17- Rehearsal and Acting
Chapter 18 of 84
Good_WitchIt's the read-through for Act 2 and Snape and Hermione have to keep their feelings a secret from the cast. Are they good enough actors?
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Chapter 17- Rehearsal and Acting
It had been a late evening for some of the cast members; they had had trouble with their transfigurations, requiring both McGonagall and Dumbledore to stay and work with them individually until they succeeded at least once in their efforts. Nevertheless, spirits were high again at dinner Friday night, as they awaited the read-through of the second act.
Hermione had taken her cue from Snape and left her script in her room, knowing she didn't need it. The other Gryffindors had theirs, and some were thumbing through them as they chatted about their parts. Ron was regaling the other seventh-year boys with tales of his trials the night before, trying to get his transfiguration spells right. Hermione noted that Harry was looking much better, smiling and laughing with the others. She sighed in relief and smiled to herself, glad that he seemed to be getting over her.
She snuck a peek up at the High Table and thrilled to see Snape leaning languidly back in his chair, idly gazing about the Hall, his head leaning against his left hand. He knew she was looking at him and flicked a glance at her, lazily tucking a strand of hair behind his ear. Hermione's breath caught at the gesture, reminding her that she would be the one running her fingers through those long black locks. She hastily jerked her eyes away and hoped she wasn't flushing as much as she thought she might be.
Snape smirked to himself at her reaction. That little minx thinks she can tempt and tease me. Apparently she's susceptible to subtle... reminders as well. His amusement faded as he looked at the time and huffed in impatience. He wanted to get rehearsal started now. After the previous occasions of going through "Point of No Return" with Hermione, he felt he was prepared to withstand the sensations it evoked, but, perversely, he craved those same sensations. Besides, there was that part of his pride that still wanted to blow everyone away this time like he had the last time.
They thought they knew Severus Snape.
They had no idea who he truly was.
Except perhaps Dumbledore, and even he didn't know everything. Bemused at the notion, he pondered his new... relationship... with Hermione. It was a strange feeling, but he rather thought that he wanted to let her get to know the real Severus Snape.
Then again, there was that niggling uneasy suspicion that Severus Snape was no longer the man he used to be.
The Great Hall cleared, Dumbledore Summoned the circle of chairs, and the cast moved to take their seats. This time, however, Snape quickly strode to the circle and immediately took the seat directly opposite Hermione as soon as she sat. When Harry took a seat a few spaces away from Hermione, Snape smothered a satisfied smirk. Then, he scowled impatiently as Dumbledore went around the group casting Suaviloquentia on those who needed it.
Beaming impartially at everyone, Dumbledore took out his music box and script and settled into his chair. "Welcome again. I've been looking forward to tonight's rehearsal since everyone's wonderful performances last week. I hope you have all been practicing the second act as well!" There was a murmur of assurance throughout the group. "Excellent! In that case, let's begin..." He opened the box and the music began.
Snape sat back to wait for his cue. This week, Neville seemed to have more confidence as he bantered back and forth with Ron. As the rest of the cast chimed in with their parts as the chorus in "Masquerade," Snape closed his eyes to listen critically to the blending of voices. His eyes snapped open to zero in on Harry as he and Hermione sang their bit about the secret engagement. Harry kept his eyes on his script, but his cheeks were bright red and his body language spoke of an ill-concealed hurt. Hermione did her best to sing with professionalism, but Snape could see the guilty gleam in her eyes as she gazed at a spot near the ceiling while she sang. Satisfied once the tense exchange was over, and Harry had not exhibited any inclinations to try to get Hermione back, Snape relaxed and closed his eyes again, focusing on the quality of the singing.
Dumbledore will be pleased. It really does sound quite good. I daresay Hogwarts has a chance at winning this competition. Of course, I will do everything I can to make sure my performance will be as perfect as possible... He looked across the circle at Hermione and felt a surge of proud relief that he had such a talented actress opposite him. Playing off someone who was so gifted brought out the best in him as well.
