19- Anticipation
Chapter 20 of 84
Good_WitchHermione tells her friends about the planned trip to her parents? Friday night. Needless to say, none of them are too keen on the idea. Snape keeps her after class to go over the details and Hermione leaves him with a threat- or is it a promise? Later that night the cast practices their spells and Snape puts on quite a show with McGonagall. Who knew he was so good with his wand?
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Author's Note: This chapter is supposed to have a lot of things set up in it that we'll see come to fruition later, so bear with me if it seems not as exciting as other chapters. The next chapter or two will make up for the lack of action, I promise!
Chapter 19 - Anticipation
Hermione was on her way back into the castle from the owlery when she heard shouts behind her. She turned to see Ginny, Ron, and Harry jogging after her, windblown and sweaty from their practice. She paused long enough for them to catch up and they walked into the Entrance Hall together.
"How was practice?" she asked them politely.
The other three exchanged pleased glances before turning back to Hermione. Ginny spoke up. "It went really well! We've managed to find a rhythm within the team since we've been together for a while now." Then her face screwed up into a moue of dissatisfaction. "That's why next year is going to be horrible! After you all leave, we'll have to find a new Keeper and Seeker, and nobody can be as good as Harry."
Ron buffeted Ginny, demanding, "Hey! What am I? Chopped shrivelfig?" Harry suppressed a smug grin and looked away modestly.
Ginny glared at Ron as she punched him back. "Well! Honestly, Ron, you know you weren't very good when you started. You've got a lot better, but... Harry's just a natural, you know?"
Ron shot a scowl at Harry, who attempted a look of wide-eyed innocence as he shrugged elaborately. Hermione laughed aloud at their by-play. Ron muttered, "Some best friend... my own sister likes him better... and now my other best friend is laughing at me..."
Hermione flung an arm around Ron's hunched shoulders and gave him a sympathetic look. "Aw, Ron, I wasn't laughing at you, just in your general direction." Ron wrinkled his nose and her and stuck his tongue out. Everyone laughed. As they passed the entrance to the Great Hall, Ron blinked, looking as if he had been struck by a thought. He slowed, looking from the Hall to Hermione and back. The others trailed off in their laughter and came to a halt with him.
Ron squinted at Hermione and asked, "Say, what did Dumbledore want you to go to his office for?" Hermione shrank in on herself, her face paling a bit, and the others all looked at her with sudden concern.
"Yeah, that's right! What happened, 'Mione? Did you get in trouble for something?" Ginny prodded.
Harry even piped up. "Why did Snape have to escort you? Was he being horrible to you again?"
Hermione looked nervously around the corridor and gestured for them to follow her up to the Tower. "No, I wasn't in trouble, and no, Snape wasn't horrible to me. I'll tell you all about it, but let's get upstairs." She turned and hastened down the corridor and up the stairs to the common room. The others eagerly followed her. They clambered through the portrait hole and made themselves comfortable in their favourite seats, Ginny, Harry, and Ron gazing expectantly at Hermione.
Hermione took a deep breath and began. "Dumbledore wanted to ask me about the play, since he found out I had seen it before. Seems he has no idea how to stage it and wanted information. Well, I told him he could go see it, since it's playing in London, but he said he wouldn't have time. So, he's sending me to see it again, and he'll take my memories out into the Pensieve to look at everything here. I was coming from the owlery just now, having sent the note back to my folks about going to see it Friday night." She paused, noting the looks of surprise and interest on the faces around her.
Ginny gazed at her thoughtfully and said, "How did he find out you had seen it?"
Hermione cleared her throat and tried to sound nonchalant as she replied, "Apparently, Professor Snape told him."
"What? How did he know?" Harry sputtered.
Hermione swallowed nervously and said, "I mentioned it in our first meeting, after he asked me how I knew my part already. Seems he was a bit put out that I knew more than he did." She forced herself to smirk a bit, knowing the others would expect it.
Ron snorted and sat back, grinning at the others. "I'll bet! Wish I could have seen that..."
"So, how are you getting to London Friday night?" Ginny asked.
Hermione tucked a wayward curl behind her ear as she glanced about. "Uh, well... I'm actually going to visit my folks and stay for dinner before going to the play. Then, they've arranged for us to have a guided tour of the theatre the next morning."
