75- Consummation
Chapter 79 of 84
Good_WitchSnape and Hermione retire to Spinner's End in the wake of their volatile meeting with her parents. At long last, they're home, and the time has come to consummate their relationship.
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Author's Note: I know it's been a while once again, but things have kept me busy. As always, check out my Livejournal ( http://pern-dragon.livejournal.com/ ) to see what's been going on with me. Azkatraz was amazing (my Epic Vacation of Awesomeness!) and I can't wait till next year for Infinitus. Hope you lot can make it to Orlando to play with us! Anyway, the usual mad props to Beta-Git (tm) Ladyofthemasque, and profound gratitude to all of you who read/review/email me... You make me so happy. :) Here we come to the long-awaited consummation. Hope you enjoy! *hugs*
Chapter 75- Consummation
They appeared in the living room again, but Hermione didn't release Snape right away. Even after he ended the concealment charm, she stood there, face buried against Snape's chest and arms tight around his waist. Snape gently brushed his hand over her hair, again and again, until she finally backed away.
Her face was wet from the tears that had silently leaked from beneath her closed lids. Snape copied Dione's actions and tenderly wiped her face, drying his hands on his robes. Hermione looked utterly woebegone, but she was quiet. Snape realized that she was deeply affected, since she seemed beyond speech.
Glancing around, he noticed that the baggage was all still stacked haphazardly around the living room. With a deft flick of his wand, he sent them all flying in a line upstairs to land in their appropriate rooms. Then, another swish toward the kitchen had the kettle popping out of the cupboard to drop onto the stove. A murmured spell or two, and the kettle was heating cocoa for Hermione.
Hermione merely watched the dance of luggage and kitchen utensils through doorways. Her lower lip still trembled. Snape had a mug of cocoa soaring toward them even as he led her to sit on the couch. She sank down listlessly, and he proffered the cocoa.
"Here, love. Have a bit of this. It will help you feel better."
She complied, eyes unfocused and still glassy. When he had made certain that she was drinking, Snape Summoned a mug for himself. The hot beverage was soothing and helped to ease the knot of anxiety in his centre.
In an attempt to rouse her from her morose state, he murmured, "It's not tea, but still acceptable."
She looked at him blankly, and didn't seem to process his meaning until he flashed a faint smirk at the mugs. Then, when she realized his quip, she shook herself, one corner of her mouth quirking in recognition. But her expression clouded again as she said, in a small voice, "I don't remember ever making my dad cry before."
Snape set his mug down on the side table and twisted to face her, one hand caressing her hair and the other cupping her knee. "It'll all work out."
She shook her head and said, "I mean, I thought he might cry in happiness...like at my wedding or something...but I never thought I'd make him cry in sadness."
Snape drew in a deep breath and said, "I daresay that if he were to cry at your wedding, it would be in both happiness and sadness. Sadness that you've grown up. Well, you saw that part tonight. Let's hope that, in time, he will only ever cry in happiness for you."
Hermione took another pensive sip of cocoa. Her eyes closed, and she sighed into the mug, sending steam to bathe her face. When she lowered the mug and opened her eyes again, Snape could see that she had regained some measure of equilibrium. She met his gaze and her expression softened.
"Thank you, Severus. You're right. The cocoa helped." She offered him a watery smile and reached out to caress his cheek. Snape turned his head to kiss at her fingers and she smiled more. "You look tired, love."
Snape snorted. "That would be because I am." He cut a sardonic glance at her and added, "It's been a rather busy day."
Hermione chuckled and wrinkled her nose at his comment. "Well, I think I could use some sleep too."
Snape stood and offered a hand, pulling her up when she clasped it. "Then let's to bed."
He led her up the stairs to the master bedroom, their bags piled neatly against the wall. The large bed dominated the back wall, its carved oak headboard and footboard complemented by the duvet in varied shades of earth tones, from pale sand to deep browns. The carpet under their feet was a warm golden tan, and the walls were a few shades lighter, with darker brown baseboards and door frames. The lamps on the matching nightstands on either side of the bed bore golden-tinged shades, with faint designs picked out in hues of caramel and chocolate. Taken as a whole, it was as successful a blend of both of their preferences as the ring was a mixture of qualities representing each of them. Snape had made sure that their sanctuary would be as comforting as possible, bearing the colours they both liked "to live with" most.