Oh, all right... I know it's not completely acting at this point, since I want her like the Phantom wants Christine, but at least we should be very believable! He chuckled wryly to himself. And if anyone asks, we can always say, "Why, we're just amazing actors, aren't we?" That may be the only thing that keeps us from arousing suspicion. Then again, we'll have to be good actors out of the play, to pretend we still have such antipathy toward each other. Ah well, that will be the real test of our skills. He let his pensive gaze slide across each person in turn, wondering if any of them would be the type to suspect anything.
Dumbledore is the biggest worry. That man has an uncanny knack for knowing things. Bloody Potter may get in the way just by pining for Hermione... heavy-handed oaf! He may hang about, just to try his luck with her again... Snape felt a flash of fury, but it was quickly followed by a flood of warmth as he remembered Hermione's emphatic rejection of Harry, and her enthusiastic attraction to himself! His lips twitched with the effort of holding in a half-sheepish, half-smug grin.
His thoughts continued. Weasley is likely too stupid to see something right in front of his face, so I doubt he'll pose a problem. Hmmm, speaking of Weasleys... He cast a speculative look at the redheaded girl by Hermione. She's the one closest to Hermione right now. And she did see us at the notice board. That girl seems far too clever for a Weasley. Come to think of it, she's probably our biggest threat after Dumbledore. I must remember to caution Hermione about her. His ruminations stopped as the song came to its crescendo and his entrance.
He slid forward to perch on the edge of the chair and sat up straight. His voice oozing diabolical amusement, he sang, "Why so silent, good Messieurs?" Hermione looked up at him, her eyes dark with whirling emotions. Snape continued in his light tone. Then, his voice hardened with menace as he sang, "Remember, there are worse things than a shattered chandelier!" He locked eyes with Hermione and his face darkened with anger. His voice rough with rage, he roared, "Your chains are still mine, you will sing for me!"
Hermione flinched involuntarily away from him as he bellowed. Inwardly she was amazed at how powerful he was; so much so that even though she knew he was not really angry at her, she was still very afraid of him like that. It's just another example of how passionate he is. Everything is so pent-up and restrained that when he lets it out, it's like a blaze!
She ducked her head to hide the wicked smile that played across her lips. Just like last night, when he gave in to temptation. Gods, what a kiss! I thought I was going to melt right there! Mmm, I want to make him really crack... I wonder if I can get him to cave enough to just... take me! She felt herself blushing hotly at the thought...really, it was one that had crossed her mind with increasing frequency...and nervously glanced up at Dumbledore, remembering Snape's cautionary words.
Snape's gaze kept coming to rest on Hermione...well, she was directly across from him...and he noticed her reddened cheeks. Then, when she bit her lip and looked furtively up at Dumbledore, he wondered what was going on. Curious, he eyed her intently.
Hermione felt that familiar tingle and looked over to see Snape staring at her, eyes narrowed speculatively. She gasped and another rush of heat washed over her already flaming cheeks. Her stomach fluttered and she felt the heady warmth pooling in her knickers. Interestingly enough, that also seemed to be happening with increasing frequency. Hermione flicked a glance around the circle, seeing everyone's eyes on their scripts as Harry and McGonagall did the scene that was not included in the recording. Then, she looked purposefully back and Snape and lowered her guard, letting him see her feelings.
Snape was once again stunned by the vehemence of her arousal. It hit him like a hot gust of wind. Shaking his head, he blinked. His body had instantly responded, and he felt his cock swelling. Holding his breath for a moment to regain composure, he glared at Hermione severely, his reprimand plain in his expression. Hermione shrank in on herself, chagrined. Taking a deep breath, she steeled herself for concentration on the task at hand and shot Snape a properly contrite look from under her lashes. Mollified for the moment, Snape quirked an eyebrow at her before forcing himself to look away.
The second "Notes" scene began, and Snape was both amused and pleased to hear Pansy trying to speak with an Italian accent. Apparently, Draco had been working with her, but she was nowhere near as proficient as he was. I really should have been the one to try to work with her, seeing as she is in my House, but Draco seems to be succeeding admirably, and it's so much easier to deal with that boy when he has things to occupy him and keep him from concocting mischief. I must remember to compliment him on his progress, just to keep him appeased...
