7- At the Other End of the Castle...
Chapter 7 of 84
Good_WitchAfter their meeting, Hermione returns to Gryffindor Tower and Harry. Just what will happen when they end up alone in her room, supposedly to read the script?
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Chapter 7- At the Other End of the Castle
"All right there, Hermione?" Harry called loudly from where he had been awaiting her arrival, his expression alert and concerned, as she climbed in through the portrait hole into the common room.
"Of course, Harry," Hermione replied, brow furrowed as she looked about the common room in amazement, quickly covering her ears at the din of multiple music boxes playing and excited conversations.
Harry grinned at her reaction and joined her near the portrait hole, laughing as he turned back to survey the commotion from her point of view. "It is a bit loud, isn't it!"
Hermione rolled her eyes at him in exasperation and jerked her head in the direction of her Head Girl's room. "I'm going to go put my things away and get away from this racket!"
Harry deftly took her possessions from her and gestured for her to lead the way. Hermione took one last look around the chaos and sped toward her room, Harry one step behind her. As the noise dissipated behind them, she slowed down and shook her head, slightly amused by the sights and sounds that had greeted her in Gryffindor Tower. Why, the whole of Gryffindor must have been crammed into the common room!
Harry saw her bemused expression and thanked his luck that it was so easy to get her away from everyone. He moved up next to her and smiled. "Guess they were all rather excited. Half the Tower was waiting for us when we all came back, asking questions and wanting to see the scripts and listen to the music boxes."
She laughed. "Well, Gryffindors are naturally curious!" They reached her door and she turned to take her things from Harry. As she reached for them, he swept them behind his back. She looked up at him in surprise and he smiled deviously at her.
"Mind if I come in and we can look over our parts together?"
Hermione saw the glitter in his eyes like earlier and blushed. Unable to think of a way to say no without hurting his feelings, she just opened her door and stepped to the side, waiting for him to enter. He stepped inside and she shut the door, instinctively locking and warding it. Harry walked to her desk and put the script and music box on it. He turned and leant against the edge and looked at Hermione. He was unaccountably nervous about being alone in her room again after that morning, so he did his best to be nonchalant.
"So, what did Dumbledore want with you and Snape?" he asked, with his characteristic smirk of distaste when he said Snape's name.
Hermione was startled by the question, her thoughts having been caught up with what she and Harry had done that morning on her bed. Her mind cast about for the information and she inadvertently remembered the searing look Snape had given her. She felt her pulse quicken even more at the sensations it evoked. "Uh, he just wanted to make sure we understood how important this was to him and that our parts will require dedication and discipline."
Harry looked at her, perplexed. "Hermione, he said all that when I was there. Surely he didn't keep you both there just to repeat himself."
She blinked. "Oh yes, of course." Unwilling to admit the heated looks that had passed between her and Snape...really, she didn't know what to think of them herself...she continued. "Well, he told us to behave like adults and to get over our personality conflicts for the good of the production. Then he left us there to work things out." She looked down, flushing hotly, her stomach fluttering at the memory of being alone with Snape.
"He left you there? Alone with Snape? I'm surprised he didn't hex you once Dumbledore was out the door!" Harry went from astonishment to warning anger, shooting away from the desk and advancing on Hermione, hands clenched tightly at his sides. "What did he do? Did he say anything? Did he hurt you? I swear, Hermione, if he does anything to you again, I'll make him regret it! I mean it!..."
Shaking off her uncomfortable thoughts, Hermione focused instead on dealing with Harry. She cut off his tirade, grabbing his arm and pulling him to sit on the edge of the bed. "Harry! He didn't do anything! We talked about the production in a calm and civilized manner." She ignored his disbelieving snort. "Once I explained to him that I was an adult and expected to be treated as such, he calmed down and was rather tolerable."
"What do you mean 'explained that you were an adult'?" Harry's eyes clouded for a moment with confusion.
Hermione rolled her eyes, aggrieved. "Harry, the time turner, third year, remember? I'm eighteen now." Then, a slow grin spread across her face at the recollection of Snape sulking when he knew he was wrong. "I just explained about that to Professor Snape and he agreed to treat the production professionally."