As soon as they entered, though, Hermione stopped dead. Snape turned to look at her, curious about her abrupt stop.
Her eyes were wide, and she was gazing about the room in a sort of dazed wonder. At Snape's concerned expression, she murmured, "It's our room. Really ours."
Snape understood how overwhelming it was, now that it was finally real. His expression softened and he smiled as he closed the distance between them again. "It is. Just as this house is ours, and the furniture is ours, and our life is ours."
A faint flush began creeping up Hermione's throat as she stared up at him. Her eyes lit up with the joy of it all, and Snape felt the wild, delirious rush of delighted love suffusing him with warmth. Hermione leant closer, and he obliged her by pinning her with a deep, devoted kiss.
She may have been tired and overwrought, but the fire chasing through her limbs at the fierce happiness of their home together and the freedom to love each other made her suddenly dizzy with awakened need.
The kiss was the catalyst to their second wind. Energy surged forth, arcing between them like electricity. When they broke apart, they were both flushed and breathing heavily. Hermione rasped, "Unpacking can wait. There are more important things to be done now." Snape's breath caught, and he nodded slowly in profound agreement.
Lifting her ring-clad hand to his lips for another gentle kiss, Snape whispered, "Welcome home, Hermione."
Then, lips curling in a faint smile full of promise, he stepped backward, tugging her to the bed. When his legs hit the edge, he sank down, pulling her between his knees and tipping his face up to kiss her again. Deft fingers began easing her clothes off, and when she was left in only her bra and knickers, she pulled her brain from its fog of pleasure and lust and grabbed his hands, snapping her narrowed eyes to his. His brows rose in question at the abrupt move.
"You're not going to pull some stunt and make me wait any longer, are you?" Her voice was husky but a thread of peevishness wormed through.
Snape blinked, not following her train of thought. Eyeing her in confusion, he said, "I'm not sure what you mean."
She released his hands and reached forward to undo his robes as she said, "We've waited all this time, until I was out of school. You're not going to try some noble gesture and say we should wait until we're married now, are you?" She waved her left hand at him, tilting her head at the ring. His eyes widened in comprehension and she repeated, "You're not, right?"
The surge in his groin sent a tingle rushing through him, and his brows lowered again, hooding his eyes with wicked intent. His lips spread in a smirk. His hands swept up to her shoulders, gripping the bra straps and yanking them down her arms in an urgent gesture, trapping her arms along her sides and baring her breasts all at once.
"No."
The deep, sensual purr of his answer sent a jolt to her core, and her nipples tightened in response to the sound and the cooler air. Her expression went from "thank the gods" to bliss as he crushed her to him, dipping his head to capture one nipple, suckling as his hands busied themselves behind her to divest her of her bra. As soon as her arms were free again, she returned her attention to his robes, backing away enough to shove and wrench at the offending garment, scowling her frustration that it wasn't off yet.
Impatient with her manhandling, as it impeded his ability to manhandle her, he shot to his feet and squirmed out of his robes, tearing at the placket of his trousers as he stepped out of the pooled fabric. Hermione edged back, eyes hungry as she watched him undress. Snape fell back onto the bed again, lifting his feet to pull off his boots, but he got tangled in the wrinkled pile of robes and kicked, muttering oaths as he fought to get his foot out of the cloth.
Hermione grinned, biting her lip to suppress a giggle at his plight. More interested in getting him naked than in taking the mickey at his predicament, she dropped to her knees and extricated him from the robes, tossing them to one side. Then, she grabbed one boot and pulled while he tugged the other one off. As she threw the boots behind her, he stripped off his socks and began undoing his shirt buttons. Hermione got to her feet and pulled him up, interrupting him so she could take over. Dragging the shirt over his shoulders and down his back, she bent low, eyeing the damp spot at the apex of his tented shorts.
