29- Crisis Averted
Chapter 30 of 84
Good_WitchHermione takes the next steps in her plans for Christmas, and Ginny gives Harry something to think about. And somehow, Snape manages to witness it!
ReviewedAuthor's Note: Just a warning: there's quite a bit of Harry and Ginny in this chapter. Don't worry, it won't become a regular thing.
Nicole aka Good_Witch
Chapter 29- Crisis Averted
Dinner that Saturday was a subdued affair, since those who had gone to Hogsmeade were fair knackered. Hermione was pleased to see another owl coming toward her. Ron and Harry looked mildly interested in what she was getting, but Ginny remarked, "You're awfully popular lately. What are you expecting now?"
"Oh, I owled my folks to send me some contact info to help me get started on my Christmas gifts, and this is it." She thanked the owl and offered it a spear of broccoli. It screeched, and she rolled her eyes and handed it a chicken bone instead. Hooting its appeasement, it flew off.
The four of them sniggered at the owl's indignation. Hermione scanned the list of photo shops. Seized with the compulsion to begin immediately, she gulped down the last of her pumpkin juice and wiped her mouth with a napkin, folding the letter and stuffing it in her pocket. "I need to go get started on this. I'll see you all later." She stood and flicked a glance at the High Table. Snape was staring blankly at her, perplexed at her sudden departure. She shrugged and quirked one corner of her mouth up. He scowled, but inclined his head, peering through his hair at her, so as not to draw attention. Briskly, she strode out of the Hall, disappointed that she couldn't explain to Snape why she was leaving so abruptly.
Out in the corridor, her stride faltered as she was struck with an idea. Oh! Now I have even more messages to send! She grinned to herself...and it was a rather Slytherin grin for a Gryffindor.
Up in her room, she sat at her desk and began writing her letters. She wrote the same thing over several times, to send to the various photo shops, but the last letter was different.
"Dear Fred and George,
I know this isn't one of your official order forms, but I know exactly what I want, so I was hoping you could just send it to me directly. I need two bottles of your invisible ink. That's it. I'm going to enclose payment, and I know you won't mind sending me whatever the change is...you're tricksters, not thieves. I really need it as soon as possible, if you can manage it. Hope your shop is doing well, and I hope you two are also. Things are really busy here with the play rehearsals and getting ready for the holidays. Ron and Ginny are both doing really well in rehearsals. You all should be proud of them. Thanks in advance for your help, and, as always, discretion is a must.
Thanks!
Hermione"
Once again grinning in satisfaction, she sealed all of the letters and prepared them to take to the owlery the next morning. Pleased that her self-appointed tasks were complete, she turned to the packages on her bed. Her purchases from Hogsmeade had been delivered, and the house-elves had brought them up to her room. She unwrapped each parcel and looked over the items, arranging them in piles. She had managed to almost complete her shopping all in that one trip to Hogsmeade. Once she had the photos copied, she could put them in the frames and wrap the gifts. Smiling, she hid the gifts in her closet.
Returning to her bed, she stared at the chocolate. How am I going to get the mousse made? I don't have the facilities up here... She pondered the chocolate, frowning in thought. Suddenly, her face brightened and she snatched up the recipe, barrelling out of the room.
Several hours had passed since she had retreated to her room. She burst into the common room, quickly glancing about. Damn! Harry's not here. There were a few students lounging about, conversing in low voices. None of her mates were there, so she began the climb to the boy's dormitory. Reaching the seventh years' dorm, she paused, hearing them talking. Taking a deep breath, she knocked on the door. The talking stopped for a moment and she heard Ron call, "Yeah? What's up?"
"It's Hermione. Can I talk to Harry for a moment?"
There was silence on the other side of the door for a long moment. Then, it was flung open and a warily curious Harry eyed her, his pyjama shirt half buttoned.
"What's up?" Harry tried hard to sound casual, but he was too perplexed to succeed. Hermione looked past him and saw the other boys watching them avidly. She rolled her eyes and jerked her head.
"Can I talk to you, privately?" Harry glanced over his shoulder at the others, who suddenly found the ceiling or the floor very interesting. Grimacing, he nodded and stepped out into the corridor, pulling the door closed behind him.
"Is everything okay?" He frowned at Hermione, concerned.
Hastily, she retorted, "Yes! Everything's fine. I just needed to ask you a favour, and they don't need to hear it." She gave him a significant look and tilted her head.
