whisper, almost mesmerized by the performance.
Hermione saw how much Snape was enjoying the play and sat back again, inordinately pleased. She gazed about with a huge grin on her face, trying to keep herself from mouthing along with the songs. Eventually, it came to the scene with the magic mirror, and Snape leant forward in his seat, staring hard at the stage. As soon as he heard the Phantom start his song, he jerked, sitting rigidly, his expression one of intense concentration. Hermione couldn't help but glance at him as he reacted so physically, and the fleeting thought that if he could "burn with the heat of his eyes," the whole stage would be aflame, so intently was he eyeing the performance.
As the play progressed through to "Music of the Night," Snape completely forgot about everyone else in the theatre, including Hermione. He was so absorbed in the performance, imagining himself in the role, recording the way the Phantom moved and gestured, that he could almost feel himself inhabiting the body of the actor onstage. As the song ended, he slowly sank back in his seat, but he never took his eyes off the Phantom. When the scene changed to the point where Christine snatched the mask off the Phantom, Snape gripped the arms of his seat so hard his knuckles turned white, and he scowled fiercely, breathing harshly in empathy. Hermione started at his vehement response and flicked a wary glance at him before hastily focusing on the play again. Eventually he relaxed again, thoughtfully watching the scenes with "Notes" and "Prima Donna."
When "Il Muto" began, he gracefully leant his chin on two long slender fingers, bemusedly gazing at the scene. When the Phantom's voice echoed throughout the theatre, he rapidly darted his gaze around, a small smile hovering on his lips. As the scene progressed, he smirked maliciously along with the Phantom's laughter and eyed the swinging chandelier. But, when Carlotta left the stage and the ballet began, his smirk faded and he regarded the shadows with growing seriousness. Hermione glanced at Snape again as the garrotted body of Buquet fell from the ceiling and saw his closed, bleak expression.
Christine and Raoul escaped to the roof, and eventually began "All I Ask of You." Hermione sternly kept herself from looking at Snape again, but she furtively snuck her hand over the arm of the seat to nestle in his.
Snape was seething as he watched the scene with Christine and Raoul, thinking about Hermione and Potter. He froze in panic at the feel of her soft hand creeping into his. Frantically, he kept his eyes on the stage, refusing to glance down at her hand in his. What the hell does she think she's doing? She's going to get us in trouble! Just don't look, and maybe she'll move it soon. Has she lost her senses? He forced himself to pay attention to the play, and not to her warm fingers snug in his hand.
As the song continued, and Christine sang, "Say you'll share with me one love, one lifetime . . . say the word and I will follow you . . ." Hermione squeezed Snape's hand firmly, hoping to get the point across. Then, when Christine and Raoul kissed, she not only squeezed his hand, but she also rubbed her thumb across the edge of his thumb and forefinger, caressing him lightly.
Snape felt her ministrations and noted the timing of them. His heart thumped oddly in response, and his throat tightened. Stoically, he managed to keep his eyes on the stage, pretending Hermione was not wreaking havoc with his emotions. As Christine and Raoul left the stage and the Phantom sang his betrayal, Hermione gripped Snape's hand tightly. He swallowed thickly, blinking. Then, when the scene ended with the chandelier falling at Christine's feet, Hermione furtively slipped her hand from his to applaud the end of Act One. Snape immediately began applauding as well, grateful that she had released him. As the house lights came back up for intermission, Snape allowed himself to look at Hermione.
In a low voice, he murmured, "I understand your appreciation of the play now. It was already quite interesting as we've been reading and listening to it, but seeing it in action... It's extraordinary." He felt his lips widening into a beatific smile and found he couldn't stop himself. But, the answering smile from Hermione reconciled him to his lack of control. She beamed up at him, her eyes twinkling.
With a saucy tilt of her head, she lilted, "See, I told you it wouldn't be so bad, having to see the play with me..."
