3- From the Dungeons, the Angel of Potions
Chapter 3 of 84
Good_WitchAfter a bad night, Snape sees the cast list. What is he going to do about it? And who dares cross his path?
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Chapter 3- From the Dungeons, the Angel of Potions
I wake early Saturday morning from a restless sleep, vaguely remembering disturbing dreams. Grimacing, I fling back the covers, sitting up on the edge of my bed. I rest my head in my hands, rubbing at my aching temples, trying to concentrate on the nightmares. Slowly, disjointedly, images come back.
I see myself on a stage, in front of masses of people. I am singing and dancing like a marionette. I try to stop but can't. The crowd is roaring with laughter, pointing at me and dashing tears from their eyes. I struggle to stop myself, but can't.
That's when I see Dumbledore to one side, wand pointed at me, a fiendish smile splitting his face. "Imperio!" he cries, over and over, forcing me to dance faster and sing louder. I can't even stop singing long enough to beg for mercy.
Tears start coursing down my cheeks, and my voice grows ragged from overuse. I feel the ache in my muscles, weary from dancing. But Dumbledore continues.
I see Potter to my side, but it's James Potter, and Sirius and Remus are with him. They are mocking me, chanting, "Dance, Snivellus, dance!" I look down to see my robes gone, and I am clad only in faded, dingy underwear.
I look back and they have transformed into Harry Potter and Ron Weasley. Neville Longbottom stands behind them yelling at me. "You are the worst dunce I have even seen at performing! You should never have been allowed at Hogwarts!"
I frantically look around me and see Lily Evans gazing at me with contempt. "Really, you should think about washing your pants sometime, Severus."
I blink and she turns into Hermione Granger. Her gaze stings me like ice. I feel the gorge rise when she looks at me with amusement and disgust. "As if you could ever aspire to join the rest of us." Then she laughs at me.
Everyone is laughing at me. I see their faces swim before me as I black out from fatigue.
I shake my head violently. This would be one for the Pensieve. If only it took dreams as well as memories. I rise, feeling the ache in my tense muscles and make my way to the bathroom to look in the mirror. My expression is grimmer than usual, and I have dark circles under my eyes. I look positively haggard. I frown at my reflection and splash cold water on my face, in an attempt to drive away the lingering dread.
It's no use. I get ready for breakfast. I don't know why I bother. My guts are a knot right now, what with all this musical nonsense, and I doubt I can eat anything. Some coffee might help, though. I make my way up to the Great Hall, hoping to arrive and be done before the students make their ways down. As I round the corner, I see the crowd shouting and milling in front of the notice board.
The cast list.
None of them notice my approach. Potter is wrapping himself around Granger like a glove, and the group suddenly quiets. I see her struggle from his embrace and turn around. The group is deathly silent. Granger goes white. Her eyes widen like saucers. What in bloody hell is going on? What, did she not get what she wanted, poor cry-baby know-it-all?
Seeing an outlet for my temper, I march up to the throng and stop behind them. Granger turns slowly, looking like she has seen her death. Malfoy crows with delight.
"Ha ha! Take that Granger! See how you like your precious part now! This is brilliant!"
Granger suddenly notices my presence. Her stricken eyes travel up to mine. The others see her looking and turn as one to see me as well. Even Malfoy seems speechless.
"What's the matter, Granger? Didn't get what you wanted? Pity. Try not to cry too much. Gryffindors are supposed to be brave, remember?" I sneer at her, smirking maliciously.
Nobody moves. It's as if someone cast Petrificus Totalus on all of them. My stomach clenches painfully. Something isn't right.
"Well? No know-it-all answer, Granger? Ten points from Gryffindor for discourtesy to a professor." I expect her to explode now. She simply shudders. Her mouth opens and closes, like a fish out of water. The other students' eyes dart between her and myself.
The hairs on the back of my neck start to rise. I growl menacingly, growing impatient, "Since Granger can't seem to answer me, can anyone explain why you're all standing here like you've just seen the Dark Lord rise again?"
"P-p-please, sir..."
I round on Seamus Finnegan. "Well, spit it out, idiot boy!"
"Professor Snape, you're on the cast list, sir."
I feel as if someone has kicked me in the chest. All the breath has left my body.
"What?" I manage to hiss.
