43- Birthday Surprise
Chapter 45 of 84
Good_WitchRehearsal sees the Masquerade staged, and Snape finds out about Dumbledore's solution. Plus, Dumbledore has another surprise up his sleeve... It is January 9th, after all.
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Chapter 43- Birthday Surprise
Snape couldn't help but smirk to himself most of the way up the dungeon stairs. As he reached the top, he wiped his face of any expression, seeing a handful of students loitering outside the Great Hall. They backed away to the opposite wall as he approached, averting their eyes. Snape simply swept past them, entering the Hall and slamming the door behind him. Dumbledore was onstage, twinkling down at Snape as he strode down the aisle.
"Severus! There you are!"
Snape briskly mounted the stage, replying, "All right, Albus, what is it that you've come up with?"
Dumbledore clasped his hands over his belly, beaming. Excitement underlying his voice, he said, "Last rehearsal, Miss Granger made a comment that spurred me in a new direction."
Brow creased in perplexity, Snape queried, "What comment was that?"
"She said something about how it would be easier if you could just pop about to wherever you need to be. So, you shall!" He ended with a triumphant gesture, but Snape grimaced his incomprehension.
Curtly, he said, "How?"
Dumbledore rolled his eyes and drawled, "You'll Apparate, of course!"
Snape blinked. Eyeing Dumbledore as if he had finally gone daft, Snape slowly enunciated, "Albus, this is Hogwarts. I cannot Apparate within the grounds. Remember?"
Dumbledore chuckled. "Oh, but my dear boy, it's so simple! Surely, you remember Apparating here? Here, in this very Hall?"
Comprehension dawned and Snape's face went slack. Eyes wide, he gazed at Dumbledore. After a beat of stunned silence, he hissed, "How? You daren't lift the wards from the whole Hall as was done for Apparition License classes! As soon as the students realize that the Hall is open to Apparition, they'll take advantage of it, and they'll obviously know once they see me Apparating. It would be irresponsible, Albus." He frowned in disapproval.
Dumbledore clapped a hand on Snape's shoulder and leant closer. "Lifting the wards for the Hall is not my plan. I can arrange it so you, and you alone, can Apparate within the castle. Now, you won't be able to Apparate from inside to outside or vice versa, but you'll be able to get where you need to be inside these walls. So, you see, it's perfect for you to just pop about like the Phantom! Now, just after dinner, I double-checked the spells to allow your magical signature to slip through the wards. So, when we finish rehearsal tonight, I'll need you to remain for a bit to allow me to cast the spells."
Snape stared at Dumbledore, incredulous. "Can you really do that? I thought the wards were woven unalterably..."
The older man chuckled and smiled conspiratorially. "You're not Headmaster yet, my boy. We do have a few secrets still." He snorted at the acid grimace Snape shot him.
Snape rolled his eyes as he mumbled under his breath, "As if I would ever want to be Headmaster! Gods save me..." After a beat, during which Dumbledore beamed at him, Snape continued, "Why can't you do it now? Isn't that why you brought me here?"
"It will take more time than we have right now, and I want to make sure it works. I wanted to tell you all about it though, so you'd be ready to stick around after rehearsal. We need to get ready for the rest of the cast to arrive." With that, he pulled out the music box and descended into the house. Snape stared after him, slightly dazed by the unexpected turn of events.
Humming under his breath, Dumbledore shuffled up the aisle to the doors, flinging them open to the cast assembled in the corridor. Snape slowly walked back into the house, sinking into a seat in the front row, lost in thought.
The hubbub grew as the students entered, chattering nervously in anticipation of staging "Masquerade." Snape was staring into the middle distance, his chin propped on his fingers, oblivious to the tumult around him.
Hermione eyed him curiously, and Ginny poked her in the ribs, cocking an eyebrow in question. Casting a mystified glance at her friend, Hermione shrugged. Dumbledore buzzed about, enspelling students, before directing everyone onstage. Everyone except Snape clambered up, many shifting from foot to foot in anxiety. Dumbledore arranged the set and placed everyone, explaining what he would be doing during the Entre-Acte. Then, hot on the tails of his explanation, he beamed at them and cried, "Action!"