Straightening, she cast a lusty glance at Snape, and he smirked back. They embraced again, kissing deeply, each left only in their underwear. Strong hands snaked down her back and slipped beneath the waistband of her knickers, pushing them down. An appreciative coo was muffled by his lips against hers. She followed his lead and pinched the white cotton between her fingers, tugging gently until his cock sprang free of its confines, bouncing against her belly as he moved his legs to let the shorts drop to his ankles.
Stepping out of them, Snape sank onto the bed again, gaze smouldering as he eased her knickers down her thighs, watching as they peeled away from her mound, already damp with her excitement. Hermione stepped out of the clingy fabric, kicking them to the side to join the rest of the discarded clothing before pinning Snape with a fierce look and shoving forward so he fell back. His cock bobbed toward the ceiling as she straddled his legs and climbed onto the edge of the bed, hovering over him in a predatory fashion.
Her voice was thick with need as she said, "I've been wanting this for so long now..."
Snape sucked in a breath and voiced a guttural groan in agreement, reaching up to grip her waist and direct her to one side. She rolled onto her hip, hooking her foot around his leg and pulling him with her. They were on their sides, but their legs were still hanging half off the bed. Snape writhed to a sitting position, then turned and crawled up the mattress toward the headboard. Hermione followed him a beat later.
They settled fully on the bed, once again entwining themselves and kissing, his cock trapped between them and smearing their bellies with moisture. After several moments of heated snogging and groping, Snape rolled forward, pressing Hermione onto her back. He held himself up on his knees and elbows, his fingers tangling in her hair, her legs loosely wrapped around his hips.
Pulling away to look into her eyes, he spared a fleeting thought of thanks that his hair was still held enough by the remaining pomade to keep it from falling lankly into his face. He wanted no interference to their communion.
Hermione gazed up at him, highly conscious of his erection pulsing and bouncing against her mound. All he had to do was back away, tilt his hips, and he could bury himself within her. Her heart raced at the thought.
After a long moment of searching her eyes for her true feelings, Snape whispered a querying, "Hermione?"
She knew he was just making sure that she was really ready, and she deliberately tightened her legs around him, angling her feet along the backs of his thighs and urging him to close the distance between them. In case her actions weren't confirmation enough, she murmured, "Yes."
Snape's eyes closed and he drew in a deep breath, trying to control the wild urge to plunge in recklessly. Easing back, he rocked his hips, sliding the head of his cock along her slick curls, slipping between her lips as he dipped lower. The blissful damp heat enveloped him as he stopped at her entrance, and he held his breath for a beat until he was certain he was as ready as she was.
Hermione shifted her legs again, taking a deep breath, watching Snape intently. She knew she was trembling in both anticipation and apprehension, but the fervent desire to finally be one with him sent tingles of delight through her at the sensation of his soft-yet-hard length poised to delve deep.
Snape leant down and stopped a hairsbreadth from her lips, sharing her breath, drowning in the dilated pupils of her eyes. Ever so slowly, he pressed forward, driving himself into her. As each centimetre sank in, Hermione's breath hitched more and more, and he felt her body tensing beneath him. Stopping his pursuit, he closed in for a gentle kiss, soothing her and leading her to relax again.
When her breath soughed out in a faint moan, he continued his advance. He could feel the tremors in her muscles, and he realized that he was shaking too. The rigid control he was exerting in his attempt to not unduly hurt her, coupled with the deliriously exquisite feel of her clutching heat, had him trembling.
Hermione recognised the difference between the wax replica and the real thing immediately. The real thing was infinitely better. The velvety soft feel of his skin was much more inviting than the hard wax, and although it felt as if steel were under that smooth exterior, his cock still had more give to it than the dildo, hard as he was. However, the one thing that remained the same was the sensation of fullness and the stinging, stretching feeling as the full size of him sank in deep.