As the scene came to the point where Christine and Raoul enter, and Carlotta makes a snide comment, Snape smirked, watching the venom between the actors come through in their roles. Hermione in particular was able to flash haughty, angry glances at Pansy and Draco, glaring at them heatedly, since she didn't have to follow in a script. Snape straightened again as McGonagall started reading the Phantom's note. His voice dripped with mocking derision as he glibly recited the insults. Then he kept his voice light but put forth an undercurrent of warning as he spoke about Christine. Hermione glanced up at him, her eyes sparkling with appreciation of the subtleties in his performance. Snape sat back with a smug, conspiratorial expression as Harry burst in with his plan.
Dumbledore took the moment when McGonagall finished her line, "but we have seen him kill," to stop the practice and organize the multiple run-throughs for each person. Finally, after each person had gone through it, Dumbledore had them all sing at once. He repeated that a few times until it was perfectly timed. As they repeated it one last time, Hermione chimed in at the end with, "If you don't stop I'll go mad!" Then, the Hall quieted completely as she continued, her voice tremulous with unease. Several people around the circle looked up in appreciation of her voice, smiling faintly.
Harry sang his coaxing lines softly, and Hermione edged forward on her seat to sit up straight as she sang her lines, her pain at being caught in such a trap clear in her expressive voice. Snape gazed at her in wonder along with many of the rest of the cast, completely enamoured by the pathos in her song. His chest tightened instinctively in response to the pain she evinced, and he was hit with the urge to comfort her. Blinking rapidly at the lightning-quick reaction, Snape breathed deeply and reminded himself, She's acting. Control yourself.
Snape shot a look at Harry as he heard the boy bellowing, "the disaster will be yours!" Harry was glaring at Snape, scowling. Snape's lip curled in a malicious sneer and his eyes narrowed, boring into the boy. They held each other's gaze until Harry finally blinked and shifted away, sullenly. Snape quirked an eyebrow in triumph before he sank back into his chair, arms crossed loosely across his chest.
The rehearsal scene for "Don Juan Triumphant" began, and Snape rolled his eyes at Pansy's spot-on performance of the sour, self-centred Carlotta. Dumbledore repeated the scene a few times to orchestrate the timing of the background chatter along with the written lines. Then, it was finished, and Hermione continued through her introduction to the next song as the others faded out.
Snape inched back in his seat, crossing his arms tighter, knowing how haunting Hermione would be as she sang "Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again." He glanced around the circle and saw faces everywhere transfixed on Hermione as she sang the poignant song. He felt like he could burst with pride, and gripped his arms against his ribs even more. The music and her voice swelled and ebbed, buoying them along on the current of emotion. As she faded away on her last word, Dumbledore shut the music box, overcome.
Wiping at the tears that drowned the characteristic twinkle of his eyes, Dumbledore sniffed and said, "My dear Miss Granger, that was simply astounding. I knew you were talented, but that was beyond all expectations! I apologize for stopping, but I just couldn't help it..." He turned a soft, indulgent gaze on the group and was met with many awed expressions and murmurs of agreement. Hermione blushed and looked at her hands in her lap, worrying them together.
In a voice barely above a whisper, she stammered, "Th-Thank you, sir."
Fishing a great spotted handkerchief from somewhere within his robes, Dumbledore blew his nose with a loud honking sound, effectively ending the awe-struck atmosphere. Titters and grins rippled over the assembled cast and Dumbledore turned to Snape, politely inquiring, "Severus, are you ready?"
Snape inclined his head respectfully and replied, "Certainly, sir."
Dumbledore opened the music box again and Snape gazed across the circle to Hermione, his tone gentle and enticing as he sang, "Wandering child, so lost, so helpless, yearning for my guidance."
Hermione lifted bewildered eyes to Snape as she answered. Snape's gaze smouldered as he dropped his voice to the hypnotic lure again. But, he was distracted from enveloping Hermione in his presence by Harry coming in with Raoul's lines. Brow creasing in irritation, Snape flicked a glance at Harry before focusing on Hermione again. When he and Hermione finally finished the line, "yet your/ the soul obeys!" Dumbledore stopped the music, indicating that he wanted to do each person's part singly before melding the voices again.