Ginny pounced on her words. "Us? Who else is going? You said Dumbledore's too busy."
Hermione glanced at them and saw their perplexed expressions. But Ginny's expression was sharp and shrewdly calculating.
Hermione's grimace was genuine as she answered, knowing what her friends' reactions would be. "H-He's sending Professor Snape as well, since he's had more experience with gathering information to be used with a Pensieve."
It was like a small bomb had gone off within the group, as everyone reacted to her news. Ron rocked back in his seat, an oath hurtling from his lips as his face contorted in disgust. Harry shot up straight and his eyes kindled like green fire as he scowled fiercely, his hands clenching in his lap. Even Ginny gasped and cried, "Snape?" Her eyebrows shot to her hairline and she regarded Hermione, stunned.
Ron stammered, "Y-You have to go see the play with Snape? Bloody hell! A whole evening with the great git! That's ruddy awful..."
Ginny narrowed her eyes again and asked, "Wait. You said you're going to have dinner with your folks before the play. So, is Snape going to be there for that too?"
Hermione nodded. Ginny shook her head slightly and blinked a few times. Harry spat, "I feel sorry for you and your parents, 'Mione. Who'd want to have to see that greasy git at dinner? It'd be enough to make me lose my appetite." He shuddered.
Hermione bit back an angry retort. Mustn't make anyone suspicious. Act like you agree with them. She contented herself with a noncommittal shrug, looking away from Harry's glower.
Ginny pressed on. "And you're going to get a tour of the theatre too? When is that?"
"Saturday morning. Early. Like, at 8:00."
Ginny quirked one corner of her mouth up in a rueful smirk. "Well then, I guess I'll have to wait until after you get back again Saturday to ask you all about the show. I doubt you'd want me pestering you when you get back late Friday night since you'll have to get up so early the next morning."
Hermione swallowed and took a shaky breath. "Well... actually... I wouldn't be back that night anyway. My parents have offered to let us stay the night, and Dumbledore accepted."
Silence reigned after her revelation. The others were too dumbfounded to even snipe in response. They stared at her, completely gobsmacked. Ginny recovered first. In a voice barely above a whisper, she said slowly, "You mean... Snape... is going to... stay the night... at your house? With you there?" Her eyes were wide.
Ron made a retching noise in his throat and moaned, "Ginny, don't say it! It's too horrid!" He gave Hermione a pitying look, turning rather green.
Harry looked as if he had been petrified. He sat, staring stonily at Hermione, his expression a mixture of envy, hatred, and disgust.
Hermione waved her hand dismissively. "Oh, stop it. It's not like I'll be sleeping with him..." Her voice faltered as she felt a pang of desire at her own words. Hastily, she continued. "There's a guest room, you know."
Ginny favoured Hermione with a sceptical look and said, "You know, I was jealous that you were going to see the play, but now, I most certainly am not!" Shivering lightly, she heaved a deep sigh and turned to the boys. "Anyway, I don't know about you two, but I need a shower before dinner." She stood and stretched. "See you lot back here in 20 minutes?" The boys blinked distractedly and nodded. Hermione stood and worried her hands, looking sheepishly at them.
"Yeah, Ginny. I'll meet you to go down to dinner. See you later." Hermione hurried to leave the common room, retreating to her room. She heard the boys whispering behind her as she left, no doubt about her having Snape stay at her house after seeing the play.
It's not like I'll be sleeping with him...
Hermione's face flushed and a tingle washed over her as she remembered her words. She hurled herself into her room and slammed the door behind her, leaning against it, panting. Tilting her head back against the wood, she closed her eyes. Oh gods! Now that I've thought of it, I'll never get it out of my head! She pushed away from the door and flopped on her bed. The heat that had started in her belly was spreading through her, and she could feel her juices moistening her knickers. She squeezed her legs together in a vain attempt to ease the throbbing.
Get a hold of yourself! This is madness. You can't go to dinner like this. He'll be able to tell! Calm down. Be rational. She pressed her palms against her eyes in frustration. Oh Merlin, this is going to be a long week...
Twenty minutes later, the four friends were down in the Great Hall for dinner, still rather subdued after Hermione's news. Hermione schooled her expression into one of indifference, hoping the others would follow suit. All the same, she was both disappointed and utterly relieved to enter the Hall and see that Snape was not at the High Table.