Snape continued his inexorable progress, repeatedly drawing her into sensual kisses, until he felt his body come flush against hers, his erection completely encompassed within her. Hermione hissed faintly as the larger base of his cock stretched her even further, adding to the distracting burn. Snape stilled again, waiting for her to get used to the feeling. He lifted his head, backing away so they could see each other clearly.
A small frown marred her brow as she struggled to dispel the irritating sensation, trying instead to focus on the pleasantly full feeling and the vaguely promising jolts from deep within as she flexed her inner muscles in an attempt at accommodation.
Snape's eyes rolled back and he uttered a shocked groan as she clamped down on him, making her brows rise in surprised interest. When he blinked dazedly at her, doggedly persisting in not responding to that intimate caress by thrusting savagely, she smirked and did it again, biting her lip to suppress the wicked giggle that wanted to surface as he grimaced and gasped at her clenching.
His voice was a strained rasp as he said, "In the name of all that is decent and holy, Hermione, don't do that!"
Mischief coloured her voice as she lilted, "Why not? Don't you like it?"
Snape pinned her with a black warning look and growled, "'Like' is too weak a word..."
She quirked one eyebrow and said, "Then why should I stop?"
He dropped down, his mouth by her ear and his chest on hers as he hissed, "Because I don't know how long I can control myself if you keep it up, and I don't want to hurt you."
Her breath hitched, and the jolt of excitement that raced over her made her squeeze him involuntarily. A low groan burst from him and his hips twitched, grinding him into her.
That set off an explosive sequence of events.
Hermione voiced a startled cry that quickly turned into an approving coo as Snape's thrust rubbed his cock against what she immediately decided was her favourite spot for erotic pleasure.
Snape's reactive movement, pressing deeper and sliding back out of her maddeningly tight cunt, flooded his body and brain with an overwhelming need to do that again.
A rumbling groan welled up as his hands gripped her hair and his head dropped to the pillow, his breath hot against her neck as he continued thrusting, each stroke backing out further before plunging back in.
Hermione gasped, taken aback by the suddenness of his onslaught and the warring sensations of "yee-ouch" and "wow." Her hands scrabbled down his back and her nails dug into his flexing buttock muscles...whether in caution or encouragement, she couldn't quite decide.
The rapturous joy of finally joining with Hermione, of actually knowing how glorious her pussy felt wrapped around his cock, fuelled Snape's passion, and his thrusts became wilder and rougher, pistoning faster.
Hermione kept sucking in sharp breaths every time he plunged into her, struggling to focus on the delicious jolts from within and the sizzling tingles every time he ground against her clit and not the burning ache at the outer edge of her entrance. If only he could keep stimulating her clit without delving so uncomfortably deep to do so... Realizing that she should be letting herself go, enjoying their consummation, she guiltily tried to shut her brain down from analyzing how their encounter could be better for her.
Snape, on the other hand, was nearly insensate to anything but the extreme pleasure of filling her with his cock as much as his heart was filled with love. He heard her repeated gasps and didn't think they meant anything untoward...but then again, his brain was no longer functioning at a higher level. The feel of her fingers scratching his buttocks led him to believe she was trying to pull him in deeper, and he gladly obliged.
Just as she had done when he had first sunk into her, Hermione tried tightening her muscles in an attempt to assuage the irritating feeling of too-much. A ragged groan burst from Snape's lips and his rhythm faltered, his movements growing more erratic.
Hoarse panting punctuated his speech as he said, "Oh gods... yes... Hermione... gods yes... do it again... ohhhh... yessss..."
Hermione smirked at her apparent influence and squeezed again, a low purring moan welling up from her throat. Snape's hips slammed forward and his head tilted back, eyes screwed shut and mouth open. His body bucked and shuddered, convulsing in time with his roar of ecstasy, and Hermione's eyes widened in wonder at the realization that he was coming...in her...hard.
His head fell forward again, and he flexed his hips a few times, more shallowly each stroke. Hermione felt the slippery warmth of his come as it trickled out around his softening cock, and a rush of feminine power and accomplishment ambushed her. She had done that. She, her body, had driven him to the peak of sensual pleasure, and she enjoyed the rush.