When Hermione grinned, Harry's breath caught. He thought about her being eighteen now, older than he. Seeing her wicked grin made him forget about Snape and the production and focus only on her. A devilish grin of his own widened and he looked at her through hooded eyes. When she glanced up at him again, her eyes flew open wide and her grin disappeared. Warily, she said, "What?"
Harry edged closer to her and said, "So, you're an older woman. You know, I think older women are sexy." His gaze locked with hers and he kept leaning closer to her. His insides jumped when his lips covered hers again. When she didn't pull away immediately, he revelled in his success and slid his hands up and around her.
Hermione was shocked, even as she berated herself for it. She should have known what Harry wanted when he came with her to her room. It was plain in his eyes. She responded to his kiss like she had earlier that morning, feeling the tingling in her centre. She vaguely thought about what they had been doing when Ron had shown up. Her body was responding to Harry's fevered kisses and the warmth of his hands on her back. She felt him trembling under her hands as he devoured her. Gasping for breath, she pulled back.
Harry reluctantly released her a bit and looked at her face. Her lips were glistening and her eyes were dark with whirling emotions. He wanted nothing more than to kiss her into oblivion. His stomach felt like it was on fire. He was breathing heavily, trying to control his hormones. He felt her heartbeat racing under him and knew he couldn't have spoken at that moment if he'd tried.
Hermione searched his face and saw only affection and passion. She could tell that things could go much too far and too fast if they weren't careful. Taking a shaky breath, she finally whispered, "I thought you wanted to look over our parts." Harry's eyes narrowed at the inadvertent innuendo and a smirk played over his lips. Hermione's eyes widened in chagrin. She felt even more colour rise to her already heated cheeks. "I... I meant... you know..."
Harry chuckled at her embarrassment and kissed her quickly, cutting off her attempt at explanation. "I know what you meant. Although, I do think that looking over some other parts could be quite entertaining." He raised an eyebrow at her with an amused smile. When Hermione looked away, he laughed aloud. This made her push him away, petulantly, and she smacked his arm.
"Prat! Don't make fun of me!"
He rubbed his arm where she had slugged him and took a deep breath through his laughter. He tried to regain his composure and dampen the ardour that had been coursing through him. Hermione squirmed away from him, moving to the desk and standing for a moment, turned away from him. Taking a deep breath, she picked up the script and turned around. Very causally, she held it out toward Harry and said, "Here. Let's read the script. That's what you came here for, isn't it?" She gave Harry a challenging look, raising her eyebrows.
Harry had the grace to look away, abashed. Then he gave her a wry grin, looking at her through his lashes...Gods, I wish he wouldn't do that......and retorted, "Well, it was a handy excuse."
Hermione threw the script at him and he caught it like a Snitch. She should have known better; his reflexes were far too fast for her to manage hitting him like that. In a low voice, Hermione said, "Harry, I think it might be better if you went back to the Tower. It's getting late, and I don't want either of us to get in trouble."
Harry stood abruptly, closing the distance between them, putting his hands on the desk on either side of her. He looked earnestly down at her. "Don't make me go. I'll behave, I promise. C'mon 'Mione, let me stay and read the script with you."
Her pulse quickened as she felt the heat from his body on hers again. It's too risky if he stays. I don't know if I could stop him if he pressed the issue... I don't know that I'd want to stop him... She set her lips in a determined line and looked resolutely up into Harry's wistful gaze. "No. It's just too much right now, Harry. So much has happened today. We'll just take things as they come, okay? Please, go back to the others and I'll see you tomorrow." She placed her hands firmly on his chest, shooing away the errant thought about how nice it felt, and gently pushed him away from her.
Harry's face fell. He stepped back and stuffed his hands in his pockets. Hermione slid past him and stepped around the bed to the door. He sighed deeply and trudged after her. She opened the door and he looked at her, pouting a little. He covered her hand on the doorknob and stroked her knuckles. "Are you sure I can't stay a bit longer?"