The tension in the Hall grew as they finished the practice and began singing together. Snape chanted, "I am your Angel of Music... Come to me: Angel of Music..."
Harry cried, "Angel of Darkness! Cease this torment!" Snape flicked a quick narrow-eyed glance of anger at Harry before gazing more intently, more determinedly at Hermione as he continued his lure. Hermione looked between Snape and Harry, anxiety growing as the scene progressed. When Harry said the lines that finally cause Christine to break from her trance, Hermione flashed an agonized, imploring look at Snape. Then she whimpered Raoul's name.
Harry looked at Hermione, his face a mixture of wistfulness and petulance. Snape tensed. The fury behind his lines as he taunted Raoul was more real than anyone had the right to know, except Hermione. Harry shot a look at Snape when he heard the mocking jeers. He scowled fiercely at Snape in between looking at his script for his lines.
Finally, looking uncomfortable indeed, Hermione begged, "Raoul! Come back...."
Snape's eyes widened and his nostrils flared in rage as he roared, "Don't go!" Then, his expression settled into a grim one of dire foreboding as he continued, "So be it. Now let it be war upon you both!" There was a beat and then Dumbledore closed the music box.
Even Dumbledore seemed loath to interrupt the crackling tension. Hesitantly clearing his throat, he said, "Let's move on to the next scene..." All of the boys except Draco turned their attention to the script for the scene that was not in the recording. Snape gazed coldly at each of them in turn as the scene progressed, eerily lilting his lines to taunt them. When he finished, Dumbledore nodded and opened the music box again, moving on to "Don Juan Triumphant."
Snape was sliding his gaze along the group when he felt the tingle on his cheek. He looked out of the corner of his eye to see Hermione staring at him, an anticipatory gleam in her eyes. Swiftly, like a snake striking, he snapped his head around to give her a stern warning glance. She jerked, blinking owlishly at him, taken aback. Almost imperceptibly, he shook his head. Just as minutely, Hermione nodded back, defeated.
As the scene continued, Snape looked around the circle more, noting the flushing cheeks and uneasy shifting of several of the students as they realized that their professor and peer would be performing the erotically charged scene. Some exchanged disconcerted glances and flicked embarrassed looks at Snape and pitying looks at Hermione. Snape's lips thinned. Just as I thought. Well, won't this be even more awkward than last week... He gratefully remembered that at least this week, he didn't have to deal with the torment of his unbidden feelings for Hermione and the misery that they were supposedly unrequited. He flashed a dark warning glance at Hermione, and was satisfied to see her drawing herself up confidently: back straight, chin up, expression determined, and attitude lofty.
Hermione was steeling herself for the onslaught of immature reactions that were already trickling in from her classmates. She was not ignorant of the pitying glances they cast at her. But she refused to bow to their irrational perception of Snape and the dynamics of the scene.
Draco was appropriately pompous and caddish as he sang his last line and laughed. Hermione chimed in with her sweet words and voice. Then, as Dean croaked, "Master," Snape responded in a hushed voice, "Passarino, go away for the trap is set and waits for its prey."
Snape stoically ignored the antsy shifting and rumblings around him as he began "Point of No Return." He simply gazed at Hermione. She took her cue from him and did the same, effectively shutting the others out of their connection. But, they both kept a firm hold on their physical responses to each other and the song. He worked his way through the verses, letting his voice savour the words as he had before, but hiding his raging desire and fiery lust behind a façade of calm composure. Even so, his heart rate increased and sweat prickled his skin under the pressure. As soon as he finished his lines and Hermione began hers, he doggedly recited a mantra in his head, Maintain control. Show nothing. Now is when you need to act. Act like you feel nothing. Maintain control. Show nothing...
Hermione recognized the firm grip Snape had on himself by the rigid tension in his lean frame. She had seen the same thing the night before in his quarters when she had pushed him beyond resistance. Now, however, that was something that they couldn't do, or even allow a hint to show. She had been marvelling at his strength of discipline and admiring him for it while he sang, and now she knew she had to match him. She knew that she couldn't completely match him, because she couldn't control the nervous flushing of her cheeks. Inwardly she felt a flash of envy that he managed to stay so cool and pale under duress. Still, she gathered strength from her connection with Snape, locking her gaze with his, and sang her verses with as much emotion as she dared.