Snape arched one eyebrow in mock severity, before he let his faint scowl dissolve into a secretive smouldering look. His lip curling, he purred, "Indeed, it has been most... revealing."
Hermione's breath caught at the sultry note in his voice, and her eyes widened. Inexorably, she glanced down at her thigh, remembering how exposed she had been and how Snape had reacted. Her eyes darted to the programme in his lap before she looked back up at him through her lashes, flushing. Snape smirked.
In a husky whisper, Hermione said, "So, I suppose Dumbledore has no need to see intermission, wouldn't you say?" Snape saw the devilish gleam in her eye.
Warily, he retorted, "I should say not. Why do you ask?" His eyes narrowed on her shrewdly.
Casually, Hermione arched her back, stretching, thrusting her chest forward as she re-crossed her legs, once again allowing the slit to open over her thigh. She stretched her arms out wide and let her right arm drop behind Snape in his seat. Languidly, she glanced over at him and saw him gazing at her, his posture rigid, his eyes hungrily travelling across her chest and down over her thigh before creeping back up again. Enjoying herself hugely, Hermione lightly grazed her fingers along the back of Snape's neck and revelled in the shudder that swept over him as he closed his eyes.
Snape was reeling again. Merlin help me! This slip of a girl is a bloody vixen! That's it. I'm going to put some things into MY Pensieve before we go to Dumbledore, just to be safe... Hmm... Well, in that case... Snape came to a decision and opened his eyes, pinning Hermione with a stare that engulfed her in blazing heat and desire. She gasped and blinked rapidly.
Snape surreptitiously glanced around and saw that the people who had been seated around them were all gone, no doubt at the loo or in the lobby buying merchandise. When he looked back at Hermione, she noticed that his gaze had become almost predatory, and she suppressed a shiver, feeling a throb in the vicinity of her knickers. He leant toward her and stopped just millimetres from her ear, his nose brushing against her curls. Hermione could feel his warm breath against her ear, and her eyes closed involuntarily as he spoke.
In a deep, velvet purr, he said, "No, indeed. There are certainly things that Dumbledore does not need to see. Intermission is one of them..." Hermione jumped as she felt his gentle fingertips teasing the triangle of flesh above her stocking, coupled with the tickling sensations of his nose nuzzling her ear and neck. Her eyes flew open and she barely contained a squeak as he nipped along the cord of her neck, bathing it with hot breath, while his hand deftly smoothed the silky material of her stocking, cupping her knee as he came to it.
Snape's mind was screaming that he was going too far, but his body was disagreeing vehemently. He could feel Hermione's pulse racing under his lips and he smiled against her soft skin. The heady aroma of her perfume filled his nose, adding to the welter of sensations and thoughts spinning through him. He heard her shallow, halting breaths and lifted his lips to her ear again, breathing, "Is anything amiss, Miss Granger?" Hermione exhaled on a low note of longing and frustration. Snape heard the other patrons returning and gave a low, throaty chuckle before he retreated to his seat, sliding his hand along her leg again on its way back over the arm to his side. Hermione closed her eyes and swallowed harshly at the vibrations his laughter had sent across the sensitive shell of her ear. Blinking rapidly to focus her eyesight, she dazedly dragged her arm back from behind Snape and let her hands fall limply into her lap.
Snape leant back in his seat languorously, extremely satisfied with Hermione's reactions. A faint smirk hovered on his lips and he gazed at the stage from under hooded lids. He felt the tingle on his cheek that signalled Hermione staring at him and casually turned to her, affecting innocent inquiry. He raised his eyebrows at her as she pinned him with an intense glare.
Hermione was squirming in her seat, uncomfortably aware of how soaked her knickers were after Snape's surprising turnabout. Glancing irritably about at the rest of the theatre, realizing that Act Two was about to start, Hermione narrowed her eyes dangerously at Snape and muttered, "Touché." Tilting her chin up at a haughty angle, she sat back in her seat and buried her nose in her programme. Snape's smirk widened as he watched her eyes and noted that they weren't moving as she ostensibly "read" her programme. The lights dimmed, and he focused once again on the stage as the second act began.