Hermione glanced cautiously into the corridor, to see if anyone were about to see them. The corridor was empty. She was startled to feel Harry's lips near her ear, sending a shiver down her spine. "Please?" he whispered.
Stoically, she turned her head and found herself enveloped in a deep green gaze of want and heat. Gulping, she shook her head "no," not trusting her voice. Her stomach was roiling again. She closed her eyes for a moment and when she opened them, Harry was looking down, defeated. He let go of her hand and stepped past her. She let out the breath she didn't know she had been holding. She felt the goose bumps on her arms from his whisper. It gave her a tingle deep inside again and she knew she had better shut the door before she gave in to her out of control hormones.
She closed the door about halfway and Harry turned back. He manfully put aside his frustration and smiled. He realized he'd have to take baby steps if he didn't want to cock things up. In as normal a tone as he could muster, he said, "So, see you at breakfast?"
Hermione gratefully nodded and shut the door a little more. She paused and said, "Good night, Harry."
With lightning speed...damn those Quidditch reflexes!...he stepped forward again and kissed her. When he broke away, she was breathless. His voice trembled a bit, full of deeper meaning, as he said, "Good night, Hermione. Sweet dreams." He turned quickly on his heel and rushed down the corridor.
Hermione numbly shut the door, locked and warded it. She leant against the heavy wood and took a deep calming breath. Mercy! I always thought those ridiculous romance novels Ginny reads were exaggerating things. Who knew it could be like this? I never really looked at Harry like that until just recently, and now I could snog him into next week!
Pushing herself off the door, she picked her script up from where Harry had dropped it. She already knew the story. She had loved the musical when she had seen it with her parents years ago. She had even bought the CD of the soundtrack right after seeing the show. What none of the others at Hogwarts knew, as she had kept it to herself, was that she already knew the whole soundtrack word for word. She was still curious to read the script, however, knowing it had some dialogue that was not on the soundtrack. She idly hoped that the singing lessons she had had as a child would be enough for her to perform on her own without the spell. Her instructor had told her she had a natural talent. Of course, being the perfectionist she was, she knew that if her skills weren't good enough, she'd use the spell in a heartbeat. She loved the play too much to not give it the very best she could.
Humming to herself, she took the script into her bathroom and opened it as she started the water running for her bath. She was a few pages in when the water was ready and she disrobed.
"Wingardium Leviosa." The script hung above the water and she smiled with satisfaction as she soaked in the warm water, reading.
As she read, she pictured each of the cast members in their roles, remembering what the costumes and the set looked like.
It will be so beautiful! She giggled to herself when she pictured Ron and Neville dressed as the managers in their Muggle suits. Actually, I'm sure they'll look quite handsome. But they'll both be so uncomfortable! She returned her gaze to the page and rolled her eyes at the thought of Pansy and Draco as Carlotta and Piangi.
Gods, as if she weren't annoying enough! Hmph, she's perfectly suited to playing a conceited bitch. Hermione smirked at the shocked reaction she would get if she ever stated her opinion out loud. They all thought she was such a goody-goody. Well, if word got around that she had been snogging Harry alone in her room on a Saturday night, perhaps her reputation would change. Thinking of Harry again made her stomach flutter. She pictured him in his costume as Raoul and felt her insides jump. Now, he would definitely look handsome in his suits! He'll look every inch the dark romantic hero. She smiled to herself. Savouring the lingering warmth from their kisses, she continued reading.
She laughed again as she pictured McGonagall as Giry, complete with her cane. Really, the Sorting Hat did quite a commendable job on casting. And Ginny will be positively sweet as Meg. I'll bet Dumbledore has something cooked up with some charms to make the magic mirror...
Her thoughts trailed off as she arrived at the part where the Phantom first sings to her in the dressing room. Her mind's eye saw Snape, but not the Snape of her Potions class, instead, she saw the Snape from just a few hours before. When she relived the piercing gaze that had raked her from head to toe, she felt the same tingling sensations in her body. Her heart sped up and she felt perspiration beading on her lip. She vividly remembered the answering look in his eyes before he had quelled it and had torn his gaze away.