Snape could see the struggle for control and discipline within Hermione. He wanted so much to show his approval for her success in mastering her outward reactions as she sang. All he could do was keep eye contact with her, hoping she could read his approval and pride in his eyes, even though he didn't dare make it obvious.
They both sang the final verse. Then, as it ended and the music changed, Snape clenched his jaw, fighting to keep his feelings for Hermione from coming out as he sang "All I Ask of You."
Where Snape's voice had been velvety and seductive and full of sultry, forbidden promise during "Point of No Return," in "All I Ask of You," it was fragile and tender and wistfully hopeful. Hermione felt a thrill cascade over her at the contrast between the sensually dominant man and the tentative, heartsick boy who was daring to bare his soul for the first time in the song. Her heart pounded as she thought about how Snape had been so like the Phantom when he finally let his guard down to her Tuesday night. Again, she felt a pang of remorse for the way she would have to behave toward Snape in the play, since she felt quite the opposite.
Hermione closed her eyes for a moment at the ensuing pandemonium. As soon as it began, she sensed everyone's attention diverting from her and Snape and she opened her eyes to give him an apologetic look before taking a deep breath and steeling herself to be hateful. Snape understood and inclined his head a fraction as he did the same.
Snape once again belted out his lines as he began "Down Once More." He held the last note forcefully before viciously singing, "Why, you ask, was I bound and chained in this cold and dismal place? Not for any mortal sin, but the wickedness of my abhorrent face!" Then he continued, letting the anguish of his existence out as he sang, "Hounded out by everyone! Met with hatred everywhere! No kind word from anyone! No compassion anywhere! Christine, Christine... Why? Why?" He glared at Hermione blackly. Hermione set her lips and narrowed her eyes back at him. Around her, the chorus sang and Harry and McGonagall recited their lines. Then, the music changed.
Hermione drew herself up in righteous wrath as she spit, "Have you gorged yourself at last in your lust for blood? Am I now to be prey to your lust for flesh?"
Snape's voice and manner were so cold that some of the girls shivered as he retorted, "That fate which condemns me to wallow in blood has also denied me the joys of the flesh. This face...the infection, which poisons our love..." Then, his voice deepened into a morose brooding for, "This face, which earned a mother's fear and loathing. A mask, my first, unfeeling scrap of clothing." Hermione nearly quailed at the chilling, dangerous spark that kindled in his eyes as he ground out, "Pity comes too late...turn around and face your fate: an eternity of this before your eyes!"
She tilted her chin in a defiant show of bravery and replied, "This haunted face holds no horror for me now. It's in your soul that the true distortion lies." In her peripheral vision, she could see the rapt attention of several cast members, entranced by the battle of wills between her and Snape. There was a very tense pause, during which the whole Hall seemed to hold its breath. Then, Snape's face changed to one of almost manic glee.
His voice was thick with sadistic satisfaction as he sang, "Wait! I think, my dear, we have a guest!" Harry felt uncomfortable with the disturbing expression Snape turned on him, his eyes practically gleaming with malice. Snape continued, a feral grin on his face, "Sir, this is indeed, an unparalleled delight! I had rather hoped that you would come. And now, my wish comes true...you have truly made my night!"
Harry was glad to look down at his script, away from Snape's sinister glare, as he sang, "Free her! Do what you like, only free her! Have you no pity?"
Snape mocked him with, "Your lover makes a passionate plea."
Hermione jumped in. "Please, Raoul, it's useless..."
Harry, blushing furiously, kept his eyes on the page as he forced out, "I love her! Does that mean nothing? I love her! Show some compassion..."
Snape cut him off with a furious snarl. "The world showed no compassion to me!" Around him, students were transfixed by the terrifying realism behind Snape's performance. The fleeting thought that perhaps Snape felt that way crossed a few minds, but it was dashed from them by new, even more frightening displays as the scene continued.
Harry pleaded, "Christine, Christine. Let me see her..."