At the swell of music, Snape snapped to attention, gazing up at the shifting sets and cast members. Once the opening scene with Neville and Ron finished, Dumbledore paused, pairing everyone up for the dancing. Snape slid his fingers over his lips to hide the smirk that heralded a gale of laughter at the horrified expressions on the faces of some of the boys, especially the one paired up with Trelawney. Shoulders shaking, he took a deep breath to regain his composure, interested despite himself in the staging of the elaborate Masquerade.
It took a long while to dry run the blocking and then match it with the music, all in short bursts. Eventually, they were to the point where the Phantom appears, and Dumbledore turned to Snape. "Severus, I need you to mount to the top of the staircase to start the next part of the scene."
Snape shot to his feet, putting on the Phantom mask. "Certainly, sir." He charged up the stairs into the wing and strode purposefully onstage to climb the staircase set piece. Once he was at the top, Dumbledore resumed giving blocking directions before walking them through the next part.
Snape descended the stairs, reciting his lines, gazing about at the rest of the cast staring at him in shock. He advanced on Hermione menacingly, miming ripping the chain from her neck. At that point, Dumbledore paused again, saying, "All right. Now, Severus, if you would please exit to the wing..." Snape nodded and stalked off, and Dumbledore directed the exodus and explained the way the sets would shift while Harry and McGonagall did their scene.
At his mark, everyone exited, and Harry called after McGonagall while the sets moved around them. They recited their scene, and when they reached the end, Dumbledore called everyone back out onstage. "Very well then, let's go back to the Entre-Acte and begin again. This time, we'll go through without stopping. Places!"
Snape climbed atop the staircase set piece and hunkered down on the top step, waiting until the piece slid onstage. As Dumbledore shifted the sets, he blinked in surprise at Snape ensconced on the stairs, then smiled in comprehension, nodding his approval. Snape inclined his head and leant forward, propping his elbows on his knees as he waited for the dancing to finish and for his cue to come up.
Dumbledore walked them through the dance again, smiling to himself at the way the students kept casting disconcerted glances at their Potions Master sitting so casually above them. Now that I think about it, it's so nice to see the dear boy loosening up. He finally seems to have relaxed this year. It's quite refreshing...
At the end of his part, Snape whirled and sped up the staircase again, riding it offstage as Harry and McGonagall continued. When they finished, the whole cast went through the scene in time to the music. Snape had to admit, from his vantage point behind everyone, that the dancing wasn't half bad. If everyone kept practicing, it should turn out pretty well. Still, he was heartily glad that he wasn't required to dance, too.
When the third run-through was done, Dumbledore called everyone onstage. "Well done, everyone! Now, next rehearsal, we'll go through the whole of Act One, on through this scene. However, I have an announcement to make, so if everyone could gather 'round..." The students sank onto the apron in a ragged semi-circle around Dumbledore. Snape stepped in from the wing, leaning against the proscenium, arms crossed, Phantom mask dangling from one finger. Dumbledore waved a hand to Snape. "Severus, come along..."
Snape frowned, sidling closer to the group, eyeing Dumbledore warily. Surely, he's not going to tell them about the Apparating. Why create an uproar?
Dumbledore was twinkling at almost twice his usual rate, making Snape's skin prickle with apprehension. "Everyone, today is a very important day. And, as befits our Phantom family, I would like you all to join me in wishing our very own Phantom, Professor Snape, a happy birthday!"
All heads turned to Snape, whose own eyes had widened so much that a complete ring of white surrounded his irises. McGonagall clapped a hand over her mouth. Snape couldn't breathe. It was like someone had kicked him in the gut. He felt his chin drop, and his mouth opened, futilely attempting a properly indignant response.
The beat of silence was charged with electricity, while Snape struggled to draw breath, and everyone stared at him, completely taken aback. Dumbledore chuckled and waved his hands at the cast. "All right, everyone, on the count of three, we'll all sing 'Happy Birthday' to Professor Snape. Ready? One, two, three..." He slashed the air with his hands, conducting them in song.
After "three," the cast began to sing, albeit hesitantly. Since they were still enspelled from rehearsal, at least they sounded fine, but the bewilderment was obvious in their voices.