Stop it. You're imagining things. You've let yourself get carried away with this play and you're imagining things that aren't there. Just be grateful that he stopped raging at you.
She forced herself to read again. In her mind she heard the music and sang along in her head with the words on the page. Imagining Snape as the Phantom, she paid careful attention to what he would sing, wondering whether his singing voice would be as commanding and powerful as his speaking voice. She shuddered as she remembered how silky his voice could be. Really, his voice is the most attractive thing about him.
She mused over the lyrics of their duet. As loath as I am to admit it, he really is the only choice to play the role. He certainly has power over people. Witness his classes for proof! Then her eyes narrowed at the line, "man and mystery... were both in you." That fits him perfectly. He's always been an enigma. Even in the Order, we never learnt much about him.
Continuing on to "Music of the Night," she relaxed into the water and closed her eyes. Letting the song play in her head from memory, she put Snape in the place of the Phantom she had seen. She had been much younger then, and couldn't fully appreciate the hypnotic beauty of the song, but now she lost herself in the poetry, imagining Snape's velvet voice wrapping itself around the words.
She remembered the way the Phantom had stalked Christine, circling her as if she were prey, accustoming her to his cold touch. Vaguely she felt a heat pooling in her stomach, but she was immersed in the images and the song in her head and paid no heed. She saw the way Christine caressed the mask and sighed almost inaudibly.
Then, the images of the Phantom changed to those of Snape in his Death Eater mask and cloak. She had seen him wearing them and sleek black gloves not long before the Final Battle, when he had come to warn them of the impending strike. She had been petrified for an instant until he had ripped his mask away. Then she felt foolish for not realizing it must have been him. Number Twelve was too well guarded for any other Death Eaters to find it. Still, she had never been more thankful to be looking up into the familiar pale, grim face framed by lank black hair. She had smiled in her relief and he had curtly nodded to her before striding purposefully off.
Now her mind was mixing memories from the play with her own memories. She thought about the part where Christine snatches the mask off the Phantom and easily saw Snape whirling on her in anger. It was something she had seen so many times before, even just that morning.
The sadness of his song, "Stranger Than You Dreamt It" tugged at her. She had always felt pity for the Phantom at that point. It wasn't his fault that he was so reviled. She wondered if anyone had ever learnt to "see the man behind the monster" that was Snape. Then she felt a moment of shame. He was not a monster. True, he had done some monstrous things in his past, but he made up for that! He was noble, and, in the end, good.
Harry and Ron never tried to see the man behind the Potions Master, but she did. She knew how much Dumbledore had trusted him, and how dangerous Snape's position had been. It was the least she could do to try and ignore the taciturn manner he used as a front and appreciate the brilliant mind and integrity buried behind it.
Her stomach roiled again. She blinked her eyes open. The water was getting cold, and she hadn't turned a page since the Magic Mirror scene. She was taken aback at how long she had been soaking in her tub thinking about Snape. She flushed again at the feelings she suddenly noticed.
You are not getting turned on by Snape! It's the character... and the costumes... and the romance of the story... and likely you're still a little worked up from Harry earlier! She refused to admit to herself that she had got all sorts of hot and bothered while thinking about Snape.
She drained the tub, putting the script on the sink. As she dried off, she was embarrassed to note how stiff her nipples were, and how the wetness between her thighs was not just bathwater. She sighed in frustration. It's a good thing I sent Harry away. Gods, just look how out of control I am! It would have been disastrous if he were still here to take advantage of it...
Hermione finished drying herself and put on her nightgown. The fabric scraped across her hard nipples, making her hiss at the sensation. She glanced at her reflection in the mirror and saw the colour burning in her cheeks and the glint in her eyes. It reminded her of what she had seen in Harry's earlier that day.