Snape was all untrustworthy accommodation as he said, "Be my guest, sir." A polite smile graced his face as he continued, "Monsieur, I bid you welcome. Did you think that I would harm her? Why should I make her pay, for the sins which are yours?" His pleasant expression morphed into a chilling one of insanity as he gleefully taunted Harry. "Order your fine horses now! Raise up your hand to the level of your eyes! Nothing can save you now, except perhaps Christine..."
Harry felt goose flesh rising along his arms and the hairs on the back of his neck standing up at the image of Snape looking so deranged, especially as it was directed at him! He swallowed thickly as he remembered the fear that had seized him the night Snape had caught him and Hermione in the corridor. Power had exuded from the man, and it was flowing off him like an aura now. Harry realized that in the play he would be almost suspended in a noose, and fervently hoped Snape wouldn't be the one in control of it!
Snape directed his attention to Hermione, his whole being radiating threatening power. "Start a new life with me. Buy his freedom with your love. Refuse me and you send your lover to his death. This is your choice. This is the point of no return!" By the time he had reached the end of his line, Snape was breathing heavily with emotion and exertion. Something about the role just sucked him in and possessed him beyond reason. His eyes were wild as he locked gazes with Hermione.
Hermione tried to give him as reassuring a look as possible without giving anything away to the others as she forced herself to sing, "The tears I might have shed for your dark fate grow cold and turn to tears of hate!"
Harry came in with his next lines and both Hermione and Snape jumped in to sing their overlapping parts. Dumbledore was so engrossed in their performance that he didn't even stop them to make each one do their part singly before blending. It was a mark of their talent and skill that they managed to interweave perfectly the first time through.
There was a break in the mingling of voices as Snape sang, dangerously, "So do you end your days with me? Or do you send him to his grave?"
Harry scowled fiercely at Snape as he shouted, "Why make her lie to you to save me?" Then, the three of them launched into the next bout of overlapping lines. The Hall was rife with tension as everyone watched and listened in rapt fascination.
Hermione's voice trailed singly as she finished, "you deceived me...I gave my mind blindly..."
Snape's voice held all the venomous hatred in the world as he spat, "You try my patience...make your choice!" Everyone sat, with bated breath, as Hermione gazed directly into Snape's eyes and set her jaw.
Resolutely, she infused all the sympathy she could into her voice as she sang, "Pitiful creature of darkness. What kind of life have you known? God give me courage to show you, you are not alone!" All through the group, wide-eyed stares were ricocheting between Snape and Hermione, with varying expressions of wonder, awe, apprehension, revulsion, and perplexity, as everyone thought about the fact that their Head Girl and their Potions Master would be kissing at that moment in the play. The music swelled and both Hermione and Snape were vibrating with pent-up tension as they stared at each other. Snape's scowl faded and his eyes widened. The fleeting expression of awe disappeared, to be replaced by one of agonized realization and defeat.
When the music changed, it was as if the Hall sighed, as the collective breath of virtually the entire cast was released at once. Both Snape and Hermione visibly relaxed from their fever pitch. There was a flurry of activity around the circle as people hurried to find their place to sing the chorus.
As the chorus sang, Snape chimed in with his lines, his voice dull and lifeless until he begged Raoul and Christine to leave so they wouldn't be found. Then it was wretched with misery. Finally, as he screamed his final entreaty, shudders rippled over the assembled group, his voice like a knife on raw nerves. The music wound down and Snape seemed to wilt into his chair, sagging back against it. His eyes were dull and his face paler than normal. Hermione felt her heart beating wildly as she fought the urge to rush to him and hold him.
The light, tinny sound of the music box in the recording began. Snape seemed to be staring into space, his eyes not focusing on anything within the group. A melancholy, rueful expression crossed his face as he softly sang, "Masquerade... Paper faces on parade... Masquerade... Hide your face so the world will never find you..." His eyes closed and his brow furrowed. His head tilted forward and long black locks tumbled over his cheeks as he almost whimpered, "Christine, I love you."