Both Snape and Hermione were dazzled by the spectacle of the Masquerade. Their tête-à-tête was forgotten in the dizzying display in front of them. Snape leant forward in his seat, as if drawn to the performance. As the second "Notes" scene began, Snape sank back into his seat, his eyes darting between the actors as they sang their respective parts. When Christine finally cried out in her frustration, Snape scowled blackly, glaring at Raoul. Hermione was so absorbed in the scene, since she would be performing it, that she didn't even glance at Snape to see his reaction.
Both were silently engrossed in the play as it progressed through the rehearsal of "Don Juan" to Christine's trek to the graveyard. As the scene built, with the confrontation between Raoul and the Phantom seemingly imminent, Hermione snuck a glance at Snape, only to see him hunched forward in his seat, his elbows on his knees, glaring menacingly at the stage. She was impressed by his obvious focus as he stared intently at the Phantom shooting fireballs at Raoul and causing the lightning and flames to flare onstage. Then, as the scene came to an end, Snape pursed his lips and relaxed back into his seat, one finger thoughtfully tracing his mouth.
Hermione cast her attention back to the play as the scene that was not included in the recording began. Soon after that, "Don Juan" began, leading up to "Point of No Return." Hermione shifted discreetly in her seat, doggedly keeping her eyes on the performance, when all she wanted to do was look longingly at Snape.
Snape was once again caught up in the play. He gazed at the performers, a rapt light shining in his impossibly black eyes. When "Point of No Return" began, he unknowingly heaved a long sigh. Hermione heard him, but avoided looking. Then, when the song changed and the Phantom offered Christine a ring, Hermione was startled by Snape's sharp gasp, followed by an explosive exhalation. Flicking her gaze toward him, she noticed that his hands were balled into tight fists on his knees. When Christine finally pulled the Phantom's mask off and the audience could see his face, Snape backed into his seat forcefully, staring in wide-eyed fascination and horror at the gruesome sight. In her peripheral vision, Hermione saw him absently lift his hand to his face, grazing across the area that would be affected by the glamour.
Hermione's attention was drawn back to the performance as the culminating scene in the Phantom's dungeon began. She focused keenly on the interplay between Christine and the Phantom, cataloguing their actions and movements for future reference. When Raoul arrived, and the Phantom secured him in the noose, Hermione glanced again at Snape, to see him watching the actors, completely still, like a statue. She could barely tell he was breathing, and he was hardly even blinking. Her pulse sped up as the climax neared, and when Christine finally kissed the Phantom, her stomach clenched before roiling agitatedly.
Furtively glancing at Snape, she saw his hands gripping so tightly that they were trembling, but they relaxed as the kiss went on, until his fists opened into limp hands drooping over his kneecaps as the kiss ended. She could see his chest rising and falling like a bellows as he breathed heavily in the wake of the climax.
The final few minutes of the play wound down, bittersweet, until the Phantom disappeared and the mob arrived in his lair. Then, the curtain closed on the final image of Meg kneeling by the throne with the Phantom's mask in her hand, reflecting light all over the theatre. Applause erupted around them, and Snape clapped fiercely. As the curtain opened for the cast's curtain call, Snape instinctively shot to his feet, applauding vigorously. Hermione smiled to herself as she joined him and many of the rest of the audience in the standing ovation. Snape showed no signs of slowing as the cast made their way off the stage after their bows, preferring to applaud until they were all completely out of sight and the audience had begun filing out of the theatre. Then, he stopped clapping and sighed deeply, almost reverently, as he took one last, long look around him.
"Amazing," he said, in a voice barely above a whisper.
When he turned to Hermione, his eyes were glittering and his expression was one of someone who had been deeply moved. Hermione smiled gently up at him and reached out to grip his arm. He glanced down, surprised at her touch, and seemed to come to his senses again. Politely, he picked up her coat and held it for her to put on. Hermione flashed a dazzling smile at him and murmured, "Thank you," as she turned to slip into the coat.