At least he's not here to see the state I'm in!
She saw the others' furtive glances at the High Table, but ignored them. Finally, Ginny started talking about the earlier practice, and the boys relaxed. Hermione only half-listened to their conversation, her mind spinning with the excitement and consternation of her situation.
I hope it won't be too awkward at dinner with my parents. Snape's not quite the easy conversationalist... And I hope my folks don't do anything to embarrass me either! Blast and damn! Dumbledore sure does have a knack for making people do things they wouldn't normally do, doesn't he? She cast a look up at the headmaster at the High Table, noting that Snape still hadn't arrived. I wonder if he's even going to come to dinner tonight... He certainly didn't seem happy about the whole idea. Oh gods, I hope he doesn't hate me for all this! Hermione writhed in spirit as she sat waiting for the others to finish eating. Ron noticed her sitting there, and looked at her, concerned.
"You all right, 'Mione?" The others turned to look at her. "You're not eating."
Hermione shook her head and huffed in dismissal. "Not everyone has a cast iron stomach like you, Ron. I'm fine. I'm just not very hungry." She really wasn't, since her stomach had knotted up in anxiety over Snape's reaction. She looked up and saw Harry scowling. She forced a watery smile and said, "Really, I'm just not that hungry. I'm fine. I think I'll go have a bath and read. I'll see you lot later."
Harry looked down, scowling deeply, and glanced back up at her, pain in his green eyes. "You'll holler if you need anything, right? I... uh, that is, we don't want you to feel bad. If there's anything I...uh, we can do to help, just say so." He blushed furiously as he stammered.
Hermione nodded and turned to go. Ginny and Ron exchanged a knowing glance over Harry's telling display. Harry avoided their eyes and focused on his plate as Hermione left the Great Hall.
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Snape decided that he didn't feel up to dinner in the Great Hall that night, not after Dumbledore's surprises that day. Besides, it probably wouldn't be a good idea to go amongst students smelling of Firewhisky.
He had been sitting in front of his fireplace for hours, mulling his prospects over several liberal shots of Old Ogden's. He had come to the startling conclusion that since Voldemort's demise, there was no one he'd be more loath to meet than Hermione's parents. Especially as he and Hermione were in the situation of still having to hide their feelings for each other.
I've never... what would this be if we were closer in age? Gone courting? He snorted violently at the old-fashioned notion. Please, that's not what they call it nowadays... Not that I have any idea what they do call it, considering my lack of prospects over the past twenty-odd years. His fingers drummed against the arm of the chair. Perhaps you should view this as an opportunity to see if there could even be a future for you, based on what you can glean from her family. Then again, maybe once she's faced with the idea of having to come clean to her parents about you, she'll realize that it's a ridiculous idea and you'll get your answer even sooner. Snape scowled into the flames, trying to ignore the panic that fluttered in his chest at that idea.
Oh bollocks! Just put it all out of your head! There's nothing you can do about it, and brooding won't make anything better. You'll follow your instructions and behave as politely as possible under the circumstances. You're not there to win a popularity contest! You have an assignment. Just like you've had for the past twenty years... Only this time you won't have to face Crucios or possible death!
A sudden image of a faceless Mr. Granger hurling himself bodily at Snape after seeing him snogging his little girl flashed across Snape's mind. He choked on his Firewhisky and spluttered. He ground his palms against his eyes in an attempt to eradicate the image, to no avail. Groaning, he sank back in his chair and closed his eyes.
Hang on a bit. Scratch that... Right. Crucios: no. Possible death: yes.
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Sunday, the cast saw the next rehearsals posted on the notice board.
"Wednesday November 19, 7:00 p.m. in the Great Hall: spell practice
All actors required to attend.
New spells will be issued for glamours for Draco, Pansy, and Professor Snape
All ballet dancers will be issued enchantments for ballet slippers.
Saturday November 22, 7:00 p.m. in the Great Hall: block from beginning Auction through Hannibal
Actors required to attend: Everyone except Professor Snape
Bring your scripts and a pencil to copy your blocking.
- A. Dumbledore, Director"
Hermione spent time with Harry and Ron, working on their homework the way they usually had done before all of the awkwardness. At one point, when Harry had left the common room for a bathroom run, Hermione squeezed Ron's hand and whispered, "Thank you."