He points to the scroll on the board. Granger is still motionless in front of it, gazing up at me in shock. I push through the crowd roughly, students scrambling to get out of my way. Potter pulls Granger to the side. She wavers like a scarecrow. I look at the list.
It's my nightmare come true.
"The Phantom-- Severus Snape."
Then, "Christine Daae (the ingénue)-- Hermione Granger."
And, "Raoul, Vicomte de Changy (her lover)-- Harry Potter."
I fight to maintain control. My hands clench and my teeth grind. Turning a hateful glare on Potter and Granger, I bellow at them, "This is an outrage! Get out of my sight, all of you!"
They scatter like roaches in the light. All but Granger and Potter. Weasley pauses a few steps down the corridor, seeing his friends aren't with him. Granger is still gazing up at me, supported by Potter.
I narrow my eyes dangerously. "Didn't you hear what I said, Granger? Ten more points from Gryffindor for disobeying an order! Now leave before I give you detention with Filch as well!"
Potter tries to pull her away, but she doesn't move. Suddenly, she gasps and crumples in a heap on the floor. Potter tries to stop her, but can't keep a grip.
"Hermione!" he says urgently, shooting an angry glance up at me. It's all I can do not to twist my hands around his neck.
Weasley is dithering in the corridor, afraid to come closer, but wanting to help his friends.
"Your friend is clearly overwrought and should not be out of the Tower. I suggest you escort her back to your rooms and keep her there until she can handle being about."
Weasley finally rushes over and helps Potter lift her, draping her arms over their shoulders. They shuffle away as fast as they can, her legs dangling and dragging between them. I wait till they are gone and the corridor is clear. Then, I turn back to the fateful list.
It reads, "Cast list for Hogwarts' production of The Phantom of the Opera:
The Phantom-- Severus Snape
Christine Daae (the ingénue)-- Hermione Granger
Raoul, Vicomte de Changy (her lover)-- Harry Potter
Monsieur Firmin (opera manager)-- Neville Longbottom
Monsieur Andre (opera manager)-- Ron Weasley
Carlotta Guidicelli (diva soprano)-- Pansy Parkinson
Ubaldo Piangi (Carlotta's lover, tenor)-- Draco Malfoy
Madame Giry (Ballet Mistress)...Minerva McGonagall
Meg Giry (Christine's friend, chorus girl)...Ginny Weasley
Joseph Buquet (stagehand), ensemble-- Terry Boot
Passarino (servant of Don Juan), ensemble-- Dean Thomas
Ballet Captain/ Wardrobe Mistress/ Confidante, ensemble...Sybill Trelawney
Ballet Girl/ Madame Firmin, ensemble-- Millicent Bulstrode
Ballet Girl/ Innkeeper's Wife, ensemble-- Parvati Patil
Ballet Girl/ Princess, ensemble-- Luna Lovegood
Ballet Girl/ Hairdresser, ensemble-- Susan Bones
Ballet Girl/ Wild Woman, ensemble-- Lavender Brown
Ballet Girl/ Page, ensemble-- Hannah Abbott
Auctioneer/ Reyer/ Policeman in Pit, ensemble-- Seamus Finnigan
Lefevre/ Don Attilo/ Porter/ Fireman, ensemble-- Justin Finch-Fletchley
Slavemaster/ Firechief/ Porter/ Police, ensemble-- Colin Creevey
First cast meeting Saturday evening, 7:00 p.m. in the Great Hall.
Director-- Albus Dumbledore"
I hear a roaring in my ears, and I realize it's my own blood pounding through my veins. I am utterly incredulous. There must be a mistake. I'm vaguely surprised the parchment isn't crackling under the heat of my rage. I whip my eyes from side to side, looking for students. Unfortunately, none are around to be my target.
I rush to the door to the Great Hall and glare inside. The House tables are empty. Viciously, I snort. No doubt they're all terrified of trying to come to breakfast after my little display in the corridor.
Good.
I stomp up the dais to the High Table, snatching up a mug and a pot of coffee. The few teachers present pause for a moment in their conversations to look at me, and I shoot them a poisonous glance. They exchange significant looks and turn away from me. No doubt they haven't seen the cast list, as they weren't out there with the crowd. Seething, I toss back a large gulp of hot coffee, grimacing at the burning in my throat. Coffee isn't going to do it. I need a drink.