When they began singing, a shudder rippled over Snape, seeming to release him from his paralysis, and he glanced wildly about, taking in the variety of the rest of the cast's expressions. His Slytherins looked mildly pleased and arrogant, apparently appreciating that their Head of House was being singled out by the headmaster for notice. McGonagall was twinkling nearly as much as Dumbledore, clearly holding in laughter at Snape's obvious discomfiture. Oh, he'd get back at her for that, hand on wand!
Some of the other students wore expressions of polite indifference, but when his gaze swept over the assembled Gryffindors, he was met with the most disparate expressions yet. Ron looked torn between turning green and laughing, the result of which was a particularly painful combination. Neville looked both confused and apprehensive...really, how different was that from his normal expression? Harry glared mulishly as he spat the words to the song. Ginny was actually smiling a little as she sang, apparently meaning the well-wishes. But, Hermione...
Snape fully expected to see Hermione beaming at him, persistent in her belief that people would like him, and that he deserved good wishes. But, he was galvanized to see her staring at him, eyes bright with a few unshed tears, as she tried vainly to master the hurt and anger that was writ plainly over her features. Swallowing hard, Snape stared dumbly at her, utterly confused at her reaction, and a frisson of unease swept over him. She shook her head minutely as the song finished, before brusquely turning away, refusing to look at him any longer.
When they finished singing, Dumbledore led the cast in applause, and Snape tore his gaze away from Hermione to glance at his employer, weakly nodding a demurral. The applause died away, and Snape cleared his tight throat, forcing out a stiff, "Indeed, Headmaster, you shouldn't have..."
Dumbledore chuckled again and waved his hand in dismissal. "Nonsense! You are an excellent role model for this cast, and you deserve a happy birthday, Severus. The least we could do is extend our regard. Of course, I sha'n't commit the faux pas of asking your age... or is that reserved only for ladies?" He turned a questioning glance to McGonagall, who tsked and swatted his arm.
"Oh, leave him alone, Albus. It's not nice to overwhelm people like that." She thinned her lips in a prim line, but they twitched when she eyed Snape. "In earnest, Professor Snape, one would hope that you would appreciate seeing another birthday, now that Riddle is no more."
Phantom mask hanging limply from one finger, Snape nodded woodenly, sweat oozing from his pores at the fact that Hermione had yet to look his way again, and her body language bespoke ill-concealed outrage. Throat dry, he rasped, "As you say, Professor McGonagall."
Dumbledore finally took pity on his embarrassed Potions Master and clapped his hands once. "Very well, then! Thank you all for joining me in wishing Professor Snape a happy birthday. You are free to go. Good night!"
Snape looked on in perplexity as Hermione shot to her feet, one of the first to leave the stage. She hurried up the aisle, leaving everyone behind with her long, angry strides. Snape blinked, feeling his chest grow tight with anxiety, and his gaze came to rest on Ginny, who was looking at him, brow furrowed in confusion. He kept his face blank as he locked eyes with her, but she glanced around furtively before nodding once and offering a wan smile, obviously meant to be reassuring. She started up the aisle, but Snape barked, "Miss Weasley!"
Whirling, she gazed up at him in polite inquiry. "Yes, Professor Snape?"
Staring hard at her, hoping her agile mind would pick up on his unspoken plea, he said, "Do not forget your detention Monday night. In my office, 7:00."
Her eyes widened in comprehension, and she nodded to herself before replying with grave courtesy, "I won't forget, sir. I'll be there."
Snape inclined his head in dismissal and she spun around, charging up the aisle after Harry. Frozen in place, Snape watched as the Hall emptied, leaving him
alone again with Dumbledore. When the doors shut behind the last cast member, Snape forced himself to turn his attention to the headmaster.
Dumbledore took out his wand and looked purposefully at Snape. "All right. Let's get on with it, shall we? Just relax, Severus." He nodded reassuringly at
the still-stunned man and began a complex incantation, uttering what sounded to Snape's keen ear like a mixture of Latin and Gaelic and other things he'd never heard before.
Standing still, listening to the rhythmic sound of Dumbledore's low chanting, he slowly became aware of a brightening around him. Darting his eyes from Dumbledore to the space around his body, he saw a vague shimmering coalescing to encase him. It glowed a pearly bluish-white, and he felt his skin prickle with what felt like a static charge. As Dumbledore droned on, gesturing with his wand in precise, finicky movements, a different kind of light developed. What looked like a grid work of faint yellowish-white lines spread around him, flowing throughout the Hall, and implicitly beyond. The light of the grid wavered and flickered like candle flame, and Snape could see how they intersected the man in front of him. Glancing down at his hands, he saw the lines did the same to
him, even through the bluish-white glow.