Ron turned a confused look on her and asked, "For what?"
Hermione smiled and murmured, "For everything you've done to help smooth things over with me and Harry. You and Ginny both. I just want you to know that I'm grateful."
Ron smiled warmly at her and patted her hand. "No worries. I'm just glad things are getting back to normal. I am sorry it didn't work out though. I thought you two were pretty great together." He paused, seeing her expression cloud and her body stiffen, and pressed her hand harder, effectively stopping her from launching into the tirade that was clearly on its way. "I know! I know. Really. You don't have to go through it all again for me. I understand."
Hermione shut her mouth with a snap and relaxed. Sheepishly smiling again at him, she nodded and looked down. "I really appreciate your support, Ron. It means a lot."
Ron twinkled at her reassuringly and said, "'Mione, you will always have my support. Whatever you want, I'm there to back you. What else are friends for?"
Hermione squinted at him pensively. In a low voice, she said slowly, "I'm really glad to hear you say that. Just be ready for me to hold you to it..." She looked away, frowning thoughtfully.
Ron's brow furrowed. Perplexed, he asked, "Uh, 'Mione, is there something going on?"
Hermione shook her head. "No. I just know that when I do fall for someone, Harry's not going to be very pleased, and it's comforting to know that you'll be happy for me." She pinned him with an intense stare. "You will, right? That's what you said. It won't matter who it is; you'll support me?"
Ron, taken aback by her intensity, blinked rapidly and stammered, "Y-yeah, of course. If you're happy, I'm happy. Simple. End of story. Are you okay?"
Hermione relaxed again and flashed him a smile. "Yes. I am. Just... don't talk about this around Harry, okay? I don't think he's ready to think about it yet."
Ron nodded vigorously, eyes wide. He glanced up at Harry, who was returning, and then quickly looked down at his book. Harry joined them again and they continued working. Hermione was relieved. Like Ron had said, things seemed to be returning to normal, and Hermione hoped that her friendship with Harry would eventually get back to its solid roots.
Wednesday morning, Hermione made her way to the Potions classroom with a nervous flutter in her stomach. It would be the first time since the meeting in Dumbledore's office that she would be close to Snape. They had managed to avoid each other in the corridors and the Great Hall. Several times, Snape hadn't even come to the meals in the Hall. Hermione kept a tight hold on her feelings at all times. Well, except for when she was alone in her room at night.
Ever since her comment, "It's not like I'll be sleeping with him," she had been plagued by highly erotic thoughts and dreams involving the Potions Master. She had even resorted to taking matters into her own hands, so to speak, to relieve some of the tension from being in an almost constant state of pent-up arousal.
And now she was going to have to make it through an entire lesson with the object of her desires in front of her. So close and yet so far. She arranged her materials on her table and sat rigidly on her stool, waiting for Snape to enter the classroom.
Snape burst into the room, stalking quickly to the front. He spun on his heel and swept the room with a baleful glare.
Hermione gasped as he entered and felt a liquid warmth in her knickers. Closing her eyes, trying to maintain a façade of composure, she took a deep breath and set her jaw before looking up at the tall man gazing down on them. She ignored the buzzing in her body, the reaction that was always attuned to Snape's presence.
Snape whipped around and wrote instructions on the board, taking the time to do so by hand so he could fight his own reaction to Hermione in the front row. His chest tightened so much that he almost felt short of breath, and his stomach seemed to turn into a block of ice. He realized afresh how much he was falling for her, and he was terrified.
The more he cared, the more she would be able to hurt him.
Finally sure that his face bore no tell-tale sign of his inner turmoil, he turned and raked the class with a supercilious sneer. "Instructions are on the board. Begin." With that, he sat at his desk and immediately dragged a parchment from the stack to grade. Hearing nothing but scratching quills, he chanced a peek through his hair at Hermione. Her face was flushed, but she was focused on her task.
Apparently both of them were getting better at controlling their emotions, as the lesson went smoothly, with no occasion for them to give themselves away. As the period neared the end, Snape looked up and announced, "Clear your stations. Turn in your samples. For homework, read chapters 26 and 27 and compare and contrast the potion types therein. At least two feet of parchment!" He paused as the students began cleaning up, eyeing Hermione. "Miss Granger, please see me after class."