Harry's eyebrows rose in interest. "What do you need?"
Lowering her voice, knowing that the others might have Weasleys' Extendable Ears, she said, "I need to go down to the kitchens, and I was wondering if I could borrow your Cloak. It's for something for Christmas... I won't be long."
Harry relaxed as he heard her request. Quirking his lips knowingly, he murmured, "Is it for the Secret Santa thing?"
Hermione shrugged noncommittally, but Harry smirked. In a deliberate voice, Hermione said, "If it were, I couldn't tell you and keep it secret, now could I?"
Harry grinned conspiratorially and nodded. "Okay, I get it. No problem. Sure. Hang on a tick, and I'll get it." He spun back into the room, nearly ploughing the door into Ron. The redhead grimaced sheepishly at them and rubbed the back of his neck. Neville, Seamus, and Dean laughed. Harry punched Ron on the arm and he yelped. Scowling at Harry, Ron flicked a glance at Hermione and cringed at her look of scathing disdain.
Harry opened his trunk, stuffed the Cloak into a bag, and glared at Ron as he walked back into the corridor. Shutting the door firmly, he waited a moment, his finger pressed to his lips and looking at Hermione. After a few beats, he nodded sharply to Hermione and flung the door open again, cracking it on Ron's head and knocking him over. Harry snorted at Ron's howls of pain, and the other boys all dissolved into guffaws. "Nice one, Ron," Harry muttered. He rolled his eyes and shut the door. "Here you go. Be careful. And get it back to me as soon as you can."
Hermione nodded gratefully. "I promise. Thanks, Harry. I should have it back to you tomorrow." She took the bag from him and smiled. He smiled back at her wistfully, his eyes darkening. Hermione felt a chill of recognition at his expression and hastily backed away. She turned and hurried off, glancing back to see him staring after her.
She emerged into the common room again and was surprised to see Ginny, curled up in her nightgown in her favourite reading spot near the fire, staring blankly at Hermione. Hermione stopped, colouring guiltily in spite of herself. Ginny gazed at Hermione, glancing at the stairs to the boys' dorms and back at her. She noted the bag in her hand and her flushed countenance. Ginny's eyes flashed and her lips thinned.
"Uh, hi, Ginny," Hermione ventured, trying to sound nonchalant.
"A bit late to be out visiting, isn't it, Hermione?" Ginny's voice was thick with suppressed venom. Her brown eyes sparked with anger. Hermione blinked, flustered.
Before Hermione could answer, they heard footsteps pounding down the stairs, and Harry burst into the room, right behind Hermione. He said, "Hey, 'Mione..." before he saw Ginny staring. Stopping, he glanced between the two girls, noting the tension. Ginny looked at Harry and saw his pyjama shirt half open. Her eyes widened, and she shot an incredulous look at Hermione. Hermione closed her eyes and shook her head, opening her eyes again to gaze imploringly at Ginny.
Harry ran his hand through his messy hair and backed against the wall, leaning against it, trying to be casual. Faintly, he said, "Uh, hey, Ginny. How's it going?" Ginny turned to him, her eyes raking him from head to toe. He was taken aback by the intensity with which she devoured him. He hadn't seen that look since before the war.
Hermione saw the exchange and jumped at the opportunity to escape. Quickly crossing to the portrait hole, she muttered, "Um, I have to go do something. I'll get this back to you tomorrow, Harry. Good night, Ginny."
The other two didn't respond and she hastily scrambled through the portrait hole, slipping the Cloak on. Wow! That was awkward... Relieved to be out of there, she sped down to the painting that covered the entrance to the kitchens.
Back in the common room, Harry was dazedly staring at Ginny, who had him pinned under her fierce gaze. Ginny glanced around the otherwise empty room quickly as she stood. Deliberately crossing to him, she said, "Why were you following her? How long is it going to take for you to see that she's not interested like that?" She stepped up to him, gazing up at him soberly. Harry's green eyes were filled with a welter of emotions. He shrugged half-heartedly and averted his eyes.
Stuffing his hands in the pockets of his pyjama bottoms, he mumbled, "I dunno'. It's just... hard, y'know?"
Ginny closed in on him, making him press himself closer to the wall as she invaded his personal space. He blinked owlishly at her as she lightly traced a finger down his bare chest. She locked eyes with him and murmured, "Yes. I do know." Harry's breath caught at the hunger and desire glowing in Ginny's eyes as she placed her palm flat against his skin.