He was startled to realize that Dumbledore had stopped reciting, and jerked his eyes up. Dumbledore's face was set with concentration. Still, he nodded
soothingly to Snape. "I need to give the grid a chance to spread out to the extremities of the boundaries. It should take a few minutes. Once it has, I need only cast the spell to allow your magical signature to slip through them. If you look at the distance between each line in the grid, you'll see that there is very little space. These lines are keyed to the magical signatures of humans, which is
why the house-elves can pop about as needed. If a person tried to Apparate, the space within these lines is so little that one cannot occupy it successfully, which is how we are prohibited from Apparating within the grounds.
"During Apparition License classes, we have a way of impeding the connection of these lines within the space of the Great Hall, which allows the Apparition to occur in this area. However, what you will experience is unique. We are
recalibrating the grid to respond to your signature, and it will expand the space between lines to allow you to occupy that space successfully. It will all be easier to understand once we're done and you do it. Then you'll be able to see the results in the light around you and in the lines themselves."
Snape listened, rapt, as Dumbledore explained. A trickle of excitement crept through him at experiencing something so unusual. Gazing about him, he ventured, "Won't everyone throughout the grounds wonder what they're seeing?"
Dumbledore smiled and said, "Oh, heavens, no. Only those present at the time the spell is cast may see the grid. No one else should have any inkling about what's going on here." They stood in silence for a few moments more, until Dumbledore nodded, exhaling in satisfaction. "Ah... There we go. All right, the grid is complete, and now, I shall cast the next part, which will recalibrate the settings. Ready?"
Snape nodded, body tense with anticipation. Dumbledore began gesturing with his wand again, intoning more unintelligible words. Snape felt the charge that surrounded his body shifting, and he looked down at the bluish-white glow. It seemed to pulse, and as Dumbledore finished his incantation with a flourish, the glow shrank into him, almost disappearing. But then, in a flash of blinding light, it expanded, only this time, it seemed to push the grid lines out of the way, until they snapped to frame Snape. Staring about in wonderment, Snape watched the grid lines bending and retreating before him as he lifted his arm. The lines all backed away, leaving a short distance between the glow around him and the closest lines, very much like the distance maintained between two like-charged magnets.
Dumbledore clapped his hands together, pleased with his success, and Snape blinked at him, startled. A huge grin split the headmaster's face, and Snape felt his lips stretching into an answering delighted grin in spite of himself and the horrors he had just experienced at the hands of this scheming old man. Eyes sparkling with keen interest, Snape took a tentative step, watching the grid morph around him. After it settled, he took another, bolder step. It happened again. On a lark, he spun on his heel, peering over his shoulder at the swirl of his robe. It, too, was contained within the adjusting grid.
Before he could try anything else, Dumbledore urged, "If you would be so kind, Severus, Apparate to the opposite end of the stage. We need to test the results."
Snape nodded and concentrated. As Dumbledore looked on, Snape blinked out of existence where he stood and appeared on the far end of the stage, bluish-white glow still strong. A triumphant cry burst from the headmaster's throat at the successful Apparition. Snape gazed across the stage at him, a smug smirk gracing his lips.
"Excellent, Severus! Now, Apparate to all the places you need to be for the play so far."
Snape nodded again, looked around into the Boxes, and onstage, and above them on the catwalk. With a decided toss of his dark head, he disappeared. Dumbledore glanced around, but didn't see him.
"Where are you?"
Snape's voice, magnified by a Sonorus spell, echoed throughout the space. A ripple of suppressed laughter threaded through his voice as he said, "I'm here, the Phantom of the Opera."
Dumbledore burst out laughing, and Snape suddenly appeared onstage again, his expression one of devilish amusement.
"Well done. So, where were you?"
Snape tilted his head up to one of the Boxes. Then, without warning, he was gone again. Dumbledore glanced around, but stopped as he saw the looming shadow on the back wall of the stage, cast by Snape in the catwalks. It darted about, growing larger and smaller, until Snape appeared onstage again, at the spot where the trap door was supposed to be located.
