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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


About Vivian B

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Reviews for Chocolate Enchantment

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0/10

Shiverrus

I'd never even considered that Snape's vow might be triggered by Harry's sectumsempra of Draco.  Good point.  I'm enjoying this, especially the sense of need between our couple. 

10/10

aura

I completely missed that when I read HBP, I knew about the Vow (obviously) but I guess I just lumped it with Draco's Task.  It never occured to me that if Harry had killed Draco, Snape would have died as well.

Love this fic!

I like how Hermione is occasionally refering to Harry as the Idiot in her own mind now, like Snape does out loud: taking on a bit more than just his emotions through the Link.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I like to think Hermione is open minded enough to see when her friends are acting like idiots. As much as I love Harry as a character, it was a supremely stupid thing to try out a spell without having a clue what it would do.

I'm so glad you are enjoying my story!

8/10

serket

I'm not usually a great fan of Snape teacher/Hermione student but I must say you're doing a good work,  with their banter and complicity working well in the story. They still have a long way to go, I now, but you're definitely doing a good job with this story. 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Thanks, I really tried to keep their personalities as true as possible, considering the extenuating circumstances. The Snape as professor role should end here soon, as the attack on the school is in chapter 12.

10/10

Sampdoria

A great chapter! I hope Hermione will remember Dumbledores words the day she will need to the most, while Severus has to run away with Draco. I hope Severus will know that Hermione will always be there for him, no matter what. I also hope that Harry and Ron won't let her down and behave like idiots. Most of all, and this is my biggest which, I hope you will never make this a story where Severus due to some kind of shceeme "gives" Hermione to Voldemort or some of his "friends" to torture, weather she knows and agrees or not. I just hate such stories, seeing that as both illogical to do to anyone you care the sligthest about, and the worst kind of betrayal, a betrayal so big it can't be forgiven, ever.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

You should be well pleased by what's to come then! Thanks for the review.

10/10

aura

*grins* Loved! 

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Hey, I think lots of us missed the connection of the fight between Harry and Draco in HBP and how it would have killed Snape too if Draco had died.

Excellent chapter. 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Thanks, another is already awaiting validation.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Oh such a lovely romantic chapter.  Well done you!

10/10

snitchette

I simply don't know what to say. You leave me speechless which usually is a hard job (from my friends' POW but I'm sure they exagerate a bit... or a lot). Anyway what a another amazing brilliant chapter.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I can't complain about anyone who thinks my writing is amazingly brilliant! =) Thanks!

0/10

KiraAlexia

Great story

10/10

sarahc517

I'm so glad you posted another chapter! I've been checking everyday since I read the last one! ;) I can't wait for more!!!

I look forward to reading how exactly Hermione will be "seduced" by the dark side and the toll it will take on both Hermione and Severus.

Awesome job!

10/10

Selene

I do so love this story.  I was wondering how long you were going to take it?  Through Voldy's downfall or just to the end of HBP?

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

It goes through the downfall of Voldemort. There are a heck of a lot more chapters to come. It ended up being twice the lenth I originally intended. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I promise another update is coming soon!

Response from Selene (Reviewer)

Yay!  I was hoping for a nice long story, especially since you write so well.

0/10

Merlina Thalia

That is really great so far...I hope more is coming soon:)

10/10

jenonymous

Bit of a nod to Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves, I see!  I am enjoying your story very much.  It takes a rather tired premise and gives it a very realistic and fresh turn.  Embedding it within HBP is bold of you!  Looking forward to the next chapter.

9/10

snitchette

I'm very glag you update so quickly. I always have loves secret marriage. MAybe there won't be as much frustration as I originaly thought it would be. I'm waiting impatiently for the next.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Ahh, another wonderful chapter.  I'm really enjoying your fic so far.  I really can't wait to read more!

10/10

MaevePotter

whoops, meant to leave the review on this chapter :) Great plot so far :)

10/10

MaevePotter

I love it!! If you have any more already finished, I would love to read more. Please tell if you have it posted further elsewhere, or feel free to email me ;) maevepotter@gmail.com I am a very good beta, as I tend to catch even the most minute errors or bad phrasing, so I could definately reward you in that way if you wanted to send me any bit more that is written ;)

10/10

snitchette

I'm sorry I haven't noticed your fic (I'm so unforgivable for that) until today. I think I'll love reading it especially the relationship between S and H which seems et become so frustating and so more funny. Now I really will looking forward to it.

0/10

Mint Stick

The twins just didn't think, did they? Or do enough research to know of the dangers? *sighs*

Great chapter. Those points certainly needed to be dealt with. I'm glad Snape took it relatively well and is looking for ways to deal with this - not that he has much choice! (Not that Hermione does, either, but at this point, Snape's position is immensly more difficult for so many reasons that I feel a little worse for him.)

8/10

MidniteOil

Great! More please!!!!!

10/10

mmesnape

I wouldn't want to be in the twin's shoes right now.  They are going to be flayed alive if Snape gets his hands on them...  Great story up to this point, keep it coming!  Yeah! 

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update, I can't wait to read about their meeting in Severus office later on, that must be a very interesting conversation!!! Hopefully Severus won't be to much of a cruel git towards her....:-))

0/10

Gwenog Jones

I'm still totally loving this fic!  I like your characterizations and the light, easy prose that you've employed.  I really can't wait for more!

8/10

chyara

great start!

0/10

Mint Stick

Hm.. so he knows now what caused the problem. Intriguing!

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