Hermione swallowed against the tightness of her throat as she watched him. She struggled to sing, "Say you'll share with me one love, one lifetime... Say the word and I will follow you..." Wrenching her gaze from Snape's crushed form, she glanced at Harry, to see him staring at Snape in awed consternation.
Harry mumbled, "Share each day with me..."
Hermione joined in with, "each night..." and they both sang, "each morning." Hermione looked away from Harry and back at Snape, to see him open his eyes and sweep his gaze over her on its way up.
Snape leant back in his chair and tilted his head back, gazing toward the enchanted ceiling. His whole being radiated resigned sadness, but with an undercurrent of martyred satisfaction as his voice resounded through the hushed Hall, singing, "You alone can make my song take flight...it's over now, the music of the night." As he finished the last note, his eyes closed again and he swallowed convulsively.
Hermione looked around the circle, seeing all eyes fixed on Snape. The music finally played out and Dumbledore shut the music box. The silence that followed was full of emotion. Slowly, all around, students started to shake off the thrall of the impassioned performance. Snape was still leaning back in his chair, gazing at the ceiling.
Hermione watched his Adam's apple bob multiple times as he kept swallowing. His chest rose and fell like a bellows winding down. Hermione was distracted from her study of Snape by the sound of sniffling and throat clearing. Several of the girls were wiping their eyes and noses and Dumbledore once again honked into that spotted handkerchief. A couple of boys were savagely coughing, muttering about things caught in their throats as they knuckled their eyes sheepishly.
Finally, Dumbledore broke the tableau by standing and deliberately applauding. McGonagall was the first to join him, followed by a wave of other cast members. Hermione rose slowly, clapping fiercely as she watched Snape, like to burst with pride. He blinked rapidly and finally tilted his head back to level, his gaze sliding across Hermione. She noticed that his eyes were glassy and felt a lump come to her throat again. By this point, the whole group was on their feet and looking at Snape. The Slytherins were beaming haughtily at the others with pride for their Head of House. Hermione felt herself smiling, and Dumbledore twinkled brightly at the Potions Master.
Snape was overwhelmed. He blinked around the group, owl-eyed with astonishment. Why are they applauding me? I didn't do anything extraordinary. Wanting to slink away from the attention, Snape tamped down the nervous heat that he could feel rising to his face. Uneasily, he straightened and stood in one fluid, graceful movement. Glancing around the circle at the varied expressions of awe, incredulity, appreciation, and pride, he schooled his face into one of humble gratitude and offered a courtly bow, hoping that would be enough to end the display.
Fortunately, it was. Dumbledore cried, "Spectacular! Simply amazing! Oh, I am so pleased with everyone. You have all done wonderfully, and I look forward to our next rehearsal! Until then, good night, and be sure to check the notice board!" The applause died away and the group broke up into small clumps of buzzing conversations.
Snape stood uncomfortably, seeing the students whispering furtively as they shot goggle-eyed glances back at him. He nonchalantly smoothed his robes, flicking imaginary specks from them. He felt Hermione looking at him and swept a glance over the Hall, noting that she was gazing at him thoughtfully, with a small smile hovering about her lips. He also noticed that the Weasley girl was right behind her, gazing speculatively between him and Hermione. He kept his gaze moving away from Hermione, both hoping that Hermione wouldn't give Ginny any cause for suspicion and wishing he could warn her that Ginny was right there. Cursing to himself, he settled his face into its customary sour expression and began to walk toward the doorway. He both hoped Hermione wouldn't follow him and wished she could.
Hermione was startled from her reverie by Ginny's voice near her shoulder. "Crazy, huh? Who knew?"
Hermione spun and raised her eyebrows in surprised confusion. "Knew what?"
Ginny nodded in Snape's direction and pursed her lips. "That Snape could do that! Crazy, huh?" She tilted her head to one side and quirked one corner of her mouth up.
Hermione glanced at the retreating form of her Potions Master and blinked. Rallying her acting skills, she flashed a look of incredulous surprise at Ginny and grimaced. "I know! Honestly, it's amazing, isn't it? Last week and now tonight... You're right. Who knew, indeed?" Hermione ignored the voice inside her that cried out, I know, I know! I know how passionate he can be! I've seen the emotions he keeps buried!