Her voice was barely above a whisper as she said, "Why do you torture yourself by keeping after her, when there are others who are just waiting for you, ready to jump at the chance..." She stretched up and gently pressed her lips to his. He gasped, unsure of how to react.
"Ginny, I..."
"Shhh..." She placed a finger on his lips and tangled her other hand in his hair, pulling his head down so she could whisper in his ear. "Didn't we have fun? I can help take your mind off her, you know." She nibbled on his ear the way she knew he liked, and smiled at his choked groan. "I've missed this, Harry. Why should we all be miserable? Quit chasing her. She doesn't want you." She pressed her body against his, feeling his reaction hot between them. Boldly, she slid her hand down his back and gripped his arse, pulling him tight. Her voice was low and husky as she pulled back and locked eyes with him again. "I do." At that, she closed in on him and kissed him passionately, her pent-up lust and longing pouring out.
Harry responded instinctively. He knew how to kiss Ginny. He remembered how she liked it. And it was clear that she remembered what he liked too. His body hadn't forgotten.
They broke apart at the sound of footsteps on the stairs from the boys' dorm. Ginny hastily retreated to her chair and buried her flushed face in her book. Harry glanced about wildly, desperate to hide his rampant erection that was threatening to poke through his pyjama bottoms. He flung himself onto a couch and grabbed a pillow to cover his lap. He could feel his face burning, and knew his hair was even messier than before, from Ginny running her fingers through it.
Both green eyes and brown gazed warily at the doorway. They saw two large feet and bony ankles under too-short pyjamas descending, and then Ron popped into view. He scowled in confusion as he saw only Harry and Ginny. "Where's 'Mione?"
"She left already," Harry said, hoping he sounded normal.
Ron glared at Harry reproachfully. "My head still hurts from that crack you gave me."
Harry huffed. "Serves you right! You shouldn't have been eavesdropping."
Ginny looked up. "Ron! What did you do?"
Ron shrugged. "I just wanted to know if she had changed her mind about Harry. Hey, I snoop because I care!" He glared indignantly at Ginny, who was rolling her eyes in exasperation.
Hotly, Ginny averred, "She didn't."
Ron squinted at her vehement retort. Then he glanced at Harry, who was sheepishly studying the seams on his pillow. "So then, what'd she want?"
Harry cleared his throat. "She just wanted to borrow the Cloak. Said she needed to go to the kitchens for something relating to the Secret Santa. She'll give me the Cloak tomorrow. That's all she'd say. The only reason she asked to speak to me in private was because the other blokes don't know about the Cloak. Why do you think I put it in that bag?"
Ron's brow smoothed again. "Oh." He rubbed the lump on his head absently. Then, he grimaced in confusion again. "So then, what took you so long? I was wondering what was going on...you know, if things were looking up or if you two had got in another row. So I figured I'd come check. But if she's gone, what have you been doing?"
Harry felt the colour rising on his cheeks again and wished he had more control over his body. Ginny furtively shrank in on herself, trying to be inconspicuous. Ron glanced between the two oddly silent teenagers. Comprehension dawned.
Harry gamely ventured, "Oh, Ginny and I were just talking about 'Mione. Right, Gin?"
Ginny's bright brown eyes peeked over the top of her book. Vigorously nodding her shiny red head, she added, "Yeah, that's right."
Ron's blue eyes kindled with a brotherly protective light and his lips thinned. Darkly, he retorted, "I see."
Suddenly, Ginny popped up from behind her book and spat fiercely, "Drop it, Ronald! We needn't go through this again, do we?" She glared at him warningly and he crossed his arms, scowling. Harry simply sat, afraid to move and draw attention to himself during this familial confrontation.
Ginny and Ron held each other's gazes for several moments, until, finally, Ron huffed harshly through his nose and jerked his head a fraction. Glancing sharply at Harry, he started to turn around, to head back upstairs. He cast a meaningful glance at Ginny as he said, "Good night, then." Ginny visibly relaxed from her tense posture. Ron stepped through the doorway, and then looked back over his shoulder at Harry. Pointedly, he said, "Don't be too long coming to bed, mate."
Harry nodded weakly and Ginny glanced at him. "Uh, sure thing. Night, Ron."
Ron nodded grimly and retreated back up the stairs. Harry sank back against the couch, his eyes closing in relief. He lifted one clammy hand to remove his glasses, rubbing the heels of his palms over his eyes. He was therefore surprised when he felt someone pouncing on his lap, pinning him to the couch. His eyes flew open to see Ginny straddling his legs, peering intently at him. He squinted up at her, shoving his glasses back on.