Snape slowly regained his mental faculties, and with them came the disquieting realization that, while he had just had one of the best orgasms of his life, Hermione had not. Guilt and embarrassment writhed within him, and he hesitantly pulled back, afraid of the resentment he felt sure he would see on Hermione's face. His anxious grimace smoothed into a look of surprise when he saw Hermione grinning at him, her whole attitude beatific.
Hermione noted his bewildered expression and smirked. "What's wrong? Can't a girl revel in her sensual talent?"
Snape's mouth opened, but no sound came out. He cleared his throat and blinked. "Of course. I just... wasn't expecting to find you 'revelling'."
Hermione's grin faded into a furrowed brow of puzzlement. "Why not?"
Snape ground his teeth and muttered, "Considering our venture was not a success for you..."
Hermione actually shook her head in astonishment before retorting, "Not a success? What are you talking about?"
Snape carefully disengaged his flaccid cock from her and rolled to one side. Hermione instinctively squeezed her legs shut at the sensation of liquid trickling along her pussy lips. Snape heaved a deep breath and said, "Clearly, I reached climax. You did not. Therefore: not a successful endeavour. I'm sorry."
Hermione squirmed up onto one arm and twisted to face him, even though he wouldn't meet her eyes. "Severus, you don't understand how amazing that made me feel...even if I didn't have an orgasm. This time. We were finally together, and I've never felt as powerful as I did knowing that I brought you to ecstasy. Truly, I wasn't expecting to be able to climax this way and this time. It's all so overwhelming and important that it's almost too hard to just let go and lose myself to the sensations. Besides, I think it'll take a few more times before I'm quite ready to completely accommodate your... full size without any discomfort."
She wrinkled her nose and quirked her lips into a lopsided, rueful smile. Snape's eyes flew open wide and he tensed, staring at her, aghast.
Curling forward onto his elbows, he said, "I hurt you, didn't I? Ye gods, Hermione, I'm so sorry!"
Hermione caressed his chest, gently pressing him to lie back again. "I'm not hurt, honestly! It stung a little whenever you were all the way in..." She felt herself colouring in a ridiculous vestige of modesty. Setting her teeth to shake off the lingering feeling of embarrassment, she tossed her head and said, "Like I said, it'll just take more practice..." and she flashed a wicked grin at him "...to get me used to it."
The tight knot of guilty tension in Snape's gut loosened a bit at her comment. His expression was mournful and sulky at the same time as he muttered, "I just wanted it to be... perfect... for you."
Hermione laughed and darted in to kiss his pouting lips. "Dear heart, you may think that wasn't perfect, but we're not in a storybook. Life isn't perfect...much. Then again, I'm finally here...with you...madly in love, with our whole future ahead of us... And we have a lovely home and good jobs and family and friends who will support us... eventually. And I've finally been able to get as close as I can to the one person who has given me this perfect life to look forward to." She kissed him again. "You've made me happier than I ever thought possible. That, my love, is perfect."
She saw his partially mollified expression, and laughed again, adding, "Fine! If you feel so awful about it, you can make it up to me." She slid her hand down his belly and traced her fingers through the tangled hair framing his groin. His brows twitched in interest and he eyed her warily. Her voice was low and throaty as she lowered her lips to his ear and said, "Besides, practice makes perfect."
The import of her words flew directly to his cock, which responded by... doing absolutely nothing. As much as he wanted to "make it up to her" and "practice," his body was decidedly not cooperating. Still, it was a matter of pride that he not leave her so unsatisfied. Turning his head, he kissed her, rolling to push her onto her back again.
Hermione gladly welcomed him back, snaking her arms around his neck and spreading her knees so his legs could slip between hers to prop himself over her. She was slightly taken aback when he pulled away and inched down, trailing kisses over her throat and chest, instead of closing the distance between their bodies again.
Snape lavished attention on her breasts, nibbling and suckling, caressing the other when his mouth was busy on one. Finally, he tore himself away from the soft flesh to continue his descent, lightly dragging his chin and nose over her ribs and stomach, smiling at her squeals and jumps in reaction to his tickling. Crawling backwards, he stopped, dropping kisses on her inner thighs.