She shooed Crookshanks off the bed and turned down the covers. "Accio script. Accio music box." She sat on the bed and tucked her feet under the sheet. She marked her place in the script and set it on her nightstand, on top of a stack of books. Then she put the music box on the edge nearest her and scooted down on her bed, lying on her side and looking at it. It was very ornate, carved and gilded and painted. She smiled at the ingenious way Dumbledore managed to get the recording to them without access to Muggle devices. She had been rather disappointed when she brought her CD player to Hogwarts, only to find out that it wouldn't work. She had actually managed to forget that part of Hogwarts: A History.
She picked up the box and rolled onto her back, shoving her hair above her head on the pillow. She saw the little dials and toggles on the sides, marked with their purposes. Smiling to herself, she set them so she could listen from the "Angel of Music/ The Mirror" through to the end of "Stranger Than You Dreamt It." She set the volume at a soft, unobtrusive level and placed the box back on her nightstand.
Rolling back onto her side, she stared at it without opening it. Her stomach still fluttered and roiled. Too much excitement for one day. You'll feel better in the morning. She pulled her covers up to her ribs and doused the lights in her room, able to see the box in the glow of moonlight from her window.
She heard the music in her head, but didn't open the box. Images of the play, and of her friends, and of Snape swirled in her head. She closed her eyes, but she could see the box outlined against her lids. Taking a deep breath, she reached out a tentative hand and opened it. Almost immediately, music started, and the Phantom's voice came out of the darkness.
She closed her eyes and it sounded like he was there in her room. The quality of the recording was amazing. She had a fleeting thought of Snape as the Phantom in her room and shied away from the tingle in her body that made her shiver.
She rolled onto her back again and rubbed her hands over the goose flesh that had risen on her arms. Her nipples pressed against her crossed forearms, still stiff. Frowning, she gripped her arms tightly under her breasts, hugging herself. The music swelled around her and she felt the lure of the Phantom's words, "I am your Angel of Music... Come to me: Angel of Music..." Her heart beat quickly against her ribs.
An image of Snape imperiously holding his hand out to her through a magic mirror, willing her to follow him, flashed in her mind. She felt the twisting in her gut as the image of her took his hand and disappeared with him. She remembered the electric jolt she felt when she shook hands with him that night and her breathing quickened.
During the song while travelling to the underground labyrinth, Hermione envisioned the misty lake at Hogwarts that she crossed as a first year. But instead of Hagrid, she saw Snape at the prow. His gaze was magnetic. She heard the extravagant vocalizing that Christine was doing in the recording and felt her senses soaring higher as Christine's pitch climbed. She was mesmerized by the low, insistent tones of the Phantom coaxing Christine to dizzying heights of sound. Her mind turned the Phantom's voice into the dangerously soft purr of Snape at his most cunning and she shuddered.
As Christine hit the peak of her vocal climb, Hermione gasped. Her thoughts raced in a jumble as her intellect...older and more mature than when she had first seen the play...realized that Christine's vocal flight and peak in response to the Phantom's insistent words were very like the build-up and climax of a woman being brought to orgasm by her lover's seduction.
Her mind reeled and she latched onto the song playing next, trying to fend off the throbbing in her body.
It was "Music of the Night." Hermione lay there as if drugged. Her body felt leaden with need and her mind was consumed by the hypnotic lyrics. She released her ribs from her rigid grip and rolled to her side, hugging a pillow against her stomach. She could feel her heart beat in every limb. But she was most distracted by the pulsing in her core. She curled into a foetal position, wrapping herself around the pillow.
Her mind replayed the images of Snape as the Phantom circling her as Christine as he sang his seductive ode to darkness. She was in the thrall of the music and the situation and felt buoyed along in the swift current of emotion. Finally, the song ended. She lay still as Christine woke from her sleep to hear the Phantom composing.
When the Phantom rounded on Christine in rage, Hermione remembered Snape bellowing at her in front of the notice board that morning. She cringed and shivered in terror at the memory. She knew she had fainted in reaction to the shock and Harry and Ron had brought her to her room. She realized that she'd have to get over her terror of Snape's wrath if she was to perform her role correctly in this scene. Christine didn't back down from the Phantom.