Ginny shrugged and rolled her eyes, smiling. Jerking her head in the direction of the doorway, she turned and started out, Hermione in her wake. Looking over her shoulder at Harry and Ron with the other Gryffindor boys, she leant toward Hermione and whispered sympathetically, "Guess some of that was kinda' awkward, huh?"
Hermione glanced back as well and realized what Ginny was talking about. Grateful to change the subject from Snape, Hermione nodded. "Yes. Very much so. Did you hear Harry when he had to sing, 'I love her!'? I just wanted to crawl into a hole and die!" She sighed. "I hope things'll get better as time goes by."
Snape had exited the Hall and started down the corridor, his senses strained for any indication that Hermione had come out too. He reached the stairs to the dungeon and paused, glancing back at the students who were making their way down the corridor in pairs or small groups. Hermione was not one of them. He turned and descended the stairs, pausing again when he was out of sight of the corridor. Backing against the wall in the shadows, he settled himself to wait until he could see Hermione on her way up to the Tower.
Hermione and Ginny were walking along the corridor. As they passed the spot where Snape had caught Harry and Hermione together, Hermione shuddered. Ginny noticed and looked at her friend quizzically. "What's wrong?"
Hermione jerked her head at the dark alcove and murmured, "That's where Snape caught us." Involuntarily, she quickened her pace. Ginny gazed wide-eyed at the spot before hurrying to catch up with Hermione.
Snape heard the footsteps and voices in the corridor at the top of the stairs. He held his breath, listening hard. Suddenly, he saw bushy brown hair and his chest tightened. He heard rapid footsteps and a shining red head joined her. Ginny's voice floated down to him.
"So you and Harry really are over? Are you sure you won't change your mind and give him another chance?"
Snape froze. Even his heart seemed to stop beating for a moment. A trickle of icy dread threaded through his centre.
Above him, Hermione paused and turned to the other girl. She looked around before replying. Snape felt his heart start beating again at the finality in her tone.
"I will not change my mind! Ginny, it's like if you were to try to date Ron..."
"Eww!"
"Exactly! Did he put you up to this?" Even Snape knew that the warning tone in her voice boded no good to whomever incited it.
There was a strained silence. Finally, Ginny sighed in defeat. "No, not exactly. Ron wanted me to ask you since he was afraid to. He just wanted to be absolutely sure so he could talk Harry out of trying again. He understands. He says it was weird for you two, so he gets the idea."
Hermione snorted. Snape felt a flash of jealous anger that Hermione had done anything with that Weasley boy.
"Yeah, all it took was one kiss for us to figure it out. I wish it had been as fast with Harry, so we could have avoided all this horrid tension!"
Snape's anger subsided a little at the revelation that it was just one kiss, but he still wanted to have her only for himself. He gazed up at the back of her head, her long curly hair darting every which way. He was struck with the desire to bury his face in her hair.
Suddenly, Hermione felt a tingle on the nape of her neck. She suppressed a shiver. Her brain started processing the event with previously acquired information and realized that Snape must be around. Her body seemed to come alive and buzzed with the energy that attuned to Snape.
Realizing the opportunity she had at hand, Hermione smiled to herself and said firmly, "Harry is one of my dearest friends. But that's all. Besides, he's still a boy. And I think I'd much rather find a man..." She quirked one eyebrow at Ginny, who grinned back, giggling.
Snape felt a surge wash over him at her words and the implications contained therein. He swallowed back a groan as his cock sprang to life.
Hermione glanced toward the Great Hall. Quietly, she muttered, "Look, here come the boys. Let's go. Race you to the common room?" She glanced challengingly at Ginny.
Ginny smirked in response and said, "Deal. Ready? One, two, three, go!" She immediately pelted off up the stairs.
Snape was gazing up at Hermione and was completely stunned when, as soon as Ginny took off, Hermione whirled, swept the dungeon stairs with a dazzling smile and blew a kiss to the air before spinning and racing off after her friend, giggling.
How did she know I was here? Snape reeled. He heard the boys approaching and flew swiftly down to his quarters, still trying to figure out how Hermione had known he was watching.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)