Hermione realized his intent, and a tingle swept over her, ending with a throb in her cunt. At the involuntary squeeze, she felt the tickle of liquid trailing over her skin toward her arse. Her hands caressed his hair, separating the tresses from their pomaded state. When she felt his warm breath ghosting over her mound, her fingers gripped his hair, urging him lower.
Snape inhaled the scent of their sex...a mixture of her juices, his come, and their sweat. It was intoxicating. Determined that she would not be left wanting, he settled himself on the bed and caressed her leg with one hand as he rested his head on the inside of her other thigh. Her low moan of pleasure assuaged the remaining knot of guilt in his gut. Tracing one finger along her cleft, he dipped down, slipping between her slick lips and opening her to his gaze.
Her curls were dark with her juices, and a thin trail of his come stood out white against the dark, flushed pink of her cunt. He could see that the lower edge was a darker, angry-looking red, and he felt a stab of remorse that he had inadvertently abused her flesh. Resolving to soothe that tender spot, he leant in and gently dragged his tongue over it, tasting their combined essences again.
Hermione sucked in a shocked breath, her fingers convulsively tightening in his hair and encouraging him to continue. The ululating cry wrenched from her throat by his intimate kisses echoed off the walls, filling her ears with the sound of her own enjoyment.
Snape's tentative tasting progressed into more confident laving and probing, and Hermione's noises progressed right along with them. When he sucked on her clit and flicked his tongue over it, she shrieked and nearly clamped her legs around his ears. The hand spreading her retreated...leaving his lips firmly fixed around her clit...to slide two fingers inside her, fluttering against that spot deep within.
Hoarse panting and urgent moans spurred Snape on. Suckling in time with the rhythm of his flexing fingers, he hummed in encouragement. Hermione's back arched, and her hands clenched in his hair. An inarticulate scream of ecstasy heralded her coming, and Snape exulted in the feel of her cunt spasming around his fingers, ushering forth a freshet of wetness to coat his chin.
Coming down from her peak, Hermione's breathing was ragged. Snape carefully withdrew from within her, backing away and giving one last, long swipe of his tongue from arse to clit before sucking his fingers clean as he sat up. Hermione lay bonelessly, one arm flung over her eyes as she tried to calm her racing pulse.
Satisfied that she, too, was now satisfied, Snape crawled beside her and sank onto the pillow, his eyelids drooping as all energy left him. Hermione felt him settling beside her and turned her head, her dangling hand still obscuring part of her vision. Snape flashed a weary smile and she did the same.
"I love you, Severus." She lifted her arm and let it fall at her side, gazing contentedly into his face.
Snape peered at her through sleepy, half-lidded eyes and murmured, "I love you, Hermione."
Hermione struggled to sit up to tug the covers from beneath them, yanking them up to their ribs. Snape fidgeted just enough to assist with the task, then scowled at the lamps still lit on their nightstands. An impatient "Accio wand!" had the shaft sailing through the air into his fingers, and he gave a curt flick at the lamps, extinguishing the light. Hermione had curled onto her right side, facing away from Snape, and he shoved his wand under the pillow before scooting closer to fit himself along her body.
Hermione voiced a happy sigh as he spooned behind her, wrapping his left arm around her ribs to snake up between her breasts and rest his hand against her collarbone. Snape shoved her tangled curls above her head on the pillow and settled so that his nose almost touched her neck. Stretching forward that inch or so, he pressed a kiss to her shoulder and hummed a deep croon of contentment before fading into a much-needed and well-deserved sleep.
What felt like only moments later, but was really a few hours, Snape woke up, his exhausted body and mind protesting against not being asleep. But, his bladder kept insisting that he pay attention, so he reluctantly dislodged himself from Hermione and edged backward until he could slip out of bed and tiptoe to the bathroom, grumpily thinking, Should never have had that cocoa...