She heard the misery in the Phantom's voice and wondered if Snape would be able to show that kind of emotion. She was sure he must have felt that way at some point, but he kept his emotions so carefully locked away that she didn't know if he could even pretend to show such feelings.
Suddenly Hermione was drawn from her musings by the line, "Fear can turn to love." Startled by this notion, she wondered if it was really true. Again, her mind turned to Snape. Most people, with very few exceptions, were afraid of the daunting, imposing Potions Master and ex-Death Eater. Could someone learn to love him? She marvelled at the idea of putting Snape and love in the same sentence. It was too fantastical. She shook her head, momentarily distracted from her physical discomfort by the unlikely nature of her thoughts.
Abruptly, the song ended and the music box stopped. The silence in her room was deafening. She heard her rapid breathing and Crookshanks's contented purr from her armchair. She gingerly uncurled herself from around her pillow and stretched out onto her back. She felt the stirring in her centre and the heat that seemed to pour off her. She sighed, frustrated. Frustrated. That's exactly it! You're sexually frustrated after so many ups and downs today. She suppressed a wry grin as she thought about what else might have had its ups and downs today as well.
An embarrassed expression took up residence on her face as she analytically pondered the possible solutions.
The recently awakened part of her that fired right up when Harry kissed her smiled devilishly and said, Well, you could always pretend you're doing a bed check as Head Girl and just 'end up' in Harry's...
Hermione instantly quashed that dangerous line of thought. She squeezed her legs together at the strong throb that idea elicited.
Well, you could always take a Dreamless Sleep draught, but then you'd have to go to Madam Pomfrey or Professor Snape to get one. And they'd want to know why you need it, and... She let out an explosive breath, shaking her head. No, that's a bad idea too. She especially didn't like the idea of disturbing Snape right now, not after the events of the day, and not with her current condition.
So, the rational, practical side spoke up. You know what you should do. Why are you even bothering with anything else? There's nothing wrong with it. It's completely natural. You'd be more abnormal if you didn't do it. Remember, those books on sexuality you read two years ago said so.
Hermione blushed, even in the solitude of her dark room. She knew it was normal, but she had only ever tried it a few times before. She always felt like she was doing something naughty and shameful.
Out of nowhere, that newly roused part of her being popped her head up and grinned at the idea of something naughty. Mmmm, that sounds like fun...
Writhing in a combination of embarrassment and need, she pulled the covers up to her chin, slipping her hands underneath. She shut her eyes tight and her hands lightly travelled down her torso to lift her nightgown. She felt a shock of surprise that she had neglected to put on her knickers when she got ready for bed. A delicious shiver washed over her. She felt... wanton.
Her hands slid over her belly and down over her thighs. She was momentarily disconcerted by how much moisture she felt leaking out to coat her curls. She gasped as her fingertips brushed over her swollen lips, stunned at how aroused she was. She gave herself over to the pleasure pulsing in her loins as she stroked her fingertips up and down her soaked pussy.
Her breath caught as one finger slipped between her lips and flicked against her clit. She rubbed her fingers along either side of it, letting out a ragged sigh. Her hips rocked as she continued her explorations. She licked her lips, remembering Harry's fiery kisses and felt a surge of excitement. Fleetingly, she wondered if it would feel different if Harry's fingers were touching her. A wave of heat crashed over her at the thought.
She sped up, her fingers dancing over her clit and the lips around it. She felt her pulse race and her breathing increase to match it as she went higher and higher toward her peak.
Unbidden, her connection of Christine's dizzying vocal acrobatics and the build-up to an orgasm flashed across her mind. She felt the tightening of her muscles, and knew she was on the edge. Suddenly she heard the low, coaxing velvet voice of her Potions Professor urging her, "Sing for me!" She moaned as she climaxed, her muscles clenching spasmodically. Her head rolled on her pillow; her hand gripped the bedclothes; her toes curled and twitched. Visions flooded her mind as she spiralled down from her crest, and she sank into a sated sleep with the image of one Professor Snape, eyes burning with intensity, locking eyes with her through a mask as he pulled her to him and they disappeared.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)