Glancing over her shoulder at him, she saw him courteously gesture for her to precede him out of the row. As she exited the row and turned to him, he offered his arm to her with a courtly bow and a small smile. Twinkling at him, Hermione slipped her hand inside his elbow and enjoyed being swept up the aisle on his arm. She kept casting admiring glances up at him, devouring his dashing ensemble and aristocratic air. Without having to discuss it, they strode directly to the spot where they had become visible again and ensconced themselves in the shadows.
Snape withdrew his wand and pulled Hermione against him, wrapping his other arm around her and gazing down into her upturned face. Hermione was taken aback by his initiative, but her surprise dissolved into pleasure at the warmth of his lean frame against her. She smiled as his velvet voice murmured the charm and they disappeared from view. In the darkness, she felt them Apparate.
She voiced a faint squeal of delight to find them back in front of the fireplace in her living room instead of on her front step. A low chuckle sounded above her head and Snape cast the reversal. Hermione backed away a step to look up at Snape in the dim light from the dying embers left in the fireplace. He was staring at her intently, his lips almost quirked up in a smile. His eyebrow arched once and he purred, "Surprise."
Hermione giggled and flashed him that dazzling smile he so enjoyed. Tilting her head, she raised one eyebrow as she grabbed his hand and pulled him out to the foyer, where she placed a finger to her lips and shook her head, flicking her eyes at the stairs. Snape glanced up the stairs and back to her, his solemn expression belied by his dancing eyes as he helped her out of her coat. She quietly hung it up in the closet in the foyer. Grabbing his hand again, she pulled him into the kitchen and carefully shut the door behind her. Snape walked slowly through the kitchen, gazing about him interestedly. Hermione leant against the door, watching him hungrily, admiring his elegant posture and graceful movements. Snape ended up at the sink, where he slowly turned and leant back against the counter, his black eyes coming to rest on Hermione across the kitchen, eyeing him.
They locked gazes for a moment, devouring each other, as if etching the image of the other into their minds, never to be forgotten. Hermione found herself breathing heavily, her chest rising and falling noticeably, and she saw Snape's gaze drop to her cleavage, his jaw throbbing as he ground his teeth.
In a faint voice, Hermione managed to gasp out, "Mum said dessert was in the fridge. Would you like a snack before bedtime?" She smiled shakily at him, suddenly aware of her damp knickers again.
Snape noticed her trembling and smoothly answered, "That would be lovely," trying to maintain some semblance of normality. Hermione nodded and pushed herself off the door to cross to the refrigerator. She opened the door and bent down, peering inside. Snape felt a throb in his groin as he eyed her, her dress tight across her backside and riding up the back of her smoky-hued legs, above her knees.
Hermione moved something and then voiced an inarticulate cry of delight. Hastily standing up, she spun on Snape, holding a bowl and beaming. She crossed to the small table against the wall and placed the bowl on it, excitedly turning and retrieving two smaller bowls and spoons as well. Snape watched her, curious about what sort of food would engender such a rapturous response. Hermione pulled the chairs away from the table and gestured for Snape to come sit. Her eyes sparkled and her grin was infectious as she looked at him.
One eyebrow arching in inquiry, Snape lifted his chin in her direction and asked, "What is it?"
Hermione breathed, "My favourite!"
Rolling his eyes at such an evasive answer, Snape began unbuttoning his opera coat, striding toward the table. Hermione's eyes goggled at him and her grin faltered a moment before she caught herself and smiled again, colour rising in her cheeks. Snape's lip curled in a wicked smirk as he shrugged out of his coat, folding it neatly and draping it across the back of his chair before gracefully sinking into it. Hermione seemed to wilt into her seat, looking slightly dazed as Snape began to undo his cuffs, turning them up twice. Then, when he undid the button on his collar, Hermione swallowed nervously, her eyes almost as black as Snape's, so dilated were her pupils. Snape was thoroughly enjoying the effect he was having on her and leant back languidly in his chair, watching her from under hooded lids. Once again affecting polite interest, he asked, "And what exactly is your favourite?"