"Um, uh... G-Ginny?" Harry felt his heart hammering in his chest. He was rather bewildered by the unexpected turn of events.
Ginny looked down at her hands where they lay against his bare chest. Avoiding his eyes, she whispered, "Harry, I'm not going to beat around the bush here. We've been through enough to skip that." She flicked a solemn glance at him before averting her eyes again. "I... really liked what we had. And I can't help but want you back." She shrugged minutely. "If you want me to leave you alone, I will." She tossed her head and made a moue of displeasure. "I won't like it, but I'll do it." She looked at him through her lashes. Almost shyly she added, "Do you want me to leave you alone, Harry?"
Harry felt her resting against his still half-erect cock. His mind flooded with memories of their dalliances. Dazedly, he became aware of her hands gently smoothing over his skin, under his pyjama top. He closed his eyes to concentrate.
Do I? I mean, we did have fun, but... She's not Hermione.
Right. Which means that she actually wants you!
But, I love Hermione...
Fine! Keep loving her. She is your best friend.
But I want to be more than friends with her!
Give over already! She doesn't love you that way and she made it pretty damn clear that she won't! You might as well move on. What's the point in pining any longer? You just make yourself miserable and strain the friendship.
But is it fair to Ginny to take up with her again when I still love Hermione?
Oh, for Merlin's sake! Can't you see how much Ginny wants to be with you? You did have a good thing going before. She already knows about your feelings for Hermione, and she still wants to get back with you.
Yeah, she does seem pretty insistent...
So get with the programme, you dolt! Jeez...
And she is really pretty...
Yeah, we know all this already.
And we had loads of fun in bed...
I'm still waiting to hear a negative...
Fine! I give up.
That's what I've been waiting for! And so has Ginny, I daresay...
All right, all right. I get it. I'll give it another try.
Brilliant!
Harry opened his eyes to see Ginny gazing at him, her cheeks flushed and her eyes crackling with heat and want. He licked his dry lips and saw her inhale sharply, staring intently at his mouth. His voice was gravelly when he spoke.
"No, I don't want you to leave me alone."
Ginny's face lit up in delight and she smiled broadly at him. He grinned crookedly back at her. She laid one hand on his cheek and leant closer to him. Harry slid his hands along her thighs and gripped her arse as he stretched forward to meet her. Their lips met with an explosion of energy, and they easily slipped back into their old habits of pleasing each other.
They had been snogging passionately for a while, Ginny grinding against Harry's lap, when Harry finally wrapped his arms around her and shifted her to one side, laying her down on the couch. He gingerly arranged his legs between hers as he kept kissing her, covering her body with his. Neither of them noticed when the portrait hole opened.
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Hermione tickled the pear in the painting and it swung forward, letting her into the kitchen. She glanced quickly around at the host of house-elves staring at her warily. Smiling in reassurance, she nodded at them and politely said, "I'm looking for Dobby. Is he around?"
The house-elves nodded in relief and pointed. Hermione thanked them and hurriedly strode over to Dobby. Dobby sensed her coming and spun around, crowing, "Miss Granger! Oh, Dobby is so glad to see Miss Granger! Dobby is always glad to see friends of Harry Potter. Is there something Dobby can do for Miss?" He gazed joyfully up at Hermione with his huge watery eyes.
"Actually, Dobby, there is something I need help with..."
Dobby wriggled in excitement. "Oh, Dobby loves to help friends of Harry Potter! Just tell Dobby what you need, and Dobby will help right away!"
Hermione glanced about, then she leant down confidentially. In a low voice, she said, "I have a recipe that I need to make..."
Dobby clapped his hands. ""Dobby would be honoured to make Miss's recipe!"
Hastily Hermione clasped Dobby's thin shoulder, gaining his attention. "No, thank you, Dobby. I need to make the recipe myself. That's what I need help with. You see, I don't have the facilities to do that in my room, so I need a kitchen to work in. But, you know that we're not supposed to be down here. And, I'm making the recipe as part of the headmaster's secret gift exchange, so I have to make sure no one finds out about it."
Dobby's eyes goggled more and more as she explained. Nodding breathlessly, he whispered, "Of course, Miss! Dobby understands. Dobby can help Miss whenever is wanted."