Hermione glanced up, startled. Darting her eyes around the room, she swallowed apprehensively and answered, "Yes, sir."
"Class is dismissed." The students began pouring out of the classroom, but Hermione stayed put. Snape stepped around his desk and leant against it again, arms crossed as he glared at everyone until they were gone. Waving his wand, he closed the door and locked it, casting a Silencing Charm for good measure. Finally alone, he looked at Hermione and saw the hunger in her eyes as she gazed at him. Clearing his suddenly tight throat, he said in a low voice, "I have the details for you regarding our departure Friday." He felt his eyes flicker away from hers uneasily and cursed himself for being so foolish.
Hermione felt her pulse throb in response and flushed. Gamely trying to act nonchalant, she inquired, "Oh? What are they?"
Snape cleared his throat again and said, "Dumbledore has decided that as I am the more experienced wizard, I will control the Apparition. We are to wear Muggle clothing and walk out to the Apparition point outside the front gate. I am to get the coordinates for our destination from your mind. I am authorized to use Legilimency for that." He cut a sheepish glance at her before looking away again. "He has stated that for security, I am to cast a concealment charm before we Apparate so that we will not be seen as we arrive at your parents' house. When we get there, we are to adjourn to a secluded area to become visible again before we approach the door. We are to be there by 5:30 for dinner. After dinner, we will make our way to the theatre for the show, and return. The next morning, we will go back to the theatre for the tour, and Apparate back here when it's done. When we return to Hogwarts, we are to meet Dumbledore in his office to deposit our memories into his Pensieve. Then, that evening, we can retrieve them at rehearsal after he has retained whatever information he needs." Schooling his expression into one of indifference, he looked at Hermione and added, "Do you have any questions?"
Hermione blinked and said, "How are we to get to the theatre? Are we Apparating there too?"
"He didn't specify. I can't Apparate somewhere I haven't seen. Do you remember the theatre enough to give me coordinates?"
Hermione scowled thoughtfully. "No. We could always ask my parents to drive us, or get a cab, but it could get expensive."
Snape twitched. Dryly, he drawled, "I'd rather not ride in a Muggle vehicle. Where is the theatre? Perhaps there is a wizard location near it we can get to."
Hermione responded absently, "It's at Haymarket, in London." Suddenly, she pinned him with an intense stare. "You said you can't Apparate to a place you've never seen, right?" Snape nodded, clearly aggrieved, but Hermione barrelled on. "And you can get coordinates from my mind. So, if you saw a picture, would that be enough?" She was obviously excited.
Snape thought for a moment. Slowly, he said, "I suppose that should work. It's much the same as me taking the picture you have of your parents' home from your mind. Once I have seen the point to which I wish to Apparate, I can do so." He looked up at her from under beetled brows. "Why? Do you have a picture?"
She flashed him a dazzling smile and said, "No. But I'm pretty sure we can have one when we get there. I'll just have to owl my folks again."
Snape's breath caught at the sparkle in her eyes and her smile. He realized he was staring at her and wrenched his gaze away.
Hermione noticed that he wasn't looking at her very much and felt her gut twist in anxiety. Sobering quickly, she leant toward Snape and said softly, "Are you okay?"
He shot a glance at her, his eyebrows raised, and snapped, "Of course. Whatever do you mean?"
Hermione stepped in front of him and hesitantly laid her hand against his forearm where it was still in front of his chest. As soon as she touched him, a jolt shot through them both. Snape inhaled sharply and Hermione gazed up at him, locking eyes with him.
In a low voice, she murmured, "Are you angry with me for this whole situation? I know you don't want to do any of this."
Snape grimaced and muttered, "You are correct in thinking that I am not entirely comfortable with this arrangement, but I am not misguided enough to hold it against you." He looked down at her, his miserable dismay clear in his black eyes.
Hermione lifted her hand from his forearm and cupped his cheek. Snape stiffened, but found himself leaning into her touch involuntarily. Hermione licked her lips at her sudden increase in desire. Snape saw it and felt a tingle in his centre. Hermione stepped closer to him and started to slide her hand up into his hair, her eyes half-closed. Snape realized she was about to close the gap to kiss him again, and he held his hand up between them, stopping her. Frustration flashed in her eyes and she voiced a petulant whine.