Hermione's face plainly showed the rush of answers that wanted to come out, mainly, "You! You're my favourite!" but she swallowed thickly and rasped, "Chocolate mousse, with cherries and whipped cream on top."
Snape leant forward slightly, interested in the dessert, remembering how delicious dinner had been. He looked into the bowl and saw the rich colour of the mousse, topped by the mound of whipped cream. Several maraschino cherries with stems were clustered on top, shining brightly in the light. In a conversational tone, Snape ventured, "So you like chocolate?"
Hermione nodded vigorously. "I don't know anyone who doesn't! But I love the mousse. It has such a divinely rich taste and the texture is so smooth and light. But it's even better with the whipped cream and cherries to complement it!" She chewed on her lower lip, eyeing the mousse with a hungry expression similar to the one she had been casting at Snape earlier. Snape bit back a snort of amusement.
Sitting back in his chair, he raised his hands in mock defence, as if warding her off. "By all means, don't let me stand in the way of your rendezvous with the mousse." He favoured her with a sardonic smirk.
Hermione narrowed her eyes at him in pique. He was making fun of her! Fine, then. Be that way. We'll see how superior you act in a minute... Hermione huffed haughtily at him and reached into the bowl to lift out a cherry. Pinning him with an intense stare, she slowly brought the cream-covered cherry to her mouth, slipping her tongue out to lightly lick the whipped cream off it. Snape's smirk vanished with comical haste. He shifted in his seat, jaw line twitching, eyes glued to Hermione's tongue.
Hermione exaggerated every movement as she licked the cherry clean, letting her lids droop in decadent delight. Once the cherry was clean, she gently sucked it into her mouth, closing her lips around the stem. Just to torment Snape further, she let it slip out of her mouth with a slight "pop" and then resumed her ministrations. Finally, she sucked it into her mouth and bit the fruit from the stem. As she jerked the stem from her lips, Snape jumped. Hermione closed her eyes in sensual enjoyment as she chewed the cherry and swallowed. Sighing in contentment, she opened her eyes and smirked at Snape. His hands were gripping the table edge, and he was breathing shallowly, looking very agitated.
In a falsely bright voice, Hermione remarked, "I prefer the cherries with the stems. They provide food and entertainment." Snape blinked rapidly. Hermione smiled sweetly at him and whispered, "Watch." She put the stem in her mouth and held his gaze as she worked her jaw. After several moments of concentration on Hermione's part and tense observation on Snape's part, Hermione's lips widened into a wicked grin and she lifted her fingers to her lips, pulling out the cherry stem. Triumphantly presenting it to a bewildered Snape, she trilled, "Ta da!"
Snape looked at the cherry stem on her palm. It was now tied in a knot. He glanced up at her in dumb amazement. His mind was feverishly trying to handle the sensory and informational overload. As he grappled with her unusual accomplishment, that riotous voice in his head shouted, Merlin's bloody balls! Just think what else she could do with her tongue! Snape closed his eyes, trying to control the manic urge to lunge across the table and teach her other tricks to do with her tongue. Finally opening his eyes again, he stoically composed himself and murmured, "Very... intriguing."
Hermione stifled a giggle and reached into the bowl, snagging another cherry. Lifting it, she extended her hand toward Snape, purring, "Want a taste?"
Snape arched an eyebrow at her in unmistakable warning, exhaling fiercely through his nose. His eyes burned with his desire for "a taste." He eyed the fruit a moment and then snorted in a sudden fit of amusement. Hermione was taken aback by his rapid mood shift and her brow furrowed, puzzled. Her outstretched hand dropping just slightly, she asked, "What's so funny?"