After availing himself of the facilities, he padded back into the bedroom, which was starting to brighten as the first hints of dawn lightened the sky beyond the windows. As he approached the bed, he saw that Hermione had not only rolled back into the spot he had so recently occupied, but she had also kicked the covers away, leaving her sprawled form bare. Snape froze, overwhelmed by the sight and all that it entailed.
She was here. With him. For good. And she loved him like he loved her. She was perfect, and she was his.
The surge of love that filled him was accompanied by a surge of desire, and his cock twitched to life, finally recovered from their previous activities. The memories washed over him, still fresh and exciting, and with them came his remembered humiliation.
She may say she didn't care, and that she probably wouldn't have orgasmed anyhow, but I want to bring her to ecstasy as much as she did to me.
Crossing to the bed, he carefully sank onto it, hoping not to wake her. Well, I want to wake her, just not yet... Lying alongside her, he studied her face, listening to her slow, even breathing. One leg was stretched out, but the other was bent, her knee fallen to the side, leaving her exposed. Snape gently stroked the curls of her mound, teasing and toying with the coarse hair.
After several moments of the same, without waking her, he dipped further down, his fingertips finding the heat that radiated from between her thighs, delighting him as he felt the slick wetness that still hid there, evidence of their repletion. Lightly, he traced one finger along her cleft, spreading the moisture and caressing her until he dared to press in, slipping between her lips and sliding one finger into her cunt, searching for that spot.
Hermione's breathing faltered, and she held her breath for a moment before gasping and then letting out a long sigh. Her head rolled on the pillow, and her hips flexed, but her eyes remained closed.
Snape grinned, wanting her to wake up to pleasure. Curling his finger and pressing, he sucked in a triumphant breath at the shudder that rippled over her body. She was slowly rousing now, her eyes moving beneath her closed lids, her breathing becoming shallower, and her muscles tensing as she writhed. When her legs closed around his hand, squeezing, her eyelids fluttered open in disoriented surprise. Her gasp of shock turned into a moan of enjoyment when Snape fluttered his finger again, watching her with a wicked grin.
Hermione rocked her hips, and her hands clamped onto Snape's wrist as she fought to clear her head of both sleep and pleasure. Snape leant in from his place along her side and kissed her, pressing the heel of his hand against her clit as he did so, making her squeal against his mouth. His cock was at full attention again, poking her hipbone, and he wanted to make sure that this time she would enjoy their coupling as much as he did.
Scooting closer, he pushed forward with his left knee, shoving her left leg up over his. Then, breaking the kiss, he shifted lower, slowly removing his finger and circling her flesh, spreading her slippery juices. Hermione voiced a protesting whine, but it deepened into another moan of appreciation when he stroked her clit. She released his wrist and rubbed her face in an attempt to wake up completely to enjoy everything.
Snape's erection was trapped between them, so he flexed his hips, pulling back so it could bounce free, rubbing against the underside of her thigh as he shifted forward again. He gripped just above the back of her knee and bent her leg skyward, angling himself so that his cock was nestled against her pussy.
Hermione's eyes flew open wide at the feel of him prodding, and she moaned her approval, slotting her right leg between his and reaching down to help guide him into her. He pressed forward, sinking slowly into her cunt, careful to control his depth. The angle they were at meant that, as he delved deeper, he slid over that sensitive spot, making Hermione nearly choke on her hastily drawn breath of delight.
Snape's smirk was smug as he retreated until she exhaled in what almost sounded like relief, then thrust again, rubbing on that spot and making her shriek and shudder again. It was more difficult now, with her leg lying over his hip, to reach down and stroke her clit, but her wild cry of abandon when he did so made it worthwhile.
Hermione was nearly overwhelmed by the power of sensations. With every thrust, Snape's cock passed over her favourite spot, sending jolts of electric pleasure through her body. The almost panicky feeling that she had to pee somehow made it more intense, and when it was coupled with his fingers on her clit, she felt as if she were about to go mad with bliss.
His strokes stayed shallow enough that she didn't experience the sting of stretching too much around the thicker base of his cock, and he kept rubbing inside, sending rhythmic surges of fire sizzling all the way to her toes and fingers. His fingers teasing her clit made a dizzying counterpoint to his cock, and her sex-flooded brain managed to form the thought, Oh, this is exactly what I need!