I think longingly of the Firewhisky in my quarters. Vowing to drink myself into oblivion as soon as I leave here, I shift in my seat, anxiously awaiting Dumbledore's arrival. He must make this right!
Minutes drag while I sit, fidgeting. Sybill Trelawney floats into the Hall. She has a self-satisfied smile on her face. I'm surprised to see her, as she usually takes meals in her quarters, but I realize why she came down from her room today.
She's on the damned cast list too! And she's happy about it!
She wafts up near me. "Oh, Severus, isn't it wonderful?"
I simply gaze at her, stonily, forcing her to clarify. Her smile flickers a bit before dying out.
"Surely you've seen the cast list. We are both honoured with roles! I had foreseen that I would be receiving an honour, but the mists of the future were secretive that day, and I had no idea it would be as impressive as this!"
She looks at me, comprehending that I do not share her opinion.
Fatuously, she waves her be-ringed fingers at me, her smile returning. "But you! You, Severus, have received the greatest honour. It is only fitting for you to finally receive such recognition after the war."
I can't bear it any longer and slam my hands on the edge of the table, making her jump back in fear. I push myself to my feet and lean over her, shaking with the desire to rip her tongue from her mouth.
"Hold your tongue, you ridiculous woman! This is no honour. This is no recognition! How much of an imbecile are you to think that this is anything but a farce? A ridiculous affair that will make me a laughingstock!" I pause for a moment and sneer, adding silkily, "Of course, it wouldn't bother you, would it? Seeing as you have been a laughingstock for years already, you must be used to it."
I watch in satisfaction as her eyes fill with tears behind her thick glasses. She gasps and covers her mouth with her hands, staring at me, crushed. I smirk at her evilly.
"Severus, that was not necessary."
Our tableau is broken by the quiet voice of Dumbledore behind me. I wipe my face of any expression and back up hastily. Sybill lets out a choked sob. Dumbledore steps up to my side and places a warning hand on my arm.
"I believe you didn't mean what you said. Surely you would like to tell Professor Trelawney that." His voice is pleasant, but I feel the steel in his grip. I know I am in trouble and I force myself to speak.
In a low tone, I murmur, "Forgive my rudeness, Sybill. Indeed, I did not mean what I said." I feel Dumbledore's hand tighten spasmodically. I continue, eyes cast down, "You have my apologies."
Dumbledore releases my arm and takes Sybill's hands in his. "I see you made the cast! I say, I am delighted. I look forward to seeing you tonight at our first meeting." He beams at her, and she regains her composure, giving him a shaky smile.
"Of course, Headmaster. I am deeply honoured. However, I think I may retire to my quarters for breakfast after all. I do hope you'll excuse me."
"Of course, my dear. Congratulations. Enjoy your meal."
With that, he releases her hands and she nods to him. She flicks a cold glance at me before whirling and hurrying away. Students are starting to trickle in, some offering her their congratulations as they pass her. I see them darting their eyes to the High Table and quickly looking away from my black gaze. They don't dare offer me congratulations. Not if they want to finish the school year unhexed.
I feel Dumbledore's presence heavily as he turns his attention to me.
"Headmaster..."
"Got up on the wrong side of the bed this morning, did you, Severus?" His voice is jovial, but I hear the undercurrent. "Perhaps you'll feel better after your morning coffee."
I realize he is offering me an excuse, that he doesn't want to broach the real subject here, in front of students. I nod miserably and sink back into my seat. He looks at my coffee mug pointedly, and I obediently lift it to drink. I almost spit it back out. It's cold. Ugh.
Dumbledore turns to his other side as Minerva enters and congratulates her on making the cast. She smiles primly, but I can see that she's pleased underneath. She looks at me and rakes me with a calculating look.
"Well, Severus, it seems we'll be seeing even more than usual of each other this year, working together on this production. I believe congratulations are in order."
I squint at her sourly, rolling my eyes away again. When I look back, there is a small smile hovering about her lips. But this time I can tell it's an expression of schadenfreude.*
Icily, I bite out, "Indeed. I do hope you plan to keep your charges in line. There is a preponderance of Gryffindors on that list. I do not expect to suffer the vagaries of undisciplined youth any more than I already do in my duties."
She bridles at this and huffily retorts, "Well! My Gryffindors, undisciplined? How dare you insult my House? I notice only three of your House were considered worthy of being cast..."