Snape's lips were twitching, holding back his laughter. Struck with a wicked impulse, he leant over the table toward Hermione, closing in on her. She looked at him, startled and wary. He grabbed her hand and pulled it between their faces, pointedly looking at it. Then he moved it out of the way and leant closer to Hermione, his voice a low growl in her ear.
"Do you realize you have just offered me your cherry?"
Hermione gasped and stiffened. She yanked her hand from his grasp and backed away from his rumbling laugh. Without thinking, she shoved the cream-covered cherry into his mouth, smearing it across his lips, pushing him backward. She felt a rush of satisfaction at his expression of startled surprise and the abrupt end of his chuckle. Then, realizing what she had just done, her eyes flew wide open and she froze, afraid of his reaction.
Snape backed slowly away from Hermione and sank back into his seat. He serenely reached up to pull the stem from the fruit in his mouth, tossing it to the table. Methodically, he chewed and swallowed. Then, his tongue snaked out to lick the whipped cream from his lips. His eyes never left Hermione's as he purred, "Delicious."
Hermione shakily sat back down. Trembling, she silently dished up two bowls of mousse, sliding one across the table to Snape. Her gaze fluttered up to him and back down to her bowl. They ate in silence for a few moments. Then, Snape, high on the rush of adrenaline, endorphins, and other heady sex hormones, spoke.
In that same light, conversational tone, he commented, "I have heard that some people say chocolate is better than sex..." He gazed at Hermione through his lashes, idly licking mousse from his spoon.
Hermione flushed, feeling a tingle in her centre at Snape's voice uttering the word "sex." She glanced about, flustered, and muttered, "I wouldn't know."
Snape snapped to attention. Virgin! that voice screamed in his head. He was suddenly overcome with a wave of shame and remorse for his crass comment earlier. He dropped the bowl onto the table with a clatter and savagely cleared his throat. Heat suffused his face as he writhed in embarrassment. What the hell do you think you're doing? You really are pushing it...
He shot to his feet, startling Hermione. Snatching his bowl and spoon and rushing to the sink, he rinsed them with the energy borne of self-castigation. Determinedly not looking at Hermione again, Snape said, in a politely cool voice of indifference, "Your mother is quite an accomplished cook. Dessert was just as wonderful as dinner. I must remember to convey my gratitude in the morning." He turned off the water and doggedly strode to his chair, picking up his coat. "Speaking of which, morning will be here sooner than we might like, so I believe it is time to retire."
Hermione was watching him mutely, bewildered by his complete mood shifts. Slowly, she stood, picking up the bowl and placing it back in the refrigerator. Snape grabbed her bowl, dropped his coat again, and proceeded to rinse her bowl like he did his. Hermione leant against the refrigerator, baffled at his behaviour and worried. Tentatively, she ventured, "Are you okay?"
Snape straightened and his hands stilled. He gazed up at the ceiling and then dropped his chin to his chest, defeated. Resuming his vigorous scrubbing, he rumbled, "No. Once again, I must apologize. I was completely out of line, and I am disgusted with myself for my lack of couth. I don't know what came over me. I'm sorry I offended you." His shoulders drooped and he shut off the water resignedly, but he didn't turn around.
Hermione crossed to him and gently laid her hand on his shoulder. He shuddered and pulled away, spinning to face her. Hermione noted the white-knuckled grip he had on the countertop and looked up into his grim face. His expression was bleak with self-loathing and he wouldn't meet her eyes.
Hermione tried to catch his eye, but he kept turning his head, avoiding her. She whispered, "Severus." Snape's eyes closed and his brow furrowed in pain. Hermione stepped closer to him, almost against him, trapping him against the counter. She reached up and gently cupped his cheek in her hand. He started and tried to back away, but she wouldn't let him. She made a "tsk" noise with her tongue and sternly said, "Severus, look at me." Snape miserably faced her.