Holding her with his stern gaze, Snape lifted his hand and covered hers against his face. He wrapped his long, slender fingers around her hand and pulled it gently away from him, turning his head to press a soft, warm kiss to her palm. He felt her fingers trembling in his and his gaze softened. He ignored the fierce pounding in his veins and purred, "All in due time, my dear... All in due time." Firmly putting her away from him, he gazed down at her and added, "Meet me in the Entrance Hall at 5:00 Friday with everything you may need to take with you. No doubt I'll see you tonight at the meeting. Now, hurry along to class."
He waved his wand at the door, removing the charm and unlocking the door. Hermione fixed him with an incredulous look of frustration, and he felt his lips twitch, holding back a laugh. Huffing, glaring at him pointedly, Hermione gathered her things to leave. Before she turned to go, she narrowed her eyes and pinned him with a meaningful glare, hissing, "This isn't over, Severus..."
Snape's eyebrows shot up in response and Hermione smirked triumphantly as she spun on her heel and flounced out of the classroom, leaving a stunned Potions Master in her wake.
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That evening, the cast gathered again in the Great Hall. McGonagall and Dumbledore began circulating through the group, making sure each person was correctly casting his or her costume spells. After getting everyone started, Dumbledore called Draco, Pansy, and Snape to him.
"Professor Flitwick has been good enough to provide me with the appropriate glamours you will need as part of your costumes. Miss Parkinson, Mr. Malfoy, you both will require glamours that will make you look, shall we say, heavier than you are. And Severus, you, of course, will need the glamour for the Phantom's face." Pansy and Draco exchanged dismayed looks at the idea that they would both have to be made to look... fat.
Draco spoke up. "Headmaster, is this absolutely necessary?"
But before Dumbledore could respond, Snape cut in, silkily, "Mr. Malfoy, have you not paid attention to the play? The Phantom clearly says that your character must lose some weight..." He smirked at the pale blond boy. "And I believe that it is a traditional idea that, in opera, diva sopranos were rather... formidable in size as well." Snape turned his smirk on the pug-nosed girl. Dumbledore chuckled.
"Don't worry about your costume spells. Once you've cast the glamour on yourself, your costumes will adjust to fit as well," Dumbledore said reassuringly. "Are you quite ready, then?"
Draco and Pansy looked at each other in chagrin and nodded at Dumbledore. Dumbledore cast Draco's glamour first, immediately followed by Pansy's. Snape watched in fascination and amusement as they seemed to inflate. The four of them were distracted by titters from among the rest of the cast. As one, they turned to see the students sputtering with laughter as McGonagall sternly scolded them. Draco and Pansy scowled and glared at the rest. Dumbledore stepped forward and swept a sober gaze over the group, silencing them with his unspoken reprimand. As the other students went back to their own spell work, Dumbledore turned to Snape.
"Now, Severus, I have taken into account the shape of your mask as well as the description of your character in the play to create your glamour. Are you ready?"
Snape inclined his head. Dumbledore nodded and cast the glamour. Snape felt the magic tingling on his face. He heard Draco and Pansy gasp at the sight and turned to look at them. They were gaping at him in horror. Suddenly, he was startled by a muffled shriek from the group, which caused every head to swivel in his direction. A spatter of answering gasps and cries washed through the group. He scowled at everyone, no doubt looking even more frightening. Dumbledore turned once again to the group.
"Settle down, everyone. There is no need for such a commotion. Professor Flitwick has done a remarkable job with this glamour, has he not?" He gazed amiably over them. A few people nodded slowly.
Snape looked at Hermione and saw her gazing at him sympathetically. She caught his eye and gave him a faint, encouraging smile. Snape continued his scan of the room and noticed that Ginny was eying Hermione, frowning thoughtfully. She glanced back at Snape and blanched before nervously jerking her eyes away from him.
Damn! That Weasley girl is going to be trouble; I can just see it! I have to remember to talk to Hermione about her. Well, I suppose I can tell her Friday. We'll have plenty of time then... He scowled again, watching the students avoiding his gaze.