"Very nice. So, I take it you're experiencing no ill effects?"
Snape strode briskly back to Dumbledore, posture proud and confident. "None, sir. I feel as good as ever."
"Glad to hear it. Obviously, it worked. As soon as I say the words, the grid will disappear, as will the light around you. We're the only ones who could see it anyway, but I daresay you'd rather not have a full-body night light if you could help it." He winked at Snape, smiling.
Snape snorted, lips quirking in a half-smile. "Indeed not." He looked back down at his hands again, and then cast a thoughtful look at the older man. "It just occurred to me, Albus: obviously I can Apparate within the confining grid, but what about Miss Granger? Several of the times I have to pop about, she has to be with me. Will you be casting this same spell on her?"
Dumbledore waved his hand dismissively. "No need. You'll simply take her as a Side-Along Apparition. Since you're the one who will be doing the Apparating, your signature will be let through. Of course, you must have complete control, and, I daresay, a firm grasp of anyone you're taking along. Miss Granger is a level-headed witch, I'm sure she'll grasp the concept easily."
Snape looked away quickly before Dumbledore could possibly see Snape's reaction to the thought that Hermione would definitely not object to however firm a grasp Snape had to take, but then he was assailed by doubts, remembering her angry countenance from earlier. Swallowing back his unease, he focused his attention back to the task at hand. Slowly, he said, "I'm sure you're right. However, forgive me if I would rather not make a first attempt with a student." Looking back up at Dumbledore, a challenge clear in his black eyes, he continued, "Would you allow me to take you on an Apparition, Albus?"
Dumbledore eyed Snape shrewdly. Slowly, he inclined his head, giving his assent. Then, stepping closer to the dark man, he remarked, "Prudent idea, Severus. Very well."
Snape's lips twitched, and he reached forward, gripping Dumbledore's arms just above the elbow. He was fascinated by the way the grid lines sprang to surround Dumbledore as well, once he had a firm grip on him. It certainly eased his mind about trying it with Hermione, especially since he wouldn't be able to see the field around them by then. Glancing slyly at Dumbledore, his voice low, he said, "Ready?"
Dumbledore nodded, and they winked out of view.
An instant later, Dumbledore let out a startled oath, grabbing for Snape as they found themselves precariously perched in the catwalks above the stage. Whipping a stern gaze around to meet Snape's devious one, Dumbledore frowned in reproach, and Snape tried to stifle a snort of amusement.
"Severus, really, that was completely unnecessary." He straightened, composing himself with dignity, but, all the same, he didn't let go of Snape's sleeves.
Snape cocked an eyebrow at him and drawled, "On the contrary, Albus. Now you know how disconcerting it is to be taken so by surprise. I merely thought to impress upon you exactly how 'completely unnecessary' that little show was earlier." As he finished, he pursed his lips in a disgruntled scowl.
To Snape's surprise, Dumbledore once again burst out laughing. That roguish twinkle back in his eye, he simply retorted, "Touché."
Rolling his eyes, Snape heaved a long-suffering sigh and said, "Shall we return, then?"
Dumbledore lazily replied "By all means, whenever you're ready." Snape inclined his head, and they popped from the catwalk back to the stage. Releasing the older man, Snape stepped back, and Dumbledore brandished his wand again. "Now, to finish the spell..." He pointed the wand at Snape, muttering a few words, and Snape watched the glow around his body get sucked into the wand, followed immediately by the light of the grid, all in one dizzying flash. The static charge he had felt along his skin disappeared, and he felt a stab of apprehension that he would no longer be able to Apparate. Seeming to read his thoughts, Dumbledore said, "Try it, Severus. It will work."
Snape concentrated and Apparated to the back of the house. Exhaling gustily in relief, he popped back onto the stage an instant later. Dumbledore beamed at him, about to speak, but before he could say anything, Snape asked, "So, I'll be at liberty to Apparate within the castle, but not the grounds?"
Dumbledore blinked at the interruption, but said, "Exactly. You may Apparate within the confines of the castle, or outside, but within the boundaries of the grounds, but you won't be able to Apparate from within the castle to the outside, nor from the grounds inside. Nor will you be able to Apparate from within the boundaries outside of them, or vice versa. Of course, there may be parts of the castle itself that are protected by other wardings, so you won't be able to Apparate into them..." He raised one brow at Snape, clearly indicating that his private quarters were so warded, and Snape would be foolish to try to gain entry.