In a low but strong voice, she said, "I'm fine. You didn't offend me." Snape rolled his eyes and snorted in disbelief. Hermione eyed him severely and gripped his chin, forcing him to look her in the eye again. "Fine, if you won't believe that... I forgive you. Is that what you needed to hear?" She saw the shame in his eyes and smiled gently in reassurance. "I forgive you. For whatever you mistakenly think you did to need it. I'm fine. Please, let's not let such a wonderful evening be spoilt, ending like this." Snape's jaw was throbbing fiercely; she felt it under her hand. Knowing his propensity to wallow in his suffering, she made a decision.
"Let it end like this..." She lifted her other hand and slid it along his hair to the back of his head. His eyes were stunned as she pulled his head down and she stretched up to meet him. She kissed him. It wasn't the deep, passionate snogging from in the shadows before the play. It was a sweet, healing benison of trust and affection. She held him until she felt the stiffness in his posture dissolve. Finally, he slid his hands around her, crushing her in a vehement embrace. He pulled away from her kiss to bury his face in her neck. Hermione smiled and murmured, "Yes, I much prefer this ending..." She felt Snape's bark of amazed laughter.
He trailed his hands deftly across her back, caressing her shoulders tenderly. He pulled back and regarded her in wonder before he enveloped her in his arms again, tucking her head under his chin. He kissed her hair and whispered, "Thank you, Hermione. You don't know how much I needed to know what it was like to be forgiven."
He inhaled the intoxicating scent of her hair and her perfume and rained kisses on her, her hair, her ears, her neck, her shoulders, her jaw, and finally her mouth. When he claimed her lips in a searing kiss, Hermione could feel the change in his demeanour. He was no longer closed off and miserable. Pleased that he was no longer blaming himself, she responded to his kiss with heat.
Their kiss turned into a long, slow, sensual, probing exploration of each other. Snape tasted the chocolate on her tongue and sighed in bliss. Hermione revelled in the shuddering warmth that seemed to end up collecting in her knickers. After several minutes, Snape felt like sobbing in relief that he had found Hermione, and that she had managed to find him.
Him. The real him. Not the Potions Master persona he put on for everyone to see. She saw through that and understood parts of him that he didn't even fully comprehend. How could she have known the right things to say and do otherwise? Regretfully, he realized that they had to get some sleep before the tour the next morning. He pulled away from Hermione and slid his hands into the hair at the base of her skull. He felt the hairpins and smiled faintly as he systematically rooted them out, collecting them on the counter beside them. Finally, once they were all out, he gently released Hermione's hair from its twist and finger-combed her curly tresses over her bare shoulders. She watched him with eyes glazed in pleasure.
He smiled at her. "There's my bushy-haired Gryffindor..." Hermione's heart thumped at his words. She gazed up at him, rapt, her breath catching. Snape grazed his fingers over her hair, smirking indulgently at her shiver. In a velvet purr, he said, "It's past your curfew..." Resolutely, he clasped her hands in his and pulled her away from the counter. Deftly snagging his coat, he guided her to the kitchen door. She gazed at him reproachfully. His eyes twinkling, he tilted his head toward the door and placed one long slender finger to his lips, imitating her gesture when they had arrived.
He led the way out and up the stairs, Hermione trailing wistfully behind him. Between their doors, they stopped, facing one another. Snape glanced down the hall at the Grangers' closed door. Inclining his head toward Hermione, he spun and opened his door quietly. He turned and regarded her from the doorway. In a faint whisper, he said, "Good night. Sweet dreams." Then, giving her one last smouldering look, he closed the door between them, leaving Hermione standing in the hallway.
Hermione sighed. Resignedly, she moped into the bathroom to brush her teeth and wash her makeup off before going to bed. Exiting the bathroom, she tiptoed to Snape's door, listening hard. She couldn't hear anything, and she couldn't tell if there was light coming from under the door or not. Mouth twisting in a moue of disappointment, she turned off the hall light and retreated to her bedroom.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)