Dumbledore handed each of them pieces of parchment with the glamour spells on them, leaning close to Snape saying, "Now, Severus, remember what I said before. No terrorizing the students on your night patrols with this new acquisition." He smiled and twinkled at him. Snape rolled his eyes, aggrieved.
Snape stepped away from the chuckling man and muttered, "Finite Incantatem." The glamour disappeared and he pocketed the parchment. Dumbledore called to all of the girls who were to do ballet in the play and began instructing them about their slippers, which would now be bewitched to dance properly.
Snape glanced at the girls. They were all listening attentively to Dumbledore. At his direction, they all changed to their ballet costumes. Snape jerked his eyes away at the sight of Trelawney again. Carefully, he focused on Hermione. As usual, beside her stood Ginny Weasley. Hermione flicked a glance at him. A moment later, Ginny glanced at him too. He instantly wrenched his gaze away from Hermione. He scanned the room before idly sweeping his gaze over the girls again. Ginny's eyes were darting back and forth between Hermione and Snape, her brow furrowed.
Bloody hell. She's far too suspicious. I should just leave. At least then there's no way she can catch anything between us!
Snape slowly sidled away from the group, heading for the doorway. He was several steps away when he was stopped by McGonagall.
"Severus," she called, as she detached herself from a pair of practicing students. "Where are you going?" She minced up to him, frowning.
Snape glared down his nose at her and said, "I am leaving. Dumbledore gave me my glamour, so I needn't stay any longer."
McGonagall quirked an eyebrow at him and pursed her lips. Firmly planting her hands on her hips, she drawled, "On the contrary, Severus. The whole cast is here to practice their costume spells. You included. Now, get to work." She smirked at him, clearly enjoying exercising authority over him.
Snape stared at her in disbelief. Icily, he bit out, "Are you questioning my skills, Minerva?" His voice was full of warning.
She thinned her lips at him and crossed her arms. "We aren't making potions here. Your task is to practice."
Snape's eyebrows climbed and his jaw clenched. He felt his pulse quicken with fury. Locking eyes with her, he slowly drew his wand. After a beat, McGonagall raised one eyebrow as if to say, "Well, get on with it." Snape narrowed his eyes.
In a deadly calm voice, he spat each of his transfiguration incantations, whipping through his costumes lightning fast. Each costume was a blur as his robes changed so quickly. Then, by way of heaping coals of fire, he snarled his glamour spell as well, taking morbid satisfaction at the startled look on her face as she jerked in surprise. Abruptly ending his spell, he sneered at her.
"Satisfied? And, please, Minerva, do I have your permission to go now?" His voice dripped with sarcasm as he mocked her.
McGonagall drew herself up and huffed. "Very well then. Good night." She flicked an irritated glance at him and hurried away to another student.
Snape noticed that several students were shooting furtive glances at him, having obviously witnessed the confrontation. He saw Hermione's lips twitching, like she was holding back a laugh. Ginny was casting owl-eyed looks his way. He straightened to his full height, smoothed his robes, and spun smartly on his heel to stride out of the Hall. He fought the desire to look back.
As the girls stepped away to practice their ballet steps, Ginny leant in to whisper to Hermione, "Wow! That was wild!"
Hermione looked at her and asked, "What?"
"That whole scene with McGonagall and Snape! Did you see how fast he flew through those spells?"
"Oh, yeah. It was something, wasn't it?" Hermione kept her eyes down, looking at her feet as the slippers made her dance.
Ginny regarded Hermione solemnly. "Man, I hope you don't make him angry Friday. If he's that quick, it could be a bad thing to do!"
Hermione rolled her eyes. "I'm sure it will all be fine. Really, Gin, stop worrying about it! He's really not that bad."
Ginny squinted at her in disbelief. "Whatever, 'Mione. I've got almost six years that say otherwise. So, you'll have to come up with something pretty extraordinary to prove he's not so bad."
Hermione thinned her lips. Still looking at her feet, she muttered sardonically, "Fine. I'll keep that in mind." At that point, the slippers were taking over for more complicated steps, and conversation became almost impossible. Hermione was grateful for the reprieve.
In a determined tone, she said to herself, If I have my way, I will have something pretty extraordinary to prove he's not as bad as everyone thinks. She smiled to herself. Of course, to me, Severus himself is what's extraordinary... I can't wait for Friday night!
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)