Snape snorted mildly and nodded his understanding. Composing his expression into one of polite curiosity, he said, "Since you cast the spell, can you undo it?"
Dumbledore grinned. "Of course I can undo it, but it's just as complex as casting it. Don't worry, my boy, I sha'n't revoke it without your knowledge and consent. I know I can trust you not to abuse it."
Doing his best to ignore the pang of guilt he felt at those words, Snape ducked his head and murmured, "So you can't track my Apparitions, like you keep track of the doors to the secret passages?"
Dumbledore shook his head. "It doesn't work like that. However, must I remind you that you needn't misuse this privilege? Do try not to frighten the students with it."
Snape snorted and lifted his head, that devious gleam back. "Ah, but just think how much faster and easier my patrols will be, now that I can get to all the best spots so much more quickly..."
Dumbledore clapped a hand on Snape's shoulder, laughing, and guided him to descend into the house, to leave the Hall. As they strode up the aisle, Dumbledore said, "I do hope you'll enjoy the last hours of your birthday, Severus. Perhaps you could view this as my gift to you."
Snape shot him an aggrieved glance, then sighed. "Thank you, Albus. I will say that I shall enjoy not having to worry about encountering any dunderheads on my way back to my quarters..." And with that, he sketched a bow to Dumbledore and Disapparated.
Dumbledore rolled his eyes and chuckled, turning to the Hall to restore it to normal before he trekked up to his own quarters for the night.
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When Ginny and Harry arrived in Gryffindor Tower, Hermione was nowhere to be seen. Ginny's first thought was to go immediately to Hermione's room to find out what was wrong, but she stopped herself before she said anything, loath to draw attention to Hermione's curious reaction. It wouldn't do to have people wondering. Resolving to address the matter later, Ginny allowed Harry to pull her onto a big squashy armchair in a corner, wrapping her in his embrace and snogging the daylights out of her. Under such an enjoyable onslaught, Ginny's worry over Hermione faded into the background.
Later, when they were interrupted by Ron whacking them with a pillow, gruffly saying, "Oh, give over already and go to bed!" Ginny remembered her distraught friend. But, by that time, it was already late, hence Ron's irritated assault on their persons, and she promised herself she'd talk to Hermione in the morning.
Saturday morning, Ginny went to breakfast with Harry, only to see a depressed Hermione toying with her eggs. Glancing up at the High Table, she saw that Snape was peering furtively through his hair at Hermione, and he cast Ginny a stone-faced look when he caught her eye. Only because she had got to know more about him recently did Ginny notice the tightness of his posture and expression, belying his purported indifference. Taking a deep breath, she sat by Hermione and said, "Morning. You feeling okay?"
Hermione shrugged listlessly and muttered, "I'm fine."
Harry poked his head around Ginny and said, "Do you need to see Madam Pomfrey again? You don't look so hot."
Hermione scowled and gave a petulant toss of her rather-bushier-than-normal hair. "I said I'm fine. Stop smothering me."
Harry jerked back in surprise. Wounded, he said, "Fine then. I was just concerned. Forget it." And, huffing indignantly, he sat back to fill his plate.
Ginny squeezed Hermione's arm until she looked at her. Her eyes were red-rimmed and puffy. Tilting her head in sympathy, Ginny whispered, "You've been crying again. What's wrong?"
Hermione shook her head and sniffed. "Not here." And with that, she dropped her fork on her plate and pushed to her feet. With a mumbled, "I'm not hungry," she fled the Great Hall. Ginny stared after her in confusion. Flicking her glance back to the High Table, she saw Snape ostensibly contemplating his teacup. But, as she looked closer, she noticed that his grip on the handle was so tight that his knuckles were white. It was a wonder it hadn't broken off in his hand.
Turning her attention back to eating, she was involved in the usual breakfast chatter when, out of the corner of her eye, she saw Snape rising to leave. He stood slowly, his posture one of carrying a burden, and as he departed, she noticed that his stride was slower. It was obvious to her that he was upset, likely very worried, and she felt for him. Especially since it had been his birthday. It's horrid to get something sad on your birthday. Really, it was a shame Hermione hadn't told her it was Snape's birthday, or she might have taken a moment to wish him many happy returns herself at some point.