"Spare me. Worthy? I daresay my three are worth all of yours put together..."
She glares at me heatedly, sputtering. I smirk inwardly. It is so easy to bait Minerva. Her House loyalty is astonishing. She pulls herself up stiffly and holds her hand out to me, eyes narrowed.
"Care to make a wager then, Severus?"
I stare at her suspiciously. "Whatever do you mean?"
"I wager that, by the time we finish this competition, and win, I might add, you will actually admit, in front of Albus as a witness, that a Gryffindor can be as worthy of anything as your Slytherins. Hmm? Care to take me up on that?" Her hand is still extended.
I contemplate for a moment. She doesn't move. Thoughtfully, I ask, "What makes you think I'd even admit it were I ever to have that opinion? I could just keep quiet and not say anything, and you'd lose."
She smiles faintly. "Because I know you have very strict ethics regarding matters of your honour. If you agreed to this wager, you would be honest to the end. After the war, I came to realize just why Albus trusts you as he does. It's a simple enough matter; either you agree or don't. What do you say?"
Taken aback by her compliment, I ask sharply, "And what if you lose, what do I get?"
"Well, I'll be forced to admit the opposite, that your Slytherins are more worthy than my Gryffindors. You'd revel in that, wouldn't you? Come now, Severus, stop dithering and make your choice. Deal or no?"
I think of how miserable life is about to become. This could be one small point of light in the darkness for me. For so many years, she has goaded me about her House being better than mine. Quidditch matches and the House Cup competition are always fierce between our Houses, largely due to the tension between us, the Heads of said Houses. To finally have her admit the inferiority of her House, and just when I will finally be near the end of my long-suffering tenure with the Golden Trio... The year could end positively after all. And this could give me something to look forward to over the horrid months ahead. I extend my hand and enfold hers in a tight grip. She returns it with strength. We shake once and nod.
"Deal."
Dumbledore chuckles, shaking his head. "You two and your House politics."
I start back to the present, having momentarily forgotten him beside me. He turns to me, eyes twinkling. I sit back, moodily.
"Don't sulk, Severus, it's not befitting your age and position," he whispers to me. I turn a black, reproachful look on him.
"Sir, this is preposterous. I am a busy man. I do not have time for these frivolities! Apparently that blasted Sorting Hat gave me the title role! Surely you would agree that my duties as Potions Master and Head of Slytherin leave me little enough free time. How can you expect me to participate in this production?"
I can feel the colour rising in my cheeks, and I duck my head toward him, hissing my words, letting my hair cover my face, shielding me from the prying eyes of the students.
"Come now, you're hardly as busy as you make out, now that the war is over. I thought I had made myself clear on this matter." Steel creeps into his normally light-hearted voice. "The Ministry has decreed that we are to participate, and I expect Hogwarts to win this competition. I expect your full cooperation in every aspect. Now, stop your grousing and set an example for the students. Follow?"
He pins me with a penetrating gaze and I clench my teeth, lips in a thin line. Inclining my head, I mutter, "As you say, Headmaster."
He beams at me again and pats my arm. "Now, you'd best not dally here any longer. You wouldn't want to waste any more of your precious time, would you?" His eyes twinkle more and he suppresses a chuckle. With as much dignity as I can muster under the circumstances, I stand.
"You are correct, sir. Excuse me." I start past him. At the edge of the dais, I am stopped by his voice calling after me.
"Oh, and don't be late for our first cast meeting tonight at seven. See you here."
I jerk my head in response and stiffly continue down the steps. Students are furtively peering at me, but avoiding catching my eye. I can hear their fervent whispers around me. I swear to Merlin, if I hear one laugh, I will make them wish they were born a Squib. Behind me, I hear the fainter voice of Dumbledore speaking again.
"I say, Minerva, have you seen Mr. Potter or Miss Granger this morning? They received quite important roles. I'd like to offer my congratulations. Where are they?"
Fuming, I remember their faces this morning. Oh, didn't you hear, Sir? They're all gone, sucked into a vortex just this morning. Tragic, isn't it? I whip down the corridors to the dungeons.
I wish.
*schadenfreude- taking pleasure in someone else's misfortune
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. 
! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. 
I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! 
They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters!
I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm?
I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't?
Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip.
And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base!
This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision. 
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. 
What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. 
Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? 
I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)