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Chocolate Enchantment
Vivian B595 Reviews | 6.62/10 (595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )
When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant
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Reviews for Chocolate Enchantment
I'd never even considered that Snape's vow might be triggered by Harry's sectumsempra of Draco. Good point. I'm enjoying this, especially the sense of need between our couple.
I completely missed that when I read HBP, I knew about the Vow (obviously) but I guess I just lumped it with Draco's Task. It never occured to me that if Harry had killed Draco, Snape would have died as well.
Love this fic!
I like how Hermione is occasionally refering to Harry as the Idiot in her own mind now, like Snape does out loud: taking on a bit more than just his emotions through the Link.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I like to think Hermione is open minded enough to see when her friends are acting like idiots. As much as I love Harry as a character, it was a supremely stupid thing to try out a spell without having a clue what it would do.
I'm so glad you are enjoying my story!
I'm not usually a great fan of Snape teacher/Hermione student but I must say you're doing a good work, with their banter and complicity working well in the story. They still have a long way to go, I now, but you're definitely doing a good job with this story.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Thanks, I really tried to keep their personalities as true as possible, considering the extenuating circumstances. The Snape as professor role should end here soon, as the attack on the school is in chapter 12.
A great chapter! I hope Hermione will remember Dumbledores words the day she will need to the most, while Severus has to run away with Draco. I hope Severus will know that Hermione will always be there for him, no matter what. I also hope that Harry and Ron won't let her down and behave like idiots. Most of all, and this is my biggest which, I hope you will never make this a story where Severus due to some kind of shceeme "gives" Hermione to Voldemort or some of his "friends" to torture, weather she knows and agrees or not. I just hate such stories, seeing that as both illogical to do to anyone you care the sligthest about, and the worst kind of betrayal, a betrayal so big it can't be forgiven, ever.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
You should be well pleased by what's to come then! Thanks for the review.
*grins* Loved!
Hey, I think lots of us missed the connection of the fight between Harry and Draco in HBP and how it would have killed Snape too if Draco had died.
Excellent chapter.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Thanks, another is already awaiting validation.
Oh such a lovely romantic chapter. Well done you!
I simply don't know what to say. You leave me speechless which usually is a hard job (from my friends' POW but I'm sure they exagerate a bit... or a lot). Anyway what a another amazing brilliant chapter.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I can't complain about anyone who thinks my writing is amazingly brilliant! =) Thanks!
Great story
I'm so glad you posted another chapter! I've been checking everyday since I read the last one! ;) I can't wait for more!!!
I look forward to reading how exactly Hermione will be "seduced" by the dark side and the toll it will take on both Hermione and Severus.
Awesome job!
I do so love this story. I was wondering how long you were going to take it? Through Voldy's downfall or just to the end of HBP?
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
It goes through the downfall of Voldemort. There are a heck of a lot more chapters to come. It ended up being twice the lenth I originally intended. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I promise another update is coming soon!
Response from Selene (Reviewer)
Yay! I was hoping for a nice long story, especially since you write so well.
That is really great so far...I hope more is coming soon:)
Bit of a nod to Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves, I see! I am enjoying your story very much. It takes a rather tired premise and gives it a very realistic and fresh turn. Embedding it within HBP is bold of you! Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm very glag you update so quickly. I always have loves secret marriage. MAybe there won't be as much frustration as I originaly thought it would be. I'm waiting impatiently for the next.
Ahh, another wonderful chapter. I'm really enjoying your fic so far. I really can't wait to read more!
whoops, meant to leave the review on this chapter :) Great plot so far :)
I love it!! If you have any more already finished, I would love to read more. Please tell if you have it posted further elsewhere, or feel free to email me ;) maevepotter@gmail.com I am a very good beta, as I tend to catch even the most minute errors or bad phrasing, so I could definately reward you in that way if you wanted to send me any bit more that is written ;)
I'm sorry I haven't noticed your fic (I'm so unforgivable for that) until today. I think I'll love reading it especially the relationship between S and H which seems et become so frustating and so more funny. Now I really will looking forward to it.
The twins just didn't think, did they? Or do enough research to know of the dangers? *sighs*
Great chapter. Those points certainly needed to be dealt with. I'm glad Snape took it relatively well and is looking for ways to deal with this - not that he has much choice! (Not that Hermione does, either, but at this point, Snape's position is immensly more difficult for so many reasons that I feel a little worse for him.)
Great! More please!!!!!
I wouldn't want to be in the twin's shoes right now. They are going to be flayed alive if Snape gets his hands on them... Great story up to this point, keep it coming! Yeah!
Thank you so much for the update, I can't wait to read about their meeting in Severus office later on, that must be a very interesting conversation!!! Hopefully Severus won't be to much of a cruel git towards her....:-))
I'm still totally loving this fic! I like your characterizations and the light, easy prose that you've employed. I really can't wait for more!
great start!
Hm.. so he knows now what caused the problem. Intriguing!