Hermione beamed. "Perfect! Here's the recipe. '3 ½ oz Milk chocolate, 3 ½ oz Semi-sweet chocolate.' I have those already. 'Three large eggs separated, a dash of salt, one cup whipping cream chilled.' I'll need those. 'Melt the chocolates in top of a double boiler over hot, not boiling water, stirring often. As soon as the chocolates melt, transfer to a 5- to 6-cup serving dish. Set aside and cool. Use a fork to froth egg yolks. Use a rubber spatula to combine egg yolks with cooled chocolate. Beat egg whites with salt until they hold their shape, but are still moist and shiny. Use a spatula to stir 1/4 egg whites into chocolate mixture. Fold in remaining whites. Whip cream until thickened. Fold into chocolate mixture. Use a spatula to smooth surface. Clean around the bowl. Cover and refrigerate overnight. Serve chilled. Makes 8 servings.' That's all of it. So, can I get all of the utensils and the rest of the ingredients here to make this?"
Dobby nodded solemnly and pointed around the kitchen. "Dobby can get everything Miss wants. When will Miss be wanting to make the recipe?"
Hermione thought for a moment. "Well, would it be too hard to get in here after curfew on Christmas Eve?"
Dobby shook his head. "No, Miss. House-elves is busy that night, but Dobby can make time to help Harry Potter's friend. Will Miss be showing up like tonight?"
Hermione nodded. "Exactly like I did tonight. That'll be perfect, Dobby. Now, remember, don't mention this to anyone! It's supposed to be secret, per Dumbledore's orders. All right?"
Dobby stared at her and nodded reverently. "Yes, Miss. Dobby won't say nothing to no one. Not even Harry Potter!"
Hermione smiled. "Thank you, Dobby. I'll see you Christmas Eve, and I'll bring my own chocolate. Good night, Dobby!" She spun and quickly retraced her steps to the painting at the entrance.
Dobby waved at Hermione and called, "Good night, Miss! Dobby will be ready!"
Hermione poked her head out of the doorway and snuck a peek down the corridor. Grateful that it was empty, she stepped into the corridor and covered herself with the Cloak to trek back up to the Tower.
Counting her blessings that she didn't even run into Filch's cat on the way back, she muttered the password to a sleepy Fat Lady and furtively crept through the portrait hole, only to be met with the sight of Harry and Ginny writhing on the couch, snogging feverishly.
Oh! My word! She stifled a stunned gasp and stared, gobsmacked. She couldn't look away. Ginny's arms were wrapped around Harry and her fingers were dragging across his back and into his hair. Harry's hand was tightly gripping her bare thigh where it hooked around his hip. His glasses were lying askew on the floor, and they were panting and whimpering as they probed each other's mouths with their tongues. Hermione felt a pang of arousal, remembering such antics with Snape. Then, she shook herself and exhaled gustily.
Well, it looks like Ginny managed to get through to him... She carefully tiptoed over to them and stood behind the couch, trying not to notice Harry's arse as he was grinding and flexing against Ginny. Quickly, she took the Cloak off and whirled it over them. They disappeared, but she heard their startled squeaks.
Looking pointedly away, she hissed, "Here's your Cloak. Um, I'm going to bed. And I'm going to pretend, as Head Girl, that I didn't see any of this. Um, have fun, you two." She flashed a half-hearted smile at the couch and spun quickly to hurry out of the room. At the doorway, she paused and flung over her shoulder, "Oh! And, good for you, Ginny. And you too, Harry. I'm glad you two are back together. You're a really cute couple." Then, she whisked away on light feet.
Harry and Ginny stared at each other, stunned. Neither spoke for a long moment. Finally, Harry said, in a strained whisper, "I can't believe she caught us. I'm sorry. I should have thought..."
Ginny shook her head vehemently and hissed back, "No, it's my fault. It's okay. She didn't seem upset..." She peered intently at Harry, her expression worried. "I'm more concerned about you. Are you okay?"
Harry held his breath for a moment as he thought. Ginny could see the play of emotions across his face. Tensely, she waited for an answer.
Harry's eyes darkened as he seemed to turn inward, shutting Ginny out. After a few beats, he shook his head and sighed deeply. He looked at Ginny's apprehensive expression and gave her a wan, lopsided smile. He could feel the relief flow through her body, pressed against his as it was. He leant down and lightly touched his lips to hers. "Yeah. I'm okay."