She and Harry had returned to the Tower, and Harry was talking about dragging Ron away from Susan long enough to get in some Quidditch practice, but Ginny said, "Just wait a bit, would you? I want to talk to Hermione."
Harry bristled and snapped, "Why? She'll just bite your head off."
Ginny grimaced at him and sharply retorted, "Maybe it's girl stuff, Harry! I'll be back later." Favouring him with an aggrieved glare, she spun and flounced off to Hermione's room. She knocked briskly on the door, calling, "Hermione, it's me, Ginny. Can I come in?"
After a beat, the door opened, and Hermione climbed onto the bed, huddling against the headboard with a pillow in her lap. Ginny shut the door and perched on the foot of the bed. Crossing her legs, she propped her elbows on her knees and cupped her chin in her hands. Gazing soberly at Hermione, she murmured, "What's wrong? Why are you so upset?"
Hermione levelled a sour gaze at her and drawled, "I'll give you three guesses and the first two don't count."
Ginny rolled her eyes at the sarcasm and said, "Snape?" At Hermione's nod, she continued, "What's wrong now? You weren't upset when rehearsal started last night, so what happened?"
Hermione worried her hands together and watched them, muttering, "It was his birthday."
Blinking at the vague answer, Ginny said, "Right. And? That reminds me, why didn't you say anything? I think it would have been nice to say something to him personally, you know, now that he's not being a raging git."
Hermione's eyes flashed angrily as she growled, "I didn't tell you because I didn't know! He never told me!"
Ginny rocked back, surprised. A weak "Oh..." issued from her lips. She stared at Hermione in shock, trying to assimilate the ramifications of that little fact.
Hermione tilted her chin up defiantly. "Exactly. Understand now?"
Casting about vainly for a reasonable excuse, Ginny offered a lame, "Maybe he forgot?"
Hermione's answering snort was scathing. "How can one forget his own birthday? I don't think so, Gin. I can't help but wonder what else he hasn't told me. I thought we were supposed to share things. I mean, this is something so basic, and he didn't care enough to tell me? It hurts. And it makes me wonder if he really cares about me as much as he claims, if he's going to keep things from me like this. I mean, is he going to open up to me or not? There has to be more than just the physical part!" Her hands clenched into fists, and she pummelled the pillow in her lap.
Ginny listened in mute sympathy. After a long moment, she finally ventured, "You know, you really haven't had much time together. Maybe it just slipped his mind in favour of more important things. It's not like you two can just sit and chat for hours. Give him a chance to explain, at least? He seems really worried. I thought he was going to shatter his teacup this morning. You two really have it tough, what with the hardly having a chance to talk and share and all that. Remember, you have to give him a little credit, until you can get to the bottom of things. Everything else worked out, didn't it? I'm sure this will too." She leant forward and patted Hermione's hands where they were fisted on the pillow.
Hermione's head fell back against the headboard with a dull thunk. She grimaced and rolled her head from side to side. Eyes closed, she said, "Why does this have to be so hard? It's not fair!"
Ginny saw the change in the other girl's posture that signalled her reluctant agreement to accept Ginny's reasoning. Her voice wry, she replied, "I've always heard that anything too easy to get was hardly worth having. So, if you think about it that way, proportionally, yours should be the greatest relationship ever, considering the difficulties you both have to face!"
Hermione opened her eyes, staring at Ginny, incredulous. Then, after a beat, she covered her face with her hands and groaned, before finally ending in a weak chuckle. Eyeing her friend through her fingers, Hermione said, "Leave it to you to come up with something like that."
Ginny grinned, glad she had been able to cheer Hermione up at least a little. Shrugging, she added, "Just remember, I'll do what I can to help."
Hermione smiled back, albeit wanly. "Thanks. Anyway, you should probably go find Harry. I'm sure he was bleating about Quidditch practice earlier."
Ginny laughed. "How did you know?"
Hermione smirked. "Of all the men in my life, Harry is by far the least complicated."
Both girls laughed, and Ginny rose, crossing to the door. "True. Which is why I'm clever enough for the both of us." Wrinkling her nose at Hermione, she waved and ducked out the door, shutting it behind her to the sound of Hermione chuckling.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)