The desire to come grew so strong that Hermione reached down and slid her fingers under his, circling and rubbing at the speed and rhythm she needed, leaving Snape to groan, gripping her thigh and pistoning faster.
She turned her head to lock gazes with him, the lust in his eyes turning her on even more. His wild thrusting had him panting and grunting, and her gasps and moans as her fingers danced over her clit blended with his deeper voice. Higher pitched squeaks and coos gave evidence that she was climbing toward her peak, and Snape's gaze burned into her when he purred, "Yes, Hermione... come for me... I want to feel it... yesss... "
His litany spurred her on, and suddenly, her orgasm hit her like a Bludger, robbing her of breath as she gasped and keened, convulsing around his cock and clamping down hard, her vision going grey around the edges. Snape's surprised oath turned into a long, wavering groan when her cunt gripped him, sending him over the edge to shudder along with her, his hips flexing as his muscles spasmed in ecstasy.
They trembled and panted, with him still lodged deep inside her, both spiralling down from their peaks, their ears ringing with the echoes of their cries.
Several minutes later, Snape dragged himself from his doze and backed away, separating from Hermione with a deep sigh. Shoving his hand under the pillow, he retrieved his wand and Summoned some tissues, handing some to Hermione as well so they could both mop up. She jerked out of her lethargy at the feel of him nudging her with the proffered tissues and discreetly cleaned up as she rolled away and squirmed back to a good position for sleeping. Snape's head fell back onto the pillow with an exhausted flop; he let the crumpled tissue fall to the floor beside the bed while he stretched and shifted alongside Hermione again.
Silence overtook them, and they both fell asleep, Hermione curled on her side and Snape sprawled on his back. Neither of them was bothered by the steadily brightening light filtering through the curtains.
That light went from a cool blue to a crisp white and then to a warm yellow as the hours wore on. Morning came and went, and it was midday when Snape finally woke again.
Mouth dry from it falling open while he slept on his back and eyes gritty with accumulated sleep, Snape roused fitfully, trying to marshal his wits and determine what had disturbed him. Rubbing his eyes and swallowing thickly, he rolled to the side, shoving himself into a sitting position, his feet splayed on the carpet.
What is that bloody noise?
He spared a glance at Hermione still asleep on the other side of the bed and listened. There! It was a knocking sound, several beats followed by a pause, then repeated. Heaving to his feet, he snatched up his wand and shuffled around to the foot of the bed. After a moment of searching through the discarded clothing, he snagged his trousers, stepping into them and hitching them over his hips, buttoning the fly just enough to keep them from falling down. Tucking his wand into a back pocket, he tiptoed out of the bedroom.
The knocking persisted.
Scrubbing his stubbly face and running his hands through his tangled hair, he padded down the stairs to the front door, the noise getting louder with every step.
Who the hell is pounding on my door? We just bloody well got here! Probably some busybody nosy housewife from one of the nearby houses, trying to get a good look at the new neighbours for gossip-fodder. Good thing my wand is behind me. No doubt Hermione would frown on me telling the neighbours to sod off as my first encounter... Fine. I'll be civil, but they'll know exactly how little I care for being dragged from my bed to deal with their curiosity.
With that decided, he paused on the threshold, listening to the continued knocking. Guess I should be grateful I didn't have that doorbell fixed... Shaking his head and blinking, taking a steadying breath, he reached for the doorknob with one hand while turning the deadbolt with the other. During the pause following the latest stint of knocking, he flung the door open wide, ready to launch into a frosty, disapproving response to the annoyingly persistent person who clearly would not go away.
As the door opened, his haughty expression melted into one of wide-eyed shock, and his free hand scrabbled hastily for his low-hanging trousers, grabbing at the half-open fly and yanking them higher in a desperate bid for modesty. His mouth sagged open, and in the charged beat of silence once the door was thrown wide, his voice emerged as an incredulous croak.
"Minerva?"
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)