Ginny closed her eyes and hugged him fiercely. Harry smiled gently into her hair. He pulled back a bit and looked at her, querying, "Are you?" He could see her eyes shining with unshed tears as she nodded at him.
In a choked voice, she murmured, "Never better." She gave him a watery smile and pulled him back down to her, holding him close. Harry idly stroked her thigh as he cradled his face in the curve of her neck. Ginny sighed.
They lay there, silent for a long moment. Then, Ginny murmured, "Harry?"
"Hmm?" He pulled back enough to see her pensively fingering the cloth of the Cloak.
"This would cover two people, wouldn't it?" She narrowed her eyes at him mischievously.
"Ah... yeah. If we hunched down. Why?"
Ginny's face split into a positively wicked grin. "Wanna' get out of here and find some place more... private?" Her eyes glinted once again with desire. Harry felt an answering jolt in his centre. A slow grin crept across his face.
"Why? What did you have in mind?" His voice was low and rumbling.
Ginny smirked and quirked one eyebrow at him. "Oh, I'd much rather show you than tell you." She grinned at him challengingly. "Whaddya' say? Up for a little adventure?" She wriggled against his still hard cock as she spoke and Harry's eyebrows shot up.
He smirked back and said, "Hey, you're talking to the Boy-Who-Lived-Twice. I'm always up for adventure." He pushed up and sat back on his knees, pulling Ginny up with him. She giggled as they stood and Harry settled the Cloak around them. Muffling the sounds of their mirth, they tiptoed to the portrait hole and left.
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Snape eased back again from his work table. He eyed the sliver of horn before him. Pleased with his progress, he laid the tool on the tabletop and stretched, shaking his tense hands.
Excellent. A few more sessions, and it'll be ready. Then we move on to the next stage.
He glanced at the time and was surprised to see how late it was after curfew. Damn! I was supposed to start my rounds a while ago. He hastily stood and crossed through his office to the classroom. As he stepped to the doorway, he cast a Silencing Charm on his boots, as he always did before beginning his patrols. It both amused and annoyed him that none of the students seemed to figure out how he managed to slink about so silently. He quietly stepped into the corridor and made his way up to begin his policing of the usual hiding spots.
He had been pacing the corridors for a while, traipsing up and down stairs, covering as much area in as little time as possible. After so many years at Hogwarts, he had discovered the best path through the castle to hit the most trouble spots. His ears strained to hear anything out of the ordinary and his eyes peered through the shadows, searching for movement or light.
Suddenly, his vigilance was rewarded. He heard the unmistakable sounds of students engaged in less-than-scholarly behaviour. His lips stretched into a malicious anticipatory grin and he skulked closer to the doorway of the classroom from which the noises were emanating. He could hear the heavy breathing and moaning, rhythmic in their utterances. He edged to the doorway and cast a barely audible concealment charm...really, a good spy uses as much as possible to his advantage. Peering around the doorjamb, he could hear the sounds more clearly, but he couldn't see anything.
He scowled. Squinting in the darkness, he searched the room for any place to hide. All he could see were tables and chairs, neatly lined up. Perplexed, he paused and listened again, trying to zero in on the sounds. Carefully stepping in the direction he thought they were coming from, he darted his gaze about the room. Suddenly, he noticed it.
One of the tables was shaking. The chair backs were blocking his view of part of it, but he could see the movement of the table against the stone floor. Stealthily, he sidled around to one side. There, in the moonlight through the window, he saw two disembodied feet, splayed against the desk, sole up.
Potter! Recognition of the use of the Invisibility Cloak hit Snape like a mallet. He vividly remembered using that Cloak to sneak into the Shrieking Shack four years before. He was frozen to the spot.
That has to be bloody Potter! And he's shagging right here in a classroom! Oh, Dumbledore can't overlook this. He has to expel him! Or at least punish him severely... Snape's imagination took wing as he thought of all manner of torturous things Potter could go through for punishment. And yet, even Snape never thought of making Harry write lines with a quill that would cut into his hand.
He was brought back to reality by a particularly loud grunt from the table, followed almost immediately by a high pitched feminine squeal. Snape stepped closer to them, about to rip the Cloak off them and scare them near to death. The thought made him positively quiver with predatory glee.
His hand paused in midair. A single thought galvanized him. What if that's Hermione under there? He nearly staggered at the pain that seized his gut. Choking back the bile that rose in his throat, he fell back a pace. No. It can't be. She rejected him. She loves me. Me, not Potter! He felt his legs going weak and stumbled to another table, leaning against it.
