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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


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10/10

snitchette

As ever it's magic . But for once I must disagree with the  secret keeper thing. "When a secret keeper dies, their secret dies with them, or, to put it another way, the status of their secret will remain as it was at the moment of their death. Everybody in whom they confided will continue to know the hidden information, but nobody else." (JKR's official website, FAQ, poll).So the Order don't need a new secret keeper. Sorry.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I didn't know that when I wrote this story, and it made sense to me that a place could be secret kept a second time, thus wiping out the initial information. (If everyone knew where the Weasley Home was before their place was put under the Fidelius, they have to be told where to find it after the Fidelius is cast, right?) Anyway, It's far too late to change that part of the story as I've finished the entire thing, so it stands as is.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter otherwise.

10/10

aura

Yay!  She still plans on meeting him.    I wonder what she's planning on looking up, and what Severus' living situation is now...

I'm looking forward to the next!  You always write such engrossing chapters.  Love this fic!!!

8/10

serket

Strong chapter, with a lot of changes, and even though I knew what was coming it still hurt to see it from Hermione's perspective. I'm happy thought that Severus decided to go with the truth when explaining why he did what he did. I'm curious to know if you'll follow DH for the rest of the story or go a different way. Either way I'm pretty sure I'll like it because I really enjoy the way you write. Keep up with the good work.

9/10

feisanna

lovely - i just spent the last few weeks reading/rereading your story.  thanks for a well written take.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Hermione forgot to ask Severus about the potion and why they are affected more than other couples.  Oh well, I'm sure she will remember eventually.

Looking forward to reading more. 

10/10

snitchette

This is getting so interesting. Influencing Voldy so that he's free to pursue his relationship with Hermione is very clever. But how is he to explain that in less than two weeks he's wedding her ... I'l glad to know I will hear about that soon.Oh and I almost forget : Merry Chistmas... 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Christmas? Er, OK.

I'm sure there are many things going on in Severus' life that Voldemort knows nothing about, who says he'll need to learn that one, tiny, insignificant detail. lol

Then again . . . .  

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

While reading your answer I was under the impression that you didn't catch my joke (or maybe I'm wrong). It's just you said in the note in the end of the chapter that everytimee you get a new review it was like Christmas to you, so ...

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Obviously my brain was elsewhere when I read the review. lol

10/10

aura

I Really like this fic! 

Severus was lucky he picked that night to tell Voldie 'bout Hermione, but has he told Hermione 'bout telling Voldie?  If she finds out some other way, she'll be quite upset - might even confuse that as being the reason for her growing to 'hate him' that he keeps warning her about.  It would be a rude awakening for her if she thought that what he had been warning her about had passed, before he killed the Headmaster.

BTW, how many chaps do you think 'til the wedding... night? 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

It's coming up soon, but I warn you , this story is only PG-13. It maybe a stretch of PG-13, but there will definitely be no lemons. Stick around anyway, cause the plot is addictive!

0/10

lina0

it was marvellous story...I could not detach myself from reading this. Great job!

10/10

snitchette

That bond between them will be terribly disturbing for them and so much fun for us. Especially in DADA class.  I long to read about it.

10/10

snitchette

I envy them. I'm single for the moment and I long to be held in strong end tender arms. * heavy sigh*. Fortunately I have you to read for enlightening my days. I'll just stop cause I'm becoming depressing for everyone ;)

10/10

aura

Adore this fic!  Simply wonderful!

Was very excited at the quick update. 

Glad Severus wasn't tempted by the Nott woman. and that they've set a date.  Wonder what he's going to end up telling the Dark Lord... 

And about your comma problem, I completely share that ailment.  *gins*  With spell-check and proof-reading a couple times, you can catch most grammer probs, but (when I was in school) my papers still came back covered in red ink - about 90% of which was due to punctuation.  I haven't posted any HP fics yet, but I'm sure that's going to be the main thing that betas will end up working on for me. 

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Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Ooooh really enjoyed that chapter.  The plot is thickening.

9/10

chyara

I am loving this story.  I can't wait until more chapters come along.hopefully not to long in between them.

0/10

Mint Stick

I love the combination of prickly/snuggly Severus. It must really be hard for him, having to go against his convictions but not really being able to help it, either.

10/10

Gardengirl

"...and he was all but inviting her to ask all the questions she wanted. Surely the world was about to come to an end." 

That's fantastic! Beautifully done. I'm really enjoying this.

10/10

MaevePotter

awww.. I want more! I love this story. Very true to character and just wonderful. True there is more qued? If so, would you mind terribly just emailing it to me so I don't have to wait? I promise to still review on site :) I am just home after a stressful day and would love some more chocolate enchantment to go with my tea :) pruep3halliwell@aol.com

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Maeve, check your gmail! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

Vivian B 

Response from MaevePotter (Reviewer)

its not there yet... :pokey: hehe I really am! great plot line!

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Ahhh, what a great chapter.  I'm glad that things are progressing.  I can't wait for more!

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Awwwww this is so romantic......................eek, going all mushy again.

More please. 

10/10

aura

Loving it!

When I read this part: 

"But you will call me Master. In your dreams, she wrote with a snort. It seemed unreal that Severus Snape could possibly have joked with her, but his response confirmed that he had. Precisely. But the rest of the time I suppose you may call me Severus. If you slip up in front of anyone else, you’ll be scrubbing floors with Filch for a week."

my first thought was 'if she slipped and called him Master in public, they'd have even more explaining to do'! 

10/10

MaevePotter

eee!! More more more!! I need more at your earliest opportunity! This chapter was great. I love the diary idea and how he just grabbed her!!

9/10

fuchsiasteerpike

Well, I simply have to insist that you update.

0/10

Terab

Great story so far.  Their relationship is starting to get interesting.  Looking foward to the next chapter.

10/10

snitchette

That's symply brilliant. I like this idea of enchanted diaries and I'll love to read their correspondance.

0/10

Mint Stick

I can't see it being too easy for them to keep any developing relationship a secret. The timing really is horrid! I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this will turn out.

0/10

pyewacketsid

Absolutely delightful, from beginning to end.  You struck a wonderful balance of letting situational angst keep the narrative tension without manufacturing drama just for the sake of drama.  It made for an authentic and satisfying emotional experience.  Love the happy ending!

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