Numbly, he stared at the disembodied feet on the table before him. I have to know. I have to be sure! Gritting his teeth, he pushed forward again and tentatively reached out to the table edge, feeling for the Cloak. He felt the fabric rustle against his fingers and he grasped it. His heart pounding painfully, he gingerly lifted the cloth.
In the moonlight, he could see the girl's hair fanned out against the tabletop. It was dark, but even in the pale light, he could see that it was straight, not bushy curls, and it gleamed red. Reeling in relief, Snape closed his eyes and inhaled deeply. He dropped the edge of the Cloak and backed away. Desperately trying to regain his composure, he barely noticed the increase in speed and pitch of the cries and gasps coming from beneath the cloak.
Finally, he heard a high pitched keening. A breathless voice hissed, "Yesss, Harry! Oh gods, yes!" The moaning that followed was a series of ululations. The deeper grunts got harsher and harsher until they culminated in an oath and a growling groan.
"Fuck! Ahhh, fuck yeah..."
Snape was rooted to the spot, unable to move. It was like a train wreck; he couldn't look away, completely in the thrall of morbid fascination. His rational mind kept telling him to break it up and punish Potter once and for all, but his newly stirred emotions disagreed.
But at least those emotions were Slytherin...
Don't do anything! If Potter and the Weasley girl are shagging, then he's certainly not going to pursue Hermione any more! Just leave it be, and hope this is the end of that idiot's juvenile fascination with her...
He heard their breathing slow, and there was the sound of humming as they kissed wetly.
There was a contented sigh, followed by, "Gods, I forgot how great that was..."
A low, delighted giggle answered that remark. "I hadn't. Why do you think I suggested it?"
Snape's eyebrows shot up. She suggested it? Merlin's balls! What would Molly and Arthur say if they knew?
Harry's deep chuckle mixed with the sound of them kissing again. "Mmm, definitely a good idea." There was rustling as Harry sat up, the Cloak lifting up and exposing Ginny's satisfied smirk. Then, Harry's head emerged, flushed and dishevelled. He grinned at her and adjusted his pyjamas, resettling his glasses. Ginny sat up and smoothed her nightgown.
Snape stared, fighting every impulse to flay them alive with vitriol. He was surprised at the way Harry reached out and smoothed Ginny's hair, and the boy's next comment stunned him into a grudging respect.
"Uh, Ginny? I know we didn't get a chance to talk about it before, but, um, do we need to cast a contraceptive charm? Or get a potion from Madam Pomfrey?" Harry gazed at her, concerned.
Ginny shook her head and smiled. "No. I've stayed on the weekly potion ever since we were together the first time around." She ducked her head and blushed. Sheepishly, she mumbled, "I guess you could say I wanted to be prepared. Wishful thinking and all that."
Snape was hit with the memory of Hermione using the same words after she had said he was hers. He blinked at the boy in front of him. If he had any sense at all, the Potter boy should realize the huge compliment inherent in such a confession.
Harry nodded and smiled shakily. He looked at Ginny through his lashes and murmured, "Oh. Well, that's good then." He shuffled back and spun to drop to the floor. The Cloak lay in a heap on the table as Harry reached up to help Ginny slide off the table. As she got to her feet, Harry wrapped his arms around her and gazed down into her eyes.
Snape averted his gaze, uncomfortable indeed witnessing such intimacy.
Softly, Harry said, "Let's get back to the Tower. Ron may have backed down, but I don't want to rub his nose in it by being gone so long. Besides, he can hex me while I'm sleeping if he wants!" Ginny wrinkled her nose at him and giggled. They kissed tenderly once more before Harry draped the Cloak around them.
Snape watched them disappear from sight. He heard their faint footsteps crossing the classroom and let out a breath he hadn't known he had been holding. Bloody hell! I can't believe I just witnessed that and didn't do anything! He snorted. Grimly, he thought, Just wait till I tell Hermione of my self-restraint... He pondered her possible reactions, and smirked to himself, hoping that he would be properly rewarded for his sacrifice.
He reversed the concealment charm and retreated to the corridor again, to finish his patrol. Fortunately for his shattered nerves, he didn't encounter any more rule-breaking students.
As he entered his quarters and prepared for bed, he amused himself picturing the delighted smile Hermione would give him when he confessed the evening's events and his out-of-character response. He slid between his cool sheets, smiling at the image of a beaming Hermione in his head.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)